山东省青岛市崂山区高考英语二轮复习 短文改错练习（5）.doc

山东省青岛市崂山区2016高考英语短文改错二轮练习（5）短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。dear lucy，thanks for your letter. i might get use to the life in american gradually. food here remains the same all day and the school here is more relaxed though i take 2 ap courses and have to catch up with half years courses. all the books are in english and i have to write many articles, that might seem difficult. much more worse, i find out my oral english retrograde (倒退的). i have been out of my school only once, and i guess there are a lot of differences. there are some funny clubs, and i participate the basketball club in this semester. its amazing. by the way, thank you and all the other classmates in china for making souvenirs (纪念品) for myself. send it to me when you all finish and i will be very happy.hope you will reply soon. yours，li hua【参考答案】：dear lucy，thanks for your letter. i might get to the life in gradually. food here remains the same all day and the school here is more though i take 2 ap courses and have to catch up with half years courses. all the books are in english and i have to write many articles, might seem difficult. much more worse, i find out my oral english retrograde (倒退的). i have been out of my school only once, i guess there are a lot of differences. there are some funny clubs, and i participate the basketball club in this semester. its amazing. by the way, thank you and all the other classmates in china for making souvenirs (纪念品) for . send to me when you all finish and i will be very happy.hope you will reply soon. yours，li hua短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。most families in china hoped their single children will have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. so do teachers in schools! many children are given such much homework that they have hardly any spare time to have sports. the children are forbidden to do anything but to study. no wonder so many children are tiring of lessons. some even attack or kill his parents and teachers! i believe many people already read this kind of news in newspaper or magazines. shouldnt we draw a lesson from the cases? now our government is carried out a plan to solve the education problems.【参考答案】：most families in china their single children will have a happy future, so they are very strict their children. so teachers in schools! many children are given much homework that they have hardly any spare time to have sports. the children are forbidden to do anything but to study. no wonder so many children are of lessons. some even attack or kill parents and teachers! i believe many people already read this kind of news in or magazines. shouldnt we draw a lesson from the cases? now ourgovernment is out a plan to solve the education problems.(河南五校联考)after i finished the school this year, i began to 1._look for work. now several month later, i still hadnt 2._found the job that i was interested. last sunday morning，3._i received a phone call from a man calling him mr. smith. 4._he said to me on the phone, “i hear you do very well in your5._studies. i may provide a job for you.” i entered 6._his office with a beaten heart. how i hoped that i 7._will go through the jobhunting talk today and he would 8._take me on as a lab assistant. but to my surprised, 9._what he said disappointing. he only needed a model. 10._答案与解析：1去掉thefinish school是固定搭配，表示“毕业”。2monthmonthsmonth是可数名词，several暗示应用复数形式。3interested后加inbe interested in是固定搭配，表示“对感兴趣”。4himhimselfcalling himself mr. smith短语作定语，修饰a man表示“自称mr. smith”的男子。5dodid根据逻辑可知这里表示毕业前的情况，故用一般过去时。do well in“干得好”。67beatenbeatinga beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。8willwould这里应考虑主从句时态的呼应，故用过去将来时。9surprisedsurpriseto ones surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人惊讶的是”。10said后加waswhat he said是主语从句，“他的话是令人失望的”。句子缺少系动词。【参考答案】women，present and ancient， at the home and 1_abroad,wear long hair,that adds to their beautybut few 2_people realize it affects her brainshair grows constantly 3_it takes in nourishment(营养) constantlyif it was short 4_of nourishment,itll die and falls offbody supplies hair with 5_nourishment,it cant be stopped even in a minutesif it takes in 6_too many,that means hair has already used too much 7_nourishment which body gives it to the headas time passes， 8_brain is relatively short of nourishmentit leads dizziness 9_(头昏)therefore ones brains will be weakened 10_【参考答案】key 101去掉the 2that which 3her their 4was is 5fallsfall 6minutesminute7manymuch 8去掉it 9 lead后加to 102015届广西桂林中学高三8月月考短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）one day my uncle had been riding a horse in rain when he reached a small restaurant. wet and coldly, and he wanted to warm himself very much. however, the restaurant was too crowded with people that he could not get near the fire. “taking some fish to my horse!” he called out to the waiter. “sorry, sir. but a horse didnt eat fish!” the waiter answered. “never mind, just do as i tell you,” my uncle said. the crowd of people felt surprising at the strange order. to see a horse eat fish, all of whom ran out. having the whole room to himself, my uncle sat down besides the fire and began warm himself. 【答案】【知识点】短文改错记叙文【文章综述】讲述一个人骑马到了一个餐馆，又冷又湿，想一个办法让自己取暖的故事。 【答案解析】76. rain前加the 考查形容词。in the rain在雨中；77.coldly cold 考查形容词。句意：又冷又湿，他非常想温暖一下自己。cold形容词做伴随状语。78.去掉and 考查句子结构。and应该连接两个句子，但wet and cold只是伴随状语，故去年掉and.79. too so 考查固定结构。句意：然而这个餐馆如何拥挤以至于不能靠近火源。so that 如此以至于。80. taking take 考查祈使句。句