新人教版高中英语必修第一册：Writing-Write a Page in a Wellness Bo

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Writing—WriteaPageinaWellnessBook写作训练弄清文路写作妙笔生花技法点拨文体分析把握写作动脉内容索引写作指导技法点拨文体分析把握写作动脉本单元的写作任务是写一页健康手册。此类作文主要围绕以下几个方面写作：1.健康生活的必要性、重要性。2.指出目前存在的不利于健康的问题。3.健康生活方式：加强锻炼、注意饮食、均衡营养、养成良好的生活习惯等。4.如何从自我做起、如何制定计划改变不良生活习惯等。常用表达1.Havingagooddietisveryimportant.2.Eatinglotsoffreshfruitandvegetablesmeansalottoourbody.3.Doingexerciseisanothergoodwaytokeephealthy/fit.4.Runningisthebestworkoutforweightlossbecauseit’scheap.5.Itisimportanttoaskyourdoctorforahealthcheckonceayear.6.Goingtobedearlyandgettingupearlyisalsoveryimportant.7.Tokeephealthy，we’dbettercutdownonfatandsugarinourdiets.8.Itisbadforyourhealthtostayindoorsforalongtime.返回写作训练弄清文路写作妙笔生花假如你是某杂志健康栏目的主持人MrHelper，人们经常写信询问健康之道，请你写一封回信，指出健康的重要性，并针对“如何保持健康”给出自己的建议。信的内容需包含以下信息：1.健康的重要性；2.给出保持健康的方法：如：避免含糖、脂肪高的食物；摒弃不良习惯；多锻炼等。注意：1.词数80左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。审题谋篇审题1.确定文体：这是一篇说明文。2.主体时态：现在的情况用一般现在时，预期效果用将来时。3.主体人称：以第一人称为主。谋篇第一段：介绍写信目的。第二段：介绍如何保持健康。第三段：最后表达祝愿。遣词造句核心词汇1.保持健康2.保持均衡饮食3.停止做4.锻炼5.减少压力6.即使______________________________________________________________________keephealthykeepabalanceddietcutoutworkoutreducestressevenif/though连词成句1.我们应该保持均衡饮食，这对我们的健康有好处。(diet；begoodfor)_____________________________________________________2.我们应该尽量不吃含太多糖和脂肪的食物。(cutout；contain)_________________________________________________________3.我们必须改掉那些不良习惯，因为它们危害我们的健康。(quit；damage)_______________________________________________________4.即使我们很忙，也应该尽量锻炼来增强体质。(workout；strengthen)_________________________________________________________________________Weshouldkeepabalanceddietanditisgoodforourhealth.Weshouldtrytocutoutfoodswhichcontainlotsofsugarandfat.Wehavetoquitthosebadhabits，fortheydamageourhealth.Evenif/thoughwearebusy，weshouldtrytodosomeexercisetostrengthenourbody.句式升级1.用定语从句改写句1。______________________________________________________2.用非谓语动词改写句2。______________________________________________________3.用定语从句改写句3。__________________________________________________Weshouldkeepabalanceddiet，whichisgoodforourhealth.Weshouldtrytocutoutfoodscontaininglotsofsugarandfat.Wehavetoquitthosebadhabitsthatdamageourhealth.组句成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。DearMyReaders，____________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文Fitnessisfarmoreimportantthananythingelse.Howcanwekeephealthy?Herearesomesuggestionsforyou._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely，MrHelperFirstly，weshouldkeepabalanceddiet，whichisgoodforourhealth.Weshouldtrytocutoutfoodscontaininglotsofsugarandfat.What’smore，wehavetoquitthosebadhabitsthatdamageourhealth.Lastbutnotleast，weshouldworkouteverydaytoreducestress.Evenif/thoughwearebusy，weshouldtrytodosomeexercisetostrengthenourbody，suchasjoggingandcycling.Ifyoufollowtheadvicegivenabove，youwillleadahealthylife.返回Thebestclassroomintheworldisatthefeetofanelderlyperson.世界上最好的课堂在老人的脚下.Havingachildfallasleepinyourarmsisoneofthemostpeacefulfeelingintheworld.让一个孩子在你的臂弯入睡,你会体会到世间最安宁的感觉.Beingkindismoreimportantthanbeingright.善良比真理更重要.Youshouldneversaynotoagiftfromachild.永远不要拒绝孩子送给你的礼物.Sometimesall