2025年高考英语写作常考题型专项突破：读后续写八步成文法（原卷版）

专题14读后续写八步成文法

【三大步】

三步核心：审题构思润色

审题：审人称时态情节结构衔接

构思：组织材料。围绕全文思想展开情节构思，但要与所给各段落开头语衔接合理。

润色：本着语言形象生动的原则，把构思句子进行修改，使得行文流畅，逻辑合理，语法正确，可以

使用无灵主语句。避免句式单一，可以灵活使用高级句型，非谓语短语，独立主格结构，从句。最后,

务必整洁地写在答题卡上。

【八小步】

1.情绪：消极情绪

2.细节：进一步解释描写

3.转折：个人的努力或借助外界

4.转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰

5.失望：但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题

6.新法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）

7.结局：过了一段时间；事情有了最后的转折

8.总结：点题，呼应前文

读后续写，大部分都是围绕conflict,solution来运转的。大部分文章都是这个模式：

过段时间,

但是问题还事情有了|传.题,

未解决或出

个人的努力呼应前文

现了新问题最后的转折

或借物外界

突然有了一个

进一步想法（一句话

解释描写说明这个想法）

情绪描写

情绪细节转折转机失望想法结局总结

第1步:消极情绪

1.awaveof...=afeeling/senseof+情绪名词floodedover阵…的情绪涌上心头。

sb二sweptoversb

情绪名词

fear,terror,fright,panic害怕happiness,joy,delight开心gratitude,appreciation感激sadness,sorrow悲伤anger,

rage,fury愤怒anxiety,stress,nervousness紧张，不安surprise,amazement,shock震惊guilt,regret后悔，内疚

Sbfeltsbwasfloatinginanoceanof+情绪名词某人感到自己漂浮在…的海洋中.

第2步：细节(动作刻画)：进一步解释描写

描写与head有关动作noddedone*shead点头shookone'shead摇头

描写“看”这一动作词：saw看见spotted发现recognized认出observedsbdoing/dosth注意到某人正在做/做

过

短语:staredat盯着看glaredat怒视glancedat瞥一眼带“eye”的表达lookedsbintheeye直视某人的眼睛

带“sight”的表达看得见：

sb/sthbeinmysight/cameintomysight/sb.caughtsightofsth看不见:sb/sthbeoutofsight/fadedaway

哭/笑：burstintotears/laughter(大哭/大笑)couldn'thelpcrying/laughing(情不自禁地哭/笑)tearswelledupinthe

eyes眼泪涌出cheeks/face泪水落下

描写“说”

温和地说，补充道，坚持说，抽泣着说，耳边轻声说saidgently/added/insisted/sobbed/whispered

与arm(手臂)有关的动作描写wavedhisarms.挥手grabbedherleftarm抓住她的左臂puthisarmsaroundher

他搂着她描写与hand有关的动作tookout取出/拿出heldone*shand抓住某人的手shookhandswith与…握手

handinhand手拉手raisedone*shand举手heldoutone'shand伸出手tookone*shand牵某人的手Herhands

shook/trembled/shivered她的手颤抖着

屏住呼吸:Sbheldone'sbreath.

深呼吸:Sbtookadeepbreath.

心里想：Aninnervoicetoldsbthat内心的声音告诉某人…

细节描写:笑

看到直升飞机，Jane高兴地笑了起来。

(1)Atthesightofthehelicopter,Janebeamedwithwildjoy.

(2)Seeingthehelicopter,Janebeamedwithwildjoy.

(3)Themomentshecaughtsightofthehelicopter,Jane'seyes/facelitupwithdelight.

(4)Themomentshecaughtsightofthehelicopter,abrightsmilelitupJane*sface/eyes.

细节描写:哭

(1)Alumpcametohisthroat.他哽咽欲哭。

(2)Hereyeswereredfromcrying.她的双眼哭得通红。

(3)Hereyesbrimmedwithtears.她的眼里满含泪水。

(4)Tearscoursed/trickled/streamed/randownhercheeks.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来。

细节描写:害怕

我感到很害怕。

(1)Ifeltveryfrightened/scared/panicked.

(2)Iwasin(a)panic/wasfulloffear.

(3)Istoodrootedtothespot,brimmingwithfear/filledwithfear.

(4)1feltsoscaredthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.

(5)1frozewithterror,tooscaredtomove.

(6)1wasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorror,mypalmssweating

细节描写:高兴激动

当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。

(l)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,shefeltexcited/thrilled.

(2)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.

(3)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,herheartwaspoundingwithwildjoy.

(4)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,awildexcitementtookholdofher.

(5)Knowingtheresultofthetest,shefeltasurgeofexcitement.

(6)Knowingtheresultofthetest,shewasovercomewithexcitement.

情绪描写:生气愤怒

felt/getangry/furious;feelasurgeofanger/rage/fury;eyesblaze;stormoutof7into/off;storm/sayangrily;sth

makessbbloodboil;sthmakessbextremelyangry;claspone'sfists/teeth;speechless

细节描写:生气愤怒

Sam感到非常生气。

(1)Samfeltveryangry.

(2)Samstoodrootedtothespot,hiseyesblazingwithanger.

(3)Samfeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.

(4)Boilingwithrage,Samshookhisfistatme.

(5)Filledwithfury,Samwasunabletoutterasingleword.

第3步：转折：个人的努力或者借助外界的力量，使事情发生转折。

1.WithouthesitationAVithouteventhinking,sbdidsth.

鼓起勇气;他人的鼓励pluckup/take/gatherone'scourage(todo...)

毫不犹豫

(1)sbcouldhardlywaittodosth

(2)withoutasecondthought

(3)withouteventhinking

(4)withoutdelay

(5)withouthesitation

第4步：转机：一事情似乎有了转机，让人抱有希望,心理能感到安慰。

似乎

(1)Itwaslikedoingsth

(2)Itseemedasif7that

希望

(l)lhopingthat...

(2)see/feelaglimmerofhope

(3)tryinghardtodosth

欣慰

(1)...breathedasighofrelief=sighedwithrelief松了

(2)(awaveof)relieffloodedthrough/washedoversb

(3)toone'srelief,..使人欣慰的/放心的是..

第5步：失望：问题还未解决或出现了新问题

但问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题典型是:不幸的是;不知道做什么;消极情绪不幸的是:

l.Sbdidsth,butinvain/butwithout.../butnousesuccess不知道做什么

1.wonderingwhattodonext.

2.notknowingwhattodonext.

3.unsureofwhattodonext.

消极情绪:afeeling/senseof...floodedoversb

第6步：新的想法：面对没有解决的问题或者新问题，突然有了想法或感触。

某人想到/明白…；有了主意

1.Atthisdarkandhopelessmoment,itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat

从句二Ithitsbthat从句=Itstrucksbthat从句=Itdawnedonsbthat从句

在这黑暗而绝望的时刻，某人突然想到…”

2.Atthisdarkandhopelessmoment,awonderfulideacametosb.在这黑暗和无助的时刻,某人突然想到一个绝

妙的主意。

第7步：结局--皆大欢喜：在想法或感触的影响下，事情有了最后的转折/转机。

过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折：

不久：notlongafterthat,...-beforelong,.二Itdidn'ttakelongbefore从何=Ittooksometimebefore从句

在某人的帮助下：

Withtheaid/helpofsb,sbapproached/solvedtheproblemfinally.在…的帮助下，某人最终解决了问题。

有了结果：

(1)Toone'ssurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat+从句

(2)Butonsecondthoughts

(3)Butwhathappenednextwaspuremagic.

(4)Toone'ssurprise/delight,itturnedoutthat从句令某人惊讶/高兴的事，结果证明..

感到欣慰：

Toone'srelief,.使人欣慰的/放心的是

Awaveofrelieffloodedoversb.某人感到如释重负。

感谢:Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartfeltgratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢感动：

Inaflash,withtearswellingupinmyeyes,Iwastouchedbeyondwords(感动得说不出话来).

Ifeltsowarmasiftherewereninesunsinmychest.刹那间，我热泪盈眶，被感动得说不出话来。我觉得很温

暖，好像有九个太阳在我的胸膛。

第8步：总结：点题，呼应前文

第8步:最后总结，点题

(1)直到……才意识到

1.倒装句：

Notuntil+时间状语+didsbrealize/noticethat+从句

2.强调句：

Itwasonly+时间状语+thatsbrealizedthat+从句

(2)还记得某人的话;还在某人的脑海中

1.One'swords(echoed/rangout)inone*sears.

2.One*swords/voice/songlingered/whisperedinone'smindhead.

(3)经历与教训

l.One*sheadwasstillfullof...

2.Whata/anvaluable/useful/great/painfullessonsbtaughtme/sblearnedfromsb!

3.Whata/anenjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettablememorable/interesting/valuableexperiencesbhad!在某人

的内心深处

(3)Downdeepinone*sheart,...

“八步法”实战应用：高考真题讲解

【典例分析1】

故事梗概：父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是

亲身上马体验。临走叔叔告诫我们不要走偏了路("Don、belateforsupper,nUnclePaulcried,nandkeeptothe

tracksothatyoudon5tgetlost!*1)。一路上，风景优美，让人陶醉。

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.Hedecidedtotakemeonatripto

theWildWest.

WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelate

afternoon.UnclePaul,mydad'sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.

HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthe

nightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearly

inthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast."Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,"hesaid.After

breakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepoutto

graze（吃草）.IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.

Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.I

wasn'tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonour

horses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.nDon,tbelateforsupper/UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothe

tracksothatyoudon'tgetlost!""OK!"mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereout

ofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelate

afternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven（编织的）blanketspreadoutuponthe

groundjustforus.

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

注意：

（1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

（2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.

Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

八步法思路

1.Awaveofnervousnesssweptovermeespeciallywhenthehorseranlikecrazy.

（情绪）

2.Myheartpoundingandmypalmssweating,aninnervoicetoldmethatIhadtocalmdown.

（细节详述）

3.Thoughinapanic,Ipluckedmycouragetopullonthereigns.

（转折：个人努力）

4.Luckily,itdidn'ttakelongbeforeIsettleddownthehorse.

（转机：成功，希望来了）

5.Justatthatmoment,Dadranover,gaspingforair.

（衔接句：新问题来了）

6.t6Boy,wearewayoffthetrack."Hesaidseriously,alookofconcernspreadingacrosshisface.

Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.

1.Hungryandfrustrated,wetriedtofindawayoutbutinvain.

（努力，失败）

2.Itsuddenlydawnedonmewecouldrodedowntherivernearby.

（突然有了办法）

3.Unexpectedly,theriverbroughtustothefamiliartrackatlast.

（开始做）

4.Afterwhatseemedtwohours,UnclePaul5sfarmhousedidcomeintosight.

（成功了）

5.Myfather9sfacebrightenedup,sodidmine.

（感受）

6.Uponourarrival,UnclePaulcouldn'twaittoaskedus,"Wherehaveyoubeen?Iamjustcalling911.”

（幽默对话）

7.“ToAlice'sWonderland^^myfatheranswered,winkingatmewithabiggrin.

8.Whatanunforgettableexperiencewehad!

【典例分析2】

故事梗概：夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子独自离开，述路在树林里，直升飞机来了几次授救但没有看见她。她

感到很失望。

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.

Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreached

thelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom.'Tmgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp"andwalkedaway.

Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturned

around,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountain

top.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.

"Tom!"shecried.nHelp!n

Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershe

walked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthe

night.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimand

tellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.

Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling（滴落）somewhereatndistance.

Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandatea

fewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow.Janebegantowalkalongthe

streamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.

Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetrees

madeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Jane

tookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.

Paragraph1

Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Paragraph2

ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.

第一段：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.（但是没有直升机来了，天又黑了。）

读后续写续写

l.Awaveofterrorsweptoverher.一阵恐怖的浪潮席卷了她。1.情绪

2.Herheartpoundingfiercelyandherpalm她的心剧烈地跳动着，手心冒汗，一个内2.细节：详述

sweating,aninnervoicetoldherthatshehadto在的声音告诉她，她必须找到一个安全的情绪

findasafeplace.地方。

3.Tiredandterrifiedasshewas,Janepluckedher虽然她很累，也很害怕，但简鼓起勇气去3.转折：个人

couragetofeeltheway.感受这条路。努力

4.Luckily,itdidn'ttakelongbeforeshefounda4.幸运的是，没过多久她就找到了一个洞转机：成功、

cave.5.Sighingwithrelief,shefeltaglimmerof穴。希望来了。

hope,sayingtoherself."Tomorrowisanother5.松了一口气，她感到了一丝希望。对自

day.”己说。“明天又是新的一天。”

Withthat,shewenttosleep,inwhosedreamher说完，她就去睡觉了，她丈夫在梦里陪伴衔接句

husbandkepthercompany.着她。

第二段：ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.简醒来的时候天已经亮了。

读后续写续写

1.Hungryanddisappointed,shefoundnot1.饥饿和失望，她发现头顶上没有任何直升机，再度失望（出

anyhelicopteroverhead,atalosswhatto不知所措。现新问题）

do.

2.1tsuddenlydawnedonherthatshe2.她突然明白，她应该先找一个大的空地。突然有了办法

shouldfindabigopenareafirst.3.她狼吞虎咽地吃了些黑莓，迫不及待地要出

3.Havinggobblingdownsome发了。

blackberries,shecan*twaittosetoff.

4.好像过了一个世纪之后，这样的地区确实出现

4.Afterwhatseemedacentury,suchan

了。

areadidcomeintosight.

5.她的脸变亮了。

1.Herfacebrightenedup.

6.Whatacoincidencethatmeanwhile,结果解决问

6.与此同时，一架直升机正朝她飞来，真是巧

ahelicopterwasflyingtowardsher.

合。题，巧不成书，

7.Uponitslanding,outdashedher

7.她的丈夫紧紧地拥抱着简，眼泪涌上心头。皆大欢喜

husbandwhohuggedJanetightly,tears

wellingupintheirheart.

8.Itwasatthemomentthatthey8.就在这时，他们决定不再争吵了，而是学会了（总结）

decidednottoquarrelanymorebut妥协

learnedtocompromise.

Writing01

【广东省六校2024-2025学年高三上学期10月联考】Inourcozylittlehousenestledattheendofaquiet

street,mysisterOscarandIwerebustling。忙碌的）about,filledwithanticipationforMother'sDay.Ourmother

Clarewastheheartofourfamily.Shewasthetypeofmomwhoalwaysputourneedsfirst,sacrificingherown

desiresforourhappiness.

Growingup,weestablishedabeautifultraditionthateachyear,wewouldsurpriseherwithaspecialgiftto

showourgratitudeandlove.Thisyear,Oscarcameupwithabrilliantidea:"Whatifwemadeheralongand

beautifuldress?^^sheexclaimed,hervoicefilledwithexcitement.AsIrecalled,sincethedaywewereborn,Mom

hadn,tboughtherselfabeautifulnewdress,soIknewwehadtomakethisyear'ssurprisetrulyspecial.

Withthatthoughtinmind,wesettowork.Igrabbedmydrawingbookandbegantodesign,mypencil

dancingacrossthepage;whileOscarwithherperfectsenseofmeasurementandloveforsewing,shegotdownto

handlingthecloth.Hereyesshonewithconcentration,whileIfocusedonthebeautifulpatternsonthedress.Soon,

thedressbegantotakeshape-itwassuchamagnificentlongdress,andwecarefullywrappeditingiftpaper.

Butthencamethequestion:wheretohideitforthesurprisetoberevealedatdinner?Weputourheads

together,brainstormingtheperfecthidingspot.t6Nobodywouldthinktolookinmybedroomcloset."Isuggested

Oscargiggled,noddinginagreement,butwebothneglectedthefactthatourtwoplayfulcatscouldbeaproblem.

Finally,themomentarrived.Afterdessert,IexchangedaknowinglookwithOscar.Itwastimetounveilour

creation!Wedashedtoourbedroomtogether,myheartpoundinginmychestasIflungopentheclosetdoor.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

“NO"Iyelled,seeingourcatsdashedoutofthecloset.

“Wheredidyougetsuchabeautifulscarf?”Momasked.

Writing02

【2025届河南省信阳市高三第一次教学质量检测（一模）】InMaplewoodHighSchool,honestywasa

principleoftendiscussedbutnotalwayspracticed.Amongthestudents,EmmaTurnerwasknownforherhonesty.

Shewasdiligent,alwayscompletedherhomeworkontime,andwastrustedbyherpeers（同龄人）andteachers

alike.Shewasalsoamodelstudent,oftenhelpingotherswiththeirhomeworkandorganizingstudygroups.Her

reputationforhonestyandhardworkmadeheranaturalleaderinherclass.

Oneautumnday,theentireschoolwasexcited.Theannualsciencefairwasapproaching,andthestudents

werebusyperfectingtheirprojects.Posters,models,andexperimentsfilledtheclassroomsaseveryoneworked

diligently.Emmahadspentweeksonherprojectaboutrenewableenergy.Shedevotedherselftovarious

sustainable（可持续的）energysources,conductedexperiments,andcreatedadetaileddisplaytoshowcaseher

findings.Shewasconfidentitwouldimpressthejudges.

Herbestfriend,Max,however,hadstruggledtocomeupwithanidea.Hehadprocrastinated（拖延）,unsure

ofwhattopictochoose,andnowthedeadlinedrewnear.MaxadmiredEmmaandfeltguiltyfornotbeingprepared.

Inamomentofdesperation,Maxdecidedto“borrow“anoldercousin'sprojectandpresentitashisown.Maxwas

surethatnooneatMaplewoodwouldknow.

Thedayofthesciencefairarrived,andthegymwasfilledwithcolorfuldisplays,excitedstudents,and

curiousparents.Theairwasthickwiththesmellofposterpaintandanticipation.Emma'sdisplayattractedalotof

attention.Teachers,students,andevenalocalnewsreporterstoppedbytoaskquestionsaboutherinnovativeideas.

Shefeltasenseofprideandaccomplishment.

Asshemadeherroundstoviewotherprojects,shenoticedMax'sproject.Herheartsankwhensherealized

shehadseenitbeforeatadifferentfairyearsago.

注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；

（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Emmafacedadifficultsituation.

EmmatookadeepbreathandapproachedMax.

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【重庆市南开中学2024-2025学年高三上学期第二次质量检测】Havingrecentlytransferredtothehigh

school,Emilyfeltlikeaghostdriftingthroughthehallways-unseenandunheard.Strugglingtoadapttohernew

environment,shefoundherselfisolated.Agroupo