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1、Qutang Middle School,cartoons,书面表达指导与训练,漫画作文,Writing about cartoons,How to write about cartoons?,1. 读图(topics),3. 谋篇(organization),2.解意(theme),.读图 (topics),education,.解意(Theme),角度(Angle): positive negative,. 主旨(Theme)(to the point ),Attention: Information: cartoons words,The comparison indicates the
2、 phenomenon of education inequality in modern China.,Example,角度 comparison 主旨 education inequality,.谋篇 -Organization,Step1. Description Describe what you have seen in the picture briefly. Step2. Analysis Figure out the inner meaning of the picture. Step3. Solutions Give your ideas about the picture.
3、,a country boy crying hope for education a city boy enjoy advantages of modern education,Step 1 Description,As is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture, In the picture, there are ,Sentence structures:,a country boy crying hope for education a city boy enjoy advantages of modern
4、 education,As is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture, In the picture, there are ,a country boy is crying helplessly in the darkness, hoping eagerly for school education. On the contrary, the city boy on the right is enjoying advantages of modern education .,As is vividly show
5、n in the picture,Step2 Analysis(联系实际分析) ( facts / reasons/results),Indication: education inequality Facts: be forced to leave school; suffer from low standards of; comparatively; better chances Results: difficult to keep pace with city children; worsen the problem,Sentence structures:,1.Reading the
6、cartoon, we think of a common phenomenon of our society. 2.It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, it is very common in our daily life. 3.The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection of 4.The picture indicates that we/ Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that 5. ,Indicate: education inequality Fac
7、ts: be forced to leave school; suffer from low standards of; comparatively better chances Results: difficult to keep pace with city children; worsen the problem,Sentence structures: 1.Reading the cartoon, we think of a common phenomenon of our society. 2.It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, it is v
8、ery common in our daily life. 3.The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection of 4.The picture indicates that we/ Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that,The picture indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China. (facts) School-age country children are often forced to leave sc
9、hool due to poverty. Even those who manage to stay in school are still suffering from the low standards of education. Comparatively, city children have much better chances to receive good education. (results) Thus, it is difficult for country children to keep pace with city ones, which in turn worse
10、ns the problem.,Step 3 Solutions Give your opinions about how to solve the problem,the government all citizens individual (从大到小) be aware of Only in this way social fairness harmonious society (从意识到行动),As far as Im concerned, /In my opinion, /From my point of view, 2. It is high time we took some me
11、asures to put an end to this phenomenon./ Immediate measures should be taken to 3. The government should make laws to 4. We should raise peoples awareness of 5. Everyone should make great efforts to,Only in this way can we,Sentence structures:,Can you think of some sentence structures to form your l
12、ast paragraph?,Sentence structures: 1. As far as Im concerned, /In my opinion, /From my point of view, 2. It is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon./ Immediate measures should be taken to 3. The government should make laws to 4. We should raise peoples awareness of 5. Ev
13、eryone should make great efforts to,the government all people be aware of Only in this way social fairness harmonious society,From my point of view, to solve this problem, the government should spend more money on the improvement of education in the countryside. Moreover, all citizens in the society
14、 should be aware of the seriousness of the problem and do whatever they can to help. Only in this way can we have more social fairness and thus have a more harmonious society.,Whatever the picture is, just remember: Proper description Exact analysis Reasonable solutions,Only if you keep these rules
15、in mind can you make it.,Conclusion:,下图描述的是目前社会上所存在的一种社会现象:酒后驾车。请描述这幅漫画并谈谈你认为应采取哪些措施禁止酒后驾车。,Steps,Contents,Description (Para 1),Analysis (Para 2),Solution (Para 3),One possible version: The picture describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among some drivers in our country. In the picture, a dri
16、ver is caught by a policeman because his car has “kissed” the wall. He has drunk so much that he cant stand normally. How can he drive a car in such bad condition? Drunk driving is a great danger both to our society and to drivers. Its time we took some measures to forbid drinking before driving. We should strengthen the traffic security education to raise peoples awareness towards safety. In addition, the government should make stricter laws about it and punish drunk drivers severely.,In my opinion, the approaches above should be followed and gradually spread out all
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