2025年高考英语写作常考题型全面突破专题17 读后续写16大提分句式+对点精练（原卷版）

专题17读后续写16大提分句式+对点精练

句式1：With+复合结构”又称为“with结构”

Atthethoughtofthefactthatshedidn’thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeating

fastandherfeetsweating.一想到自己没有幸运的钉子，她就更加焦虑，心跳加速，脚出汗。

Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammatestightlywithtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie激动而高

兴，紧紧地拥抱着队友，泪水从脸上滑落。

1.那女孩张大了嘴巴，打开了她的礼物盒。(with+宾语+adj.open)

2.女孩心怦怦直跳（beatwildly），打开（unwrap）了她的礼物盒。(with+宾语+分词)

3.他的妻子伤心极了，眼里满是泪水（fulloftears/filledwithtears）

4.那个人躺在地上，双手颤抖着。（ontheground,tremble）

Thegirlunwrappedthegiftboxwithhermouthwideopen.

Thegirlunwrappedthegiftboxwithherheartbeatingwildly.

Hiswifewasextremelysad,witheyesfulloftears/withtearsrollingdownherface

句式2：并列谓语，细化动作A,BandC

Whentheannouncersaid“Nextupisthegirls’100-meterhurdles”,Jodietookadeepbreathand

walkedtothestartinglineslowly.当播音员说“接下来是女子100米栏”时，朱迪深吸一口气，慢慢地

走到起跑线上。

句式3：句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子用于表示动作伴随，原因或结果

Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,waitingforherturnnervouslyandanxiously.Jodie穿着她崭新的钉子，

紧张不安地等待着轮到她。

句式4巧用生动的无灵主语：Astrong/intensesenseofdelighttookholdofmethemomentIheardthenews.

Relieved(=breathingasighofrelief),Ericthankedthemanandswitchedthefrequencyback,“Mac,help

iscoming!”Buttherewasnoresponse.埃里克松了一口气，向那个人表示感谢，并将频率调回，“麦克，

救命来了！”但没有回应。

句式5：情感形容词+句子

Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammatestightlywithtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie激动而高

兴，紧紧地拥抱着队友，泪水从脸上滑落。

句式6：巧用时间状语，表达情节

Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,Ericheardanothervoice.ItwasSlideMountainRescuewhofinally

came!好像经历了一个世纪之后，埃里克听到了另一个声音。终于来了，是雪山救援队！

句式7：.“一……就……”的表达法：assoonas,hardly/scarcely…when…,nosooner…than…,the

moment/minute/second/instant,immediately/instantly/directly,on/upon+n.doing。

Themomenttheannouncerannounced“Number11,JodieNymble,takesthegoldforRiversideMiddle

School”,thunderouscheersandlaughterfilledtheHiddenPark.当播音员宣布“11号，JodieNymble，为

RiversideMiddleSchool夺金”的那一刻,雷鸣般的欢呼和笑声充满了HiddenPark.

句式8：巧用“某人想到”:

Atthethoughtofthefactthatshedidn’thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeating

fastandherfeetsweating.一想到自己没有幸运的钉子，她就更加焦虑，心跳加速，脚出汗。

句式9：主句，which从句（定语从句）

格式：_______主句________，which第二句话；

例句：玛丽打开门看到了小女孩，她有着令她熟悉的眼睛和黑色的头发。Maryopenedthedoorandsaw

thelittlegirl，whohadfamiliareyesandblackhair.

结构2：格式：_______主句________，whichenable/forced/allowedsbtodo；_______主句________，

whichmade/forced/allowedsb感情词

例句：就在这时，我们听到了UnclePaul远处传来的微弱声音，这重新点燃了我们回家的希望。

Justatthemoment,weheardthefaintvoiceinthedistancefromUnclePaul,whichallowedustolightthe

hopereturninghome.

句式10：描写气氛或者氛围的句子。（情感词+fill+地点）

Worryandanxietyfilledtheair.空气中弥漫着忧虑和焦虑。

句式11：关于情感句子的积累：(表达情感的形容词+动作具体描写)，用so…that

Jodiewassoexcitedandrefreshedthatsheyelledout“Myluckyspikes”.朱迪非常兴奋，神清气爽，她

大叫“我的幸运钉”。

1.兴奋：Iwassoexcited/thrilledthatIgaveajumpintheair.我动得跳了起来

2.开心：Iwassohappy/cheerfulthatIjumpedupanddown.我高兴得上跑下跳

3.感动：IwassomovedthatIfailedtosayaword.我感动得一句话也说不出来

4.悲伤：IwassosadthatIhidmyfaceinmyhands.我难受得用手捂住了脸。

5.(生气)IwassoangrythatIfailedtosayaword.我气得一句话也说不出。

6.（害怕）Iwassoscared/frightenedthatmypalmssweatedandmyheartpounded.我害怕得手心汗，

心怦怦直跳。

7.（羞愧）IwassoashamedthatIcouldfeelmyfaceburning.我羞愧得感觉自己的脸在燃烧。

升级：倒装

SoshockedwasIthatIwasfrozentothespotthemomentIheardthenews.(当我听到消息时候，我太震

惊了以至于呆在原地)

句式12：副词修饰动词或句子

（1）Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,waitingforherturnnervouslyandanxiously.Jodie穿着她崭新的

钉子，紧张不安地等待着轮到她。

（2）Whentheannouncersaid“Nextupisthegirls’100-meterhurdles”,Jodietookadeepbreathand

walkedtothestartinglineslowly.当播音员说“接下来是女子100米栏”时，朱迪深吸一口气，慢慢地

走到起跑线上。

（3）Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammatestightlywithtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie.激动

而高兴，紧紧地拥抱着队友，泪水从脸上滑落。

句式13：倒装或强调

NotuntilthendidJodierealizethatluckwouldalwaysfavorheraslongasshesparednoefforttodoit.

直到那时，朱迪才意识到，只要她不遗余力地去做，运气总是会眷顾她。

呼应主题常用句式

直到...才.…(1)倒装句:notuntil+时间状语didsbrealizethat+主题从句

(2)强调句:itwasonlythenthatsbrealizedthat+主颖从句

还记得某人的话，某人的话还One’swordsechoed/rangoutinone'searsthat+主题

在脑海中

Myteacher’sencouragingwordsstillechoed/lingered/rangoutinmyears,bringingmeaglimmer/ray/

beamofhope.

Itwasmymotherwhotaughtustoholdapositiveattitudetolife.是我的妈妈一直教导我们要对困难保

持乐观的态度。

Itwaslovethatmakestheworldgoaround.正是爱让/使这个世界运转起来

Shesaidthatitwasmycompanyandencouragementthatnotonlymadeherhappybutalsoimprovedher

confidence.(她说正是我的陪伴和鼓励不仅使我快乐而且提高了我的信心）

句式14：独立主格结构

Shetookmoneywithshakinghands,tearswellingupinhereyes.

句式15：名词性从句

主语从句

结构1：Itis+adjforsbthat…

结构2：whatIcoulddo/say/…isto

what(counts/matters/impressme)mostisthat…=itisimportantthat…

Whatmakemeanxiousisthat>>>>

功能：用于突出某个动作的重要或必须

应用位置：不限

例句1：我们能做的就是慢慢沿着原路回去。

Whatwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrack.

例句2：我所看到的与我过去所经历的任何事情完全不同。

WhatIsawwascompletelyunlikeanythingIhadexperiencedinthepast.

句式16：毫不犹豫/迫不及待做某事

1.Withoutdelay/hesitation/asecondthought

2.Couldnot/hardlywaittodosth

【例句】

1.在一个下雪的冬天早上，水冰冷刺骨，但那个年轻人毫不犹豫/迟疑地跳进水里，伸手去够我儿子。

Onasnowywintermorningwiththefreezing/bitterlycoldwater,theyoungmanjumpedintotheriver

withoutdelay/hesitation/asecondthought,reachingformyson.

2.我迫不及待地想把这个好消息告诉妈妈。

Icouldhardlywaittoinformmymotherofthisgoodnews.

对点精练

一、对点精练--汉译英

句式1：With+复合结构

1.那女孩张大了嘴巴，打开了她的礼物盒。

______________________________,thegirlopenedhergiftbox.

2.女孩心怦怦直跳，打开了她的礼物盒。

______________________________,thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.

句式2：并列谓语，细化动作

1.他看到包里的外套后，非常惊讶，然后叫他妈妈出来。

Seeingthecoatinthebag,he______________________________hismothertocomeout.

2.他的妻子伤心极了，眼里满是泪水。

Hiswife,extremelysad,______________________________.

句式3：句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子

他躺在地上，双手颤抖着。

______________________________,hetrembledwithhishands.

句式4：巧用生动的无灵主语

1.一想到即将到来的考试，他就感到无比焦虑。

__________________________________________________________himwithimmenseanxiety.

2.一股激动的情绪在人群中蔓延，因为乐队的主唱宣布了演唱会的日期。

_____________________________amongthecrowdastheleadsingerofthebandannouncedtheconcert

date.

3.一种宁静的感觉笼罩了整个图书馆，每个人都在专心致志地学习。

__________________________________________________________,witheveryonedeeplyfocusedon

theirstudies.

句式5：情感形容词+句子

兴奋和精神焕发，朱迪大叫“我的幸运钉鞋”。

_____________________________,Jodieyelledout"Myluckyspikes".

句式6：巧用时间状语，表达情节

好像经历了一个世纪之后，埃里克听到了另一个声音。终于来了，是雪山救援队！

_____________________________,Ericheardanothervoice.ItwasSlideMountainRescuewhofinally

came!

句式7：“一……就……”的表达法

当播音员宣布“11号，JodieNymble，为RiversideMiddleSchool夺金”的那一刻，雷鸣般的欢呼和

笑声充满了HiddenPark.

_____________________________"Number11,JodieNymble,takesthegoldforRiversideMiddle

School",thunderouscheersandlaughterfilledtheHiddenPark.

句式8：巧用“某人想到”

一想到自己没有幸运的钉子，她就更加焦虑，心跳加速，脚出汗。

_____________________________didn’thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeating

fastandherfeetsweating.

句式9：主句，从句（定语从句）

玛丽打开门看到了小女孩，她有着令她熟悉的眼睛和黑色的头发。

Maryopenedthedoorandsawthelittlegirl,_____________________________.

句式10：描写气氛或者氛围的句子

空气中弥漫着忧虑和焦虑。

_____________________________.

句式11：关于情感句子的积累

我动得跳了起来。

_____________________________Igaveajumpintheair.

句式12：副词修饰动词或句子

Jodie穿着她崭新的钉鞋，紧张不安地等待着轮到她。

Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,_____________________________.

句式13：倒装或强调

直到那时，朱迪才意识到，只要她不遗余力地去做，运气总是会眷顾她。

_____________________________thatluckwouldalwaysfavorheraslongasshesparednoefforttodo

it.

句式14：独立主格结构

她手里颤抖着拿钱，眼里泪水涌起。

Shetookmoneywithshakinghands,_____________________________.

句式15：名词性从句

我们能做的就是慢慢沿着原路回去。

_____________________________wastogobackalongtheprevioustrack.

句式16：毫不犹豫/迫不及待做某事

在一个下雪的冬天早上，水冰冷刺骨，但那个年轻人毫不犹豫/迟疑地跳进水里，伸手去够我儿子。

Onasnowywintermorningwiththefreezingwater,theyoungmanjumpedintotheriver

_____________________________,reachingformyson.

二、请使用现在分词结构改写下列句子或小段落

1.Hewastremblinginablanketandhesaid,“I’mcold.”

______________________________________________________________________________________

2.Isatbackinaneasychairandfellasleep.

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3.WhenIsawnoonenoticingus,IputtheChristmaspresentdownandleft.

______________________________________________________________________________________

4.Whenshearrivedthere,shesearchedtheunfamiliarbuilding,andaskedforZatanna’sdormitoryfrom

doortodoor.

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5.Helookedatmeandbithislips,asifhewasthinking.

______________________________________________________________________________________

6.ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthere.Iheldthatten-dollarbillandIwonderedwhattobuyandwhoto

buyitfor.

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7.Whenhesawthecoatinthebag,helookedveryastonishedandthenaskedhismothertocomeout.

______________________________________________________________________________________

8.‘Here,’hesaid.Atthesametimehehandedthecoinstothegatekeeper.

______________________________________________________________________________________

9.Atallgirlansweredthedoorandshewasfrowning.ShetoldEmilythatZatannawasworkinginthe

schoolcafé.Whensheheardthis,Emilyforcedafaintsmile,thankedherandleft.

______________________________________________________________________________________

10.Shewrote“ToBobby,FromSantaClaus”onit.ThenshedrovemeovertoBobbyDecker’shouse

assheexplainedIwasofficiallyoneofSanta’shelpers.

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三、请使用独立结构改写下列句子

1.Hereyesbrimmedwithtears,andsheleft.

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2.Theboystoodthereandhisfacewasrigidwithanger.

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3.IclaspedmyhandsbehindmeandIwastooshockedtosayaword.

______________________________________________________________________________________

4.Agirlcameinwithabookinherhand.

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5.Themanagersatquietlyintheofficeandhiseyeswereclosed.

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6.Theysatintheroomwiththecurtainsdrawn.

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7.Oliverjumpedupandhisfacewasbrightredwithanger.

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8.Lindaleapttoherfeetandhereyeswereblazingwithanger.

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9.AswehuggedRuthgood-bye,shesaidtome.Hertearswereshininginhereyes.

______________________________________________________________________________________

10.Hecriedandhisblueeyeswereshiningbehindhisglasses.

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四、请用过去分词或形容词改写下列句子或小段落

1.ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthere.Iwasconfused.

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2.Theywereveryfrightened.Theyalljumpedback.

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3.Intheevening,thechildrenreturnedhome.Theyweretiredandhungry.

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