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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Walkingonthestreet,thebittercoldofaDecemberdayinWashington,D.C.wasruiningmymood.ThetemperaturewasbelowzerosoIduckedintothesubwaystation,hopingtogetwarm.WarmthcametomybodyasIsettledontoabenchwithacupofhotcoffee.NowIwasreadytorelaxanddosomeseriouspeople-watching.Inoticedahomelessmanseatednearby.Thepleasantsmellofdeliciousfoodfromthesubwayfoodcourt(餐饮区)wastemptingmetoconsideranearlydinner.Fromthelonginglookinmyneighbor’seyesitwasobviousthathe,too,noticedthegoodsmell.Iwonderedhowlongithadbeensincehehadeatenanything,expectinghewouldapproachmeforahandout(施舍).Butheneverdid.Myheadandheartwerebattlingitout:theformertellingmetomindmyownbusiness,andthelatterurgingmetomakeanimmediatetriptothefoodcourtforhim.Whilethisinnerdebatewasfierce,awell-dressedyoungcouplesuddenlyapproached.“Excuseme,sir,”beganthehusband.“Wejustfinishedeatingandourappetitewasn’tasbigaswethought.Wehatetowastefood.Canyouhelpusoutandputthistogooduse?”Thekindstrangerhandedalargecontainerwithfood.“Thankyou.”camethegratefulreply.FeelinggoodaboutwhatIhadseen,butdisappointedbymyownlackofaction,Iobservedmyneighbor’sresponsetohissuddengoodfortune.Heliftedthesoup,cuppinghishandsaroundthesteamingbowl.Itwasobviousthathewasgoingtoenjoythismiraclemeal.Heopenedhismouthandsuddenly,hestopped.Thereasonforthisunexpectedbehaviorsoonbecameclear.Enteringthehallwasanewarrival,inhisseventies,hatlessandgloveless.Hislightweightjacketwasapoorprotectionagainstcold.Hisfaceandhandswereredanddamaged.Peoplearoundfocusedonhimwithpityandwhisperedatthissadsight.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Myneighborwastheonlyonetotakeaction.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TearsblurredmyvisionwhenIwenttobuyfoodatthefoodcourt.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意这篇文章讲述了一个发生在华盛顿地铁站的感人故事。在一个寒冷的12月,作者在地铁站躲避严寒时,注意到了一位无家可归的人。作者内心挣扎,是否要为他提供帮助,但最终没有采取行动。此时,一对年轻夫妇将自己吃不完的食物送给了这位无家可归的人。然而,当一位年迈且衣衫单薄的老人进入地铁站时,无家可归的人毫不犹豫地将自己的食物让给了老人。这一行为深深触动了作者,让他意识到自己的自私和冷漠,并促使他反思和行动。故事展现了人性中的善良与无私,以及小小的善举如何传递温暖。故事山分析引入:作者在寒冷的12月躲避严寒,进入地铁站。上升:作者注意到一位无家可归的人,内心挣扎是否要帮助他。冲突:作者犹豫不决,而一对年轻夫妇主动将食物送给了无家可归的人。高潮:无家可归的人将食物让给了另一位更需要的老人。结局:作者深受触动,决定采取行动,为需要的人提供帮助。伏笔及回应伏笔:作者提到“我的头和心在交战”,暗示内心的挣扎。回应:作者最终没有采取行动,但被无家可归的人的行为触动。伏笔:无家可归的人“渴望地看着食物”,但没有伸手乞讨。回应:他将食物让给了更需要的老人,展现了无私。伏笔:作者提到“我期待他会向我乞讨,但他没有”。回应:无家可归的人没有乞讨,反而主动帮助他人。伏笔:作者提到“我为自己没有行动而感到失望”。回应:作者最终决定弥补自己的不足,主动为他人提供帮助。伏笔:作者提到“我准备去吃晚饭”,暗示他有能力提供帮助。回应:作者最终去买了食物,帮助了需要的人。续写要点(两段)第一段:描述无家可归的人如何将食物让给老人,以及他的行为对周围人的影响。关键点:无家可归者的无私行为,老人的反应,作者的感动。第二段:描述作者的反思和行动,以及这次经历给他的启示。关键点:作者的内心挣扎,最终的行动,对人性的思考。情感线(150字)文章通过作者的内心挣扎、无家可归者的无私行为以及作者的反思,展现了情感的起伏。作者在寒冷的天气中感到冷漠,内心挣扎是否要帮助他人,但最终没有行动。然而,无家可归者的无私行为深深触动了他,让他感到羞愧和自责。这种情感的转变最终促使作者采取行动,为需要的人提供帮助。故事传达了善良和无私的力量,以及小小的善举如何温暖人心。故事线作者在寒冷的天气中进入地铁站躲避严寒。作者注意到一位无家可归的人,内心挣扎是否要帮助他。一对年轻夫妇将食物送给了无家可归的人。无家可归的人将食物让给了另一位更需要的老人。作者深受触动,决定弥补自己的不足。作者反思这次经历,意识到善良和无私的力量。主旨升华句Kindnessisnotabouthowmuchyougive,butabouthowmuchitmeanstothosewhoreceiveit.Sometimes,thesmallestactsofgenerositycanmakethebiggestdifferenceinsomeone’slife.Truecompassioncomesfromrecognizingtheneedsofothersandtakingaction,nomatterhowsmall.Asingleactofkindnesscancreatearippleeffectthatwarmstheheartsofmany.Inaworldfilledwithcoldness,asimpleactofkindnesscanbringunexpectedwarmth.写作示范(两篇)示例1:Myneighborwastheonlyonetotakeaction.Withoutamoment’shesitation,hestoodupandwalkedtowardstheoldman.Hehandedthecontaineroffoodtohim,saying,“Here,thisisforyou.IthinkyouneeditmorethanIdo.”Theoldman’seyeswidenedwithsurpriseandgratitude.Heacceptedthefoodwithtremblinghandsandmumbledaheartfelt“Thankyou.”Myneighborpattedhimontheshoulderandreturnedtohisseat,asmallbutcontentedsmileonhisface.Thekindnessheshowedwasastarkcontrasttothecoldnessoftheweather.Irealizedinthatmomenthowmuchwarmthasimpleactofgenerositycouldbring.ItwasalessoninempathyandcompassionthatIwouldneverforget.TearsblurredmyvisionwhenIwenttobuyfoodatthefoodcourt.Ifeltamixofadmirationformyneighborandregretformyowninaction.AsIstoodinline,Idecidedtomakeamends.Iorderedextrafood,hopingtodomypartinhelpingthoseinneed.WhenIreturnedtothebench,Ihandedthefoodtoanotherpersonwholookedcoldandhungry.Thistime,Ididn’twaitforsomeoneelsetotaketheinitiative.Ilearnedthatsometimes,thesmallestgesturescanmakethebiggestdifference.Theexperienceremindedmethatkindnessisnotjustaboutgrandgestures,butaboutrecognizingtheneedsofothersandtakingaction,nomatterhowsmall.示例2:Myneighborwastheonlyonetotakeaction.Hestoodupandwalkedtowardstheoldman,whowasshiveringinthecold.Withagentlesmile,hehandedthecontaineroffoodtohim,saying,“IthinkyouneedthismorethanIdo.”Theoldman’sfacelitupwithgratitude,andheacceptedthefoodwithtremblinghands.“Thankyou,”hewhispered,hisvoicefilledwithemotion.Myneighbornoddedandreturnedtohisseat,hiseyesshiningwithaquietsatisfaction.Iwatchedinawe,feelingapangofguiltformyownhesitation.Hissimpleactofkindnesshadnotonlywarmedtheoldman’sbodybutalsohisheart.TearsblurredmyvisionwhenIwenttobuyfoodatthefoodcourt.Ifeltadeepsenseofadmirationformyneighborandregretformyowninaction.AsIstoodinline,Idecidedtodosomething.Iorderedextrafoodandreturnedtothestation,determinedtomakeadifference.Thistime,Iapproachedayoungmotherwithacryingbabyandhandedherthefood.“Ihopethishelps,”Isaidsoftly.Shelookedup,surprisedandgrateful,andthankedme.Inthatmoment,Irealizedthatkindnessisnotabouthowmuchyougive,butabouthowmuchitmeanstothosewhoreceiveit.【答案】Myneighborwastheonlyonetotakeaction.Hestoodup,walkedovertothenewcomer,andgentlyofferedhimthesteamingbowlofsoup.Theoldman’seyeslitupwithsurpriseandgratitudeasheacceptedtheunexpectedkindness.Myneighborthenreturnedtohisseat,satisfiedwithhisdecisiontosharehismeal.Theatmospherei

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