高考英语二轮专题训练 书面表达50.doc

2015届高考英语二轮专题训练 书面表达50福建省永安市2014届高三质量检查英语试卷 【题文】中央电视台在2014年春节期间，推出“新春走基层”节目，主题是“家风是什么？”你校英文报针对该话题征文活动。假如你是高三学生李华，你打算以你家的家风“勤俭节约（work hard and be thrifty）”为话题写一篇文章，要点如下：1. 勤奋能给我们带来什么？2. 生活中，我们如何节俭？ 3. 举例说明你是如何做到勤俭节约的。 注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 短文标题和开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 work hard and be thrifty first of all, we should work and study hard. _ 【答案】first of all, we should work and study hard. as we know, hard work can lead to success. if people want to make more money or want to make greater achievements, they must devote themselves to their work. as students, if we want to do well in our studies, we should also spend more time and work hard. then we can gain more knowledge and improve our abilities so that we can be admitted to good universities and in the future we can find more satisfying jobs.on the other hand we should live a thrifty life. resources should be saved. for example, we should save on water, food and electricity. never waste money. we should also promote waste recycling as possible as we can. as for us senior school students, i think concentrating on our study and wearing plain clothes is a good way to be thrifty.in a word, i think both working hard and being thrifty are equally important in our life and study.广东省惠州市2015届高三第二次调研考试英语试题【题文】随着智能手机的广泛应用，越来越多的年轻人成为低头族。近日，重庆划设了中国第一条专供手机使用者的人行道。请根据以下内容写一篇报道。【写作内容】 地点重庆洋人街景区基本情况3米宽，50米长人行道一分为二；一边划设给手机使用者，另一边则为非手机使用者使用目的保障手机使用者的行走安全看法一些人赞同：认为人行道的设置是合理的，可避免手机使用者在行走中造成不必要的伤害一些人反对：认为最好的办法是加强行人的安全教育，改掉手机使用者沉迷手机的不良习惯。参考词汇：人行道：sidewalk； 洋人街景区：yangrenjie scenic spot【写作要求】 1. 只能用5个句子表达全部内容；2. 首句已给出，不计入总句数。【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 with the increasing popularity of smart phones, more and more young people in china are glued to them._【答案】with the increasing popularity of smart phones, more and more young people in china are glued to them. to ensure the safety of phone users on the road, the first “mobile phone sidewalk in china” was built in yangrenjie scenic spot, chongqing. it is divided into two pathways, one for cell phone users and the other for those ordinary pedestrians. as for its appearance, different people hold different opinions. some people think it reasonable, viewing it as a good solution to the unnecessary injuries when they use phones while walking. however, others consider it pointless, believing it would be better if phone users can get rid of the bad habits of getting addicted to using phones and enforce the safety education for pedestrians.【解析】【思路点拨】本文是议论文，主要讨论是否应该为手机族设专线的问题，学生很容易把握要点，也容易写出自己的感想和评价。范文点评：该生具有很好的语言表达能力，语法结构、语态的掌握及高级词汇的运用基本正确。通篇十分流畅，可以看出作者厚实的写作功底。第一句就用to ensure不定式结构作状语抓住了改卷老师的眼球。后面衔接的也十分恰当，使用了as for，while，however等连接结构。文中使用了get rid of，get addicted to doing等高级词汇。本文语言流畅，高级结构应用自如，抓住了要点，是一篇佳作。2014年高考真题英语（湖北卷）【题文】请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。small things make a big difference. the small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.注意：无须写标题；除诗歌外，文体不限；内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例； 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。【答案】one possible versionit isnt hard to grow up into a responsible member of society. i can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy sunday afternoon. i was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. a man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and i joined in without hesitation. luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. compared with the escaped driver, i am proud of what i did.as a member of the society, i am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.广东省中山市2014届高三高考模拟题英语试题 【题文】a boy quarreled with his parents and ran away from home. he had a hard life 16 any contact with his family for years. later he wanted to go home 17 he was afraid that his parents might not welcome him. finally he decided to send a letter to his father 18 (express) his desire to return home and begging his pardon. in his letter he asked his father to tie a white ribbon on 19 tree near his house by the side of the railway lines if he was ready to welcome him back home. 20 he did not see the ribbon on the tree, he would think that his family did not welcome him and then he would leave them forever.he boarded the train and waited very 21 (nervous) as the train was about to pass by his home. to his surprise, the tree 22 (decorate) with hundreds of white ribbons 23 danced in the wind. his family did not want him to miss the sight of the ribbon and the welcome signal, so 24 covered the whole tree with ribbons to show their whole-hearted 25 (happy) and willingness to welcome him back.【答案】16. without 17. but 18. expressing 19. the 20. if21. nervously 22. was decorated 23. which/ that 24. they 25. happiness福建省四地六校2014届高三高考模拟试题 英语【题文】书面表达（满分25分）请你根据下面这幅漫画用英语写一篇短文。短文内容应该包括以下三个方面：1. 描述这幅漫画的内容。2. 是否同意他们的教育方式，并陈述理由。3. 对家庭教育提出建议。注意： 1 词数120左右。 2 参考词汇： 溺爱 spoil as can be seen in the cartoon, the young couple educate their child in different ways. 【答案】书面表达 as can be seen in the cartoon, the young couple educate their child in different ways. father educates their child with a ruler but mother with a bar of chocolate. what is illustrated in the picture is that father is too hard on their child while mother spoils him. they adopt strikingly inconsistent methods, which makes their child confused.i subscribe to neither of their education methods. if we always give children severe punishment, they will become nervous