读后续写-情人节的特别礼物：传递对奶奶的爱 讲义-2025届江西省萍乡高三第一次调研考试英语试题

读后续写WhenValentine’sDaywasaroundthecorner,GrandmacamedownwithaterriblecoldasshewastravellingfromColoradotomyfamily’shouseinCalifornia.Shewastooweaktogooutatall,whichwassadanddisappointing.GrandmaandGrandpahadbeenplanningtotakemylittlesisterIndiandmetothezooforValentine’sDay.Grandma,asananimallover,hadbeenespeciallylookingforwardtoit.OnValentine’sDay,IndibeggedGrandmatogotothezoowithus.ButGrandmajokinglyexplainedthatifshewentthere,shemightspreadhercoldtoothervisitors,oreventotheanimals,makingthemallstartsneezing.Iimaginedthesightthatanelephantkeptsneezing.Meanwhile,Ipretendedmyarmwasatrunkandblurtedoutafunnytrumpetingsoundthatendedwithagiganticsneeze.“Goodone,brother,”Indilaughed.“Thatelephantwouldneedahugeboxoftissues.”Grandmawasamused.Butsheinsistedthatsheshouldstayathomeandrestup.Shewishedusapleasantvisitandremindedustosendherregardstothemonkeys.Well,wedidgoandwedidhaveagreattime,butIkeptwishingGrandmacouldhavebeentherewithus.Whenwereachedthemonkeymountain,Grandpasuggestedtakingapicturewiththemonkeysandtoldustoholdstillandsay“cheese”.“Cheese,”Isaid.ButIndisaid,“HappyValentine’sDay,Grandma!”“Youweresupposedtosaycheese,”saidGrandpa.Indishrugged,“Itjustcameout.”“I’mgladitdid,”Isaid.“Becauseyou’rejustgivenmeafantasticidea.Whatifwetakepicturesofdifferentanimals,andthenturnthemintoaspecialValentinegiftforGrandma?”IndiandGrandpaagreedandwekepttakingpicturesforGrandma.Paragraph1:Whenwegothome,wesetaboutmakingthegift._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:ThenwetookthegiftupstairstoGrandma’sroom._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意情人节前夕，奶奶从科罗拉多州来加州途中患重感冒，无法按计划带“我”和妹妹去动物园。情人节当天，我们还是去了动物园，玩得很开心，但“我”一直希望奶奶也在。在猴山拍照时，妹妹喊出“情人节快乐，奶奶！”，这让“我”想到以动物照片为奶奶制作情人节礼物。故事山分析开端：奶奶因感冒无法带“我”和妹妹去动物园过情人节。发展：我们去了动物园，在猴山拍照时妹妹的话启发“我”制作礼物。高潮：回家后制作礼物以及给奶奶送礼物的过程。结局：奶奶收到礼物后的反应，体现亲情的温暖和礼物的意义。伏笔及在续写中的回应伏笔：“Grandma,asananimallover,hadbeenespeciallylookingforwardtoit.”表明奶奶热爱动物。回应：续写中以动物照片制作礼物，满足奶奶对动物的喜爱，给她带来惊喜。伏笔：“Iimaginedthesightthatanelephantkeptsneezing.”体现“我”丰富的想象力。回应：在制作礼物时，可能会发挥想象力对照片进行创意加工，如添加有趣的文字描述动物打喷嚏的样子。伏笔：“ButIndisaid,‘HappyValentine’sDay,Grandma!’”妹妹对奶奶的情感表达。回应：制作的礼物围绕情人节祝福展开，强化妹妹对奶奶的爱，也让奶奶感受到这份温暖。伏笔：“‘Whatifwetakepicturesofdifferentanimals,andthenturnthemintoaspecialValentinegiftforGrandma?’IndiandGrandpaagreed.”表明要制作礼物。回应：续写第一段详细描述制作礼物的过程，如挑选照片、装饰等。伏笔：“Well,wedidgoandwedidhaveagreattime,butIkeptwishingGrandmacouldhavebeentherewithus.”体现对奶奶的思念。回应：制作礼物是弥补奶奶未能同去的遗憾，奶奶收到礼物后，能感受到我们的思念，进一步加深亲情。续写要点第一段：详细描述回家后制作礼物的过程。先挑选出最有趣、最有代表性的动物照片，然后用彩色笔在照片周围画上爱心、花朵等装饰，还可以在每张照片下写上有趣的文字，如动物的“内心独白”，表达对奶奶的祝福。第二段：描述送礼物给奶奶的场景。我们走进奶奶房间，将礼物递给她，奶奶打开礼物时的表情从惊讶到感动，她可能会逐张翻看照片，眼中泛着泪花，对我们的礼物赞不绝口，最后我们一起拥抱，感受亲情的温暖。情感线从去动物园时对奶奶的思念，到决定制作礼物时的期待，制作过程中的用心和喜悦，送礼物时的紧张与兴奋，以及奶奶收到礼物后的感动，情感层层递进，突出亲情的美好。故事线奶奶因感冒无法陪我们去动物园。我们在动物园游玩，妹妹的话启发制作礼物。回家后挑选照片，装饰并撰写文字制作礼物。带着礼物上楼，走进奶奶房间。奶奶打开礼物，表现出惊讶与感动。一家人拥抱，感受亲情温暖。主旨升华句Loveisnotboundbycircumstancesbutcanbeexpressedincreativeways,justlikethegiftwemadeforGrandma.Asimpleactofkindnessandthoughtfulnesscanbringimmeasurablejoyandwarmth,especiallytothosewelove.Thepoweroffamilyloveliesinthesmallgesturesthatshowwecare,likethisspecialValentine'sgiftforGrandma.Eveninthefaceofdisappointment,lovefindsawaytoshinethrough,asourgifttoGrandmademonstrated.ThisValentine'sDay,welearnedthatthemostpreciousgiftsarenotboughtbutcraftedwithloveandsharedwithfamily.写作示范示范一Whenwegothome,wesetaboutmakingthegift.First,wecarefullyselectedthebestpicturesfromourzoovisit.Theoneofthelionroaringwasamust-include,andthephotoofthecutepandasmunchingonbamboowasperfecttoo.Then,IndiandItookoutourcoloredpensandstarteddecoratingtheedgesofthepictureswithheartsandflowers.Iwrotefunnycaptionsundereachphoto.Forthelion,Iwrote,“Roar!Wishingyouaspeedyrecovery,Grandma!”Wespenthoursmakingthegiftasspecialaspossible.ThenwetookthegiftupstairstoGrandma’sroom.Asweentered,Grandmalookedupwithatiredsmile.Wehandedherthegift,andsheopeneditslowly.Hereyeswidenedwithsurpriseatfirst,andthenfilledwithtearsofjoyasshesaweachphoto.“Oh,mydears,thisisthemostwonderfulValentine'sgiftever.IfeellikeIwasrighttherewithyouatthezoo,”shesaid,hervoicetremblingwithemotion.Weallhuggedhertightly,andtheloveintheroomwaspalpable.示范二Whenwegothome,wesetaboutmakingthegift.Ispreadoutallthepicturesonthet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