河北省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错+书面表达（21）

用心 爱心 专心1 河北省河北省 20122012 高考英语二轮复习专题训练 高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错短文改错 书面表达 书面表达 2121 短文改错 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误 对标有题号的每一行作出判断 如无错误 在该行 右边横线上画一个勾 如有错误 每行只有一个错误 则按下列情况改正 此行多一个词 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 在该行右边横线上写出该词 并也用斜 线划掉 此行缺一个词 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 A 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词 此行错一个词 在错的词下划一横线 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 注意 原行没有错的不要改 I will go to college in the near future After enter1 college and I plan to set new goals in my study and life 2 As I was away from my parents it is necessary for me3 to learn live on my own such as doing some washing 4 shopping and cleaning for myself What s more 5 in my spare time I will take part in different kind of6 school activities for example I will often go to English7 Corner to practice my spoken English Besides I ll try my8 best to get along well with your teachers and classmates 9 I m sure if I will have a wonderful college life Bless me 10 用心 爱心 专心2 书面表达 前不久 某中学发生了一起食品中毒事件 假设你叫李华 是这个学校的一名高三学 生 请你给某报社英文栏目编辑写一封信 100 词左右 反映一下该情况 内容要点应包 括以下几个方面 1 20 多名学生因中午吃了学校食堂的饭中毒 2 你目睹了他们中毒后在老师和其他同学的帮助下脱险的经过 3 呼吁社会采取行动杜绝此类事件再次发生 注意 信的开头与落款已给出 不计入总词数 Dear editer I m writing to tell you about a food poisoning incident in my school Yours Li Hua 用心 爱心 专心3 1 enter entering 2 去掉第一个 and 3 was am 4 在 live 前加 to 5 for by 6 kind kinds 7 在 English 前加 the 8 9 your my 10 if that 或去掉 if One possible version Dear editor I m writing to tell you about a food poisoning incident in my school Several days ago more than 20 students had stomachaches and brought up what they had eaten after the school lunch meal Learning that they must be poisoned our teachers and other students immediately called the ambulance which carried them quickly to hospital After several hours treatment they were fortunately brought out of danger However this food poisoning incident has been dealt with properly And we ve come to realize the importance of food safety I do hope that the whole society shall begin taking actions to stop such bad inc