2017-2018学年人教课标高一英语必修4辅导Unit4BodylanguageGUIDEDWRITING

如何写慰问信【写作任务】假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Amy是一名网球运动员，最近她因训练时右腿骨折导致停训数月而闷闷不乐。请你用英语给她写一封慰问信，要点包括：1.

同情遭遇；2.

给予安慰；3.

表达祝愿。注意：

1.

词数100左右（开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数）；2.

可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearAmy,

Yours,

LiHua【写作指导】一、审题定调本篇习作要求写一封慰问信，它是一种应用文体，用于向收信人表示关怀和问候。写慰问性信函时要注意态度诚恳、真切，语气诚挚。写慰问信时，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称主要用第一人称或第二人称。二、谋篇布局慰问信的格式和普通信件一样，通常包括以下几个部分：信头、称呼、正文、结束语和签名。其中信头部分为写信人地址和写信日期，常省略。因本写作任务称呼、结束语和签名已给出，所以我们只需写出正文部分。慰问信的正文通常分为三部分：第一部分：引入话题（同情对方遭遇，表明写信目的）；第二部分：表示慰问（向对方的处境表示理解、关心，并给予鼓励或者提供帮助等）；第三部分：总结全文（表达美好祝愿）。三、组织语言1.

第一部分：引入话题（同情对方遭遇，表明写信目的）。普通表达高级表达★Iheardthat...andIfeelreallysorryforthat.★Iamshocked/awfullysorrytohear/learnthat...★Ifeelgreatpityforyou.★Ijustcan’ttellyouhowsad/sorryIwastohearthat...★Itwasagreatshockforme/brokemyhearttohearthat...★I’mwritingtoexpressmydeepestsympathyforyou.2.

第二部分：表示慰问（向对方的处境表示理解、关心，并给予鼓励或者提供帮助等）。普通表达高级表达★Iunderstandhowyoufeelnow.★Youmustbeverysad/upset/disappointed...★Lifeisn’tthatbad.★If/Aslongasyou...,you’llgetbettersoon.★WearebestfriendssoIwill...★PleaseletmeknowifthereisanythingIcando.★It’safactthatattitudedecideseverything.Soyoushouldnevergiveupwhateverhappens.★Thesituationisn’tasbadasyouthink.★Remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.★Aslongasyou...,you’resuretorecover/beassoundasabellagainbeforelong.★IfIcanbeofanyhelp,pleasedon’thesitatetoletmeknow.3.

第三部分：总结全文（表达美好祝愿）。普通表达高级表达★Ihopeyou’llgetbettersoon.★Ihopethattimewilltakeawayyoursorrow.★Ihopeyou’llrecoverassoonaspossibleandcarryonasnormal.★Cheerup!I’mfirmlyconvincedthatyouwillgetoveritand...soon.★Ihopeyou’llmakeafullrecoverysoon.

【范文展示】普通范文DearAmy,I’msorrytohearthatyouhurtyourrightlegduringyourtrainingandhadtoquittennisforafewmonths.Ifeelgreatpityforyou.Youmustbeverysadnow.However,inmyopinion,lifeisn’tthatbad.Aslongasyoulistentothedoctoranddoashe/shetellsyou,you’llgetbettersoon.Duringthisperiod,youcandootherthingsyoulike,suchasplayinginstrumentsordrawing,whichwillhelpyourelax.Finally,pleaseletmeknowifyouneedanyhelp.Ihopeyouwillgetwellsoonandbeabletocontinuewithyourtennispractice.

Yours,

LiHua高级范文DearAmy,Ican’ttellyouhowsorryIfelttohearyou’vehurtyourrightlegduringyourtrainingandmustquittennisforafewmonths.I’mwritingtoexpressmydeepestsympathyforyou.Iunderstandyourfeelings.However,thesituationisn’tasbadasyouthink.Aslongasyoufollowthedoctor’sadviceclosely,you’llrecoversoon.Meanwhile,youcanpursueyourhobbieslikeplayinginstrumentsordrawing,whichwillputyourselfinamorerelaxedmood.Finally,ifIcanbeofanyhelp,pleasedon’thesitatetoletmeknow.Ihopeyou’llrecoverassoonaspossibleandcarryonasnormal.

Yours,

LiHua同学们，学习两篇范文后，你是否掌握了慰问信的一些常用表达了呢？是否掌握了一些复杂结构或高级词汇呢？希望大家认真研读范文，平时注意积累高级词汇，尝试使用从句等高级句型，以使自己写作能力更加出色。【实战演练】假定你是李华。你的美国笔友Ella因即将跟随父母到另外一个国家生活和学习，她情绪非常低落。请你用英语给她写一封电子邮件，表示安慰。注意：

1.

词数100左右（开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数）；

2.

可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearElla,I’msorrytohearthatyou’reupsetthesedaysbecause

Yours,

LiHua答案DearElla,I’msorrytohearthatyou’reupsetthesedaysbecauseyou’llhavetomovetoanewcountry.Truly,it’shardtoleaveaplacewhereyou’velivedformanyyearsandtosaygoodbyetoyourfriends.Iunderstandthatyou’llhavetofaceawholenewenvironmentwhereyoubarelyknowanyone.However,thingswon’tbeasbadasyouthink.Youcanstillkeepin