新人教版高中英语必修第一册：Writing-Write to a Friend about a Travel Plan

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Writing—WritetoaFriendaboutaTravelPlan写作训练弄清文路写作妙笔生花技法点拨文体分析把握写作动脉内容索引写作指导技法点拨文体分析把握写作动脉本单元的写作任务是以电子邮件的方式向朋友告知旅行计划，属于应用文写作。旅游可分为观光游、文化游、美食游及探险游等不同类型，因此旅游计划也要根据不同的旅游目的进行设计。旅行计划类的信件内容主要包括以下方面：1.旅行的主要目的；2.具体计划；3.交通方式；4.感想。常用表达1.Iamplanningtodo...2.Iamwillingtodo...3.It’samazingthat...4.Iamalsoplanningtodo...5.Wearelookingforwardto...6.Itisknownas...7.Wearetakingthetrain，leaving...thedaybefore...8.Wearearrivingat9：30am...9.It’shardtobelieve...返回10.I’mwritingtoinformyouthat...11.Ican’twaittotellyouthenewsthat...12.I’meagertohearfromyou.写作训练弄清文路写作妙笔生花假设你是李华，下周你们将组织由外国学生参加的旅游活动——“DiscoveringChina”，你刚到北京的美国朋友Tom来信询问活动的有关安排。请你根据以下要点，给他写一封回信：1.日程安排：(1)时间：周一开始，持续一周；(2)路线：昆明—井冈山—上海—苏杭。2.发出邀请。注意：1.词数80左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。审题谋篇审题写作要求是介绍一次旅行的目的和行程安排。写作时应注意下面几点：1.确定文体：这是一篇介绍类文章，注意要简单明了，通俗易懂。2.主体时态：文章应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。3.主体人称：人称应该以第一人称为主。谋篇第一段：开门见山，引入主题。第二段：具体介绍目的、持续时间及路线。第三段：诚挚邀请并表达祝愿。遣词造句核心词汇1.一个受欢迎的旅游景点2.去井冈山3.登船4.欣赏美景5.丰富你的知识__________________________________________________________________________________________________________apopulartouristdestinationhead/leaveforJinggangshanboardashipadmire/enjoybeautifulviewsenrichyourknowledge连词成句1.我们要飞往昆明，一个因为美丽而备受欢迎的旅游景点。(touristdestination)_________________________________________________________________2.然后我们要去井冈山，它既是一个美丽的地方也有着悠久的历史。(headfor)_________________________________________________________________________3.在我看来，这次旅行会丰富你的知识。(view；enrich)____________________________________________We’llflytoKunminganditisapopulartouristdestinationforitsbeauty.Thenwe’llheadforJinggangshananditisabeautifulplacewithalonghistory.Inmyview，thistripwillenrichyourknowledge.句式升级1.用定语从句改写句1。We’llflytoKunming，

foritsbeauty.2.用定语从句改写句2。Thenwe’llheadforJinggangshan，______________________________

.3.用复合句改写句3。____________________________________________whichisapopulartouristdestinationwhichisabeautifulplacewithalonghistoryIbelievethatthistripwillenrichyourknowledge.组句成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。DearTom，Howareyoudoing？I’mgladtotellyouthat________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文anexploringtripcalled“DiscoveringChina”willbeorganizednextweek.I’mwritingtosharemoredetailswithyou._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours，LiHuaThetripstartsfromnextMonday.We’llflytoKunming，whichisapopulartouristdestinationforitsbeauty.Thenwe’llheadforJinggangshan，whichisabeautifulplacewithalonghistory.Thenwe’llboardashipontheYangtzeRivertoShanghai，andwecanenjoythebeautifulviewsontheway.OurlastdestinationisHangzhouandSuzhou.Thewholetripwilllastaweek.Ibelievethatthistripwillenrichyourknowledge.Isincerelyinviteyoutojoinus.返回Thebestclassroomintheworldisatthefeetofanelderlyperson.世界上最好的课堂在老人的脚下.Havingachildfallasleepinyourarmsisoneofthemostpeacefulfeelingintheworld.让一个孩子在你的臂弯入睡,你会体会到世间最安宁的感觉.Beingkindismoreimportantthanbeingright.善良比真理更重要.Youshouldneversaynotoagiftfromachild.永远不要拒绝孩子送给你的礼物.Sometim