初中英语人教版八年级上册writing.ppt

1、书面表达,writing 义坊学校 涂淑梅,How can we write a good composition?(作文）,Step 1:Search (Read the instructions carefully and get the main idea) 认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。,健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。,审,travel,stay at home,visit frie

2、nds or parents,work,根据以下关键词及图表找出文章的要点如下：,调查报告 如何度假 倡议假日休闲,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,A lot of people travel Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,Step 2:Li

3、st (Make an outline),Step 3:Add (Add a beginning and ending),加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。,A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey repo

4、rt.,Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,a nice head,a nice tail,a nice body,恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,Step 4:Connect (Use proper link words),1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor; 2.表示选择: or, eitheror; 3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, a

5、fter all, 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, notbut, on the one handon the other hand; 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, final

6、ly, in the end; 9.表示强调: also, besides, whats more, actually, in fact, 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking,关联词,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some ot

7、her people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,连,write correct sentencesUse proverbs/sayingsneat handwritingenough words,Step 5:Beautify 选好词句，美化文章。 在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。,Skill One Make your sentences correct,We should do s

8、ports a week once. Save the environment is our duty. There is going to have a meeting today. I hope I can come true my dream.,once a week,Saving,be,achieve,Skill Two: Different expressions,the same meaning.,He studies English well. He is good at English. He does well in English,Tom is a student. He

9、is 16 years old. He likes running . Tom, a 16-year-old student, likes running .,Try to use phrases!,Try to use long sentences!,He is my best friend. He always helps me with my English. The boy who always helps me with my English is my best friend.,Try to use clauses,Skill Three:Use proverbs and sayi

10、ngs,An apple a day keeps the doctor away. Where there is a will, there is a way. Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy, and wise. Failure is the mother of success Practice makes perfect,Skill Four:A good beginning and ending,My favorite teacher is I have met many excellent teac

11、hers in junior school. One of them is my English teacher. Her name is Ms. .,We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at h

12、ome, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,美,Add (加),Beautify (美),List （列）,Search (审),Connect (连),achieve a high mark in writ

13、ing,作文评分规则：,A.(1315分)包含内容要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。 B(10_12分）基本包含内容要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。 C(79分)内容包含部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意 D(46分)要点不明确，语言错误多 E(13分）只抄了提示词，错误百出 F（0分）白卷,Writing practice,中学生学习时间长、大力大，专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。为此，不同的同学有不同的放松方式，有的爱看电视，有的听音乐，有的做运动请你谈谈你通过哪些方式放松自己并说说原因，谈谈你的感受。,The Senior High School

14、Entrance Examination is coming. In order to make a success in the exam I think its righ time for us to relax a little. Or well be too nervous to work well in the exam. In order to relax ourselves, we can turn to some of our hobbies, different students have different ways - Some watch TV, some listen to music But for me I enjoy taking exercise most. Whenever I feel tired, I always spend an hour (in) walking or jogging in the park. Besides, I also play table tennis with my friends afte