高考英语大一轮复习写作必备写作体裁技巧点拨十图画作文写作课件外研版

十、图画作文写作,写作指南,常用句型,写作实例,佳作向导,范文体验,写作指南,图画类书面表达要求考生从观察入手,通过对画面意思的理解,发挥想象力,按照一定的要求把图画内容准确、生动地加工成书面语言。 针对此类题型,考生在写作时可遵循以下步骤: 1.读图。要读懂图片,联想其背景,并了解其深层的含义。 2.描图。简要描述图画的内容,为下文做好铺垫。 3.说理。要联系现实,说清道理。针对图片进行联想,挖掘图中隐含的有 教育意义的内容,联系现实生活进行说理,对人能够起到激励作用。此 部分是文章的重点,切忌轻描淡写。 4.升华。结尾要言简意赅,画龙点睛,起到升华的作用。 5.锤炼语言。使用高级词汇和句式,恰当运用连接词语与过渡句,增加文 章的得分点。,常用句型,In the picture,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.(2015福建) 在图中,我们可以看到一个穿着破旧衣服的男孩,坐在一张破旧的木桌 子旁,上面放着一堆书。 As is described in the picture.正如图画所描述的那样 A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.(2015福建) 一道微弱的光线穿过墙上的一个小洞,他在全神贯注地看书。 The moral of the story is: spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.(2015福建) 故事的寓意是:不遗余力地去获取知识,不管情况多么困难,也决不 气馁。,The picture indicates/conveys the meaning that. 这幅图指出/传达 The sight reminds me of something in my daily life. 这个情景使我想起了我的日常生活中的一些事情。 According to the picture above,we can see that. 通过上面的图画,我们可以得知 It is a common phenomenon in China that. 在中国是常见现象。,写作实例,假如你叫李华,是一名高中生。最近,你将参加学校组织的英语作文比赛。请根据下面一幅漫画写一篇英语短文。内容包括: 1.描述图画的内容; 2.揭示图画所反映的问题; 3.针对图画的内容谈谈你的看法。,注意:词数100左右。,佳作向导,1.文体信息 (1)体裁:记叙文 (2)时态:一般现在时 (3)人称:第三人称为主 2.思路点拨 本题要求看图说理,所给图画反映的是目前家庭教育中存在的问题,可以采用先叙述后议论的方式来写。文章可分为三部分来写: (1)开头描述图画:图中女孩拒绝帮助母亲干家务活,甚至要求洗碗一次50元。 (2)发展揭示问题:许多青少年有如此表现,他(她)们认为学习是他(她)们的义务,而家务活是父母的事情。 (3)结尾陈述自己的看法:父母教育方式错误;应当帮助孩子学习一些技能;有利于融洽关系。,3.要点表达 (1)从图中我们可以看到一个女孩拒绝帮助她母亲干家务活,甚至洗碗一次索要50元的费用。 From the picture we can see a girl refuses to help her mother with housework.She even charges 50 yuan for washing dishes at a time. =From the picture we can see a girl refuses to help her mother with housework and even charges 50 yuan for washing dishes at a time. (2)他(她)们很少和父母分担家务活。他(她)们认为努力学习功课是他(她)们的职责而家务活是父母的事。 They seldom share housework with their parents.They think their duty is to work hard at their lessons and housework belongs to their parents. =They seldom share housework with their parents because they think it is their duty to work hard at their lessons and housework belongs to their parents.,(3)父母应该要求孩子分担家务而不是宠爱他(她)们,因为做家务活是有益的。 Parents should require their children to share housework instead of spoiling them because doing housework is beneficial. (4)父母除了应该帮他们培养责任感还要帮助孩子学习一些重要的技能,如做饭和洗衣服。 Parents should not only help their children develop a sense of responsibility but also assist them in learning some important skills,like cooking and washing. =Apart from helping them develop a sense of responsibility, parents should also assist them in learning some important skills,like cooking and washing.,范文体验,From the picture we can see a girl (拒绝帮助她的母亲干家务活) and even charges 50 yuan for washing dishes at a time. (她的行为) is really astonishing and it sets me thinking deeply. Many teenagers today act just like the girl.They seldom share housework with their parents because they think (努力学习功课是他们的职责) and housework belongs to their parents. I think it is because parents educate their children in a wrong way.Parents should require their children to share housework (而不是宠爱他们) because doing housework is beneficial. (除了帮他们培养责任感),parents should also assist their children in learning some important skills, like cooking and washing.Moreover (和孩子们一起做家务活) promotes a pleasant relationship.,答案:refuses to help her mother with housework Wha