应用型大学英语综合教程二+unit+1.ppt

,上海交通大学出版社,BookII,应用型大学英语系列教程,应用型大学英语综合教程,Application-orientedcollegeEnglishCourse,2,上海交通大学出版社,Back,Next,LanguageSkillsDevelopment,LanguageinUse,EnhancementofLanguageAbilities,Unit1,UnitOne,TableofContents,3,上海交通大学出版社,Focus1content,Back,Next,Starter,Text:Thanksforthebestlaughwevehadinyears,Workingwithwordsandphrases,Discussion,Practice:interpreting,Practice:translation,Practice:writing,SurfingtheInternet,Highlights,TableofContents,Part1LanguageSkillsDevelopment,4,上海交通大学出版社,focus1highlights,Back,Next,HighlightsS:FacialexpressionsL:Anextremelyself-satisfiedwomansracialstereotypesR:ThanksforthebestlaughwevehadinyearsW:HowtoavoidwritingsentencefragmentsInternetwork:SearchingforinformationaboutRitzCarltonHotel,Part1LanguageSkillsDevelopment,5,上海交通大学出版社,focus1starter,Back,Next,1.Starter,A.Canyoudescribethefacialexpressionsinthefollowingpicturesusingthewordsbelow?,4._,1._,2._,3._,panicked,guilty,confident,confused,6,上海交通大学出版社,focus1starter,Back,Next,B.Listentoastoryaboutanextremelyself-satisfiedwomansracialstereotypes,andthencompletethefollowingnoteswiththeappropriatewords.,1.Starter,nextto,aflight,unpleasant,awhiteperson,Thewhitewoman,anyone,theblackman,7,上海交通大学出版社,focus1starter,Back,Next,Onaflight,amiddle-agedwhiteSouthAfricanwomanfoundherselfsittingnexttoablackman.Shecalledtheflightattendantovertocomplainaboutherseating.“Whatseemstobetheproblem,Madam?”askedtheattendant.“Cantyousee?”shesaid.“Youvesatmenexttoablack.Icantpossiblysitnexttothisunpleasantperson.Findmeanotherseat!”“Pleasecalmdown,Madam.”theattendantreplied.“Theflightisveryfulltoday,butIllchecktoseeifwehaveanyseatsavailableincluborfirstclass.”Thewomangaveanunfriendlyglanceattheangryblackmanbesideher.,1.Starter,Tapescript,8,上海交通大学出版社,focus1starter,Back,Next,Afewminuteslatertheattendantreturnedwiththegoodnews,whichshegavetothewoman,wholookedatthepeoplearoundherwithaverypleasedandself-satisfiedsmile,“Madam,wedohaveoneseatinfirstclass.”Beforethewomanhadachancetoanswer,theattendantcontinued,“Ihadtogetspecialpermissionfromthecaptain.But,inthiscase,thecaptainfeltitunfairthatsomeoneshouldbeforcedtositnexttosuchanunpleasantperson.”Withthesewords,sheturnedtotheblackmanandsaid,“Soifyoudliketogetyourthings,sir,yourseatisreadyforyouinfirstclass.”Atthispoint,thesurroundingpassengersstoodupandclappedtheirhandsloudlyastheblackmanwalkedup.,1.Starter,9,WarmUp,Back,Next,1.Canyoustillrememberthebestlaughyouvehadinyourlife?Tellusthestory.2.HowdoyouregardBlackpeople?,TextLead-in,上海交通大学出版社,10,Back,Next,TextLead-in,上海交通大学出版社,TextOrganization,Awomanswinninglotsofmoneyataslotmachineandreturningtothehotelroom(Paras._),Thewomansfearwiththetwoblackmenshemetintheelevator(Paras._),Thewomansstereotypicalreactiontothetwoblackmen(Paras._),Thetwoblackmenskindnessandconsiderationforthewoman(Para._),Thewomansreceivinggiftsfromthetwoblackmenshemetthedaybefore(Paras._),12,35,68,9,1012,11,上海交通大学出版社,focus1text,Back,Next,2.Text:ThanksfortheBestLaughWeveHadinYears,1OnarecentweekendinAtlanticCity,awomanwonabucketfulofquartersataslotmachine.Shetookabreakfromtheslotsfordinnerwithherhusbandinthehoteldiningroom.2Butfirstshewantedtohidethequartersinherroom.“Illberightbackandwellgotoeat,”shetoldherhusbandandcarriedthecoin-ladenbuckettotheelevator.,Translation,谢谢您带给我们多年来最畅快的欢笑1最近一个周末，有位女士在大西洋城玩老虎机，赢了满满一桶二十五美分的硬币。她暂时离开赌博机，与丈夫前往旅馆餐厅吃晚饭。2不过，她想先去客房把硬币藏起来。“我去一会儿就回来，然后我们再去吃饭。”她对她的丈夫说道，之后，便提着满满一桶硬币朝电梯走去。,Meaning:Shestoppedgamblingattheslotmachineforawhileinordertohavedinnerwithherhusbandinthehoteldiningroom.,bucketful:n.C一桶（的量）e.g.Drawabucketfulofwaterfromthewell.n.+-ful=n.e.g.handful,mouthful,pocketful,QuestionsaboutParas.1-2,slot:n.C硬币投币口；细长的孔，狭缝e.g.Pickupthereceiveranddepositacoinintheslot.,take/haveabreak:休息一会儿e.g.Welltakeashortbreakforlunch,andthenstartagainat2oclock.coffeebreak下午茶时间lunchhour:午餐时间，午休springbreak:复活节假,laden:a.1)（用于构成形容词）充满的，装载的e.g.Theflavorofthesouppermeatesthemoisture-ladenair.2)装满的，有负载的e.g.Theorchardisfulloftreesladenwithapples.,12,上海交通大学出版社,focus1text,Back,Next,Shewonabucketfulofquartersataslotmachine.,1.WhathappenedtothewomaninAtlanticCityonarecentweekend?,Shewentbacktoherroom.Becauseshewantedtohidethequartersfirst.,2.Wheredidthewomangobeforehavingdinnerwithherhusband?Why?,2.Text:ThanksfortheBestLaughWeveHadinYears,13,3她正要走进电梯时，看到电梯里已经有两位男乘客。两位都是黑人，其中一位个头很高，体型令人望而生畏。这位女士一下子愣住了。她的第一反应是：“这两个男人会打劫我。”她转而又想：“不要戴着有色眼镜看人；他们看上去完全像是绅士。”然而，种族偏见的力量是强大的，恐惧使她浑身发凉。她定在那里，眼睛紧盯着眼前两位男子。,上海交通大学出版社,focus1text,Back,Next,3Asshewasabouttowalkintotheelevatorshenoticedtwomenalreadyaboard.Bothwereblack.Oneofthemwastallverytallanintimidatingfigure.Thewomanfroze.Herfirstthoughtwas:“Thesetwoaregoingtorobme.”Hernextthoughtwas:“Dontbeabigot;theylooklikeperfectlynicegentlemen.”Butracialstereotypesarepowerful,andfearfrozeherblood.Shestoodandstaredatthetwomen.,Translation,QuestionaboutPara.3,Meaning:Oneoftheblackmenwassotallthathelookedveryfrightening.,Meaning:Overwhelmedwithfixedandprejudicedideasofblackpeople,shewasextremelyafraidofthetwomen.Shestoppedmovingforwardandlookedatthemintentlyforalongtime.,Meaning:Thewomanbecamestiffwithfearandstoodtherewithoutmoving.,beabouttodosth.:正要，就要（做某事）e.g.Iwasabouttoleavehomewhenitpouredcatsanddogs.notbeabouttodosomething意思是“不愿意做，无意做某事”.e.g.Shewasnotabouttoleaveofficeafter10yearsinpower.,aboard:ad.在/到（船、飞机、火车或其他交通工具）上e.g.Theplanecrashkilled100passengersaboardyesterday.,intimidating:a.吓人的，令人胆怯的e.g.Theyshrugatmentioningtheintimidatingbarrister.,freeze:vi./vt.1)（因恐惧、震惊而）呆住，僵住，愣住e.g.Iheardtheexplosionandfrozeinmytracks.2)（使）冻结，凝固e.g.Itwassocold;thelakewassuretofreezeovernight.3)（使）感到极冷；冻僵，冻死e.g.Theyalmostfrozetodeath.,racial:a.种族的，人种的，民族的e.g.Wemustfightracialdiscrimination.,stereotype:n.C成见，陈规，老一套，刻板印象e.g.ThestudysaysthatBritishadvertisementshavestereotypesaboutwomen.vt.对有成见，对形成模式化看法e.g.Blackpeopleareoftenstereotypedastroublemakers.,freezeonesblood:使人恐怖万分，令人毛骨悚然e.g.Iheardascreamthatfrozemyblood.,2.Text:ThanksfortheBestLaughWeveHadinYears,14,上海交通大学出版社,focus1text,Back,Next,Becausetherewerealreadytwoblackmenaboardandshewasafraidthattheyweregoingtorobher.,3.Whydidthewomanhesitatetoentertheelevator?,2.Text:ThanksfortheBestLaughWeveHadinYears,15,上海交通大学出版社,focus1text,Back,Next,4Shefeltanxious,upsetandashamed.Shehopedtheydidntreadhermindbutgosh,theyhadtoknowwhatshewasthinking!,Translation,4她开始焦虑，心神不定，又感到不好意思。她希望他们没有看出她的心思，但是，天啊，他们肯定已经知道她在琢磨什么了！,have(got)to:表示一定真实或肯定发生e.g.Therehastobeareasonforthis.,2.Text:ThanksfortheBestLaughWeveHadinYears,16,上海交通大学出版社,focus1text,Back,Next,5Herhesitationaboutjoiningthemintheelevatorwasalltooobviousnow.Herfacewasflushed.Shecouldntjuststandthere,sowithamightyeffortofwillshepickeduponefootandsteppedforwardandfollowedwiththeotherfootandwasontheelevator.Avoidingeyecontact,sheturnedaroundstifflyandfacedtheelevatordoorsastheyclosed.Asecondpassed,andthenanothersecond,andthenanother.Herfearincreased!Theelevatordidntmove.Panicconsumedher.“MyGod,”shethought,“Imtrappedandabouttoberobbed!”Herheartsank.Sweatpouredfromeverypore.,Translation,5要不要进去和他们同乘一部电梯？她迟疑不决的态度已经太过明显了。她涨得满脸通红。老站着不动也无济于事，于是她横下心来，抬起一只脚往前挪，接着另一只脚也跟了进来，站在电梯内。她不敢抬眼，僵直地转过身，脸朝外，这时，电梯门合上了。时间一秒一秒地过去。她越来越害怕！电梯纹丝不动。她陷入了恐惧的深渊。“我的天啊，”她暗忖，“我被困在这里，要遭人劫财！”她的心往下沉，每个毛孔都在冒汗水。,Meaning:Shedidntknowwhethersheshouldstepintotheelevatorandstandtogetherwiththetwoblackmenalreadyaboard.Heruncertaintyhadbecometooobvious.Shebecamesoembarrassedthatherfaceturnedred.,Meaning:ShefeltmoreandmorefrightenedShewashitbyfearthatwasextremelystrongandnearlylostherreasoningShelostcourageandhope.Shewasfilledwithsuchgreatfearthatshesweatedalot.,alltoo:太（强调达到极端的程度）e.g.Hisfathersoldhispropertytoamanalltooanxioustobuy.,flushed:a.脸红的e.g.Herfacewasflushedwithhappiness.,pickup:抬起，拾起；取或收集某物；接乘客e.g.Whenweteachahorsetopickupitsfeet,westartbygettingitaccustomedtohavingaropedangledaroundhislegs.Atruckpicksuptherecyclingonceaweek.Illpickyouupatsix.,mighty:a.1)强而有力的e.g.Heisstrongwhoconquersothers;hewhoconquershimselfismighty.2)巨大的，非凡的e.g.TheyarecruisingonthemightyChangjiangRiver.ad.非常，极其e.g.Immightypleased.,avoid:vt.躲开，避开；使无效，避免e.g.Toavoidwritinganinvoiceisataxdodge.,stiffly:ad.僵直地e.g.Justthentheoldwomanstrodestifflyintotheroom.,consume:vt.1)使充满（强烈的感情）e.g.Shewasscaredbythedepressionwhichthreatenedtoconsumeher.2)吃，喝，饮e.g.MomwasamazedbyhowmuchpizzaTomcouldconsume.3)消耗，消费e.g.TheUShas5%oftheworldpopulation,butconsumes25%oftheglobalenergy.,trap:vt.1)使陷入困境，使落入险境e.g.Manywomenaretrappedinlovelessmarriages.2)使陷入圈套，使中计e.g.Hefelthehadbeentrappedintoacceptingthetermsofthecontract.,2.Text:ThanksfortheBestLaughWeveHadinYears,17,上海交通大学出版社,focus1text,6Thenoneofthemensaid,“Hitthefloor.”Instincttoldhertodowhattheytoldher.Thebucketofquartersflewupwardsasshethrewoutherarmsandcollapsedontheelevatorfloor.Ashowerofcoinsraineddownonher.“Takemymoneyandspareme,”sheprayed.Moresecondspassed.Sheheardoneofthemensaypolitely,“Maam,ifyoulljusttelluswhatflooryouregoingto,wellpushthebutton.”Theonewhosaidithadalittletroublegettingthewordsout.Hewastryingmightilytoholdinabellylaugh.,Next,Back,Translation,6这时，她听到其中一个人说：“趴下（与“按下楼层”同音）。”她的本能反应就是照着他们的话做。于是她张开双臂，趴在了电梯地板上，满桶的硬币飞向空中，洒了出去。硬币如雨点般落在了她的身上。她在心里默祷：“把钱拿去吧，饶我一命。”又过了几秒钟，她听到其中一位男子彬彬有礼地说：“夫人，您只要告诉我您要去几楼，我们来按按钮。”说这话的人有点费力才把话说完，尽力忍住没有放声大笑。,QuestionaboutPara.6,collapse:vi.1)倒下，倒塌e.g.Oneofthefourmedievalchurcheswasnotstructurallysoundandcollapsed.2)崩溃，瓦解e.g.Amonarchycollapsed.n.倒塌，塌陷；崩溃，瓦解Theseminersweretrappedbythecollapseofthetunnelroof.,ashowerof:一阵，一连串e.g.ashowerofleaves一阵落叶ashowerofdust一阵灰尘ashowerofsparks一连串火花,pray:vi.1)祈祷e.g.Theywenttothemosquetopray.2)请求e.g.Ihopeandpraythatthisisjustamisunderstanding.,havetrouble(in)doingsth.:做有困难e.g.Whatdoyoudowhenyouhavetroublesolvingaproblemintheworkplace?,2.Text:ThanksfortheBestLaughWeveHadinYears,18,Shetookitas“fallonyourkneestothefloor”.,上海交通大学出版社,focus1text,4.Whatdidthewomantake“hitthefloor”tomean?,Next,Back,2.Text:ThanksfortheBestLaughWeveHadinYears,19,7这位女士抬起头望着这两位男乘客。他们弯下腰，把她搀扶起来。她满腹疑惑，挣扎着站了起来。“我叫我这个朋友按楼层，”那位普通个头的男子说，“意思是叫他按我们要去的楼层的按钮。夫人，我并非要您趴在地上。”他说话时态度和蔼，紧咬着嘴唇。,上海交通大学出版社,focus1text,Back,Next,7Thewomanliftedherheadandlookedupatthetwomen.Theyreacheddowntohelpherup.Confused,shestruggledtoherfeet.“WhenItoldmyfriendheretohitthefloor,”saidtheaverage-sizedone,“Imeantthatheshouldhittheelevatorbuttonforourfloor.Ididntmeanforyoutohitthefloor,Maam.”Hespokepleasantly.Hebithislip.,Translation,QuestionaboutPara.7,Meaning:Shewasstillunsureofwhatwashappening.Shemadeanefforttogetup.,confused:a.迷惑的，糊涂的e.g.Jolookedveryconfused,butthenshelaughed.confused派生自动词confuse，意为“使糊涂，疑惑不解；混淆，使分辨不清；使混乱”。e.g.Hekeptaskingunnecessaryquestionsthatonlyconfusedtheissue.,struggle:vi.1)努力；争取e.g.Fishstruggleforsurvivalwhenthewaterleveldropsinthelake.2)挣扎着前行或进行某事e.g.Hestruggledalongtheroughroadholdinghisson.n.C挣扎，战斗，斗争,biteoneslip:抑制情感的流露，忍住话e.g.Shepauseduncertainly,bitingherlip.,2.Text:ThanksfortheBestLaughWeveHadinYears,20,Accordingtothetwoblackmen,“hitthefloor”meant“topushthebuttonforthefloortheyweregoingto”.,上海交通大学出版社,focus1text,5.Whatdid“hitthefloor”meanaccordingtothetwoblackmen?,Next,Back,2.Text:ThanksfortheBestLaughWeveHadinYears,21,Meaning:Shefeltlikesayingsorrytothetwomenforhavingmistakenthemforbadguys,butshedidntknowwhattosayandbecamespeechless.,上海交通大学出版社,focus1text,8Itwasobvioushewashavingahardtimenotlaughing.Thewomanthought:“MyGod,whataspectacleIvemadeofmyself.”Shewastooembarrassedtospeak.Shewantedtomakeanapology,butwordsfailedher.Howdoyouapologizetotwoperfectlyrespectablegentlemenforbehavingasthoughtheyweregoingtorobyou?Shedidntknowwhattosay.Thethreeofthemgatheredupthescatteredquartersandrefilledherbucket.,Back,Next,Translation,QuestionaboutPara.8,makeaspectacleofoneself:当众出丑，出洋相e.g.Hedranktoomuchandmadeaspectacleofhimself.,fail:vt.没有帮助；辜负e.g.Hisstrengthfailedhim.他（一下子）失去了力量。Hisfriendsfailedhim.他的朋友没有帮他的忙。,respectable:a.1)人格高尚的，值得尊敬的e.g.TheChineseareahard-working,respectablepeople.2)相当多的；满意的；体面的e.g.ShereceivedarespectablesumofmoneyforNewYeargiftfromrelatives.,scattered:a.分散的，零散的，疏落的e.g.scatteredvillagesscatteredshowersscattered派生自动词scatter，意为“分散；散播；撒”。e.g.Thecrowdscatteredatthesoundofgunshots.,2.Text:ThanksfortheBestLaughWeveHadinYears,8很显然，他在极力忍住不笑出来。该女士心想：“我的天啊，真是丢人现眼，出大洋相了！”她羞愧难当，默不做声。她想要道一声歉，却不知如何开口。把两位绝对体面正派的绅士看作劫匪，如何请求他们的谅解？她不知该怎么说。他们三人拾起散落的硬币，重新放进了桶里。,22,Shefeltapologeticandembarrassed.,上海交通大学出版社,focus1text,6.Howdidthewomanfeeltowardthetwoblackmenlater?,Next,Back,2.Text:ThanksfortheBestLaughWeveHadinYears,23,pulloneselftogether:控制自己，镇定下来；重新控制感情，重新振作起来e.g.Stopcryingandpullyourselftogether!,brushoneself/sb.off:（尤指摔跤后）拂去衣服上的灰尘，掸净自己/某人e.g.Igotup,brushedmyselfoff,andcarriedonwalking.,unsteady:a.1)不稳固的，失去平衡的e.g.Theyaresittingatanunsteadytable,enjoyingtheyear-enddinner.2)容易变化的，不稳定的e.g.Allgoessmoothlyexcepttheunsteadyairflow.,roar:vi./vt.1)放声大笑e.g.Thesechildrenroaredinamusementatthefairytales.2)吼叫，咆哮e.g.Couragedoesntalwaysroar.Sometimescourageisthequietvoiceattheendofthedaysaying,“Iwilltryagaintomorrow.”3)（车辆）呼啸而过e.g.Thecarroaredoffdowntheroad.,9电梯在她要去的楼层停下了，两位男士坚持要陪她到她的客房，因为她的脚步似乎有点摇晃，他们担心她在过道里会有闪失。他们将她送到门口，然后道了晚安。她迅速进入客房，耳边传来他们走回电梯时发出的哈哈大笑。她掸了掸灰，定了定神，便来到楼下与丈夫一起用餐。,上海交通大学出版社,focus1text,9Whentheelevatorarrivedatherfloortheytheninsistedonwalkinghertoherroom.Sheseemedalittleunsteadyonherfeet,andtheywereafraidshemightnotmakeitdownthecorridor.Atherdoortheybidheragoodevening.Assheslippedintoherroomshecouldhearthemroaringwithlaughterastheywalkedbacktotheelevator.Thewomanbrushedherselfoff.Shepulledherselftogetherandwentdownstairsfordinnerwithherhusband.,Back,Next,Translation,walk:vt.使（某人/某物）行走e.g.Wewalkedourhorsesthelastquarterofamile.,QuestionaboutPara.9,2.Text:ThanksfortheBestLaughWeveHadinYears,bid:vt./vi.1)向某人打招呼e.g.bidsomebodygoodafternoon/goodmorning,etc.2)吩咐e.g.Hebadethem(to)leaveatonce.3)出价，投标e.g.Howmuchdoyoubidforthelateartistspainting?n.C竞标,24,Theyhelpedherup,gatheredthescatteredquarterswithherandwalkedherbacktoherroomseeingthatshewasstillunsteadyonherfeet.,上海交通大学出版社,focus1text,7.Howdidthetwoblackmenexhibittheirfriendlinesstothewoman?,Next,Back,2.Text:ThanksfortheBestLaughWeveHadinYears,25,10第二天早晨，鲜花送到了她的客房是12朵玫瑰，每一朵玫瑰都附上了一张崭新的百元美钞。11卡片上写着：“谢谢您带给我们多年来最畅快的欢笑。”12落款是：艾迪墨菲迈克尔乔丹,上海交通大学出版社,focus1text,10Thenextmorningflowersweredeliveredtoherroomadozenroses.AttachedtoEACHrosewasacrispone-hundred-dollarbill.11Thecardsaid:“Thanksforthebestlaughwevehadinyears.”12Itwassigned:EddieMurphyMichaelJordan,QuestionaboutParas.10-12,Back,Next,Translation,deliver:vt.1)投递；传送；运送e.g.Couldyoutrytodeliveraheadoftime?2)发表（演讲）；宣布e.g.ProfessorLiwilldeliverthecommencementaddresstothisyearsgraduatingclasses.3)接生e.g.Hereshowtheydeliveredthebabyinsideaparkedcaratthegasstation.,attach:vt.将某物系在另一物上e.g.Billwasfrustratedwhenhetriedtoattachthetrailertohistruck.,crisp:a.1)崭新的，挺括的e.g.acrispnew5note2)脆的，酥的，松脆的e.g.crisppotatochips脆脆的薯条,2.Text:ThanksfortheBestLaughWeveHadinYears,26,8.Whatdidthewomanreceivethenextmorning?Whosentthemandwhy?,上海交通大学出版社,focus1text,Back,Next,Shereceivedadozenrosesandtwelvecrisp100-dollarbills.TheyweresentbyEddieMurphyandMichaelJordantothankherforthebestlaughtheydhadinyears.,2.Text:ThanksfortheBestLaughWeveHadinYears,27,WhenIborn,IblackWhenIgrowup,IblackWhenIgoinSun,IblackWhenIscared,IblackWhenIsick,IblackAndwhenIdie,IstillblackAndyouwhitefellowWhenyouborn,youpinkWhenyougrowup,youwhiteWhenyougoinsun,youredWhenyoucold,youblueWhenyouscared,youyellowWhenyousick,yougreenAndwhenyoudie,yougrayAndyoucallingmecolored?,Readaloudthepoemanddiscusswhatyoucanlearnfromit.,Interaction,Back,Next,28,()1.strugglea.fear()2.intimidatingb.separated()3.racialc.ethnic()4.scatteredd.shaky,上海交通大学出版社,Focus1words2.Hermisunderstandingofthetwoblackmenintheelevator;3.Thetwoblackmenshelptothewoman;4.Thewomansguiltinessaboutherracialstereotypes.,44,Referenceanswer:AwomanwonabucketfulofquartersataslotmachineinAtlanticCity.Shefoundtwoblackmenalreadyintheelevatorasshewentbacktoherroomtohidethequarters.Shehesitatedtoentertheelevatorbecauseshewasafraidthatthetwomenweregoingtorobher.Aftershejoinedthemintheelevator,sheheardonemansay,“Hitthefloor”,whichwastakenbyherforfallingonherkneestothefloor.Soshedid.Thetwomenexplainedtoher“hitthefloor”meant“topushthebuttonforthefloortheyweregoingto”.Thewomansfeargaveplacetoembarrassment.Thetwomengatheredupthescatteredquarterswithherandaccompaniedhertoherroom.Thenextdaythewomanreceivedadozenrosesandtwelve100-dollarbillsgivenbyEddieMurphyandMichaelJordantothankherforthebestlaughtheydhadinyears.,上海交通大学出版社,Focus1writing,Back,Next,8.Practice:writing,45,上海交通大学出版社,Focus1writing,Back,Next,B.Basicsentencewritingtechniques:howtoavoidwritingsentencefragments(不完整句).,1.a.Althoughthecompanyisfinallyshowingaprofit.b.Thisyearmaynotturnouttobeprofitable.,Althoughthecompanyisfinallyshowingaprofit,thisyearmaynotturnouttobeprofitable.(aisadependentclause,butitiswrittenasifitwereacompletesentence),8.Practice:writing,46,Raymondhadtogiveupskiingbecausehedevelopedsoreknees.(bisadependentclause,butitiswrittenasifitwereacompletesentence),上海交通大学出版社,Focus1writing,Back,Next,2.a.Raymondhadtogiveupskiing.b.Becausehedevelopedsoreknees.,8.Practice:writing,47,上海交通大学出版社,Focus1writing,Back,Next,3.a.Myworkconsistsofmanynecessaryofficeduties.b.Forexample,takingtelephonemessages.,Myworkconsistsofmanynecessaryofficeduties,forexample,takingtelephonemessages.(bisanappositive,butitiswrittenasifitwereacompletesentence),8.Practice:writing,48,上海交通大学出版社,Focus1writing,Back,Next,4.a.Itwasillegible.b.Theaddresswrittenonthepackage.,Theaddresswrittenonthepackagewasillegible.(bisanounphrasewithanounmodifiedbyapastparticipialphrase,butitiswrittenasifitwereacompletesentence),8.Practice:writing,49,上海交通大学出版社,Focus1writing,Back,Next,5.a.Regardingtheissuingofliquorlicencestorestaurants.b.Whatdoyouthinkthebestpolicyis?,Whatdoyouthinkthebestpolicyis,regardingtheissuingofliquorlicencestorestaurants?(aisaprepositionalphrase,butitiswrittenasifitwereacompletesentence),8.Practice:writing,50,上海交通大学出版社,Focus1internet,Back,Next,9.SurfingtheInternet,Gotoor,51,Referenceanswer:HotelInformationStrolldownthefamousWestNanjingRoad,pastthemagnificentBundbuildin