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读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。IworkedatalocalstationoftheBerlinfiredepartment.Wegotanalert(警报)around8:25pmthatFridayandrushedtothefireengine,wheretheprintoutfromthedispatcher(调度员)saidtherewasanine-year-oldboylockedinasafe(保险箱).Iaskedmyself:ifitwereasafe,woulditbeairtight?Iwasawarethatitmightalreadybetoolatebythetimewearrived.Ihadtoplanforabadoutcome.Ontheotherhand,ifwewereintime,howlongwouldittakeustoopenthesafe?Iknewitwouldbeanincrediblydifficulttask.It’swhatsafesaredesignedfor—nottobeopened.Ittooklessthanfiveminutestoreachtheproperty.WhenIsawawomancryingonthestreet,Iknewthesituationwasserious.Shewastheboy’smotherandsheledusintothebasement.Shetoldustheboywasaliveandwestartedtalkingtohim;hewasverycalm.Weaskedhowithadhappened:duringagameofhideandseekwithhisfive-year-oldbrother,hehadthoughtthesafewouldbeagoodplacetohide.Theboy’sparentshadgotthehousefromhismother’sfather.Theunlockedsafehadbeentherewhentheymovedinandwasinanareatheydidn’tusemuch.Theboy’slittlebrotherhadshutthesafe,then,whenhecouldn’topenitagain.Theonlypersonwhoknewthecombinationwastheboy’slategrandfather.Fromtheoutset,thebiggestprioritywasgettingoxygentotheboy.Wegotoxygenfromthehospital.Theboysaidthathecouldfeelathinstreamofair.Iaskedhisparentsifanyonehadopenedthesafebeforeandtheysaidno.Sowehadtoguessasix-digitcode(密码).Westartedtypingthemin—butwehadtowait10minutesbetweeneachattemptbeforewecouldtryagain.Soquicklywetriedthemall.Noluck.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。Wewerefullypreparedatthispointtoopenthesafebyforce,startingwithadrill.Then,justaswestartedtomakethefirstcut,myworkmatetypedinthecorrectcode.解救被困保险箱男孩的故事续写续写要点(两段)第一段:在尝试密码失败后,消防员们决定强行打开保险箱。详细描述他们准备强行开启的过程,如检查并调试钻孔工具,确保工具能正常运作;与男孩再次沟通,安抚他即将听到巨大噪音,让他做好心理准备。同时,描绘周围环境,母亲焦急踱步,双手紧握,眼神中满是担忧;弟弟在一旁自责哭泣,不断喃喃自语。消防员们神情专注而坚定,汗水从额头滑落,但目光始终紧盯着保险箱,为强行打开保险箱做最后准备。第二段:当同事输入正确密码打开保险箱时,着重刻画众人的反应。男孩先是惊讶地瞪大双眼,随后露出惊喜的笑容,如释重负地松了一口气。母亲瞬间冲过去,紧紧抱住男孩,泣不成声,嘴里不停地说着“感谢上帝”。弟弟也跑过来,拉着哥哥的手,满脸愧疚地道歉。消防员们则欣慰地笑了,互相击掌庆祝,之前的紧张与疲惫一扫而空。之后,大家围在男孩身边,关心他的身体状况,男孩虽有些疲惫,但状态良好,对消防员们连连道谢,整个氛围从紧张转为温馨与喜悦。情感线(150字)起初,消防员们得知男孩被困保险箱,内心充满担忧与紧张,深知救援难度极大。尝试密码失败,准备强行开启时,他们的焦虑感达到顶峰,同时又坚定决心一定要救出男孩。而男孩母亲从最初的惊慌失措,到看着消防员行动时的满心期待与忐忑不安。当保险箱被打开,男孩安然无恙,众人的情感瞬间转为喜悦与欣慰。消防员们为救援成功感到自豪,母亲和弟弟的愧疚与担忧化作喜悦和对消防员的感激,情感从压抑紧张逐渐过渡到轻松愉悦,充满温情。故事线(6条)救援准备:消防员到达现场,了解情况后,迅速准备救援,包括获取氧气、尝试密码开启保险箱。尝试密码失败:多次尝试密码均未成功,大家陷入焦急,气氛愈发紧张。决定强行开启:因密码尝试无果,消防员决定采取强行打开保险箱的方案,开始准备钻孔工具。输入正确密码:就在准备钻孔时,同事根据母亲提供的重要日期,尝试输入密码,成功打开保险箱。解救男孩:保险箱打开,男孩被成功救出,母亲和弟弟激动不已,与男孩相拥。后续关怀:众人关心男孩身体状况,男孩对消防员表达诚挚感谢,消防员们带着成就感离开,社区也因这次救援更加团结。主旨升华句Thisrescuenotonlyshowcasestheunwaveringdeterminationofthefirefightersbutalsohighlightsthepowerofhopeandthevalueofeverylifeinthefaceofdanger.(这次救援不仅展现了消防员坚定不移的决心,也凸显了在危险面前希望的力量以及每一个生命的价值。)Intimesofcrisis,thecombinedeffortsofthecommunityandtheselflessdedicationoftherescuerscanovercomeseeminglyinsurmountableobstacles,justlikeinthiscaseofsavingtheboy.(在危机时刻,社区的共同努力和救援人员的无私奉献能够克服看似不可逾越的障碍,就如同这次解救男孩的事件一样。)Thesuccessfulrescueoftheboyfromthesafeservesasareminderthateveninthemostdesperatesituations,aglimmerofhopecanleadtoamiraculousoutcome.(从保险箱中成功解救男孩这件事提醒我们,即使在最绝望的情况下,一丝希望也能带来奇迹般的结果。)Thisincidentdemonstratesthatwheneveryonecomestogether,whetherit'stherescuers'expertiseorthefamily'ssupport,theycanturnapotentiallytragicsituationintoaheartwarmingstoryofsurvivalandgratitude.(这一事件表明,当所有人齐心协力,无论是救援人员的专业技能还是家人的支持,都能将一场潜在的悲剧转化为一个关于生存与感恩的温馨故事。)Therescueoftheboyreflectsthespiritofhumanityandtheimportanceofnevergivingup,asthefirefightersandthefamilypersevereduntiltheboywassafelyfreed.(对男孩的救援体现了人性的光辉以及永不放弃的重要性,因为消防员和男孩的家人坚持不懈,直到男孩被安全救出。)写作示范一Paragraph1Wewerefullypreparedatthispointtoopenthesafebyforce,startingwithadrill.Thechiefcarefullyinspectedthedrill,makingsureitwasinperfectworkingorder.Iwalkedovertothesafe,croucheddown,andgentlytoldtheboy,“Son,we'regoingtouseadrillnow.It'sgoingtobeverynoisy,butwe'llhaveyououtsoon.Coveryourearstight.”Theboy'smotherstoodnearby,herhandswringingnervously.Thelittlebrotherwascryingsoftlyinthecorner,filledwithguilt.Weputonoursafetygogglesandstartedthedrill.Theharshsoundechoedthroughthebasement,makingeveryone'sheartrace.Butweweredetermined,oureyesfixedonthesafe,readytobreakthroughthebarrierthatseparatedtheboyfromsafety.Paragraph2Then,justaswestartedtomakethefirstcut,myworkmatetypedinthecorrectcode.Thesafeletoutaloudclick,andthedoorslowlyswungopen.Theboy,hiseyeswidewithsurprise,emergedfromthesafe.Hismotherrushedforwardandhuggedhimtightly,sobbingwithrelief.“Thankyou,thankyousomuch,”shecried,lookingatuswithgratitude.Thelittlebrotherranover,grabbinghisbrother'shand.Weallsmiled,feelingasenseofaccomplishmentwashoverus.Wecheckedtheboy'scondition,andalthoughhewasabitshaken,hewasfine.Asweleftthehouse,theboyturnedtousandsaid,“You'remyheroes.”Hiswordsmadeourday,andweknewthatalloureffortswerewellworthit.写作示范二Paragraph1Wewerefullypreparedatthispointtoopenthesafebyforce,startingwithadrill.Oneofthefirefighterscarefullyadjustedthedrill'ssettings,whileanotherdouble-checkedtheoxygensupplytoensuretheboyhadenoughair.Ikneltdownnexttothesafeandsaid,“Hey,kiddo.We'regoingtostartthisdrill.It'sgoingtobeabitscary,butwe'rerightherewithyou.”Themotherpacedbackandforth,herfacepalewithworry.Wecouldseethefearinhereyes.Theroomwasfilledwithtensionaswepositionedthedrillagainstthesafe.Thenoiseofthedrillpiercedtheair,anddustfilledthespace.Despitethedifficulty,wewereresoluteinourmissiontosavetheboy.Paragraph2Then,justaswestartedtomakethefirstcut,myworkmatetypedinthecorrectcode.Thesafe'slockdisengagedwithasharpsound.Thedooropened,andtheboysteppedout,blinkinginthebrightlight.Hismotherletoutacryofjoyandrushedtoembracehim.Theyoungerbrother,whohadbeenblaminghimself,joinedthehug,tearsstreamingdownhisface.Weallletoutasighofrelief.Wepattedeachotherontheback,happythatourlong-awaitedrescuehadfinallybeensuccessful.Theboylookedatusandsaid,“Iknewyou'dgetmeout.”Hiswordswarmedourhearts,andweleftthescenewithasenseofpride,knowingthatwehadmadeadifferenceinthisfamily'slife.参考答案Wewerefullypreparedatthispointtoopenthesafebyforce,
startingwithadrill.Theoverwhelmingtensionintheairofthebasementweighedheavilyonourhearts.Additionally,theboy’sweakbreathfromthesafebroughtour
hearts
intoourmouths,whichurgedustoactquickly.“Staybackandyou’llbealright.”
Isoothedthehelplessboyinacalmingvoice.
Sweatsstreamingdownmycheeks,Iexaminedthesafecarefully,pointedthedrilltoitsfrontdoorandturnedonthedrill.Asthedrillwasroaring,
Icouldevensensetheparents’
anxiouseyesfallonthedrill.Iknew,fromthebottomofmyheart,wewereallracingagainsttime.Meanwhile,myworkmate,
focusedanddetermined,wasmakingeveryattemptt
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