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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Joanexcitedlypackedherbagsforherupcomingtripwithherfamily.TheyweregoingtodrivefromNewYorktoVirginiatovisitrelatives.Shecouldnotwait.Shehadmissedplayingwithhercousinsandtalkingtoherauntanduncle.Afterallofthesuitcaseshadbeenloadedintothecar,Joan’sdadlookedtoJoanandhermother.“Iseveryonereadyforourroadtrip?”Theybothgrinned(露齿而笑)andnodded.Itwasgoingtobequitealongjourney,andwithinacoupleofhoursJoanhadalreadybeguntofeeltired.Shebegantonodoffwhenshenoticedthatthecarbegantoveer(突然变向)tothesideoftheroad.Joan’sfathergotoutandwalkedaroundthecar.Hescratchedhishead,lookingconfused.Then,hegaveagreatsigh.Hepokedhisheadthroughthepassengersidewindow.“Wehaveaflattire,”hesaidtoJoan’smom.“Usethesparetireinthetrunk.ThenwecanreplaceitwhenwereachVirginia,”shesuggested.Joan’sfatherlookeddownathisfeetsheepishly(羞怯地).“I...haven’thadthesparetirereplacedsincethelasttimewehadaflat.”Hermotherseemedfrustrated(沮丧),buttriedtoremainpositive.“Maybewecancallaservice,”shesuggested.Butaquickglanceattheircellphonestoldthemthattherewasnoreceptioninthearea.Joanlookedathermotherinthefrontseat,andherfatherstillstaringblankly(茫然地)attheflattireoutside.Bothofthemlookedconcerned.Joanbegantogetworried.Noothercarshadpassedbyinawhileanditseemedliketheywerefarawayfromatowncenter.Joanlookedoutthewindow,wonderingiftheywouldhavetosleepinthecaroriftherewasanywaytheycouldpossiblyfindsomeonetohelpthem.WouldtheyevermaketheirwaytoVirginia?Herrelativeswouldsurelybeworriedaboutthem.注意：1.续写词数应为150词左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Paragraph1:WhenJoanlookedoutthewindow,shesawacarapproaching.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Joansawcloudsintheskyanditbegantorain._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意​Joan满心期待地和家人开启从纽约到弗吉尼亚探亲的公路之旅。途中，Joan感到疲惫犯困时，车子突然偏向路边。父亲下车查看后发现车胎爆了，可自从上次爆胎后，他一直没更换备用轮胎。母亲提议打电话叫救援服务，但他们所处区域手机没有信号。Joan开始担心，周围许久没有车辆经过，他们似乎远离城镇中心，不知道是否要在车里过夜，也不确定能否找到人帮忙，更担心无法按时到达弗吉尼亚，让亲戚们担忧。​故事山分析​开头：Joan一家满怀期待踏上公路旅行，Joan憧憬与亲戚相聚。​发展：车行驶途中车胎爆了，且没有可用的备用轮胎，手机还没信号，一家人陷入困境。​高潮（续写部分）：一辆车的出现带来希望，后续又遭遇下雨，如何应对成为关键。​结尾（推测）：一家人成功解决问题，继续踏上旅程，到达弗吉尼亚与亲戚团聚，经历此次事件收获成长。​伏笔以及在续写中的回应​Joan的期待：原文中Joan迫不及待与亲戚相聚，在续写中可回应为Joan期待能尽快解决车胎问题，不耽误与亲戚见面，如“Joan’sheartachedatthethoughtofdisappointinghercousins.Sheprayedthattheapproachingcarcouldofferasolution.”​父亲未更换备用轮胎：这一伏笔在续写中可回应为若路过车辆无法直接帮忙换胎，可能会提及去寻找新的备用轮胎，如“Thedriveroftheapproachingcaralsodidn'thaveasuitablespare,butheknewanearbygaragewheretheycouldgetone.”​手机无信号：续写中可回应为在向路过车辆求助时，强调手机信号问题导致无法提前联系救援，如“Heexplainedthattheyhadbeentryingtocallforhelp,butthelackofreceptionmadeitimpossible.”​许久无车经过：路过车辆的出现打破这一困境，在续写中可描述为这是他们许久等来的唯一希望，如“Joan’seyeslitupwithhopeasthecar,thefirstoneinalongwhile,cameintoview.”​担心在车里过夜：续写中下雨的情节可与之呼应，增加在车里过夜的不适，突出尽快解决问题的紧迫性，如“Astherainpoured,Joanshivered,imaginingspendingthenightinthecold,wetcar.”​续写要点（两段）​第一段：重点描述驶来车辆的情况，如车上人员、态度，双方交流内容，是否能直接帮忙解决车胎问题，Joan一家的反应等。​第二段：围绕下雨展开，描写下雨对他们处境的影响，如是否会影响车辆维修，他们如何应对，最终问题是否解决，一家人心情变化等。​情感线（150字）​Joan从最初的期待旅行，到车胎爆胎后的担忧，看到有车驶来燃起希望，交流中可能因对方能否帮忙而忐忑，下雨时又陷入新的焦虑，随着问题逐步解决，心情逐渐平复，最后重拾对旅程的期待。她的父母也经历了从发现车胎问题的沮丧，到向路人求助的急切，面对困难时的焦虑，再到问题解决后的释然等一系列情感变化。​故事线Joan一家车胎爆胎后的困境。​驶来车辆的出现及车上人员情况。​双方交流及关于解决车胎问题的尝试。​下雨对当前状况的影响。​Joan一家如何应对下雨及车胎问题。​最终一家人是否成功解决问题并继续旅程。​主旨升华句ThisunexpectedencountertaughtJoanandherfamilythevalueofhopeandkindnessindifficulttimes.​Thejourney,thoughinterruptedbytheflattire,becameamemorableexperiencethatstrengthenedtheirfamilybond.​Throughthischallenge,Joanlearnedthateveninthefaceofadversity,thereisalwaysaglimmerofhopewaitingtobediscovered.​Theirexperienceontheroadshowedthatwithapositiveattitudeandthewillingnesstoseekhelp,anyobstaclecanbeovercome.​Theincidentservedasareminderthatlife'sunexpectedtwistscanbringbothchallengesandopportunitiesforgrowth.​两篇写作示范​写作示范一​WhenJoanlookedoutthewindow,shesawacarapproaching.Herheartleapedwithhope.Thecarpulledupbesidethem,andamiddle-agedmansteppedout.Joan’sfatherquicklyexplainedtheirsituation.Themannoddedsympatheticallyandsaidhehadasparetireinhistrunkthatmightfittheircar.Withhishelp,theystartedchangingthetire.Joanwatched,feelingasenseofrelief.However,astheywerealmostdone,Joansawcloudsintheskyanditbegantorain.Theraindropsquicklyturnedintoadownpour.ThemanandJoan’sfatherstruggledtofinishtighteningtheboltsintherain.Joanandhermotherhuddledinthecar,worried.Butsoon,thejobwasdone.Themanrefusedanypayment,sayinghewasjustgladtohelp.Withawave,theycontinuedtheirjourney,gratefulforthekindnesstheyhadreceived.​写作示范二​WhenJoanlookedoutthewindow,shesawacarapproaching.Sheimmediatelygotoutofthecar,wavingherhandsfrantically.Thecarstopped,andayoungcoupleemerged.Afterhearingtheirstory,thecoupleofferedtodrivetothenearesttownandcallforatowtruck.Joan’sparentswerehesitantatfirst,worriedaboutbeingleftalone.Butseeingnootheroption,theyagreed.Asthecoupledroveaway,Joansawcloudsintheskyanditbegantorain.Therainmadethesituationevenmoremiserable.Joan’sfamilyhuddledinthecar,coldandwet.Theywaitedanxiously,prayingforthecoupletoreturnsoon.Afterwhatseemedlikeaneternity,theysawthecouple’scarcomingbackwithatowtruck.Theproblemwasfinallysolved,andtheywereontheirwaytoVirginia,feelinggratefulfortheunexpectedkindnessofstrangers.​【答案】WhenJoanlookedoutthewindow,shesawacarapproaching.Shewavedtothedriverandshoutedloudly.Fortunately,thecarstopped,andanoldladygotoutofthecar.Shesaid,“What’sgoingon,dear?”Joanexplainedthewholeaccidentindetail.Theladysaid,“Iwillgohomeandaskmyhusbandtohelpyou.Heisgoodatfixingcars.”Joanlookedattheladyindisbelief,not