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第1页/共1页阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。I’mnotgoingtosaystormsaregood,becauseIknowwhatthey’vestolenfrompeople.ButmystoryisofastormthatgavememorethanI’dthoughttoaskfor.Thetornado(龙卷风)blewthroughonaSunday.WewerevisitinggrandparentsinRaleighthenunawarethatseventymilesawaythebigtreeinourfrontyardwastearingthroughourroofanddestroyingthekitchen.Whenwereturned,wesawRosica’sfatherandbrothersinouryard,gatheringdebris(碎片)andusingachainsawtocutthethickestbranchesofthefallentree,thoughwebarelyknewthemthen.Theywerecoveredinsweatanddirt.Mymomdidn’tseemtonoticehowhappytheyweretohelpusbecausethefirstthingshesaidwas“Oh,youdon’tneedtobedoingallthatwork!”Mr.Floreslaughed.“Claro!Ofcourse,wedon’t.Butmoreimportantly,youcannotsleepinthathousetonight.Comeandspeaktomywife.She’llhelpyoufigureoutwhattodo.”Mymomdoesn’tusuallyletpeopletellherwhattodo,butshesighed(叹气)deeplyasshetookinthesightofourhomeinthefailinglight,reachedformyhand,andfollowedourneighbortotheirhouse.TheFloresfamilylivedacrossthestreet.Theirhomewasthesamesizeasoursbuthousedthreegenerations.Rosicawasmyage.Iknewhernameandface,butsinceshewasnewtoourschool,andhadadifferentteacherthanIdid,wehadneverspoken.Itwasshewhoansweredthedoor.“Mamaischangingthesheetsonthebedforyou,andthere’ssomelemoncheesecakeonthetable.”“Pleasedon’ttroubleyourself.IthinkI’dcallahotelandseeaboutaroom,”mymomsaid,moreuneasythanusual.Mrs.Florescamedownthestairsandsmiledatuswarmly,“Yourroomisready.Iknowit’smoreencouragedtogivethanreceive,butallowyourselftoreceiveaplacetostay,andallowusthechancetogiveyousomethingyouneed!”注意:1.续写词数应为150左右:2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Ourtwo-weekstayatFlores’shomestarted.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Followingourstayintheirhome,abeautifultraditionbegan.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意文章讲述了作者一家在外地时,家中遭遇龙卷风袭击,大树砸穿屋顶并毁坏厨房。回家后,虽不太熟悉的邻居弗洛雷斯一家主动帮忙清理废墟,还热情邀请作者一家到他们家居住。作者妈妈起初有些犹豫,但最终还是接受了邻居的好意。弗洛雷斯一家的热情和善良让作者一家在困境中感受到温暖。故事山分析开端:作者一家外出时,家中遭遇龙卷风破坏。发展:回家后看到邻居弗洛雷斯一家帮忙清理,还被邀请到邻居家居住,作者妈妈从犹豫到接受。高潮(可在续写中体现):作者一家在弗洛雷斯家居住期间发生的温暖故事。结局(可在续写中体现):形成新的传统,邻里关系更加亲密。伏笔以及在续写中的回应伏笔:作者与罗西卡虽同校但从未交谈。回应:在居住期间,两人逐渐熟悉,成为朋友,一起玩耍、交流。伏笔:弗洛雷斯一家热情邀请作者一家。回应:续写中,弗洛雷斯一家在生活各方面照顾作者一家,让他们感受到家的温暖。伏笔:作者妈妈的犹豫。回应:在居住过程中,妈妈逐渐放下顾虑,与弗洛雷斯一家相处融洽,对他们的帮助十分感激。伏笔:弗洛雷斯家房子不大却住三代人。回应:体现出他们虽然空间有限,但依然慷慨地接纳作者一家,突出善良品质。伏笔:罗西卡说妈妈在换床单和准备蛋糕。回应:后续可以体现弗洛雷斯一家在生活细节上的照顾,比如准备适合作者口味的饭菜等。续写要点第一段:详细描述在弗洛雷斯家居住的两周里的生活细节,如两家人一起吃饭、聊天,作者和罗西卡增进友谊等。第二段:着重讲述新传统的具体内容,比如定期家庭聚会、互相帮忙等,以及这个传统对邻里关系的积极影响。情感线起初,作者一家因房屋受损而陷入困境,心情低落、焦虑。邻居弗洛雷斯一家的热情帮助,让作者一家感受到温暖,作者妈妈从犹豫到接受,体现出对邻居善意的信任。在居住期间,两家人情感不断升温,作者和罗西卡成为朋友,两家人像亲人一样相处。新传统的形成,更是将这种邻里间的温暖和情谊延续下去,成为彼此生活中重要的情感支撑。故事线作者一家房屋受损,邻居帮忙清理并邀请居住。作者一家在弗洛雷斯家居住,感受温暖照顾。作者与罗西卡从陌生到熟悉,成为好朋友。两家人相处融洽,关系越来越亲密。形成新的传统,邻里间定期互动。邻里关系因这次经历变得更加深厚,温暖延续。主旨升华句Thisexperiencetaughtusthatinthefaceofdifficulties,thekindnessandsupportofneighborscanturnadisasterintoachanceforbuildingdeeperconnections.ThewarmthwereceivedfromtheFloresfamilynotonlyhelpedusthroughatoughtimebutalsobecameapreciousmemorythatwouldalwaysremindusofthepowerofhumankindness.Ourstoryshowsthatasimpleactofgenerositycancreateabeautifulbondbetweenneighborsandmakeourcommunityamoreharmoniousandlovingplace.ThefriendshipandcarethatgrewduringourstayattheFlores'homeprovethateveninthemostunexpectedsituations,truekindnesscanbloomandbringlighttoourlives.ThisencounterwiththeFloresfamilytaughtusthatthevalueofacommunityliesnotinitsmaterialwealthbutintheloveandsupportitsmembersoffertooneanother.写作示范一Paragraph1:Ourtwo-weekstayatFlores’shomestarted.Eachdaywasfilledwithwarmthandcare.Intheevenings,wewouldallgatheraroundthedinnertable.TheFloresfamilysharedtheirstories,makinguslaughwiththeirfunnyanecdotes.RosicaandIspenthourstogether,doinghomeworkandexploringtheneighborhood.Sheintroducedmetoherfavoritespots,andweformedadeepfriendship.Mymom,atfirstreserved,graduallyopenedup.ShehelpedMrs.Floresinthekitchen,andtheychattedlikeoldfriends.Paragraph2:Followingourstayintheirhome,abeautifultraditionbegan.Everymonth,ourtwofamilieswouldhaveapotluckdinner.Wewouldtaketurnshostingateachother'shouses.Thesegatheringswerefilledwithdeliciousfood,laughter,andsharedexperiences.Wewouldtalkaboutourlives,dreams,andchallenges.Thestormthatoncebroughtdestructionhadnowbecomethecatalystforalastingbondbetweenourfamilies,showingusthetruemeaningofcommunityandneighborlylove.写作示范二Paragraph1:Ourtwo-weekstayatFlores’shomestarted.Mrs.Floresmadesurewehadeverythingweneeded.Sheevenadjustedthemenutosuitourtastes.Duringthedays,whilemymomwasbusydealingwithinsurancematters,Iwasneveralone.RosicaandIplayedboardgames,watchedmovies,andsharedsecrets.Hergrandparentswouldtellusstoriesabouttheiryouth,andwelistenedintently,fascinatedbytheirexperiences.Thesmallhousewasfilledwiththesoundofjoyandtogetherness.Paragraph2:Followingourstayintheirhome,abeautifultraditionbegan.Everyholiday,wewoulddecorateourhousestogether.Inspring,weplantedflowersinthefrontyards.DuringChristmas,wewouldputuplightsandexchangehandmadegifts.Theseactivitiesnotonlystrengthenedthebondbetweenourfamiliesbutalsoinspiredotherneighborstobemorefriendly.Thestorm,insteadoftearingusapart,hadbroughtourcommunitycloser,andweallcherishedthenew-foundwarmthandconnection.【答案】Ourtwo-weekstayatFlores’shomestarted.Inthebeginning,mymomwasveryuneasyandthoughtthatlivingherecouldbeatroubleforthefamily.Shewouldhelpthemwiththehouseworkasmuchaspossible.Thefamilywereveryfriendlytous.Theyal
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