2025版高考英语二轮复习专项技能保分练二十三短文改错

PAGE1-专项技能保分练(二十三)短文改错Test1[2024·成都其次次诊断]Lastyear,myfriendandIwenttovisittheYellowMountain.Wecarriedtwobackpacks,thatturnedouttobeprettyheavierforthehike.Iamnotanexperiencinghikerandthoseendlessstepsmakemewanttoreturntothesafeandcomfortableground.Butmyfriendencouragedmegreat.“Look,thetopiscomingcloserandcloser.Wearealmostthere.”Ipulledmetogetherandkeptgoing.Afterthree­hourexhaustinghiketothetop,butwithwonderfulsceneriesontheway,wegottothetopfinally.Forourpleasure,wealsofoundahotelthatlookedverymuchinviting.答案与解析：Lastyear,myfriendandIwenttovisittheYellowMountain.Wecarriedtwobackpacks,eq\o(that,\s\do10(①which))turnedouttobeprettyeq\o(heavier,\s\do10(②heavy))forthehike.Iamnotaneq\o(experiencing,\s\do10(③experienced))hikerandthoseendlessstepseq\o(make,\s\do10(④made))mewanttoreturntothesafeandcomfortableground.Butmyfriendencouragedmeeq\o(great,\s\do10(⑤greatly)).“Look,thetopiscomingcloserandcloser.Wearealmostthere.”Ipulledeq\o(me,\s\do10(⑥myself))togetherandkeptgoing.Aftereq\o(∧,\s\do10(⑦a))three­hourexhaustinghiketothetop,butwithwonderfuleq\o(sceneries,\s\do10(⑧scenery))ontheway,wegottothetopfinally.eq\o(For,\s\do10(⑨To))ourpleasure,wealsofoundahotelthatlookedveryeq\o(,\s\do10(⑩))inviting.①that改为which考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处是一个定语从句，先行词是backpacks，应用which引导该非限制性定语从句，在从句中作主语。②heavier改为heavy考查形容词。分析句子结构可知，此处pretty是副词，相当于very，并没有比较的含义，故用形容词原级即可。故将heavier改为heavy。③experiencing改为experienced考查形容词。依据句意可知，此处表示“我不是一个阅历丰富的远足者”，应用experienced“阅历丰富的，有阅历的”，experiencing没有这个意思。④make改为made考查动词的时态。与上文中的“Lastyear”呼应可知，事情发生在过去，故用一般过去时。⑤great改为greatly考查副词。一般用副词修饰动词，在句子中作状语，故用greatly修饰动词“encouraged”。⑥me改为myself考查反身代词。与句子的主语I呼应可知，此处应用I的反身代词myself作动词pull的宾语，表示“使自己振作起来”。⑦After后加a考查冠词。hike是可数名词，被“three­hourexhausting”修饰，表示“一次三个小时的令人力倦神疲的远足”，且three­hour的发音以辅音音素开头，故用不定冠词a修饰。⑧sceneries改为scenery考查名词。scenery是不行数名词，没有复数形式。⑨For改为To考查固定搭配。表示“令某人欢乐的是”应用toone'spleasure，介词to在此表示“某事发生时某人的反应”。⑩删除much考查副词。very是副词，可修饰形容词，在句子中作状语，而much是副词，一般修饰形容词的比较级，此处修饰形容词inviting应用副词very，故删除much。Test2[2024·河南五校联考]DearDaniel，I'mreallydelightedtolearnthatyouhavewonfirstprizeinyourschool'sChineseTraditionalCultureQuizlastweek.I'mwritingtoofferyourcongratulationstoyoufromthebottomsofmyheart.IknowthatyouhavealwaysbeinginterestedinChinesetraditionalculturesinceyoucamefromChina.LearningChineseisnoteasyforyou,andyoukeeponstudyingithard.Nowyoureffortshavepaidoff.Thereisyourhardworkthatleadsyoutosoagreatsuccess.I'msureyouwillachieveanevengreatsuccessinyourfuturestudies.WishyouhappystayinChina!Yours，LiHua答案与解析：DearDaniel，I'mreallydelightedtolearnthatyoueq\o(,\s\do10(①))wonfirstprizeinyourschool'sChineseTraditionalCultureQuizlastweek.I'mwritingtooffereq\o(your,\s\do10(②my))congratulationstoyoufromtheeq\o(bottoms,\s\do10(③bottom))ofmyheart.Iknowthatyouhavealwayseq\o(being,\s\do10(④been))interestedinChinesetraditionalculturesinceyoucameeq\o(from,\s\do10(⑤to))China.LearningChineseisnoteasyforyou,eq\o(and,\s\do10(⑥but/yet))youkeeponstudyingithard.Nowyoureffortshavepaidoff.eq\o(There,\s\do10(⑦It))isyourhardworkthatleadsyoutoeq\o(so,\s\do10(⑧such))agreatsuccess.I'msureyouwillachieveaneveneq\o(great,\s\do10(⑨greater))successinyourfuturestudies.Wishyoueq\o(∧,\s\do10(⑩a))happystayinChina!Yours，LiHua①删除won前的have考查时态。句中有明确地表示过去时间的状语lastweek，因此不能与现在完成时连用，只能用一般过去时。②your改为my考查代词。依据语境可知，此处表示“我写信向你表示我真心的庆贺”，故congratulations前的物主代词应用my。③bottoms改为bottom考查名词的单复数。fromthebottomofone'sheart“从内心，真心地”，是固定搭配，bottom用单数形式。④being改为been考查时态。依据时间状语从句sinceyou...China可知，此处应用现在完成时，故将being改为been。⑤from改为to考查介词。依据语境可知，Daniel从国外来到中国，故用to。⑥and改为but/yet考查并列连词。句意：学中文对你来说并非易事，但是你坚持努力学习。前后分句之间存在语意上的转折关系，故用but/yet。⑦There改为It考查强调句。依据后面的that和语境“正是你的努力带领你取得如此大的胜利”可知，本句是强调主语部分的强调句结构，故只能用It。⑧so改为such考查限定词。so＋adj.＋a/an＋单数可数名词＝such＋a/an＋adj.＋单数可数名词，表示“如此……的……”，故此处要用such。⑨great改为greater考查形容词的比较级。上文提到Daniel取得了很大的胜利，此处表示“我确信你会在将来的学业上取得更大的胜利”，语意上有递进关系，故用形容词的比较级。⑩happy前加a考查冠词。stay作“停留，逗留，暂住”讲时，为可数名词。Test3[2024·石家庄一模]Theotherday,wemovedtothenewschoolyard,whereliesinthefarnorthofthecity.Wewereallonhighspirits.Itismuchbigthantheoldone.Theclassroomsarebrightandclean.Wehavealotofmodernequipment,makingconvenientforstudentstolearneverysubject.Nowwecanhavealotofafter­schoolactivityonthenewplayground.Ourteachersoftenplaythebasketballandsoccertogetherwithus.Asspringapproached,theflowersnewlyplantingintheyardhavejustcomeout.Withsuchmanygreentreesandfragrantflowersaround,wefeelitlesshardlytostudyandourschoollifemoreenjoyable.答案与解析：Theotherday,wemovedtothenewschoolyard,eq\o(where,\s\do10(①which))liesinthefarnorthofthecity.Wewerealleq\o(on,\s\do10(②in))highspirits.Itismucheq\o(big,\s\do10(③bigger))thantheoldone.Theclassroomsarebrightandclean.Wehavealotofmodernequipment,makingeq\o(∧,\s\do10(④it))convenientforstudentstolearneverysubject.Nowwecanhavealotofafter­schooleq\o(activity,\s\do10(⑤activities))onthenewplayground.Ourteachersoftenplayeq\o(,\s\do10(⑥))basketballandsoccertogetherwithus.Asspringeq\o(approached,\s\do10(⑦approaches)),theflowersnewlyeq\o(planting,\s\do10(⑧planted))intheyardhavejustcomeout.Witheq\o(such,\s\do10(⑨so))manygreentreesandfragrantflowersaround,wefeelitlesseq\o(hardly,\s\do10(⑩hard))tostudyandourschoollifemoreenjoyable.①where改为which考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处引导非限制性定语从句，先行词为thenewschoolyard，在从句中作主语，故应用which引导该定语从句。②on改为in考查介词。句意：我们都兴致勃勃。inhighspirits为固定搭配，意为“心情高”。③big改为bigger考查形容词的比较级。依据该句中的“much”“than”可知，此处应用形容词的比较级。④making后加it考查代词。分析该句结构可知，making后缺形式宾语来指代动词不定式tolearneverysubject。⑤activity改为activities考查名词的单复数。此处activity“活动”为可数名词，依据该句中的“alotof”可知，该处应用复数形式。⑥删除the考查冠词。表示球类、牌、棋等嬉戏名称的名词前用零冠词。⑦approached改为approaches考查动词的时态和主谓一样。依据语境可知，该处描述的是当前的状况，故用一般现在时；主语spring为第三人称单数，故用approaches。⑧planting改为planted考查非谓语动词。动词plant和其逻辑主语theflowers之间为动宾关系，故用过去分词形式作后置定语。⑨such改为so考查副词。依据many可知，该处应用副词so。⑩hardly改为hard考查形容词。句意：有这么多绿色的树和芳香的花在四周，我们觉得学习不那么困难了，我们的学校生活更开心了。依据句意和前面的副词less可知，该处表示“不那么困难”，应用形容词hard。hardly为副词，表示“几乎不”，不符合语境。Test4[2024·太原一模]Myseniorhighschoollifeisalmostover.Althoughlookedforwardtoenteringcollege,Ican'thelpmissingthosegoodolddaysverymuchthatIfeelsad.I'munwillingtosaygoodbyetoeveryoneandeverythingIamfamiliar.However,Icometorealizenatureneverstoodstill.Differentseasonscomeandgo.Plantsandanimalsdieandnewonecometolife.We,likeeverythinginnature,hastoadapttothechanges.Beforeknowingit,Iamakindofcalm.NowI'dliketorecallthemostwonderfulthingswhathavehappened,andaccepthappywhateveristohappen.答案与解析：Myseniorhighschoollifeisalmostover.Althougheq\o(looked,\s\do10(①looking))forwardtoenteringcollege,Ican'thelpmissingthosegoodolddayseq\o(very,\s\do10(②so))muchthatIfeelsad.I'munwillingtosaygoodbyetoeveryoneandeverythingIamfamiliareq\o(∧,\s\do10(③with)).However,Icometorealizenaturenevereq\o(stood,\s\do10(④stands))still.Differentseasonscomeandgo.Plantsandanimalsdieandneweq\o(one,\s\do10(⑤ones))cometolife.We,likeeverythinginnature,eq\o(has,\s\do10(⑥have))toadapttothechanges.eq\o(Before,\s\do10(⑦After))knowingit,Iameq\o(,\