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ReadingforwritingUnit4ADVERSITYANDCOURAGELearnaboutoptimismandperseveranceplannedtomaketheirfirstlandcrossingofAntarctica.Unfortunately,theirvoyagedidnotgosmoothly.gotstuckintheiceleftElephantIslandforhelpabandonedtheshipandcampedontheicestayedontheislandRevision:Retellthestoryaccordingtothepictures.Watchthedocumentary(纪录片)tolearnwhatthe22crewmemberssufferedonElephantIsland.WhatproblemswouldthepeopleremainingonElephantIslandfaceInaword,theymightsufferalotphysicallyandmentally.Thecrewmembersmightstruggle
withkeepingwarmintheterrible
conditions.Theyalsowouldhavefound
ithardtofindfoodandmakefire.Theice
wouldhavebeenmovingandbreaking
too,whichwouldbeverydangerous.whathadtheysufferedWhatdoyouthinkwasthebiggestchallengeforthemProbably,thementalstruggleswouldbethebiggestchallenge.HowlongdoyouthinktheyhadstayedontheislandMaybetheywouldremainontheislandforalongtimeforitwasabigundertakingtolookforrescue.extremeweather;coldnessloneliness;helplessnesshunger;thirst;illness......HowcouldthecrewcheerthemselvesupinsuchamiserableplaceonElephantIslandplayBanjoholdsomeactivitiesWeretheyfinallyrescuedShackletonwouldbe
successfulinrescuinghismen.Nowlet'sreadthememoirtoseewhatwouldhappentothem.TheRewardForPerseveranceAmonument(纪念碑)wasbuiltinhonorofShackletonandhiscrew.rewardAmemoirisanarrativewritten(记叙文)aboutanimportanteventinthe
author'slifethataffectedtheminsomeway.CharacteristicsofMemoirs:Amemory;adescriptionofatrue
pasteventWritteninthefirst
personRevealsthefeelingsofthewriterShowswhattheauthorlearnedfrom
theexperience回忆录(memoir)一般指基于个人经历或观察对人物、事件等的回顾和记录。一般具有以下特点:聚焦某个特定的人物、关系或事件;文风具有亲切感;一般有完整的故事主线;并非完整的生平记录,而是一些特定的记忆片段描述;是作者的个人叙事,故事性大于细节的准确性。Skimthetextandmatcheachparagraphwithitsmainidea.
Para1Para6Para2Para3Para4Para5Foodwasaproblembecauseofnofruitorvegetablesontheisland.Theytriedtheirbesttostayalive.Theintroductiontowhatmightmakethemill.WhattheauthorthoughtofafterShackletonleft.Whenrescued,theyfeltjoyfulandrelieved.Itwastheirdisciplineandteamspiritthatmadethemgothroughthefourmonths.Part1________Part2________
Part3________
Part4________A.ProblemstheyfacedB.BackgroundofthestoryC.Theresult:theywerefinallyrescuedD.Thingsthathelpedthemtacklethe
difficultiesPara.1Para.2~4Para.6Para.5Dividethepassageinto4partsandthenmatchthesubheadingswiththeparts.BADCWhat'sthemainideaofthememoirwherewhowhathowwhenOnthe_______Island,optimismandfaithinShackletonhelpedthe_____________whowereleftbehindtopersevereinovercoming_________andtillShackleton's_______came.ElephantcrewmembersadversityrescueTHEREWARDFORPERSEVERANCEWewatchedasShackletonandtheboatsailedawayfromElephantIsland.Itwaseasytoimaginethedangeraheadofthem.WouldtheyeverreturntofindusWhatmighthappentothemWhatiftheyweredelayedWefeltsoaloneanddesperate.Butitwasnotforlong.Therewasnothinglikeagooddinnerandsomemusictocheerusup.坚持不懈给我们的回报我们看着沙克尔顿和小船驶离了象岛,不难想象他们前面会遇到什么危险。他们还会回来找我们吗?他们可能会发生什么事情?如果他们被耽搁了怎么办?我们感到如此孤独和绝望。但这担心并没持续太长时间,没有什么比得上一顿好饭和一点音乐能使我们振奋起来了。Para1THEREWARDFORPERSEVERANCEWewatchedasShackletonandtheboatsailedawayfromElephantIsland.Itwaseasytoimaginethedangeraheadofthem.WouldtheyeverreturntofindusWhatmighthappentothemWhatiftheyweredelayedWefeltsoaloneanddesperate.Butitwasnotforlong.Therewasnothinglikeagooddinnerandsomemusictocheerusup.Para1HowdidtheyfeelwhenShackletonandhisboatlefttheislandsoalone
anddesperate.使某人振作起来worried
Lifefellintoaregularpattern.Stayingalivetookallourtimeandenergy.Forexampleweneededwater,andElephantIslandhadnone.Wefoundthatwecouldmelticefromtheoceananddrinkthewaterfromit.ButhowcouldwemakefireTherewerenotreesgrowingonAntarcticaandnooil,sotheonlyfuelwecouldusewasanimalfat.Thisgaveoffoily,blacksmoke,butitstayedburningeveninstrongwinds.生活陷入了某种规律。活下去耗费了我们所有的时间和精力。例如,我们需要喝水,而象岛却没有水。我们发现我们可以融化海洋里的冰来喝水,但我们怎么生火呢?南极洲没有树木生长,也没有石油,所以我们唯一能使用的燃料就是动物脂肪。它释放出油乎乎的黑烟,但即使在大风中它也会燃烧。Theytriedtheirbesttostayalive.Para2Foodwasalsoaproblem,aswedidnotfindanyvegetablesorfruitontheisland.Oneofourgroupmembers,LionelGreenstreet,notedinhisdiaryabouthowboredhewaswiththemeals:"Thefoodnowisprettywellallmeatofseacreatures."Ifitweren'tforseaanimals,wewouldallstarve.
Asachef,itwasmydutytocook,soItriedtovarythemealsinwhateverwayIcould.Butitwasdifficult.
食物也是个问题,因为我们在岛上没有找到任何蔬菜和水果,我们小组的一名成员莱昂内尔·格林斯特里特在他的日记中记录了他对这些食物的厌倦:“现在的食物几乎全是海洋生物的肉。”如果没有海洋动物,我们都会饿死。作为一名厨师,做饭是我的职责,所以我尽量用任何我能想到的方法来使食物多样化,不过这很困难。Para3Foodwasaproblembecauseofnofruitorvegetablesontheisland.
Wehadtobecarefulnottogooutsidetoooften,asthechangingtemperaturescouldmakeusill.Itwasalmostasdangeroustobecometoohotfromwearingtoomanyclothesastobecometoocoldfromwearingtoofew.Thesweatcouldfreezeveryquickly.Manyofusalsobecameillfromtheblacksmokeoftheanimalfatweburntforourfires.Itdamagedoureyesandburntourlungs.
我们必须小心,不要常外出,因为变化无常的气温会使我们生病。因穿太多衣服而太热和穿太少衣服而太冷几乎是同样危险的。汗水很快就会结冰。我们许多人也因为燃烧动物脂肪产生的黑烟而病了,他损害了我们的眼睛,灼伤了我们的肺。
Para4Theintroductiontowhatmightmakethemill.ProblemstheyfacedNofireNowaterLackoffoodIllnessDrinkingwaterfrom______icenottogo________Eatingmeatof____________Using__________
asthefuelSolutionsPart2meltedanimalfatseaanimalsoutside
Thetwenty-twoofuslivedlikethisinthecoldforfourmonths.Ourdisciplineandteamspiritkeptusoptimisticandhelpedusdealwithourfearsinapositiveandsuccessfulway.Wealsocelebratedourbirthdays,festivals,andeventhetimeswhenwecaughtaseaanimal.Thiswasan
episode
inmylifethatIwouldneverforget.
我们二十二个人就这样在寒冷中生活了四个月,我们的纪律和团队精神使我们保持乐观,并帮助我们以积极和成功的方式应对我们的恐惧。我们也庆祝我们的生日、节日,甚至当我们抓住一个海洋动物的时候也庆祝一下。这是我一生中永远不会忘记的一段经历。
Para5Itwastheirdisciplineandteamspiritthatmadethemgothroughthefourmonths.
Whenwewerefinallyrescued,wefeltsuchreliefandjoythatmanyofuscouldnothideourtears.Wewereatlastfreetogohometowarmbeds,goodfood,andthecareofourfamilyandfriends.OuroptimismandfaithinShackletonhadhelpeduspersevereinstayingalive.Andhepaidusbackbyhis
commitment
tosaveusfromaslowbutpainfuldeath.
当我们最终获救时,我们感到如释重负,许多人都喜极而泣。我们终于可以解脱回家了,享受温暖的床,好吃的食物,还有家人和朋友的关心。我们的乐观和对沙卡尔顿的信任帮助我们坚持活了下来。他回报了我们,实现了他的承诺,把我们从缓慢而痛苦的死亡中救了出来。
Para6Whenrescued,theyfeltjoyfulandrelieved.Whathelpedtheirsurvival_______________inShackletonShackleton’s____________tosavethem_____________instayingalive
,
,and
ofbirthdays,festivals,andsmallachievementsdisciplineteamspiritcelebrationoptimism&faithperseverancecommitmentResult:________________________Theywerefinallyrescued.Part3&4Whatwerethekeyreasonsforthecrewmembers’survivalItwas
and
thathadhelpedthempersevereinstayingalive.theiroptimismfaithinShackletonTheRewardForPerseverancerewardbeingrescued,survival,learn
beingoptimisticwheninadversityandhavefaithinpartners,haveanunforgettableexperience,.Backgroundofthestory_________________________leftElephantIslandto____________whiletheothers______ontheisland.Problemstheyfaced_________________________________________________________icefromtheoceantheonlyfueltheycouldusewas__________variedthemealsof_________nottogo_______Thingsthathelped________,__________and__________ofbirthday,festivals,andsmallachievements.Result:_______________________.SolutionsShackletonandfivememberslookforrescuestayedgotdrinkingwatermadefirefoodproblemillnessmeltedanimalfatseaanimalsoutsidedisciplineteamspiritcelebrationTheywerefinallyrescuedPlotlineHowwouldyoudescribeShackleton?ShackletoncalmwiseselflessresponsiblefearlessgenuinepersistentdeterminedoptimisticShackletonisacalm,wise,selfless,responsible,fearless,genuine,persistent,determined,optimisticleaderandexplorer.Thesequalitiesmadehiscrewmemberstrusthimbecausetheyknewhewouldn’tabandonhismenontheislandandwouldriskhisliferescuingthem.keepdisciplineteamspirittheresolvetolivefaithinsb./one’scommitmentperseverance/endurance……makeeffortstoovercomedifficultiesWhatcanwelearnfromthewholestorytherewardforperseverancesailawayfrom......aloneanddesperateforlongcheersbupfallintoaregularpatterntakeallourtimeandenergymelticefromtheoceanmakefiretheonlyfuelwecouldusestayburninginstrongwindsbeboredwith......prettywellkeywords,phrasesandsentencepatterns.
1.锲而不舍的回报2.驶离3.孤独和绝望4.很长时间5.使某人振作起来6.转入常规7.耗费我们所有的时间和精力8.融化海洋中的冰块9.生火10.我们唯一能能使用的燃料11.产生12.持续燃烧13.在强风中14.对......感到厌烦15.几乎,差不多,相当好toooftenthechangingtemperaturefreezeveryquicklybecomeillfromdamageoureyesburnourlungsourdisciplineandteamspiritpaysbbackbyhiscommitmentdealwithourfearsinapositiveandsuccessfulwayanepisodeinmylifethatIwouldneverforgetfeelreliefandjoyhideourtearsoptimismandfaithinsbbefreetogohome
16.时常,经常17.变幻的温度18.很快结冰19.因为......而生病20.伤害我们的眼睛21.烧伤我们的肺22.纪律和团队合作精神23.通过承诺回报某人24.处理我们的恐惧25.以一种积极和成功的方式26.我生命中难忘的插曲27.释然和欣喜28.隐藏我们的眼泪29.乐观和对某人的信任30.自由地回家perseverein/withsb/sthpersevereindoingsthsaveusfromaslowbutpainfuldeathIfitweren’tforseaanimals,wewouldallstarve.There’snothinglike......Whatif......
31.对......坚持不懈32.对做什么坚持不懈33.把我们从一个缓慢而痛苦的死亡中拯救出来34.如果不是海洋生物,我们都会挨饿。
35.没有比......更好的
36.要是......怎么办Basedonthediaryentriesandthememoiryouhaveread,writeanessayaboutthestoryofShackletonandhismenontheshipEndurance.Writing本单元的写作任务是根据本单元的故事写一篇短评。篇章结构引出故事(作品)AbriefintroductionAgeneralsummarymaincharacters/plots/endingYourpersonalviewfeeling/thought/whatyoulearnt注意下面几点:1.确定文体:这是一篇短评,应注意短评的常规格式、结构与规范表达。2.主体时态:文章应以一般过去时为主。3.主体人称:由于是写一篇短评,所以人称应该以第三人称为主。AbriefintroductionIhavereadanicestoryandI'dliketoshareitwithyou.Letmeintroduceaninterestingstorywhichissetin...Thisisastoryconcernedwith...Thestorytakesplacein...(地点/时间)Thisstoryisbasedonthetrueexperienceof...Thenovelshareswithusatouchinglovestorybetween...and...引出作品我读了一个很好的故事,想把它和你分享一下。我来介绍一部有趣的故事,这个故事以……为背景。这是一个关于...的故事。故事发生在...这个故事是根据...的真实经历写的。小说与我们讲述了...和...的感人爱情故事Abriefintroduction
Thisstoryisaboutthe1914-1916expeditionbyEarnestShackletontomake
thefirstlandcrossingofAntarctica.Ageneralsummary中段:介绍这个故事的主要内容、情节、主要人物等介绍作品(故事内容)
欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的船员们登上了名字为“坚忍”号的大船。不幸的是,途中“坚忍”号被冰块困住,沉进了大洋中。在放弃那艘船后,他们逃到了大象岛上。沙克尔顿承诺会救他们,因此他决定去寻求他人的帮助。尽管他们陷入了恐慌,遇到了许多困难,但船员们却设法活了下来。1.欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的船员们登上了名字为“坚忍”号的大船。(aboard;Endurance)_________________________________________________________________2.不幸的是,途中“坚忍”号被冰块困住,沉进了大洋中。(unfortunately;be/becomestuckin;sinkinto)_________________________________________________________________3.在放弃那艘船后,他们逃到了大象岛上。(abandon;escape)_________________________________________________________________ErnestShackletonandhiscrewwentaboardtheshipwhosename
wasEndurance.Unfortunately,onthewayEndurancebecamestuckintheiceandsankintotheocean.Aftertheyhadabandonedtheship,theyescapedtoElephantIsland.Rewritethesentenceswithnon-predicateverbsErnestShackletonandhiscrewwentaboardtheshipnamed
Endurance.Unfortunately,onthewayEndurancebecamestuckintheice,sinkingintotheocean.Havingabandonedtheship,theyescapedtoElephantIsland.沙克尔顿承诺会救他们,因此他决定去寻求他人的帮助。(commitment;resolve;turntosbforhelp)Shackletonmadeacommitmenttosavethem,soheresolvedtoturntoothersforhelp尽管他们陷入了恐慌,遇到了许多困难,但船员们却设法活了下来。(getintopanic,therebe;managetosurvive)Althoughtheygotintoapanicandthereweremanydifficulties,thecrewmanagedtosurvive.ErnestShackletonandhiscrewwentaboardtheshipnamedEndurance.Unfortunately,onthewayEndurancebecamestuckintheice,sinkingintotheocean.Havingabandonedtheship,theyescapedtoElephantIsland.Shackletonmadeacommitmenttosavethem,soheresolvedtoturntoothersforhelp.Althoughtheygotintoapanicandthereweremanydifficulties,thecrewmanagedtosurvive.Yourpersonalviewfeeling/thought/whatyoulearntUsefulexpressions:Whatimpressedmewasthat...Itwastheir...spiritsthat...Iwasdeeplymoved/inspiredby...Allinall,Ihavelearnedanimportantlessonfromtheinspiringstory.Thatis,...Weshouldembracepositiveattitudesandbehaveconfidently.Onlythroughpersistentpursuitcanwe....
我被他们之间的关心和爱深深地感动了,也被他们面对困难的忍耐和毅力所鼓舞。总之,我从这个鼓舞人心的故事中学到了重要的一课。那就是,无论遇到什么困难,都要积极面对,决不放弃。我被他们之间的关心和爱深深地感动了,也被他们面对困难的忍耐和毅力所鼓舞。(move;concern;inspire;infaceof)
IwasdeeplymovedbythegenuineconcernandlovebetweenthemandI’malsoinspiredbytheirenduranceandperseveranceinfaceofdifficulties.总之,我从这个鼓舞人心的故事中学到了重要的一课(inspiring;encouraging)。Inaword,Ihavelearnedanimportantlessonfromtheinspiringstory.那就是,无论遇到什么困难,都要积极面对,决不放弃。(thatis;whatever;)Thatis,whateverdifficultieswemeet,facethempositivelyandnevergiveup.IwasdeeplymovedbytheconcernandlovebetweenthemandI’malsoinspiredbytheirenduranceandperseveranceinfaceofdifficulties.Inaword,Ihavelearnedanimportantlessonfromtheinspiringstory.Thatis,whateverdifficultieswemeet,facethempositivelyandnevergiveup.
我最喜欢这个故事的地方是,虽然他们的探险没有达到目的,但也没有造成本来可以造成的灾难。这要归功于沙克尔顿面对逆境的勇气和船员们在这么长的时间里生存下来的耐力和毅力。总之,我从这个鼓舞人心的故事中学到了重要的一课。那就是,无论遇到什么困难,都不要绝望。我最喜欢这个故事的地方是,虽然他们的探险没有达到目的,但也没有造成本来可以造成的灾难。(what主从;that表从failindoing;)WhatIlikemostaboutthisstoryisthatalthoughtheirexpeditionfailedinachievingitsgoal,itwasnotthedisasteritcouldhavebeen.这要归功于沙克尔顿面对逆境的勇气和船员们在这么长的时间里生存下来的耐力和毅力。(oweto/bedueto/;adversity;endurance;perseverance;survive)Thisowedto/wasduetoShackleton’scourageinfacingadversityandthecrew’senduranceandperseveranceinsurvivingforsolong.总之,我从这个鼓舞人心的故事中学到了重要的一课。那就是,无论遇到什么困难,都不要绝望。(abandononeselftodespair.)
Inaword,Ihavelearnedanimportantlessonfromtheinspiringstory.Thatis,whateverdifficultieswemeet,neverabandonourselvestodespair.SampleWriting1Thisstoryisaboutthe1914-1916expeditionbyEarnestShackletontomake
thefirstlandcrossingofAntarctica.ErnestShackletonandhiscrewwentaboardtheshipnamedEndurance.Unfortunately,onthewayEndurancebecamestuckintheice,sinkingintotheocean.Havingabandonedtheship,theyescapedtoElephantIsland.Shackletonmadeacommitmenttosavethem,soheresolvedtoturntoothersforhelp.Althoughtheygotintoapanicandthereweremanydifficulties,thecrewmanagedtosurvive.WhatIlikemostaboutthisstoryisthatalthoughtheirexpeditionfailedinachievingitsgoal,itwasnotthedisasteritcouldhavebeen.ThiswasduetoShackleton’scourageinfacingadversityandthecrew’senduranceandperseveranceinsurvivingforsolong.Inaword,Ihavelearnedanimportantlessonfromtheinspiringstory.Thatis,whateverdifficultieswemeet,neverabandonourselvestodespair.Thisstoryisaboutthe1914-1916expeditionbyEarnestShackletontomake
thefirstlandcrossingofAntarctica.ErnestShackletonandhiscrewwentaboardtheshipnamedEndurance.Unfortunately,onthewayEndurancebecamestuckintheice,sinkingintotheocean.Havingabandonedtheship,theyescapedtoElephantIsland.Shackletonmadeacommitmenttosavethem,soheresolvedtoturntoothersforhelp.Althoughtheygotintoapanicandthereweremanydifficulties,thecrewmanagedtosurvive.
IwasdeeplymovedbytheconcernandlovebetweenthemandI’malsoinspiredbytheirenduranceandperseveranceinfaceofdifficulties.Inaword,Ihavelearnedanimportantlessonfromtheinspiringstory.Thatis,whateverdifficultieswemeet,facethempositivelyandnevergiveup._________________________(锲而不舍的回报)Wewatched____ShackletonandtheboatsailedawayfromElephantIsland.Itwaseasytoimaginethedanger________(在…前面)them.WouldtheyeverreturntofindusWhatmighthappen______them___________(要是...怎么办)theyweredelayedWe__________________________(感到如此孤独和绝望)But___________________(时间没过多久).______________________(没有比...更好)agooddinnerandsomemusic_______________(让我们振作起来).TheRewardofPerseverance
astoWhatif
feltsoaloneanddesperateitwasnotforlongTherewasnothingliketocheerusupaheadofTask2.Gooverthetextandfilltheblanks.Life________________________(转入常规)._____________(活下去)tookallourtimeandenergy.____________(例如),weneededwater,andElephantIsland_________(没有).Wefoundthatwecould_____________________(融化海洋中的冰块)anddrinkthewaterfromit.Buthowcouldwe_________(生火)Therewerenotrees________(grow)onAntarcticaandnooil,so________________________(我们唯一能使用的燃料)wasanimalfat.This_______________________(产生油膩的黑烟),butit_______________(持续燃烧)eveninstrongwinds.fellintoaregularpatternStayingaliveForexamplehadnonem
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