Unit2Lifeinthefuture.ppt

Areyousatisfiedwithyourself Howcanweimprovewritingskills Let spractisewriting 五 遣词造句 争取文采 评分标准 结构 8分 内容 8分 文采 4分 一 认真审题 结构正确 二 理清思路 列出提纲 三 连词成句 初步成型 四 检查修改 内容无误 基本步骤 WritingSkill Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic Theinternethaschangedourlife 以 网络改变了我们的生活 为题 写一篇不少于60个词的短文 标点符号不占格 Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference 所给提示仅供参考 1 Whataretheadvantagesoftheinternet 2 Howdoyouusetheinternet giveatleasttworeasons Whatwordsorphrasescanyouthinkofwhenyouseetheword Internet Internet download searchfor information news fast convenient watch games E mail send Makesentencesusingthewordsorphrases MakeSentences wecanknowthenewsontheinternet TheInternetisfastandconvenient Wecanfindanddownloadinformationthatweneed Wecansendemailstofriends Wecanplaygamesonit Howtochangeitintoawell organizedparagraph Thestructureofawriting givingopinions Topicsentence Supportingdetails Reason1 Reason2 Reason3 Conclusion Findthetopicsentenceintheparagraph Ilistentomusicwhiledrivingtowork IlistentomusicwhenI mthinking IlistentomusicwhenI mhappy EvenwhenI msad Ilistentomusic too Ican tlivewithoutmusic Musicplaysanimportantpartinmylife Musicplaysanimportantpartinmylife Writeatopicsentenceforthereport Abigproblem90 ofthecity sriversarepolluted Theairinthecityisgettingdirtier Noiseisbecomingabigheadacheforpeople Pollutionisbecomingaseriousprobleminthecity Writeatopicsentenceforthetable year PopulationinChina 195319641982199020002019 601 million 7231031116012951395 Populationinourcountryisincreasingveryfast Writeatopicsentencefortheparagraph wecanknowthenewsontheinternet TheInternetisfastandconvenient Wecanfindanddownloadinformationthatweneed Wecansendemailstofriends Wecanplaygamesonit TheInternetplaysanimportantpartinourlife TheInternetisveryusefulinourlife Conclusion Wecan tlivewithouttheInternet Howtowriteagoodparagraph Wecanknowthenewsontheinternet TheInternetisfastandconvenient Wecanfindanddownloadinformationthatweneed Wecansendemailstofriends Wecanplaygamesonit Listingwords linkwordstointroducesupportingpoints First Firstly Second Secondly Third Thirdly Foronething Whatismore Themostimportant Oneproblemis Anotherproblemis Themostseriousproblemis Firstofall Also Inaddition Finally However Addlistingwordstothefollowingparagraph 1 Ofallthewaysoftraveling Iliketravelingbytrainbest Ineedn tworryabouttrafficjams thetrainsarefastandcomfortable Youcanusethetimeindifferentways Youcanjustsitandreadsomething oryoucanenjoytheviewoutofthewindow youcanhaveamealinthebuffetcarorgotosleepinthesleepingcar First Second Third Fillintheblankswithlistingwords 2 Schooluniformrulehasitsadvantages wedon thavetospendtimethinkingaboutwhattoweareveryday wedon tneedtoworryaboutcompetingwithothersbasedonhowwelook ithassomedisadvantages Ourindividualitycan tbeshownifwewearthesameclotheseveryday sometimestheuniformstyleisold fashioned Firstofall Inaddition However What smore Fillintheblankswithlistingwords 3 Assonsordaughters weshouldrespectourparents theyloveusandalwaysthinkofusmorethanthemselves theyhaverichlifeexperience andtheycangiveusgoodadvice reasonisthatifwedonotrespectourparentsnow weourselveswillnotberespectedwhenweareold Foronething Whatismore Themostimportant 4 Johnsoncannotgetalongwithhisclassmates isthathealwayswantstohavehisownway Healsowantsotherstodowhathewants isthathenevertakesadvicefromanyone evenwhenheiswrong isthathealwayscriticizes 批评 others Someday hewillloseallhisfriends Oneproblem Anotherproblem Themostseriousproblem Fillintheblankswithlistingwords Conclusionwords Inmyopinion Ithink Inaword Inshort Generallyspeaking Addlinkwordstomakethesupportingdetailsbetter organized NowadaystheInternetplaysanimportantpartinourlife WiththeInternet wecangetthelatestnews Itisfastandconvenient Wecanfindanddownloadinformationthatweneed Wecansendemailstofriends Wecanplaygamesonit Wecan tlivewithouttheInternet NowadaystheInternetplaysanimportantpartinourlife Itisnotonlyfastbutconvenientaswell WecandomanythingswiththeInternet Firstofall wecangetthelatestnews Secondly Wecanfindanddownloadinformationthatweneed What smore Wecansendemailstofriends Wecanevenplaygamesonit Inaword wecan tlivewithouttheInternet 70words Discussingandwriting IsitgoodforGradeNinestudentstousethemobilephoneswhilebusystudying Body Conclusion Opinion Topicsentence Supportingdetails R