外研安徽 九年级 下册 英语 Module 2《模块主题写作》复习课 课件

Module2Education模块主题写作一、主题分析本模块写作情境为“教育”，属于“人与自我”主题范畴中的“生活与学习”这一主题群，涉及子主题“多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活”。常见的写作任务是描述学校生活、介绍多彩的校园活动、畅想未来学校等。二、素材积累(1)主题词汇our//pass//building//education//purpose//unforgettable//competition//activity//daily//communication//workhard//doexercise//takeanactivepartin//learnbyoneself//studyingroups//withthehelpof(2)重点句式1.WhatdoI______________(最喜欢)aboutschool?2.TodayI’m_____________________(乐意与……分享)youmyideasaboutthecominghighschoollife.3.Inclass,weshould_________________(被鼓励)workwithpartners.likebestgladtosharewithbeencouragedto4.Weshould/must/areexpectedto________________(互相帮助).5.____________(总之),ifwealldosomething,wecan___________________________(使我们的学校变得更好).6.____________________(多么有趣的生活啊)!Ican’twait!helpeachotherAllinallmakeourschoolabetterplaceWhatafantasticlife三、写作示例三年的初中生活令人难忘,即将到来的高中生活更让人心生向往。你心目中的高中生活是什么样的?请以“Whatwillmyhighschoollifebelike?”为题写一篇英语短文,从学习方式、课外生活和交友等方面描述一下你心目中的高中生活。写作要求：1.内容可适当发挥；2.词数：80-100（标题已给出，不计入总词数）；3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。Whatwillmyhighschoollifebelike?__________________________________________________________________________________________________谋篇布局1.审题立意：①主题：学校生活；②人称：第一人称；③时态：一般将来时。2.写作提纲描写学校生活开篇点题Myhighschoollifeisstarting.

Whatwillitbelike?展望未来Ihopewewillbegivenmore

freetimesothatwecanlearn

howtomakegooduseoftime.

IalsohopeIwillmakemore

friends.感慨生活Whatafantasticlife!Ican’t

wait!基础篇Whatwillmyhighschoollifebelike?Myhighschoollifeisstarting.Whatwillitbelike?Ihopewewillbegivenmorefreetimesothatwecanmakegooduseoftimeandmakeourlearningmoreeffective.Inclass,weshouldworkwithpartners,anditwillhelpusgettheabilitytocooperatewithothersinthefuture.Afterschool,wecanchoosemoreactivitiesaccordingtoourhobbiesandinterests.IalsohopeIwillmakemorefriendsandwecanspendanunforgettabletimetogether.Mylifemustbefantastic!Ican'twait!名师点评本文内容齐全，逻辑清晰，层次分明。第一部分，开篇点题(第一段)﹔第二部分，从多方面展望高中生活(第二段)﹔笫三部分，感慨生活(第三段)。用词和短语较高级，但在句型句式方面较简单，缺乏一些高级句型的运用。可以多丰富句式结构。提升篇Whatwillmyhighschoollifebelike?Myhighschoollifeisstarting.Whatwillitbelike?Ihopewewillbegivenmorefreetimesothatwecanlearnhowtomakegooduseoftimeandhowtomakeourlearningmoreeffective.①Inclass,weshouldbeencouragedtoworkwithpartners,whichwillhelpusgettheabilitytocooperatewithothersinthefuture.②Afterschool,wecanbeprovidedwithmoreactivitiesfromwhichwecanchooseaccordingtoourhobbiesandinterests.IalsohopeIwillmakemorefriendsandwecanspendanunforgettabletimetogether.Whatafantasticlife!③I’mlookingforwardtoit.名师点评本文内容齐全，逻辑清晰，层次分明。①运用sothat引导的目的状语从句充分表达了作者的意图﹔“疑问词＋不定式”结构的使用比用从句更简洁；②which引导的定语从句效果好，体现了作者扎实的语法功底﹔③运用感叹句表达了作者对未来高中生活的期待。四、写作练笔假如你是陈华，快要毕业了，你的美国网友Mike想要了解你的初中生活以及对高中生活的规划，请你根据以下信息给Mike写一封回信。写作要点：1.感谢Mike对自己的关心；2.对于初中生活的回顾。(1)初中生活多彩难忘；(2)老师和同学给予了很多帮助；(3)你对于未来高中生活有什么打算。写作要点:1.不得使用真实姓名和学校名；2.词数：80-100；3.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。DearMike,Howiseverythinggoing?________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,ChenHua___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearMike,Howiseverythinggoing?Thanksforyourconcern.Letmesharesomethingaboutmymiddleschoollifeandtheplanofmycominghighschoollifewithyou.IthasbeenthreeyearssinceIcametothebeautifulschool.Iwillneverforgetmycolorfulschoollife.Myschoolisverybeautiful.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihavedifferentkindsofactivitieseveryterm.Myteachersalwaystrytomaketheirlessonslivelyandinteresting.Ihavelearnedalotandmadegreatprogressduringthelastthreeyears.Iamthankfultomyteachersandclassmates.Theyhavehelpedmealotinthepastthreeyears.Inthefuture,Iwillstudyharder.AndIwanttomakemorefriendsinthehighschool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________