外研安徽 九年级 下册 英语 Module 5《模块主题写作》复习课 课件

Module5Lookafteryourself模块主题写作一、主题分析本模块写作情境为“健康生活”，属于“人与自我”主题范畴中的“生活与学习”这一主题群，涉及子主题“身心健康、抗挫能力、珍爱生命的意识”。常见的写作任务是如何保持健康、健康的重要性、良好的生活习惯、面对突发事故的急救等。二、素材积累(1)主题词汇healthylife//necessary//should//vegetable//fruit//takeexercise//keepfit/healthy//stayup//junkfood//keepabalanceddiet//havebreakfast//haveenoughsleep//begood/badfor//stayawayfrom//makeyoustrongandhealthy(2)重点句式1.____________________(对我们来说是重要的)studentstokeephealthy.2.Doingphysicalexercise___________________________(使我强壮和健康).3.__________________(……是必要的)eatmorefruitandvegetables.It’simportantforusmakesmestrongandhealthyIt’snecessaryto4.__________________________(通过做体育运动)everydayIcankeepmymindalert.5.Followmyadviceand____________________(养成良好习惯).6._______________(用这样的方式),wecanhaveahealthybodyandliveabetterlife.BydoingphysicalexercisedevelopagoodhabitInthisway三、写作示例体育与健康测试已经纳入初中生中考范围，体育越来越受到人们的重视。假如你是校英语报的记者李辉，为了鼓励大家积极参加体育锻炼，请你给全校同学写一封倡议书。内容包括：1.体育锻炼的重要性；2.体育锻炼的好处(身体、精神、学业、社交等方面)；3.发出倡议。注意：1.词数：80—100(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；2.短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。Dearfellowstudents,Nowadayspeoplepaymoreandmoreattentiontodoingsports.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________谋篇布局1.审题立意①主题：体育锻炼的重要性；②人称：第一人称；③时态：主要是一般现在时，也可用一般将来时。2.写作提纲健康运动类话题引出话题Nowadayspeoplepaymoreandmoreattentiontodoingsports.具体阐述First,doingphysicalexercisemakesmestrongandhealthy...Second,bydoingphysicalexerciseeverydayIcankeepmymindsoalert...Finally,doingexercisewillhelppeople...发出倡议Let’sdoexerciseeveryday...ahealthybodyandliveabetterlife.基础篇Dearfellowstudents,Nowadayspeoplepaymoreandmoreattentiontodoingsports.Itisimportantforustotakeexerciseanditisgoodforbothourbodyandmind.Inmyopinion,doingphysicalexercisehaslotsofadvantages.First,doingphysicalexercisemakesmestrongandhealthy.Forexample,takingexerciseinthemorningwillrefreshmybody.Second,bydoingphysicalexerciseeverydayIcankeepmymindsoalertthatIcanfinishmytasksintime.Finally,doingexercisewillhelppeopletoformabetterpersonality.WheneverIwanttogiveup,myfriendswillencouragemetocarryon.Let’sdoexerciseeveryday.Inthisway,wecanhaveahealthybodyandliveabetterlife.名师点评本文内容全面，逻辑清晰，结构完整。第一步，写出体育锻炼的重要性；第二步，说明体育锻炼的好处；第三步，呼吁大家参加体育锻炼。本文运用了合适的连接词进行衔接，并用例子佐证了观点，在连接词和句型的选用方面还可以再丰富一些。提升篇Dearfellowstudents,Nowadayspeoplepaymoreandmoreattentiontodoingsports.Takingexerciseisveryimportanttoeverybodybecauseitcanofferpeoplehealthandpleasure①③.AsfarasIamconcerned①,doingphysicalexercisehaslotsofadvantages.Firstofall②,doingphysicalexercisemakesmestrongerandhealthier.Forexample,takingexerciseinthemorningwillrefreshmybody.What’smore②,bydoingphysicalexerciseeverydayIcankeepmymindsoalertthatIcanfinishmytasksintime.Finally,doingexercisewillhelppeopletoformabetterpersonality.WheneverIwanttogiveup,myfriendswillencouragemetocarryon.Let’spickupourfavouritesportanddoiteveryday.Onlyinthiswaycanwehavebothpleasureandahealthybody③.名师点评本文要点齐全，且对细节进行了必要的补充。①offersb.sth.；asfarasIamconcerned的使用使文章可读性更强。②firstofall；what’smore等比单纯的first,second等更高级一些。③此外，还使用了一些复杂的句式为文章增添了亮点，如原因状语从句Takingexerciseisveryimportanttoeverybodybecauseitcanofferpeoplehealthandpleasure.和倒装句Onlyinthiswaycanwehavebothpleasureandahealthybody.等。四、写作练笔最近你们班要举办以“HowtoKeepHealthy”为主题的班会,请从保持健康的重要性、方法和结论等方面谈谈你对健康的看法(如：多吃水果蔬菜，保持饮食平衡,多锻炼以强身健体,减少不良习惯)。要求：1.内容包含所给信息，可适当发挥；2.词数：80—100。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Dearboysandgirls,Nowadays,moreandmorepeopleknowtheimportanceofkeepinghealthy.Hereismyadviceabouthowtokeephealthy.Asamiddleschoolstudent,first,you’dbetterdomoreexercisesuchasplayingballgames,running,swimmingandropeskipping.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thenyoushouldpayattentiontoyourdietormeals.Don’teattoomuchmeatorsugarbuteatmorevegetabl