公开课短文改错解读.ppt

1、词数在100字左右； 以书信、日记、记叙文为主； 短文为常见话题或学生身边事； 语言简单易懂，难度符合中学生水平； 以考查学生书面表达中的常见错误为主； 出题涉及面广，但动词（包括非谓语动词）、名词、连词、形容词或副词的考查较多； 标点符号、语序、单词拼写一般不作要求；,高考短文改错命题特点,高考短文改错要求,增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写 上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上 修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。 例如: It was very nice

2、to get your invitation to spend weekend with the you. Luckily I was completely free then, so Ill to say “yes”. Ill arrive am in Bristol at around 8 pm in am Friday evening. on,例如: It was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you. Luckily I was completely free then, so Ill to say “ye

3、s”. Ill arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in am Friday evening.,注意：以下为不规范答题,均不给分,the,am,on,错误类型分析,漏词,例1 The day before the speech contest English teacher talked to me.,例2 I hope youve had pleasant journey home and. (NMET 2005 全国卷III),例3 Last Saturday, the class that I was on held a get-together, whic

4、h took us a long time prepare,my,a,to,2.多词,例1 Suddenly I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.,例4 Some students may also to save up for their college or future use.(NMET2005全国),3.错词,例1 Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to EmeiThe time passes quickly.,_,passed,例2 It is real

5、a good chance to have met all of you here.,_,really,错误设置及考点分布,两大类型：,逻辑错误,语法错误,词法错误,句法错误,I.从词法的角度去分析：,1.冠词,2.名词,3.介词,4.形容词和副词,5.代词,6.动词,冠词：英语中冠词只有三个，从高考英语改错题的角度来看，通常从以下几个方向出题： 1）不定冠词a和an互改 2）不定冠词 a或an和定冠词the互改 3）根据需要增删冠词(注意惯用法),1.冠词常见错误：,1）Today I visited the Smithsmy first visit to a American family

6、 2）Each player must obey captain，who is the leader of the team 3）We may be one family and live under a same roof， but 4）Although we have been members for a short period of time, we have made a great progress .（07福建）,an,the,the,冠词常见错误：,2.名词常见错误：,单复数用错,可数与不可数名词的混用。,advantages,subjects,1）There are adva

7、ntage for students to work while studying at school. 2）We study quite a few subject，such as maths, Chinese，English and physics,words,pictures,3）On the way up, I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. 4)Their word were a great encouragement to me.,5) Your knowledges of Greece can

8、 help the whole class.（浙江）,knowledge,6) In summer, the sea under the blue skies is even more beautiful. (重庆 ),sky,名词常见错误：,1)介词的多余或缺失 2) 错用。 这一部分需要平时多多积累，弄清常用介词的固定搭配。,3.介词常见错误：,1) Could you share your experiences for us?. 2) I am writing to thank you with your kind help. 3) Bill insisted in staying n

9、ear the car. 4)In fact, they are planning to visit China in next year. 5) We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves.,for,on,of,with,4.形容词和副词常见错误：,1).两者混用 2).形容词、副词的比较级或最高级 记住:修饰名词及在连系动词后用形容词；修饰实义动词，形容词，分词及整个句子用副词。,1)Im sure well have a wonderfully time together. 2) It is disho

10、nest and foolishly to help or to ask help from others .(05重庆) 3)The Huanghe River is the second longer river in China. 4)Although radios can be very noise, 5)He played strong and loudly music.,wonderful,foolish,longest,noisy,loud,主要是代词的格与数的错用和一致性,5.代词常见错误：,1）The Smiths did his best to make me feel a

11、t home. 2）People need a place where they can rest and enjoy them 3）Some students may also save up for our college or future use ,their,their,themseleves,6.动词常见错误,1)时态错误,包括and前后动词时态不一致(时态的更 改要以上 下文的主体时态为依据) 2) 主谓不一致，如第三人称单数漏掉s,或主语为复 数,谓语动词用了单数;再就是就近原则对主语的影响 3)主动语态与被动语态错用. 4)非谓语动词的错用：不定式符号to的有无问题；动名词作

12、主语、 宾语问题;and连接的不定式或动名词前后一致问题; 现在分词和过去分词的区别等。,watch,Playing,costs,1)At first I was not quite willing to sit down and watched the 90-minute football match. (08浙江) 2) Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also. 3）Anyone may borrow books, and it cost nothing to borrow them. 4)Soon

13、I began to enjoy talk to myself. 5)Earning their own money allow them to spend on anything as they please. (05全国),talking,allows,动词常见错误,7.连词常见错误：,连词主要考查上下文之间的逻辑关系，包括并列连词、从属连词、连接代词、连接副词、关系代词、关系副词。,1 )The food was expensive and the service was good.,_,but,2) My hometown is a pretty city, so people the

14、re are kind and polite.,_,and,3) While they find fish come to the surface, they fly down immediately and catch them without delay.,_,when,II.从句法的角度去分析：,1）定语从句 2）名词性从句 3）状语从句 4) 句式结构,1）定语从句,1.He put it in a secret place where I couldnt find.,which,2.The house which Lu Xun once lived is being repaired

15、 now.,where,3. Ill never forget the day which I first went to school.,when,2）名词性从句,1.We would return at night to hear that hed picked up from the radio in the day.,what,2.But it didnt matter that I would win or not.,whether,3.When people are playing games,they move a lot. That is how sports are good

16、 activities for their health.,why,3）状语从句,1.He got up early in order to he could catch the first,that,2. Make a mark which you have any doubts or questions.,where,4) 句式结构,考察一个句子是否完整,是否存在否定误用的问题,省略 现象是否有误,平行、并列关系是否混乱,强调句结构是否完整等,1) As we climbed the mountains, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told

17、stories.,2 )I particularly enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the changing colors of the leaves on the trees.,visited,seeing,3)Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?,do,1 )Uncle Ben will go back from America for Christmas.,2)“Havent you been to Beijing?” “Y

18、es. Ive never been to Beijing.”,3 While the others are jumping about in the air, I can run under my legs and get the ball.,_,come,_,No,_,their,III.行文逻辑,高考短文改错解题步骤,纵观全文,理解大意,逐句审读,分行判断,先易后难,各个击破,还原检查,规范答题,返回,动词形，名词数， 还要注意形和副； 非谓语，细辨别， 习惯用法要牢记； 句子成分多分析， 冠词逻辑须关注。,短文改错口诀,实战演习 I had a interesting dream la

19、st night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I, didnt lose heart and kept running. All the students on the playground cheer me on, Come on! I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if flying like the superman. In the end, I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time I woke up and find myself still in bed!,_,an,_,_,But,_,cheered,_,faster,with,_,a,_,proud,_,clas