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Unit5MusicReadingforwritingWriteaspeech1.What’sthetypeofthevideo?2.Doyoulikemusic?Why?AspeechLead-in:watchthevideoandanswerquestionsWhydoyoulikemusic?giveusjoy\happinessinspireustobeoptimistickeepourcompanyrelieveourpressuregiveushope\strengthcalmusdownSkimthetextquicklyandsummarizethemainideaofeachpara.Greetings&self-introduction&purposeofthespeechSarah’spersonalexperiencewithmusic:herproblem&solutionTheimpactsofmusiconSarahSarah’sadviceandhopefortheaudienceGood
morning!My
name
isSarahWilliams.It's
an
honour
to
be
here
andtosharewithyouthestoryof
how
musichas
hadan
impacton
my
life.A]Have
you
ever
faced
a
time
whenthingslooked
dark
and
you
had
nohope
at
all?Two
years
ago,I
was
toldIhad
a
seriousdisease
whichwasdifficult
to
cure.My
body
ached
allthetime
and
thusI
thoughtIdidn'thavemuch
longer
to
live.I
was
very
afraid
and
I
felt
so
alone
and
discouraged.Then
oneday,Ihadtogothroughatwo-hourmedicaltreatment.Thedoctorwanted
me
to
relax,
so
he
had
me
listen
to
some
music,and
one
of
the
songs
was
"Happy".The
song
mademefeelsomuchbetterthatfromthenon
I
began
to
listen
to
music
all
the
time.(BIJohnA.Logansaid,"Musicisthemedicineofthemind."And
it's
true.Music
helped
me
recover.ICI
Musicgave
me
happiness.When
I
listenedto
music,(D)it
made
my
spirits
fly
like
a
kite
inthewind.IC]Musicgave
mestrengthandbrought
me
relief.(E)It
was
the
rockIleantonto
becomestrongandtoget
through
those
hard
times.
Moreover,[C]music
gave
me
hope
and
a
sense
ofsatisfaction.(FItbecame
mybest
friend.It
spoke
wordsofencouragementtothedeepestpart
ofmy
being.Of
course,I
hope
none
ofyou
have
to
go
through
the
same
kind
ofsuffering
that
Idid.At
the
same
time,we
all
go
through
various
periods
when
we
feelsad
or
alone.
Duringthosetimes,musiccan
helpyou
inthesamewaythat
it
helped
me.I
hopeall
of
you
willsomehow
begintotreasure
musicand
make
ita
partofyourlife.Thank
you!personalexperiencespersonalfeelingsconclusionThanktheaudience
Body
Endinggreetingsself-introduction
topicBeginningReadforthestructureOpening(Para.1)Body(Para.2-3)Closing(Para.4)Aspeech(Title)Greetings,self-introduction&purposePersonalexperienceSarah’sproblem+solutiontotheproblemImpactsofmusiconSarahSarah’sadvice&hopefortheaudienceReadforthestructureReadfordetailsReadthetextagainandanswerthefollowingquestions.Sarahhadaseriousdiseasewhichwasdifficulttocure.ltmadeherfeelmuchbetterbecauseitisthe“medicineofthemind”.Heradvicetoothersistousemusictohelpwhenyouhaveproblems.Readforlanguagefeatures1.Simile(明喻):tomakecomparisonbetween
twounlikeelements.comparativeword:as,like,as/though,seem,as...aseg.Heworkslikeahorse.2.Metaphor(暗喻):tomakecomparison,butitisimpliedratherthanstated.eg.Theworldisastage.3.Personification(拟人):togivehumanfeelingstoanimalsorpersonalattributes(特质)toinanimate(无生命的)objects.eg.Theskyweeps.Rhetoricaldevices(修辞手法)
arewaystomakeourlanguagemorevivid,andthuskeepthereaders'attention.Rhetoricaldevicesthatareusedinthepassage:Readforlanguagefeatures4.Rhetoricalquestion(设问):questionwithoutadirectanswer.eg.Whodoesn'tloveabeautifulsunset?5.Quote(引用):torepeatashortpassage,word,phrase,orsentencethatcamefromsomewhereorsomeoneelse.eg....asLongfellowsays,“Musicistheuniversallanguagesofmankind.”6.Repetition(重复):repeatwordsorphrasestoemphasize(强调)certainfactsorideas.eg.Icame,Isaw,Iconquered.ReadforlanguagefeaturesHaveyoueverfacedatimewhenthingslookeddarkandyouhavenohopeatall?JohnA.Logansaid,“Musicisthemedicineofthemind.”Musicgavemehappiness.Musicgavemestrengthandbroughtmerelief.Musicgavemehopeandasenseofsatisfaction....itmademyspiritsflylikeakiteinthewind.ItwastherockIleantontobecomestrong...Itbecamemybestfriend.RhetoricalquestionQuoterepetitionsimilemetaphorpersonificationHowtowriteaspeech?
假定你是李华。请你写一篇演讲稿,与大家分享音乐对你的影响。内容包括:
1.曾经考前紧张,无法入眠;
2.音乐改变现状。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。1.第一段开门见山,点明主题——音乐是如何影响了我的人生的。2.主体部分通过事例、细节描述等有步骤地展开对主题的介绍,语言富有激情和感召力。如:第二段作者在叙述事情时,先用问句开头,引起读者注意,然后按照时间顺序展开。Twoyearsago、Thenoneday、fromthenon这些时间状语的使用,使叙述清晰、有序。3.第三段作者连续使用了三个“musicgaveme...”构成的排比句,层层递进,语气强烈,富有感染力,突出了音乐对作者的极大影响。4.结尾简明扼要,照应主题,发出呼吁或建议。如:第四段使用了两个“Ihope...”构成的排比句,表达了作者对于读者的美好祝福和真诚建议。学结构第一段:点明演讲话题①Goodmorning,everybody!MynameisLiHua.Itismyhonourtodelivermyspeechabouthowmusichashadanimpactonmylife.大家早上好!
我是李华。很荣幸能发表关于音乐是如何影响了我的人生的演讲。②Today,I'dliketotalkabouthowtoexpresslovetoourparents.今天,我想谈谈如何向我们的父母表达爱。③IwanttosharewithyouhowtheInternethashadanimpact/influenceonourlife.我想和你们分享互联网是如何影响我们的生活的。素材积累——对素材积累的应用要准第二段:通过引言或问题吸引听众的注意力,并结合自身经历,有步骤地展开对话题的介绍,并总结其对自己的影响①Someonesaid,“Wearereadingthefirstverseofthefirstchapterofabookwhosepagesareinfinite...”有人说过:“我们正在读一本书的第一章第一行,这本书的页数是无限的……”②Asweknow,musicisthroughourlife.正如我们所知,音乐贯穿我们的生活。③Lastyear,ourbelovedpetdogdied,whichmadeourwholefamilyverysad.Itwasmusicthathelpedusout.去年,我们心爱的宠物狗去世了,这让我们的整个家庭非常难过。正是音乐帮我们走出了困境。④Wheneveryoulistentomusic,it'sapleasure.Musicmakeseverythingaroundyoulooksobeautiful.无论什么时候听音乐都是一种享受。音乐让周围的一切看起来都那么美好。第三段:总结其对自己的影响①Musicisakindofmedicine,whichcancureourdepressionorunhappiness.音乐是一种药,它可以治愈我们的沮丧或不快。②Withoutmusic,ourlifewillbecolourlessandtasteless.没有音乐,我们的生活将会失去色彩,索然无味。③Musicisplayinganimportantroleinourlife,whichisanessentialpartofourlife.音乐在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色,它是我们生活中不可或缺的一部分。④Musicistouswhatsunshineistotheearth,whichbringscolourtoourlife.音乐之于我们就像阳光之于地球,给我们的生活带来色彩。⑤Whetherwearesadordepressed,thereismusictokeepuscompany.无论我们悲伤或沮丧,都会有音乐陪伴着我们。⑥Itismusicthatgivesusencouragementinthefaceofdifficulty.是音乐给了我们面对困难的勇气。第四段:总结演讲内容,提出希望①Altogether,wecancometo/drawaconclusionthatwecan'tbeseparatedfrommusic.总之,我们可以得出一个结论:我们离不开音乐。②Basedontheabovestatements,wecanconcludethatmusicmakeslifebetter.基于以上陈述,我们可以得出结论:音乐让生活更美好。③Let'scontinuetakingmusicasourcompanionandenjoyingthestrengthandenjoymentbroughtbymusic.让我们继续以音乐为伴,享受音乐带来的力量和快乐。④Musicissuchagoodthingthatlet'smakefriendswithit.音乐如此美好,让我们和它交朋友吧。⑤Ihopeallofyouwillbegintotreasuremusicandmakeitapartofyourlife.我希望你们所有人都能开始重视音乐,让它成为你们生活的一部分。[写作指导]一仿结构布局合理第一段:
第二段:
第三段:
第四段:
点明话题通过问题吸引听众的注意力,并介绍过去的经历音乐的影响提出希望二仿语言规范美观
1.与大家分享音乐对我生活的影响。(祈使句;impact)答案
Sharewithyouthestoryofhowmusichashadanimpactonmylife.2.考试即将来临时你紧张吗?(with复合结构)答案
Areyounervouswiththeexamapproaching?3.我无法像往常一样入睡。(asusual)答案
Icouldnotfallasleepasusual.4.我感到气馁。(主系表;discouraged)答案
Ifeltdiscouraged.5.老师建议我听音乐。(suggest+宾格+doing)答案
Myteachersuggestedmelisteningtomusic.6.音乐给我力量,给我安慰。(主谓宾)答案
Musicgivesmestrengthandbringsmerelief.7.听音乐给我一种满足感。(动名词短语作主语)答案
Listeningtomusicgivesmeasenseofsatisfaction.8.为什么不试试呢?(whynot)答案
Whynothaveatry?三仿句式高级表达9.用“It'sanhonourto...”改写句1。答案It'sanhonourtobehereandtosharewithyouthestoryofhowmusichashadanimpactonmylife.10.用asaresult呈现句3和句4的因果关系。答案Icouldnotfallasleepasusual.Asaresult,Ifeltdiscouraged.四誊写[参考范文]Hello,everyone.It'sanhonourtobehereandtosharewithyouthestoryofhowmusichashadanimpactonmylife.Areyounervouswiththeexamapproaching?Icouldnotfallasleepasusual.Asaresult,Ifeltdiscouraged.Then,myteachersuggestedmelis
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