读后续写 Sean航海救援 讲义-河南省驻马店大联考2024~2025学年高二上学期12月月考英语试题

读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Preparetocomeabout!”Seanturnedtolookathisfather,whowasstandingconfidentlyatthehelm(船舵)ofhisnewlyboughtsailboat.“Whichwayareweturning?”Hesawhisfatherfrown(皱眉).“Thatmeansweareturningintothewind.”hisfathersaid,pointingtotherightsideoftheboat,hisfrowndeepening.Seanhateditwhenhefelthedisappointedhisfather.Seanhadmixedfeelingsaboutsailingwithhisfather.Helikedspendingtimewithhisfather,butwhentheyweretogether,Seanwasremindedofhowdifferenttheywere.Hisfatherwasconfidentandoutgoing.Seanwasshyandhadfewfriends.Sighing,Seanlookedupatthesky.Justanhourago,ithadbeensunny.Butnowtheskywasgray,cloudsweregathering,andthewindbegantoblowangrily.Heputonhislifejacketandwasonceagainremindedhowdifferenthewasfromhisfatherwhoneverworealifejacket.“Hey,Sean,canyoutakethehelmforaminute?”hisfatherasked.“Uh,yeah,sure,”Seanreplied.Seanheldthehelmtightly.Suddenly,thewindshifteddirection,catchingSeanoffguard.Theboatheeled(倾斜)sosharplyonitssidethatitfeltlikeitmightoverturn.Wherewashisfather?Theboatbegantoheelevenmore.“Dad!”hecalled,butthewindswallowedhisvoice.Hedidn’tseehimanywhere.“Dad!”heshoutedcrazily,buttherewasnosignofhisfather.Seanlookedoutatthehugewavescrashingagainsttheboat.Thenhesawit—justaflashofsomethinginthewater.Itwashisdad!Hemustbehurt,Seanthought,orhe’dbeabletoswimovertotheboat.Seanhadtothinkfast.Howcouldhegethisdadbackintotheboat?Thenhehadanidea.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Hereachedundertheseatfortheropeheknewhisdadkeptthere.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Yousavedmylife,son,”hisdadsaid.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sean航海救援续写续写要点第一段：着重描写Sean救父亲的具体过程。他拿到绳子后，要详细描述他如何克服内心恐惧，在摇晃的船上艰难地将绳子一端系在船上固定处，接着精准地把另一端抛向父亲。描述父亲在水中努力抓取绳子的艰难，以及Sean看到父亲抓到绳子时的激动心情，然后拼尽全力拉绳子，过程中可能会遇到风浪干扰，增加困难程度。第二段：聚焦父子间的情感交流。父亲获救后，对Sean表达真诚的赞美和感激，肯定他的勇敢与智慧。Sean此时回想起之前和父亲相处的种种，感慨自己在关键时刻的成长。父亲可以进一步分享自己以前航海遇到危险时的类似经历，让Sean明白成长往往在困境中发生，最后两人一起总结这次经历对彼此的意义，以及对父子关系的深远影响。情感线起初，Sean在父亲意外落水后，内心充满恐惧与无助，害怕失去父亲。但在救援过程中，他的恐惧逐渐转化为坚定的决心，一心只想救父亲。父亲获救后，Sean先是松了一口气，紧接着因父亲的夸赞而感到自豪，之前觉得自己与父亲不同、常让父亲失望的自卑情绪也随之消散。父亲则从最初对Sean能力的怀疑，转变为满满的骄傲与欣慰，父子间的情感在这场危机中得到前所未有的升华。故事线Sean迅速在船中找到绳子，在风雨中艰难地将绳子一端牢牢系在船的桅杆上。他奋力将绳子另一端抛向水中的父亲，大声呼喊父亲抓住绳子。父亲在波涛汹涌的水中奋力游动，艰难地抓住绳子，Sean开始全力拉绳子，过程中船身摇晃，多次差点被风浪打断。父亲终于被拉回船上，Sean和父亲都疲惫不堪，但Sean心中满是喜悦。父亲对Sean的勇敢和果断进行夸赞，讲述自己过去航海遇险的经历，鼓励Sean。Sean和父亲一起回顾这次冒险，两人关系更加亲密，带着新的感悟准备返航。主旨升华句Inthefaceofdanger,thebondbetweenfatherandsonwasforgedstronger,showingthatloveandcouragecanovercomeanystorm.（在危险面前，父子之间的纽带变得更加牢固，表明爱与勇气能战胜任何风暴。）ThisterrifyingexperiencetaughtSeanthathisinnerstrengthwasfargreaterthanhethought,andthathisfather'slovewasalwaysthere,eveninthemostchallengingtimes.（这次可怕的经历让Sean明白，他内心的力量远比自己想象的强大，而且父亲的爱一直都在，即使在最艰难的时刻。）Theirsharedstruggleatseanotonlysavedalifebutalsotransformedtheirrelationship,provingthatadversitycanbeapowerfulcatalystforgrowthandconnection.（他们在海上共同的挣扎不仅挽救了一条生命，还改变了他们的关系，证明了逆境可以成为成长和情感连接的强大催化剂。）Throughthislife-threateningsituation,Seanlearnedthatdifferencesbetweenhimandhisfatherpaledincomparisontotheloveandmutualsupportthatboundthemtogether.（通过这次危及生命的情况，Sean了解到他和父亲之间的差异，与将他们紧密相连的爱和相互支持相比，显得微不足道。）Thejourneyhomefromthestorm-riddenseawasnotjustaphysicalreturnbutaspiritualone,withanew-foundunderstandingandclosenessbetweenfatherandson.（从暴风雨肆虐的大海返航的旅程，不仅仅是一次身体上的回归，更是一次精神上的回归，父子之间有了全新的理解和亲密感。）写作示范一Hereachedundertheseatfortheropeheknewhisdadkeptthere.Withhandstrembling,Seantriedhisbesttokeephisbalanceontheviolentlyrockingboat.Hetiedoneendoftheropefirmlyaroundthemast,hisfingersfumblingduetonervousness.Then,hetookadeepbreathandthrewtheotherendtowardshisfather,shouting,"Dad,catchit!"Hisfather,lookingexhausted,swamwithallhismighttowardstherope.Thewaveskeptpushinghimback,buthedidn'tgiveup.Sean'sheartwasinhismouthashewatched.Finally,hisfathergrabbedtherope.Seanpulledwithallhisstrength,hismusclesaching.Eachtugwasabattleagainstthepowerfulsea."Yousavedmylife,son,"hisdadsaid.Hisvoicewasweakbutfilledwithpride.Seanhelpedhisfatherclimbbackintotheboat."Iwassoscared,butIknewIhadtosaveyou,"Seanadmitted,hiseyesstillwidewiththememoryofthedanger.HisfatherputahandonSean'sshoulder."Youwereincrediblybrave.Iwaswrongtothinkyouweredifferent.You'rejustascapableasIam,ifnotmoreso."Seansmiled,asenseofprideswellinginhischest.Theytalkedabouthowtheyhadovercometheoddstogether,andSeanrealizedthattheirdifferencesdidn'tmatter.Whattrulycountedwastheirloveandthewaytheycouldrelyoneachotherintimesofneed.Astheysailedbackhome,thesunpeekedthroughtheclouds,symbolizingtheirnew-foundconnection.写作示范二Hereachedundertheseatfortheropeheknewhisdadkeptthere.Sean'smindwasracing,butheforcedhimselftofocus.Thewindhowled,andtherainlashedathisfaceashesecuredtheropetotheboat.Heaimedcarefullyandthrewtherope,hiseyesfixedonhisfatherinthewater."Comeon,Dad!"heyelled.Hisfather,strugglingagainstthewaves,finallycaughttherope.Seanstartedpulling,hisarmsburningwitheffort.Theboatpitchedandrolled,makingitevenharder,butherefusedtostop.Hecouldseehisfathergettingcloser,andhopefilledhisheart."Yousavedmylife,son,"hisdadsaid.Therewasanewrespectinhisvoice.Seanhelpedhisfathersitdown."Iwassoworriedaboutyou,"Seansaid,hisvoicecracking.Hisfatherlookedathimandsaid,"I'vealwaysknownyouwerespecial,buttodayyoushowedmejusthowmuch.Ishouldhavehadmorefaithinyou."Theysharedstoriesofpastadventuresandnear-misses.Seanlearnedthathisfatherhadfacedsimilarfearswhenhewasyoung.Thisexperiencehadnotonlysavedhisfatherbutalsobroughtthemcloser.Astheymadetheirwayback,Seanfeltanewsenseofconfidenceandadeeperconnectionwithhisfather.Thesea,whichhadseemedsoterrifying,nowheldadifferentkindofbeauty,areminderoftheirstrengthandlove.参考范文Hereachedundertheseatfortheropeheknewhisdadkeptthere.Sean’sheartracedashequicklytiedoneendoftheropetotheboatandthrewtheotherendtowardshisfather,whowasstrugglingtokeephisheadabovethewater.“Grab