Unit5MusicReadingforWriting写演讲稿课件-高中英语人教版

Unit5MusicReadingforwritingWriteaspeech1.What’sthetypeofthevideo?2.Doyoulikemusic?Why?AspeechLead-in:watchthevideoandanswerquestionsWhydoyoulikemusic?giveusjoy\happinessinspireustobeoptimistickeepourcompanyrelieveourpressuregiveushope\strengthcalmusdownSkimthetextquicklyandsummarizethemainideaofeachpara.Greetings&self-introduction&purposeofthespeechSarah’spersonalexperiencewithmusic:herproblem&solutionTheimpactsofmusiconSarahSarah’sadviceandhopefortheaudienceGood

morning!My

name

isSarahWilliams.It's

an

honour

to

be

here

andtosharewithyouthestoryof

how

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impacton

my

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you

ever

faced

a

time

whenthingslooked

dark

and

you

had

nohope

at

all?Two

years

ago,I

was

toldIhad

a

seriousdisease

whichwasdifficult

to

cure.My

body

ached

allthetime

and

thusI

thoughtIdidn'thavemuch

longer

to

live.I

was

very

afraid

and

I

felt

so

alone

and

discouraged.Then

oneday,Ihadtogothroughatwo-hourmedicaltreatment.Thedoctorwanted

me

to

relax,

so

he

had

me

listen

to

some

music,and

one

of

the

songs

was

"Happy".The

song

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I

began

to

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all

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time.(BIJohnA.Logansaid,"Musicisthemedicineofthemind."And

it's

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me

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I

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made

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fly

like

a

kite

inthewind.IC]Musicgave

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me

relief.(E)It

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the

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becomestrongandtoget

through

those

hard

times.

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me

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being.Of

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same

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all

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Body

Endinggreetingsself-introduction

topicBeginningReadforthestructureOpening(Para.1)Body(Para.2-3)Closing(Para.4)Aspeech(Title)Greetings,self-introduction&purposePersonalexperienceSarah’sproblem+solutiontotheproblemImpactsofmusiconSarahSarah’sadvice&hopefortheaudienceReadforthestructureReadfordetailsReadthetextagainandanswerthefollowingquestions.Sarahhadaseriousdiseasewhichwasdifficulttocure.ltmadeherfeelmuchbetterbecauseitisthe“medicineofthemind”.Heradvicetoothersistousemusictohelpwhenyouhaveproblems.Readforlanguagefeatures1.Simile(明喻)：tomakecomparisonbetween

twounlikeelements.comparativeword:as,like,as/though,seem,as...aseg.Heworkslikeahorse.2.Metaphor(暗喻):tomakecomparison,butitisimpliedratherthanstated.eg.Theworldisastage.3.Personification(拟人):togivehumanfeelingstoanimalsorpersonalattributes(特质)toinanimate(无生命的)objects.eg.Theskyweeps.Rhetoricaldevices(修辞手法)

arewaystomakeourlanguagemorevivid,andthuskeepthereaders'attention.Rhetoricaldevicesthatareusedinthepassage:Readforlanguagefeatures4.Rhetoricalquestion（设问）:questionwithoutadirectanswer.eg.Whodoesn'tloveabeautifulsunset?5.Quote（引用）:torepeatashortpassage,word,phrase,orsentencethatcamefromsomewhereorsomeoneelse.eg....asLongfellowsays,“Musicistheuniversallanguagesofmankind.”6.Repetition（重复）:repeatwordsorphrasestoemphasize(强调)certainfactsorideas.eg.Icame,Isaw,Iconquered.ReadforlanguagefeaturesHaveyoueverfacedatimewhenthingslookeddarkandyouhavenohopeatall?JohnA.Logansaid,“Musicisthemedicineofthemind.”Musicgavemehappiness.Musicgavemestrengthandbroughtmerelief.Musicgavemehopeandasenseofsatisfaction....itmademyspiritsflylikeakiteinthewind.ItwastherockIleantontobecomestrong...Itbecamemybestfriend.RhetoricalquestionQuoterepetitionsimilemetaphorpersonificationHowtowriteaspeech?

假定你是李华。请你写一篇演讲稿，与大家分享音乐对你的影响。内容包括：

1.曾经考前紧张，无法入眠；

2.音乐改变现状。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。1.第一段开门见山，点明主题——音乐是如何影响了我的人生的。2．主体部分通过事例、细节描述等有步骤地展开对主题的介绍，语言富有激情和感召力。如：第二段作者在叙述事情时，先用问句开头，引起读者注意，然后按照时间顺序展开。Twoyearsago、Thenoneday、fromthenon这些时间状语的使用，使叙述清晰、有序。3．第三段作者连续使用了三个“musicgaveme...”构成的排比句，层层递进，语气强烈，富有感染力，突出了音乐对作者的极大影响。4．结尾简明扼要，照应主题，发出呼吁或建议。如：第四段使用了两个“Ihope...”构成的排比句，表达了作者对于读者的美好祝福和真诚建议。学结构第一段：点明演讲话题①Goodmorning,everybody!MynameisLiHua.Itismyhonourtodelivermyspeechabouthowmusichashadanimpactonmylife.大家早上好！

我是李华。很荣幸能发表关于音乐是如何影响了我的人生的演讲。②Today,I'dliketotalkabouthowtoexpresslovetoourparents.今天，我想谈谈如何向我们的父母表达爱。③IwanttosharewithyouhowtheInternethashadanimpact/influenceonourlife.我想和你们分享互联网是如何影响我们的生活的。素材积累——对素材积累的应用要准第二段：通过引言或问题吸引听众的注意力，并结合自身经历，有步骤地展开对话题的介绍，并总结其对自己的影响①Someonesaid,“Wearereadingthefirstverseofthefirstchapterofabookwhosepagesareinfinite...”有人说过：“我们正在读一本书的第一章第一行，这本书的页数是无限的……”②Asweknow,musicisthroughourlife.正如我们所知，音乐贯穿我们的生活。③Lastyear,ourbelovedpetdogdied,whichmadeourwholefamilyverysad.Itwasmusicthathelpedusout.去年，我们心爱的宠物狗去世了，这让我们的整个家庭非常难过。正是音乐帮我们走出了困境。④Wheneveryoulistentomusic,it'sapleasure.Musicmakeseverythingaroundyoulooksobeautiful.无论什么时候听音乐都是一种享受。音乐让周围的一切看起来都那么美好。第三段：总结其对自己的影响①Musicisakindofmedicine,whichcancureourdepressionorunhappiness.音乐是一种药，它可以治愈我们的沮丧或不快。②Withoutmusic,ourlifewillbecolourlessandtasteless.没有音乐，我们的生活将会失去色彩，索然无味。③Musicisplayinganimportantroleinourlife,whichisanessentialpartofourlife.音乐在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色，它是我们生活中不可或缺的一部分。④Musicistouswhatsunshineistotheearth,whichbringscolourtoourlife.音乐之于我们就像阳光之于地球，给我们的生活带来色彩。⑤Whetherwearesadordepressed,thereismusictokeepuscompany.无论我们悲伤或沮丧，都会有音乐陪伴着我们。⑥Itismusicthatgivesusencouragementinthefaceofdifficulty.是音乐给了我们面对困难的勇气。第四段：总结演讲内容，提出希望①Altogether,wecancometo/drawaconclusionthatwecan'tbeseparatedfrommusic.总之，我们可以得出一个结论：我们离不开音乐。②Basedontheabovestatements,wecanconcludethatmusicmakeslifebetter.基于以上陈述，我们可以得出结论：音乐让生活更美好。③Let'scontinuetakingmusicasourcompanionandenjoyingthestrengthandenjoymentbroughtbymusic.让我们继续以音乐为伴，享受音乐带来的力量和快乐。④Musicissuchagoodthingthatlet'smakefriendswithit.音乐如此美好，让我们和它交朋友吧。⑤Ihopeallofyouwillbegintotreasuremusicandmakeitapartofyourlife.我希望你们所有人都能开始重视音乐，让它成为你们生活的一部分。[写作指导]一仿结构布局合理第一段：

第二段：

第三段：

第四段：

点明话题通过问题吸引听众的注意力，并介绍过去的经历音乐的影响提出希望二仿语言规范美观

1．与大家分享音乐对我生活的影响。(祈使句；impact)答案

Sharewithyouthestoryofhowmusichashadanimpactonmylife.2．考试即将来临时你紧张吗？(with复合结构)答案

Areyounervouswiththeexamapproaching？3．我无法像往常一样入睡。(asusual)答案

Icouldnotfallasleepasusual.4．我感到气馁。(主系表；discouraged)答案

Ifeltdiscouraged.5．老师建议我听音乐。(suggest＋宾格＋doing)答案

Myteachersuggestedmelisteningtomusic.6．音乐给我力量，给我安慰。(主谓宾)答案

Musicgivesmestrengthandbringsmerelief.7．听音乐给我一种满足感。(动名词短语作主语)答案

Listeningtomusicgivesmeasenseofsatisfaction.8．为什么不试试呢？(whynot)答案

Whynothaveatry？三仿句式高级表达9．用“It'sanhonourto...”改写句1。答案It'sanhonourtobehereandtosharewithyouthestoryofhowmusichashadanimpactonmylife.10．用asaresult呈现句3和句4的因果关系。答案Icouldnotfallasleepasusual.Asaresult,Ifeltdiscouraged.四誊写[参考范文]Hello,everyone.It'sanhonourtobehereandtosharewithyouthestoryofhowmusichashadanimpactonmylife.Areyounervouswiththeexamapproaching?Icouldnotfallasleepasusual.Asaresult,Ifeltdiscouraged.Then,myteachersuggestedmelis