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感谢信
【试题探究】
假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请你写一封邮
件,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;
2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;
3.临别祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Step1:审题布局
人称第一人称(I)为主,第二人称(you)为辅
时态一般过去时,一般现在时
1.点明写作目的,感谢对方的帮助
要点2.具体指出曾经的帮助
3.临别祝愿
Step2:巧饰亮点
要点1:你教我如何学英语。
一般表达:YoutaughtmehowtolearnEnglish.
句式升级(强调句)
是你教我如何学英语。
ItwasyouwhotaughtmehowtolearnEnglish.
要点2:你帮助我提高了英语并且给了我更多学习的自信。
一般表达:YouhelpedimprovemyEnglishandgavememoreconfidenceinlearning.
句式升级(倒装句)
你不但帮助我提高了英语,并且给了我更多学习的自信。
NotonlydidyouhelpimprovemyEnglish,butalsoyougavememoreconfidenceinlearning.
Step3:衔接然成篇
DearAlex,
I’veheardthatyou’releavingChinasoon,soI’mwritingtoexpressmysincereblessingand
thanks.
IcanwellremembertherewasatimewhenIhaddifficultyinlearningEnglish.Itwasyou
whotaughtmehowtolearnEnglish.Underyourpatientguidance,Igraduallymadeprogressand
begantobecomeinterestedinEnglish.NotonlydidyouhelpimprovemyEnglish,butalsoyou
gavememoreconfidenceinlearning.Thanksagainforyourgeneroushelp.
Iwishyouapleasantjourneyhome.
Yours,
LiHua
【句式储备】
1.篇头——开篇表意,写信原因和目的
①I’mwritingtothankyouforhelpingmespendwonderfuldaysinLondon.
我写信感谢你帮我在伦敦度过快乐的日子。
②Iamwritingtoexpress/show/conveymysincerethankstoyouforyourhelp.
我写信真诚地感谢你的帮助。
2.篇中——描述对方对自己的帮助
①Without/Butforyourhelp(Ifitwerenotforyourhelp),Iwouldnothavemadesomuch
progressinmyEnglish.
要是没有你的帮助,我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。
②Haditnotbeenforyourpatientguidance,Icouldn’thavepreparedsowell.
如果没有你耐心的指导,我不可能准备得这么好。
3.结尾——表达谢意
①Again,nowordsarestrongenoughtoconveyhowgratefulIam.
再一次,没有任何言语能表达我的感激之情。
②Yourkindnessandhelpwillalwaysberemembered.
我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。
【拓展储备】
假定你是李华,你在你校举办的英语辩论赛上取得了不错的成绩。请给你的留学生朋友
Chris写一封感谢信,感谢他对你的帮助,内容包括:
1.表达感谢;
2.感谢的原因;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
DearChris,
I’mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyouforthehelpyouofferedme.
Tobehonest,yourassistancehasagreatimpactonme.ItwasyouwhomademyEnglish
improvegreatly.Haditnotbeenforyourpatientguidance,Icouldn’thavepreparedsowell.
Withoutyouraid,Iwouldn’thavedonewellintheEnglishdebatecontestheldinourschool.I’ll
bearyourkindnessinmindforever.
Again,I’dliketothankyouforwhatyoudidformeandwishyouallthebest.
Yours,
LiHua
【要点精练】
1.假定你是李华,你被你心仪的大学录取了。请你给你在高中期间的外教MrPotter写一封
邮件表达对他的感谢,内容包括:
1.对老师的辛勤工作表示感谢;
2.感谢老师对自己的教导和帮助;
3.表达对老师的祝愿。
注意:1.可适当补充信息,以使行文连贯;
2.词数为80左右。
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2.假定你是李华,前一段时间你的身体状况一直不好。你的网友Oliver时常关心着你。请
你用英语写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.目前状况及感谢;
2.介绍健身计划。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
DearOliver,
_______________________________________________________________________________
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Yourssincerely,
LiHua
3.假定你是李华,你在你校上周举办的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。此前,你的交换生
好友Peter给予了你很多帮助。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.分享获奖的喜悦;
2.感谢他的帮助;
3.邀请他到你家做客以表谢意。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
DearPeter,
_______________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
LiHua
4.假定你是学生会主席李华,学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动WorkCreatesaBetter
Life得到了外教Patrick的大力支持。活动已经圆满结束,请你给他写一封感谢信。内容包
括:
1.表示感谢;
2.外教的帮助;
3.活动的反响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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5.假设你是李华,你的英国伦敦的朋友Peter在你暑期在伦敦旅游期间对你热情款待和帮助,
写信对他表示感谢,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;
2.回顾你在伦敦时Peter对你的帮助;
3.再次表达感谢,表达回报的愿望;
注意:1.词数80到100之间;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
DearPeter,
_______________________________________________________________________________
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Yours
Lihua
6.假定你是李华,你的交换生朋友Robert上周末参加了你校英语社团举办的探访养老院
活动,请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;
2.回顾活动内容;
3.期待后续参与。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
DearRobert,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_
Yours
LiHua
7.假设你是高一学生李华。正在英国某国际中学交换学习。上周末你的同学Mark邀请你
参加了学校组织的世界图书日(4月23日)(WorldBookandCopyrightDay)。请你给Mark
写一封邮件。
内容包括:
1.感谢邀请;
2.分享感受。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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8.假设你是李华,上周六一外国乘客John发现了你落在地铁上的相机,并根据名牌上的
Email联系你,将相机寄回。现你已经收到相机。请你给John写一封电子邮件。内容包括:
1.事情过程;
2.你的感受;
3.表达感谢。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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9.假设你是李华,梁教授去年六月推荐你去悉尼大学学习,现在你已经被悉尼大学录取,
请写一封信向梁教授表示感谢。
悉尼大学SydneyUniversity;被录取beadmittedinto/to
DearProfessorLiang,
_______________________________________________________________________________
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Yourstruly,
LiHua
10.假定你是李华,现在在美国某高中做交换生,你因为受伤在家休养,这期间有不少同班
同学来看望你。现在你即将康复,请给他们写一封感谢信,内容包括:
1.回忆同学们为你做的事;
2.表达你的感谢之情。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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参考答案
1.DearMrPotter,
I’mgladtowritetosharewithyoumyhappinessofbeingadmittedtocollege,whichIhave
beendreamingof.Firstly,I’dliketoexpressmygratitudeforyourexcellentteachingandyour
careaswellasloveforme!It’syouwhocheeredmeup.NeverwillIforgetwhatyousaid—
doorsopentotheverymanwithfullconfidenceandinstantaction.Withoutyourhelp,Icould
neverhaveenjoyedsuchajoyfulharvest.AndIreallyappreciateyourinstructions.
Iwishmoreandmoreofyourstudentscouldgototheiridealcolleges.Wishyouallthe
best!
Yourssincerely,
LiHua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,你被你心仪的大学录取了。请你给
你在高中期间的外教MrPotter写一封邮件表达对他的感谢。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
感激:gratitude→thankfulness
表达:express→extend
高兴的:glad→delighted
快乐:happiness→joy
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Withoutyourhelp,Icouldneverhaveenjoyedsuchajoyfulharvest.AndIreallyappreciate
yourinstructions.
拓展句:Ireallyappreciateyourinstructionsbecausewithoutyourhelp,Icouldneverhave
enjoyedsuchajoyfulharvest.
[高分句型1]I’mgladtowritetosharewithyoumyhappinessofbeingadmittedtocollege,
whichIhavebeendreamingof.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]NeverwillIforgetwhatyousaid—doorsopentotheverymanwithfullconfidence
andinstantaction.(运用了否定词Never置于句首引起的部分倒装以及what引导的宾语从句)
2.DearOliver,
Thiswinter,thecoldwasverypopularandIlackedexercise,somyphysicalconditionhas
beenpoor.Itisyourconcernandencouragementthathavecontinuouslystrengthenedmy
confidence.Ifeelwarmtohavefriendslikeyou.
Springhasarrived.Ayear’splanliesinspring.Iamplanningtodevelopadetailedfitness
planaccordingtowhatyousaid.Firstly,participateinmoreoutdooractivitiesandbreathefreshair.
Secondly,handletherelationshipbetweenlearningandhealthcorrectly,andemphasizetheroleof
physicalhealthinlearning.Inthefuture,Iwillcontinuetocommunicatewithyouaboutthis
situation.Ialsowishyoubetterhealth.
Yourssincerely,
LiHua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于“前一段时间你的身体状况一直不好,
你的网友Oliver时常关心着你”这一情况,用英语写一封回复邮件。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
缺乏:lacked→wasshortof
增强,提升:strengthened→enhanced
参加:participatein→takepartin
强调:emphasize→stress
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Thiswinter,thecoldwasverypopularandIlackedexercise,somyphysicalconditionhas
beenpoor.
拓展句:Thiswinter,thecoldwasverypopularandIlackedexercise,whichledtomyphysical
conditionpoor.
【高分句型1】Itisyourconcernandencouragementthathavecontinuouslystrengthenedmy
confidence.(运用了Itis…that…的强调句式。)
【高分句型2】Iamplanningtodevelopadetailedfitnessplanaccordingtowhatyousaid.(运用
了连接代词what引导的宾语从句。)
3.DearPeter,
IamthrilledtosharewithyouthatIjustwonthefirstprizeinourschool’sEnglishspeech
competitionlastweek!Thisaccomplishmentisundoubtedlyaresultofyourinvaluableassistance.
Yourinsights,suggestions,andencouragementwerecrucialinhelpingmeprepareforthe
competition.Ireallyappreciateyourhelp.
Toexpressmyheartfeltgratitude,Iwouldliketoinviteyoutomyhomeforavisit.Itwouldbe
apleasuretohaveyouasmyguestandtothankyouinpersonforallyourhelp.
Yours,
LiHua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生好友Peter写封邮件,告诉他在
上周举办的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖,同时感谢他的帮助。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
激动的:thrilled→excited
帮助:assistance→help
至关重要的:crucial→vital
感谢:appreciate→thank
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Yourinsights,suggestions,andencouragementwerecrucialinhelpingmeprepareforthe
competition.
拓展句:Yourinsights,suggestions,andencouragementwerecrucial,whichhelpedmepreparefor
thecompetition.
【高分句型1】IamthrilledtosharewithyouthatIjustwonthefirstprizeinourschool’sEnglish
speechcompetitionlastweek!(运用了从属连词that引导的宾语从句。)
【高分句型2】Toexpressmyheartfeltgratitude,Iwouldliketoinviteyoutomyhomeforavisit.
(运用了非谓语动词中的动词不定式Toexpress作目的状语。)
4.DearPatrick,
IamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourkindhelpintheWorkCreatesaBetter
Life,whichhasturnedouttobeanamazingsuccess.
Itissoniceofyoutohaveofferedusavarietyofpresentationskillsandcreative
suggestionsonourshow.Itwasunderyourprofessionalguidancethattheparticipantsshowed
theirskillsofcooking,gardening,etc.Theirimpressiveperformancesdefinitelyfueledtheir
passionfordailylifeskills.Mostimportantly,thisactivityhelpedstudentsreceivewide
admirationandgaintheirtremendousconfidence.
Manythanksforyourtimeandsupport.
Yours,
LiHua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封感谢信,感谢外教Patrick对学生
会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动的大力支持。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
感激:gratitude→appreciation
惊人的:amazing→astonishing
表达:express→convey
各种各样的:avarietyof→various
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Theirimpressiveperformancesdefinitelyfueledtheirpassionfordailylifeskills.
拓展句:Theirperformanceswhichimpressedpeople,definitelyfueledtheirpassionfordailylife
skills.
【高分句型1】IamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourkindhelpintheWorkCreates
aBetterLife,whichhasturnedouttobeanamazingsuccess.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语
从句)
【高分句型2】Itwasunderyourprofessionalguidancethattheparticipantsshowedtheirskillsof
cooking,gardening,etc.(运用了itis...that强调句型)
5.DearPeter,
Iamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourwarmhospitalityandassistanceduring
mysummertravelinLondon.
FromthemomentIarrived,youwelcomedmewithopenarmsandmademefeelathomein
yourbeautifulcity.Istillrememberhowyoupatientlyshowedmearoundthecity,introducingme
toitshiddengemsandtakingmetoyourfavoritelocalspots.Moreover,yourwillingnessto
accompanymeonvariousexcursionsmadethetripevenmoreenjoyableandmemorable.
Onceagain,thankyoufromthebottomofmyheartforbeingsuchanamazinghostand
friend.IwouldlovetohavetheopportunitytohostyouinmycountrysomedaysothatIcan
returnthefavorandshowyouthesamelevelofhospitalityandgratitudethatyoushowedme.
Yours,
Lihua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的英国伦敦的朋友Peter在你暑期在伦敦旅游期
间对你热情款待和帮助,请你给他写信对他表示感谢。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
诚挚的:sincere→genuine
此外:moreover→what’smore
各种各样的:various→avarietyof
机会:opportunity→chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Iamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourwarmhospitalityandassistanceduring
mysummertravelinLondon.
拓展句:Iamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourwarmhospitalityandassistance
duringmysummertravelinLondon,whicharegreatlypreciousforme.
【高分句型1】Istillrememberhowyoupatientlyshowedmearoundthecity,introducingmeto
itshiddengemsandtakingmetoyourfavoritelocalspots.(运用了how引导的宾语从句以及
现在分词作伴随状语)
【高分句型2】IwouldlovetohavetheopportunitytohostyouinmycountrysomedaysothatI
canreturnthefavorandshowyouthesamelevelofhospitalityandgratitudethatyoushowedme.
(运用了sothat引导的目的状语从句)
6.
DearRobert,
Knowingthatyouparticipatedintheactivityofvisitingthenursinghomelastweekend,I
wouldliketoexpressmythankstoyou.
ItisuniversallyacknowledgedthatrespectingtheelderlyisatraditionalChineseculture.To
carryforwardourtraditionandalsohelptheelderly,theEnglishcommunitylaunchedanactivity
atthenursinghomelastSaturday.Assoonaswegotthereearlyinthemorning,wegavethemour
giftsanddidsomecleaningfortheelderly.Whatagreatday!
Weallbenefitedalotfromthisactivityandhopewecanparticipateinmoremeaningful
activitiesinthefuture.
Yours,
LiHua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。交换生朋友Robert上周末参加了你校英语社团举
办的探访养老院活动,要求考生按照要求给他写封邮件。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
参与:participatein→takepartin
感谢:thanks→gratitude
一致地:universally→solidly
承认:acknowledge→recognize
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Knowingthatyouparticipatedintheactivityofvisitingthenursinghomelastweekend,I
wouldliketoexpressmythankstoyou.
拓展句:
AsIknowthatyouparticipatedintheactivityofvisitingthenursinghomelastweekend,Iwould
liketoexpressmythankstoyou.
【高分句型1】Knowingthatyouparticipatedintheactivityofvisitingthenursinghomelast
weekend,Iwouldliketoexpressmythankstoyou(.运用了现在分词Knowing作原因状语、that
引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】ItisuniversallyacknowledgedthatrespectingtheelderlyisatraditionalChinese
culture.(运用了It作形式主语、that引导的主语从句、动名词respecting作主语)
7.
DearMark,
ThankyouforinvitingmetotheWorldBookandCopyrightDaylastweekend.Itwasan
amazingexperienceandIthoroughlyenjoyedspendingtimewithyou.Asweallknow,readingis
beneficialtous.Inthisactivity,readinggoodbooksenrichedourmind,broadenedourhorizons
andgaveuswisdomaswell.Mostimportantly,beingexposedtoabundantChinesefolkstories
gavemegreatpleasure.AndIamlookingforwardtomoreopportunitiestoreadgoodbookswith
youinfuture.
Bestregards.
Yours,
LiHua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。上周末同学Mark邀请考生参加了学校组织的世界
图书日,要求考生按照要求给Mark写一封邮件表示感谢以及分享感受。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
令人大为惊奇的:amazing→surprising
有益的:beneficial→helpful
大量的:abundant→massive
快乐:pleasure→joy
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Asweallknow,readingisbeneficialtous.
拓展句:Itisknownthatreadingisbeneficialtous.
【高分句型1】Asweallknow,readingisbeneficialtous.(运用了As引导的非限制性定语从
句)
【高分句型2】Mostimportantly,beingexposedtoabundantChinesefolkstoriesgavemegreat
pleasure.(运用了动名词短语beingexposedtoabundantChinesefolkstories作主语)
8.DearJohn,
I’mLiHua.I’mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourkindassistanceinreturning
mylostcamera.
LastSaturday,Itookthesubwayandaccidentallyleftmycameraonit.Later,Ireceivedan
emailfromyou,informingmethatyouhadfoundmycameraandwouldmailitbacktome.Iwas
trulytouchedbyyourthoughtfulnessandhonesty.
Ihavealreadyreceivedthecameraandeverythingisingoodcondition.Yourkindnesshas
savedmefromtheinconvenienceandfrustrationoflosinganimportantpossession.Onceagain,
thankyouforyourhelp.
Yours,
LiHua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的感谢信。要求考生给外国乘客John写封电
子邮件,感谢其寄回自己丢失的相机。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
真诚的:sincere→genuine
意外地:accidentally→byaccident/bychance
感动的:touched→moved
重要的:important→significant/essential
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Ihavealreadyreceivedthecameraandeverythingisingoodcondition.
拓展句:Ihavealreadyreceivedthecamerawhichisingoodcondition.
【高分句型1】Later,Ireceivedanemailfromyou,informingmethatyouhadfoundmycamera
andwouldmailitbacktome.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Ihavealreadyreceivedthecameraandeverythingisingoodcondition.(运用了
and连接的并列句)
9.DearProfessorLiang,
Iamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyou.Haditnotforyourhelp,Iwouldn'thave
beenadmittedintoSydneyUniversity.LastJune,whenIappliedtobecomeastudentofSydney
University,youreallygavemealotofvaluablehelp.Notonlydidyouwritearecommendation
formetotheuniversitybutalsogaveme
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