外研安徽 九年级 下册 英语 Module 4《模块主题写作》复习课 课件

模块主题写作Module4Rulesandsuggestions一、主题分析本模块写作情境为“规则和建议”，属于“人与社会”主题范畴中的“历史、社会与文化”这一主题群，涉及子主题“公共秩序与法律法规”。常见的写作任务是提出建议和规则、制定规则制度等。二、素材积累(1)主题词汇should//can’t//mustn’t//obeytherules//makesure//allinall//paygreatattentionto(2)重点句式1.Therearemany__________(安全守则)forustofollow.2.Safetyis_____________________(最重要的事)inourlife.3.We________________(应该小心)whenwemakefriendsandtryourbestto___________________(远离)dangerouspeople.safetyrulesthemostimportantthingshouldbecarefulkeep/stayawayfrom4.We_______________(禁止打架)withothersatschool.5._______________(确保)tobehavewellallthetime.Haveagoodtimehere!6.Inaword,_______________(安全第一).7.Inshort,ifwe_______________(遵守规则)and_______________(照顾)ourselves,wewillgrowupsafelyandhealthily.mustn’tfightMake/Besuresafetycomesfirstobeytherulestakecareof三、写作示例安全对于我们每个人都很重要。为进一步增强学生的安全意识，提高学生的自我保护能力，你校正在开展以“HowtoKeepSafeinOurLife”为主题的英语演讲比赛，现面向同学们征稿。请根据以下提示内容，写一份英文演讲稿。内容要点：1.校园安全:不在走廊奔跑，不打架……；2.交通安全:遵守交通规则，骑自行车时不听音乐……；3.食品安全:吃健康食品，不吃垃圾食品……；4.其他…….(至少补充一点)。注意：1.词数：80—100(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数);2.演讲稿必须包括所有要点，可以适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺;3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息。Dearteachersandstudents,Today,I’mgladtogiveaspeechabouthowtokeepsafeinourlife.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou.谋篇布局1.审题立意①主题：安全守则；②人称：第一人称；③时态：一般现在时。2.写作提纲规则和建议类话题引入话题Safetyisthemostimportantthinginourlife.详细介绍First,whenweareatschool...Second,onourwayhome,weshould...Next,weshould...Besides,don’t...总结全文Inaword,safetymustcomefirst.基础篇Dearteachersandstudents,Today,I’mgladtogiveaspeechabouthowtokeepsafeinourlife.Asfarasweknow,safetyisthemostimportantthinginourlife.First,wecan’truninthehallwaysandmustn’tfightwithothersatschool.Weshouldalwayswalkslowlyontherightside.Second,onourwayhome,weshouldfollowthetrafficrules.Whenwerideabike,wemustn’tlistentomusic.Next,weshouldeathealthyfoodandnevereatjunkfood.Besides,don’tswimintheriver.It’sverydangerous.Inaword,safetymustcomefirst.Pleaserememberthesesafetytips.That’sall.Thankyou.名师点评本文结构清晰，层次分明。第一步，总体介绍安全很重要;第二步，根据提示具体阐述在生活中如何保证自己的安全;第三步，最后书写小结。文章虽然要点齐全，但在具体阐述中稍显不足，补充的内容也只用简单的句型进行了表达。优化此文章需要把内容写得更加详细，多使用一些短语和复杂句型。提升篇Dearteachersandstudents,Today,I’mgladtogiveaspeechabouthowtokeepsafeinourlife.Asfarasweknow,safetyisthemostimportantthinginourlife.First,whenweareatschool,wecan’truninthehallwaysandmustn’tfightwithothers②

.Weshouldwalkslowlyontherightsideinsteadof①

rushingwhenwegoupanddownthestairs.Second,onourwayhome,weshouldfollowthetrafficrules.Don’tcrossthestreetwhenthetrafficlightisred.②

Whenwerideabike,wemustn’tlistentomusicorjustuseonehand.Next,weshouldeathealthyfoodandkeepawayfrom①

junkfood.Besides,don’tswimintheriver.It’sverydangerous.Inaword①

,safetymustcomefirst.Pleaserememberthesesafetytips.That’sall.Thankyou.名师点评本文要点齐全，内容充实，逻辑严谨。①使用了较多的高级短语，如insteadof；keepawayfrom；inaword等，使文章可读性更佳。②同时运用了高分句型，如时间状语从句First,whenweareatschool,wecan’truninthehallwaysandmustn’tfightwithothers.和祈使句Don’tcrossthestreetwhenthetrafficlightisred.等，使文章内容更加严谨，所需表达的要点也更完整地呈现了出来。四、写作练笔假如你是某博物馆的管理员,最近经常有外国友人来博物馆参观。请你根据以下提示用英语写一则游客须知,说明博物馆的有关规则。提示：1.保持馆内安静;2.保持馆内清洁;3.不得随意触摸展品;4.参观时请关闭手机。要求：1.短文应包括所给提示;2.词数：80—100(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。NoticeWelcometoourmuseum!Pleaseobeythefollowingrules.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Themuseumisaquietplace,soyoushouldnottalkloudlyorrun.Inordertokeepthemuseumclean,youaren’tallowedtoeatsnacksorsmoke.What’smore,toprotecttheexhibits,youcan’ttouchthemortakephotosofthem._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________