高考英语 书面表达一轮训练（8）.doc

2014高考英语书面表达一轮训练（8）附参考范文(2012湖北孝感一次统考)请根据下面提示，结合你的校园生活中的一个事例，就英语格言“failure is the mother of success.”这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。in fact，there arent always bright sunshine and gentle breeze，birds singing and flowers fragrant in our daily life.we have so many failures and hardships that someone will be disappointed and give up the hope of success，but life is what you make it.注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；词数为120左右。_参考范文one possible version：success will be gained after times of failure so long as we are good at drawing lessons from failures or mistakes and stick to what we are doing.that is the message carried in the proverb “failure is the mother of success”for example，when i began to learn english，i was slow and clumsy that i read the words wrong from time to time.my poor pronunciation made myself laughed at by my classmates.but i didnt give up and kept practising reading aloud english every day.and my teacher gave me a helping hand，getting me right whenever i made an error.in a word，as long as we dont lose heart and keep on trying，we are sure to go through failure and achieve our aims.*结束图表式书面表达思路与技巧 图表式书面表达是常见的一种写作形式,现笔者结合下面一则实例,谈谈怎样写好这类书面表达。根据以下表格内容,请以howtoreducethepresentcitypopulation为题,用英语为杂志社写一篇短文,阐述你对这一问题的见解。建议i具体措施:a.晚婚b.一对夫妇,一个孩子目的:减少人口自然增长(人口出生率)建议ii具体措施:严格控制外地人进城务工经商目的:减少外地人口对城市的压力建议iii具体措施:a.在郊区,建造生活、商业、文教、卫生、娱乐、休闲生活小区b.在城外建造卫星城目的:吸引城市居民到郊区和卫星城工作和生活注意:1)词数:100左右。2)参考词汇:严格控制haveatightcontrol,卫星城satellitetown一、认真审题,准确把握提示要求。1.审体裁。准确把握体裁是写好一篇文章关键的一步。体裁的形式直接决定着考生用英语表达信息的途径和形式,并影响着书面表述语句的正确性和准确性。2.审人称。根据体裁要求,要准确把握人称的使用。是用第一、二人称,还是用第三人称。3.审时态。不同的体裁,其动词时态的使用也各有不同。一般情况下,故事、日记等体裁常以一般过去时为主要动词时态;书信、便条、通知等体裁常以一般现在时为主要动词时态。分析以上实例,应以第一人称的口吻进行描写。从题目要求、表内要点以及体裁可知,本文时态应以一般现在时为主体时态。二、理清表内要点,进行合理发挥。图表式书面表达其主要内容常被列在表内。考生首先必须理清表内内容要点,抓住主要信息进行描写。可先把表内所提供的内容要点用英语列出,尽量使用一些较高层次的词汇或短语以及所学过的句法结构(如定语从句、分词结构等)进行描述。例如上述实例图表中的内容可用英语列出以下几个短语或句式:(1)practiceapolicyoflatemarriageandonecouple,onechild(2)reducethebirthrate(3)haveatightcontrolovercountrypeopleenteringcitiestodovariousphysicaljobs(4)lightenthepressureonthecitycausedbytheincreasingpopulation(5)buildapartmentblockswithshoppingcenters,schools,hospitals,aswellascinemasandtheatersaroundusorevenbuildsatellitetownsinthecitysuburbsorthecountiesroundthecities(6)encouragecitycitizenstomovetheretoliveandwork三、正确使用过渡性词语,提高文章的连贯性。过渡性词语的使用是语言的连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句子与句子之间,段落与段落之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的过渡性词语是非常必要的。例如上述实例,我们可在要点(1)前插入表示时间顺序的过渡词语first/firstly,在要点(3)前插入secondly,在要点(5)前插入finally。在要点(6)前可以插入表示终结关系的过渡短语inthisway/bythismeans。现将中学课本中应掌握的过渡词语总结如下:1.表示起始关系的有:firstofall,accordingto,sofar,asfaras,tobeginwith,inmyopinion等。2.表示时间顺序的有:first,then,later,intheend,finally,atlast,afterthat,sincethen,immediately,suddenly,soon等。3.表示空间顺序的有:ontheright/left,ononesideof,atthetop/foot/endof,inthemiddleof,infrontof,atthebackof等。4.表示并列关系的有:and,or,also,too,aswellas,neither.nor,notonly.butalso,either.or,not.but等。5.表示转折关系的有:but,yet,however,while,onthecontrary等。6.表示因果关系的有:because,since,as,for,thanksto,thus,therefore,asaresult(of),onereasonisthat.anotherreasonisthat.等。7.表示条件关系的有:if,unless,as(so)longas,onconditionthat等。8.表示让步关系的有:although,though,evenif,inspiteof,afterall,infact,what(who,when,where,how.)ever等。9.表示递进关系的有:whatsmore,furthermore,besides,whatsworse,tomakethematterworse,also,still,ontheonehand.ontheotherhand等。10.表示列举事实的过渡性词语有:forexample/instance,suchas,take.forexample,asfollows,andsoon等。11.表示总结性的有:inshort,inbrief,inaword,onthewhole等。12.表示过渡性的插入语有:ithink(believe,suppose,imagine,guess.),imafraid,youknow,asisknowntousall,asweallknow等。根据以上图表式书面表达题写作思路,上述实例可整理成文如下:howtoreducethepresentcitypopulationourmoderncityiscrowded,andtosolvetheproblem,threeproposalsareputforward.mostofthepeoplethinkthatweshouldfirstpracticethepolicyoflatemarriageandonecouple,onechildinordertoreducethebirthrate.secondly,thecitygovernmentsmusthaveatightcontrolovercountrypeopleenteringcitiestodovariousphysicaljobssoastolightenthepressureonthecitycausedbytheincreasingpopulation.finally,moreandmorepeoplesuggestthatweshouldbuildapartmentsubdivisionswithshoppingcenters,schools,hospitals,aswellascinemasandtheatersaroundthemorevenbuildsatellitetownsaroundthecities.inthisway,citycitizenswillbeencouragedtomovetheretoliveandwork.ifthesethreeproposalsarewellcarriedout,thepopulationwillbegreatlyreduced。*结束 20万元会使中国令世人瞩目，中国运动员创造了新的奥运会金牌纪录。获金牌的运动员除了得到政府奖金20万元以外，还会从地方得到更多的奖励。对此，社会各界反响不一。赞成不赞成1. 运动员为国争了光2. 运动员付出了许多辛苦和汗水3. 奖金有利于中国体育后备力量的培养1 运动员是国家培养出来的，为国争光理所当然2 得到大量奖金后，有些队员不会退役3 一些企业趁机炒作，从中获取广告效应 请你就此现象进行简单阐述，并提出自己的一些看法或建议。(120词左右)提示词汇：奖金bonus 参考范文china has become a shock to the world in olympic game 20 the chinese government will offer each gold medal winner the bonus of 200,000, local reward not included, which has become a household talk. some say the players have won honor for our country after taking great pains, so they deserve it. whats more, it will benefit the training of future players. others on the opposite side believe the players get well trained and paid by the country. it will go against our wish if the players quit after getting much money. besides, its said that some enterprises are taking advantage of this to sell their products. i think i will admire the sportsmen who worship not moneny but the spirits of the olympic games.*结束作文（*） 目前，家长开车接送孩子上下学已成为一个普遍现象，人们对此做法褒贬不一。下面是就此现象所做的问卷调查结果。 请根据下列图表提示，描述被访者的看法，并就此现象发表自己的观点。 注意：1词数100左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计人总词数。2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 nowadays its a common phenomenon that parents drive their children to school and back home, which causes a heated discussiona survey has just been conducted about it，and the findings are as follows_one possible version： nowadays its a common phenomenon that parents drive their children to school andback home,which causes a heated discussiona survey has just been conducted about it,and the findings are as follows we can see that half of the supporters believe that more valuable time can be saved for students to get enough sleepanother 30think children can rest or have meals comfortably in their own carsabout l5consider it reasonable just for the sake of childrens safetythe rest of them think it offers more chances for parents to communicate with their children however，other people hold different opinions55of them believe that it results in more traffic jauls，especially around schools in rush hoursand 30think that driving kids to and from school will undoubtedly add to the parentsburdens in aspects like time，energy and expensesstill，15worry that in the long term children may be more dependent on their parents，which does no good to themin my opinion，we can take buses to school*结束7. 假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自于美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排在津的一日活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队smith 先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见。上午与我校学生座谈（话题如校园生活、文化差异等）；中午与我校学生共同进餐（午餐包括饺子、面条等）；下午与我校学生游览海河。注意：1. 次数不少于100；2. 可是当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数。参考词汇：海河 the haihe river dear mr smithi am li hua, chairman of