读后续写+圣诞新礼：母亲缺失的圣诞袜+讲义 高二上学期开学自主学习检测英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。SuddenlyIfeltmyfaceturnredwithembarrassment..HowcouldIhavenevernoticed?EveryChristmasmymotherenjoyedcreatingspecialmemoriesandtraditionsforherfamily.MomlovedChristmas-theshopping,cooking,decorating,music,giftseventhehustleandbustle(拥挤喧器)theseasonbrings.Herenthusiasmencouragedmybrother,sister,andmetoexperiencethejoyandwonderoftheseason.Althoughwecouldreceivevariousgifts,weweretaughtthattherealreasonfortheseasonwastocelebratethegettingtogetherofthewholefamily.ManyyearshavepassedsinceIwasachild.YetIcanstillsmellthearoma(香味)ofMom’ssugarcookiesasshepreparedaspecialtreatforherfamily.ThesesweetswereasuresignthatChristmasDaywasnear.OnChristmasEvemymotherlaidallourstockingsunderthebeautifullydecoratedpinetreemyfatherhadpickedoutandcutdownintheforest.Later,inthemiddleofthenight,shesecretlyfilledthestockings.Thenextmorningweexcitedlyopenedourgifts,leavingourChristmasstockingsforlast.Ourstockingswerealwaysfulloftinytoys,trinkets,nuts,oranges,apples,andcolorfulhardcandiesinvariousshapesandsizesInmytwenties,IwentChristmasshoppingwithafriend.Shebeganlookingforasmallgifttoplaceinhermother’sstocking.“YoufixaChristmasstockingforyourmother?”Iasked.“Yes,"shereplied.“EveryyearIfillastockingwithlittletreatsandhaveitwaitingforheronChristmasmorning.Icouldn’tbearformymothertonothaveaChristmasstocking,especiallysinceshepreparesoneforeveryoneelse.That’swhenIfeltmyfaceturnredwithembarrassment.IrealizedmymotherhadnothadaChristmasstockingforaslongasIremembered.And,evenworse,noonehadnoticedherstockingwasmissing.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。MysisterandIweredeterminedtostartatraditionofourownthatyear.Lookingatthestocking,mymotherseyesfilledwithtears.续写中需要回答的问题Whatdidtheauthorandhersisterdotostartthenewtradition?

TheauthorandhersistersecretlypreparedaChristmasstockingfortheirmother,fillingitwithvarioussmallgiftsandtreats.Howdidtheygettheitemsforthestocking?

Theywentshoppingtogether,carefullychoosingtinytoys,trinkets,nuts,fruits,andcolorfulcandies,justliketheirmotherusedtodoforthem.Whendidtheypresentthestockingtotheirmother?

TheypresentedthestockingtotheirmotheronChristmasmorning,aftershehadopenedothergifts.Whatdidthemothersayordowhenshesawthestocking?

Themotherwasspeechlessatfirst,thenhereyesfilledwithtearsofjoy.Shehuggedtheauthorandhersistertightly,expressinghergratitude.Whatdidtheexperienceteachtheauthor?

Theexperiencetaughttheauthortheimportanceofreciprocatingloveandthoughtfulness,andthatsmallgesturescanbringgreathappiness.故事主旨Thestoryemphasizesthesignificanceoffamilytraditions,theselflessloveofamother,andtherealizationoftheneedtoreciprocatethatlovethroughsimpleyetmeaningfulactions.Itshowshowalong-overlookeddetailcanbecomeaturningpointforanewandcherishedfamilytradition.故事山Beginning:TheauthorrecallsthewonderfulChristmastraditionscreatedbyhermother,includingmakingsugarcookies,decoratingthetree,andfillingstockingsforthefamily.Middle:Theauthor,inhertwenties,issurprisedtolearnthatherfriendfillsastockingforhermother.SherealizesthatherownmotherhasneverhadaChristmasstocking.End:Theauthorandhersisterstartanewtraditionbypreparingastockingfortheirmother,whichdeeplytouchesher.故事发展线索ChildhoodChristmasmemories→Adultrealizationofmother'smissingstocking→Decisiontostartanewtradition→Preparationofthestocking→Mother'sreaction情感线索JoyandnostalgiaforchildhoodChristmas→Embarrassmentattherealization→Determinationtomakeachange→Anticipationwhilepreparingthestocking→Happinessandemotionalconnectionwhenmotherreceivesthestocking续写布局与框架Paragraph1:Startwiththedeterminationoftheauthorandhersister.Describetheirshoppingprocess,choosingitemssimilartothoseintheirownchildhoodstockings.EndwiththemsecretlyplacingthestockingunderthetreeonChristmasEve.Paragraph2:Beginwiththemother'sinitialreactionwhensheseesthestocking.Includeheremotionalresponse,suchascryingandhuggingthesisters.Endwiththeauthorreflectingonthenewtraditionanditssignificance.续写注意事项承接原文:Continuouslyreferbacktothemother'spastChristmaspreparationsforthefamily,likethetypesofitemsinthestockingsandtheoverallfestiveatmosphere.Usephraseslike“justlikethestockingsMomfilledforus”or“thesamekindofcandiesweusedtofind”.整体设计:Keepthetonewarmandfamily-centered.Ensurethattheactionsoftheauthorandhersisterareinlinewiththefamily-orientedChristmasspiritestablishedintheoriginalstory.巧妙设计:Addsomesmalldetails,suchasaspecificmemoryassociatedwithoneoftheitemsinthestockingorauniquewaythesistersdecoratedthestockingtomakeitmorepersonal.高分语句呼应原文:“JustasMomhadalwaysfilledourstockingswithlove,wenowfilledherswithtokensofourappreciation,emulatingthetraditionsshehadsolovinglycreatedforus.”高级句型:“Itwasnotuntilthatmoment,whenwesawthetearsofjoyinMom'seyes,thatwetrulyunderstoodtheprofoundimpactofthissimpleyetmeaningfulgesture.”(强调句)主题表达&意义延伸直接引语点明主旨:“Thisisforyou,Mom,”wesaid.“You'vealwaysmadeChristmasspecialforus.Nowit'sourturntomakeitspecialforyou.”促成转变，引发感悟:Theexperiencenotonlybroughtjoytothemotherbutalsomadetheauthorandhersistermoreawareoftheimportanceofshowinggratitude.Ittaughtthemthattraditionsarenotjustaboutrepetitionbutalsoaboutevolvingandadaptingtoexpresslove.借象征物点明主旨:Thestocking,nowfilledwithloveforthemother,becameasymbolofthecycleofloveinthefamily,passingfromonegenerationtothenext.学生写作示范学生写作示范一MysisterandIweredeterminedtostartatraditionofourownthatyear.Wewentshoppingtogether,carefullyselectingabeautifulstockingforMom.Wepickedouttinytoysthatremindedusofourchildhood,trinketsthatwethoughtshewouldlike,andavarietyofnuts,oranges,andapples.JustlikeMomusedtodo,wealsoboughtcolorfulhardcandiesindifferentshapes.OnChristmasEve,afterMomhadgonetobed,wequietlyplacedthestockingunderthetree,filledwithourcarefullychosengifts.

Lookingatthestocking,mymother'seyesfilledwithtears.Shewasspeechlessforamoment,overcomewithemotion.Thenshepulledusintoatighthug,saying,“Ineverexpectedthis.Itmeanstheworldtome.”Wespentthemorningtogether,laughingandsharingstoriesaswewatchedMomexploreeachiteminherstocking.ThisnewtraditionnotonlybroughtjoytoMombutalsomadeourbondasafamilyevenstronger.Ittaughtustheimportanceofgivingbackthelovethatwehadreceivedalltheseyears.学生写作示范二MysisterandIweredeterminedtostartatraditionofourownthatyear.Weplannedeverythinginsecret.Wevisitedseveralstores,searchingfortheperfectitemsforMom'sstocking.Wefoundasmall,hand-carvedwoodenornamentthatweknewshewouldlove.Wealsoboughtsomeofherfavoritenutsandaboxofhigh-qualitychocolates.Afterfillingthestocking,wecarefullyhungitnexttotheonesshehadpreparedforus.

Lookingatthestocking,mymother'seyesfilledwithtears.Shelookedupatus,herfacebeamingwithhappiness.“Yougirlsaresothoughtful,”shesaid,hervoicechokedwithemotion.Wesataroundthetree,chattingandenjoyingthemomentasMomtookouteachitemonebyone.ThissimpleactoflovehadtransformedourChristmas.ItmadeusrealizethatthetrueessenceofChristmasliesinthesmall,unexpectedgesturesofkindnessandlovewithinthefamily.学生写作示范三MysisterandIweredeterminedtostartatraditionofourownthatyear.WepooledourmoneyandwentonamissiontocreatethemostspecialstockingforMom.Wefoundavintage-stylestockingwithbeautifulembroidery.Thenwewenttoalocalmarketforfreshfruitsandnuts.Wealsoboughtsomescentedcandlesandacutekeychain.OnChristmasEve,weplacedthestockinginaprominentplaceunderthetree.

Lookingatthestocking,mymother'seyesfilledwithtears.Shewasvisiblymoved.Shewalkedovertous,huggingustightly.“ThisisthemostwonderfulChristmasgiftever,”shesaid.Aswesattogether,Mom'sexcitementasshediscoveredeachiteminthestockingwaspalpable.ThisnewtraditionhadaddedanewlayerofwarmthtoourChristmas.Ittaughtusthatfamilytraditionsarenotjustaboutthepastbutalsoaboutcreatingnewmemoriesandshowingloveineverypossibleway.参考答案续写第一段MysisterandIweredeterminedtostartatraditionofourownthatyear.Weimmediatelysetouttobuyastockingf