江苏高考英语专题五书面表达第二节分类突破一审题谋篇的4大要素优选习题.docx

第二节分类突破一、审题谋篇的4大要素(2016江苏)请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。In recent years，internet voting has become increasingly popular in China.People not only cast on-line votes themselves，but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “Cutest Baby”Li Jiang，a high school student，is invited to vote in the “Best Police Officer” competition，organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers daily work.Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories.He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds.He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “Future Singer” competition.He has already received three similar invitations this week.His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition，the family will win an overseas tour for free.Su Hua likes his cousin very much，but he finds other singers perform even better.To vote，or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.写作内容1用约30个单词写出上文概要；2用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用23个理由或论据支撑你的看法。写作要求1写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。考场思维模式(一)审题：定体裁读写任务类议论文，本文是对网络投票的利与弊进行讨论。定人称第一人称定时态一般现在时定结构开头：用约30个单词写出上文概要；主体：阐述对网络投票的看法；结尾：说明自己的观点。(二)谋篇：1阅读短文，抓住内容要点根据写作内容和写作要求可以列出以下三个要点：(1)写出文章的概要；(2)发表支持或反对网络投票的观点；(3)概括观点，得出结论。2概括大意，转述作者观点本文为“对比观点式”议论文，写作时要从正反两个方面入手。以支持该观点为例，可以写出下列概要：描述现象：With the rapid development of the Internet，online voting has been gaining popularity.陈述观点：Online voting may indeed offer people more opportunities to participate in a variety of social activities without expending too much effort.3顺承过渡，引出自己观点根据概要写出过渡性语句，引出自己的观点：From my own perspective，online voting should be treated rationally.4详写例证，论证自己观点用23个理由或论据论证自己的观点。5得出结论，注意前后呼应对观点进行论证之后，进一步概括归纳自己的观点，升华主题，并照应开头。6修饰润色，使其锦上添花7誊答案英语书面表达是唯一一项主观性试题，评分过程中就难免会有很多主观因素。漂亮的字体、干净整洁的卷面会使人赏心悦目，无疑会给作文增色不少。因此，在誊答案时要注意书写规范，字母均匀大小适中，字体工整，保持卷面整洁，切忌潦草凌乱、乱涂乱改。如需改动，用笔画斜线进行删除就可以了。8再复查将答案誊到答题纸上之后，还要快速地复查一下，以防由于粗心大意而出现的一些完全可以避免的错误，例如单复数、拼写、搭配、时态、标点符号等方面的错误。满分作文With the rapid development of the Internet，online voting has been gaining popularity.It brings several advantages，influencing people actively.However，online voting has adverse effects，and considering too much about personal emotion may cause inequity.Online voting may indeed offer people more opportunities to participate in a variety of social activities without expending too much effort.Moreover，wider and better social benefits can be reached with the positive social images built.Everything is double-edged.As is known to us all，not all the people are willing to vote for the people who are eager to be the winners in competitions.Whats worse，fairness will undoubtedly be affected due to the emotional factor resulting from interpersonal relationships.From my own perspective，online voting should be treated rationally.Neither should we embrace online voting aimlessly，nor can we deny it completely.高考书面表达的审题谋篇是取得高分的第一步。认真阅读试题，做到明确中心思想，判断类型和特点，了解重点内容，力求切中题意。不论书面表达是以哪种形式提供情景，都要首先搞清楚要求写的是记叙文，还是说明文或议论文等。定文体，定人称，定时态和语态以及定要点，做好以上内容的整体布局和策划，是一篇优秀习作的必经之路。微技能(一)写作思路要顺畅1流畅性指根据整篇文章思想的需要，有效采用不同的连接手段，使文章层次清楚、行文连贯。所以我们要认真审题，分析所给的短文或者图画的内容，明确文章的写作主题，确定写作体裁、人称、时态、结构及要点等五大要素，并做到合理安排。2根据所提供的短文或者图表(图画)的内容，确定文章的段落层次。3收集所要表达主题的相关材料，能支持主题的具体内容材料。然后按要求写出语法正确的句子，包括时态、语态、用词和句法等要准确、地道地表达。必须要牢牢掌握一些常用句型或习惯表达，避免中式英语，在实践中不断总结中英在用法上的差异，养成用英语思维写作的习惯。 4理清我们写的三段中段落与段落之间的关系，以及这之间的过渡、衔接关系和方式。5确定能体现主题，简单明了，发人深思的结尾方式。微技能(二)篇章结构须谋划1注意篇章结构，合理布局读写任务型写作一般分为三段：第一段：概括所给的短文或者图表(图画)的内容要点；第二段：过渡引出主题句，并且阐述理由；第三段：表达个人观点。2确定主题句主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨，能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用，通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。写主题句应该注意以下几个方面：归纳出要写的文章的几个要点；提炼出具有概括性的几个要点的一句话；主题句应该具有可读性，抓住读者眼球并且吸引读者继续读下去。微技能(三)写作要点巧表述1所给短文或者图表(图画)的内容要点化根据所给短文或者图表(图画)的提示，列全需要写作的内容要点。确保无遗漏，这是考生能够拿到基本分的关键。2要点句式化将要点扩展成精确的句子，这是体现写作水平的关键一环，