英语四级写作.ppt

1、Types of Writing,1.Narration,To narrate is to give an account of an event or a series of events,Five parts, Point of View, Purpose,The 1st person-vivid/ limited,/,the 3rd person- subjective,Try to make sure it can leave deep impression on the reader.,One evening I visited the English corner of our u

2、niversity It lies beside our university library where trees and flowers grow and there is a spacious ground. Every evening, large numbers of people go there to improve their English, but I had never been there before.,A Visit to an English Corner,When I arrived there, many people had already been th

3、ere. 1 looked around and found that most of them were college students. Some of them were talking in English in twos and threes. From time to time they laughed joyfully. To my great surprise, I even found three foreigners talking and smiling with some students who were listening with great interest.

4、,Just then, a tall student came towards and asked: Shall we have a talk in English? My heart beat very fast at that moment for this was the first time for me to visit the English comer. Anyway, I managed to say “Yes”. Soon we were talking freely about our studies, our lives, our hobbies as well as o

5、ur problems of learning English.,Time went fast, and it was already 10 oclock before I realized it. I had a good time there and was glad to 1earn a lot at the corner. I understood the proverb better: Practice makes perfect.,An Eternal Love,An Eternal Love,An Eternal Love,Jay met Nancy at my 21st bir

6、thday party. In that evening, they had a good impression with each other, then they fell in love.,But I knew what was meant. Nancy had been suffered from serious disease and struggled with cancer for one year. To my surprised, Jay didnt give up their love when he heard of it. He said composedly: “I

7、love you deeply and I will be right here waiting for you.”,Nancy cried and whispered: “I cant believe how lucky I am to meet you at this point in my life, but I dont want to hurt you please leave me!” Jay gave her an embrace: “Let me take care of you and youll be fine, God bless you” She had no word

8、s but wept in his arms.,Love seemed to have defeated Nancys disease. For over a year, all her tests were normal, and they were able to study together. But disease hit Nancy again when they studied at the reading-room. Jay sent her to the hospital immediately. In her unconscious days, he accompanied

9、her several days without sleeping. At last she died with no signs of fear or pain, smiling with one hand in his.,Their love shocks my heart. It makes me comprehend that love is also eternity, even at the edge of life.,An Unforgettable Day,During my 20 years life, so many days are important to me. Th

10、e day is when I was born, when I first went to school, when I got a deep criticismBut the most unforgettable day is China succeeded in application for the Olympic Games in Beijing, which gave me a deep and extraordinary memory.,The day was very important to every Chinese. When the president of Olymp

11、ic Game claimed the winner was Beijing, China, the whole China became a happy sea. Through TV, I could see people using different ways to celebrate this Exciting/moment.,Many persons cheered with tearful smile; taxi drivers turned on their headlights, forming two big Chinese characters “中国”; Preside

12、nts of other countries congratulated to China by telephone or telegraph. At that moment, I was very proud of our great country. Had I been there, I would have joined them in and had a crazy sleepless night.,Not only was the day important to me, but to any Chinese. It is a symbol of the Chinese posit

13、ion in the world. It proves that china is becoming rich, strong and prosperous. To be every citizen in China, we should remember that that historic inspiring moment,2. Argumentation,An argumentation is to convince; to make the reader Agree with its point of view and support it, to persuade him to ch

14、ange his mind or behavior.,For/advantages,Against +Dis,phenomenon,Conclusion,Pheno+My view,reasons,conclusion,Paragraph,On the contrary, others are attracted by the country.,They like clear streams, fresh air and high mountains. In the countryside, the air is clear, the food is fresh And the houses

15、are usually spacious with large Courtyard around them.,Therefore, people feel closer to nature The very nature that gives man life.,Topic S,Supporting S,Concluding S,2. Argumentation,T. S + D.S + C.S,Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. The time when women were only con

16、fined to the kitchen and looked after their children at home is gone. Instead, they have gone out their home and taken up many jobs such as drivers, doctors, scientists and even top managers which used to be dominated by men. Now we can say for sure what men can do is equally done by women., How to

17、Keep Fit, How to Interview for a Job,How to Control Unplanned Birth,phenomeonon,solution,conclusion,Model 2: Why, Why Some Animals die out, Why So Many People Try Their Luck on the Lottery,Why the Internet Becomes Popular in China,Phenomenon,Reasons,Conclusion Or solution,Topic S Brain Drain in Chin

18、a,China is facing a serious problem of talent flight.,There are many reasons for the widespread brain drain in China.,Its urgent for the government to take measures to Protect our human resources and to enable our country To take off in the 21st century.,Developing S,There are many reasons for the w

19、idespread brain drain in China. Some felt ignored at home, having been kept down at the bottom of social ladder in the past. And they believe they couldnt develop their potential at home. Others cant resist the temptation of better conditions. They have gone abroad either for money or for their care

20、ers. And still some others have gone abroad for the sake of their children.,Model 3: Why+How, Gaps Between the Rich and the Poor,Exercise,Phenomenon,Reasons,solution, Harmfulness of Fake Commodities, The Negative Effects of Examination,Brain Drain in China,Model 4: Why+harmfulness, Cheating On Campu

21、s,Exercise, Fighting against Smoking, Over-Population, “Little Emperor” in China,Model 5: problem,harmfulness+solution, Problem with Todays Only Child,Exercise, Fake Diplomas, Breeding Self-Confidence,Exercise,Why I Came to College, How to Get to Know the World Outside the Camputer, Noise Pollution,

22、 College Students Doing Part-time Jobs, Cell Phones, Holiday Economy,Model 6: Advantages+disadvantages,advantages,Disadvantages,phenomenon,Conclusion, TVs Effects on the Young,Exercise,Model 7: My view on,Support meanwhile, frequently going out on a date may result in frequent absence from class, wh

23、ich will undoubtedly hold up their learning pace. In a word, love makes one indulge more in sweet romance.,On Campus Love,Every coin has its two sides, so does campus love. So in my eyes, whether there are more advantages than disadvantages or vice versa, the key point is the way to treat the relati

24、onship between love and study. It is true that love can make the world go round, but it determines the ways love goes. Taking good care of campus love and study, youll find that original life can be much better than you thought., On Layingoff,Exercise, Exam-Oriented or Quality-Oriented, Teacher-Centered or Student-Centered Class,