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读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Irunaphotographystudiointheheartofthecity,specializinginchildren'sportraits.Fromhigh-endmodelingshootstoheartwarmingsiblingphotosandlovelybirthannouncements,wecoveritall.Ourstudioisalwaysbusy,andasisstatedonourwebsite,wedon'tacceptwalk-ins.Withbookingsscheduledsixmonthsinadvance,it'snon-stop.Oneevening,justtenminutesbeforeclosing,amotherwalkedinwithayounggirl,aroundsixorsevenyearsold,followingher.Ifeltquiteannoyed—Ireallyneededtocloseup.Themothersaid,"Hello.Iknowyou'reclosingsoon,butIhaveaspecialfavortoask."Atthatmoment,thelittlegirlpeekedoutfrombehindhermother'slegs,hereyesscanningnervouslyaroundtheroom.Sheglancedatthebeautifulportraitsofhealthy,smilingchildrenhangingonthewalls,andtheexpressiononherfacewasamixoflongingandself-consciousness.Sheseemedtoknowshedidn'tlookliketheotherkidsinthephotos.Underherthickwintercoatandhat,shelookedweak,withdarkcirclesunderhereyes.Shehadnohair,andatubewastapedtohercheek,feedingintohernose.Itwasclearshewasveryill.Themothercontinued,hervoiceshaking,“Mydaughtersawoneofyourphotosatthehospital.Sheusedtobesuchabeautifulandlovelygirlasthoseinyourphotoshangingonthewalls,butshedoesn'tlookherbestrightnow...Sir,Iknowyou'rebookedup,andthenextappointmentismonthsaway,butIdon'tknow.…”Shestartedtocry.Irealizedthatwaitingformonthswasnotabetforthislittlegirl.Seeingsheheldhermother'shandtightly,Ifeltmyheartsoften.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Itookadeepbreathandsmiledgentlyatthelittlegirl,makingupmymindtodosomething.Thelittlegirllookedatthephotoswithabrightsmile.摄影工作室的善举续写续写分析(两段)第一段:此段开篇表明“我”决定帮助小女孩,“Itookadeepbreathandsmiledgentlyatthelittlegirl,makingupmymindtodosomething.”这一关键决定推动故事发展。随后“我”迅速行动,“Iimmediatelycalledmyteamandaskedthemtostayabitlonger.”体现出“我”的果断与团队协作精神。准备工作室过程中,“choosingpropsthatwouldbringoutthegirl'sinnerbeauty”以及对小女孩脱外套、帽子和处理医疗管时的细致动作,“Ipatientlyhelpedhertakeoffhercoatandhat,handlingthemedicaltubewithcare.”,展现出“我”对小女孩的关怀与尊重。在调整灯光时分享有趣故事,“AsIadjustedthelighting,Ikepttalkingtoher,sharingfunnystoriestoeasehertension.”,从细节处缓解小女孩的紧张情绪,进一步刻画“我”的善良与体贴。“Themotherwatched,stillinshockbutwithhopeshininginhereyes.”通过母亲的反应,侧面烘托出“我”的行为给她们带来的希望,为后续拍摄及故事发展铺垫情感基础。第二段:以小女孩看到照片时的惊喜反应开启,“Thelittlegirllookedatthephotoswithabrightsmile.‘Mom,isthatreallyme?’sheaskedinastonishment.”生动展现出照片对小女孩的积极影响,凸显拍摄的成功。对照片中女孩形象的描述,“Thepicturesshowedabraveandbeautifulgirl,hereyesfulloflifedespiteherillness.”,不仅强调了小女孩的内在美,也呼应前文“我”希望通过拍摄展现她内在美的初衷。母亲的感激之情,“Themothercouldn'tholdbackhertears,thankingmeoverandoveragain.”,强化了这一行为的意义。最后“我”的感悟与决定,“Thisexperiencewasaturningpointforme.Itmademeunderstandthatmyjobwasn'tjustabouttakingpictures;itwasaboutcreatingmemoriesandspreadingjoy.Idecidedtosetasideonedayeachmonthforchildreninsimilarsituations...”,将故事从一次偶然的善举上升到对职业价值的重新认知和长期的行动规划,升华了故事主题,使故事更具深度和感染力。故事线“我”在市中心经营一家儿童肖像摄影工作室,业务繁忙,不接受未经预约的顾客,预约通常提前六个月安排。一天晚上关门前十分钟,一位母亲带着看起来病得很重的小女孩走进工作室,母亲希望“我”能为小女孩拍照,小女孩看到墙上健康孩子的照片时,流露出渴望又自卑的神情。“我”看到小女孩的状况后,心生怜悯,决定为她拍摄照片,迅速召集团队,精心准备工作室,在拍摄过程中细心照顾小女孩,缓解她的紧张情绪。小女孩看到拍摄的照片后非常惊喜,母亲十分感激,“我”也因此重新认识到自己工作的价值,决定每月留出一天为类似情况的孩子拍照。短语makeupone'smind下定决心callone'steam召集某人的团队bringout展现出takeoff脱下handlewithcare小心处理easeone'stension缓解某人的紧张情绪holdback抑制setaside留出inshock震惊中withhopeshininginone'seyes眼中闪烁着希望主旨升华句Thisheartwarmingnarrativeofthephotographystudioencounternotonlyshowcasesthepowerofcompassioninbrighteningthelivesofthoseinneedbutalsoservesasapoignantreminderthatineveryprofession,thereliesanopportunitytomakeadifferenceandtouchhearts,transcendingtheboundariesofbusiness.这个关于摄影工作室相遇的温馨故事,不仅展示了同情心在照亮有需要的人生活中的力量,还深刻地提醒我们,在每个职业中,都存在着超越商业界限、有所作为并触动心灵的机会。Throughthephotographer'sjourneyfromanannoyedstudioownertoacompassionategiver,wearevividlyshownthetransformativenatureofempathyandthebeautyofrecognizingtheinherentworthandbeautyineveryindividual,regardlessoftheircircumstances.Theirstoryimpartsthevaluablelessonthatactsofkindnesscanbethecatalystforcreatinglastingmemoriesandspreadinghope.通过摄影师从一个烦恼的工作室老板到一个富有同情心的给予者的历程,我们生动地看到了同理心的变革力量以及认识到每个人内在价值和美丽的美好,无论他们的情况如何。他们的故事传达了一个宝贵的教训,即善良的行为可以成为创造持久记忆和传播希望的催化剂。Thestoryofthelittlegirlandthephotographerisnotmerelyataleofaspontaneousphoto-shoot;itisaprofoundexplorationofthehumanspirit'scapacitytoriseaboveself-interest,toconnectwithothersonadeeperlevel,andtouseone'sskillsandresourcestobringjoyanddignitytothosefacingadversity.小女孩和摄影师的故事不仅仅是一个关于一次自发拍摄的故事,它是对人类精神超越自身利益、在更深层次上与他人建立联系以及利用自己的技能和资源为那些面临逆境的人带来快乐和尊严的能力的深刻探索。Inaworldoftenfilledwithbusynessandroutine,thedecisiontohelpthelittlegirlstandsasapowerfulstatement,illuminatingthepathtowardsamoreempatheticandcaringsociety.Itremindsusthateveninthemidstofourownhecticlives,takingamomenttoreachoutandofferkindnesscanhaveaprofoundandfar-reachingimpact.在一个常常充满忙碌和常规的世界里,帮助小女孩的决定是一个有力的声明,照亮了通往一个更富有同情心和关爱的社会的道路。它提醒我们,即使在我们自己忙碌的生活中,抽出一点时间伸出援手并给予善意也能产生深远的影响。Fromtheinitialannoyanceofthephotographertothefinalrealizationofthetruemeaningofhiswork,thestoryencapsulatestheessenceofgrowth,thepowerofpositiveinfluence,andtheunwaveringbeliefthateveryactofkindness,nomatterhowsmall,hasthepotentialtocreatearippleeffectthatcantransformlivesandcommunities.从摄影师最初的烦恼到最终对自己工作真正意义的认识,这个故事体现了成长的本质、积极影响的力量,以及坚定的信念,即每一个善良的行为,无论多么微小,都有可能产生连锁反应,改变生活和社区。写作示范示范一Itookadeepbreathandsmiledgentlyatthelittlegirl,makingupmymindtodosomething.Irushedtotheproproom,searchingfortheperfectitems.Ipickedasoft,fluffyteddybearandacolorfulscarf.Myteamquicklyrearrangedtheset,creatingawarmandinvitingatmosphere.Icarefullyremovedthegirl'shatandcoat,beingextracautiousaroundthemedicaltube.AsIadjustedthelights,ItoldheraboutthetimeIphotographedashypuppythatendedupbeingthestaroftheshow.Shegiggledsoftly,hereyeslightingup.Themotherwatched,herhandsclaspedtightly,hopebloominginherheart.Thelittlegirllookedatthephotoswithabrightsmile.“Mom,Ilooksopretty!”sheexclaimed.Thepicturescapturedherdelicatefeaturesandthetwinkleinhereyes.Themotherwasintears,huggingmetightly.“Thankyoufromthebottomofmyheart,”shesobbed.Thisexperiencechangedme.Irealizedthatmystudiocouldbeaplaceofhope.Idecidedtocollaboratewithlocalhospitals,settingupaprogramtoofferfreephoto-shootsforsickchildren.Iwantedtobringabitofjoytotheirdifficultlives.示范二Itookadeepbreathandsmiledgentlyatthelittlegirl,makingupmymindtodosomething.Iimmediatelyaskedmyassistanttograbthemostcheerfulbackdrops.Wechoseabright,floweryonethatwouldcontrastbeautifullywithherpalecomplexion.Ihelpedhersitonthestool,beingmindfulofthetube.AsIfocusedthecamera,Isharedafunnystoryaboutaphoto-shootwhereachild'spetrabbitkepthoppingintotheframe.Shelaughed,hertensionmeltingaway.Themother,stillindisbelief,watchedwithbatedbreath.Thelittlegirllookedatthephotoswithabrightsmile.“Isthatreallyme?”sheasked,hervoicefilledwithwonder.Thephotosshowedaresilientandcharminggirl.Themotherwasovercomewithemotion,thankingmeprofusely.Thismomentwasawake-upcall.IrealizedthatIhadthepowertomakeadifference.Iplannedtohostamonthly“specialmoments”dayatthestudio,dedicatedtochildrenwithspecialneeds.Ibelievedthateverychilddeservedtofeelspecialandhavetheirbeautycaptured.参考答案Itookadeepbreathandsmiledgentlyatthelittlegirl,makingupmymindtodosomething.
Isaidtothemother,"Don'tworry.Wecanarrangeaspecialphoto-shootforyourdaughter
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