高考英语复习读后续写练习：新同学的到来：驱散体育课上的自卑阴霾+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习新同学的到来：驱散体育课上的自卑阴霾1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Peoplealwayssaythatwithexercise,puttingonyourshoesisthehardestpart.ButforEmma,thiswasalie.Therealpainalwaysstartedwhenallthestudentsweregatheredonthetrack,readytorun.Itwasn’tthefatiguesheminded,itwasthelooksothersgaveher.Emmawasbiggerthanothersofherage.Backinprimaryschool,sheremembersherclassmatesaskingherwhyherthighs（大腿）weresobigandherchestsowide.Ontheoutside,shelookedbig,butontheinside,shefeltassmallasapea.AndPEclasswaswhenshefeltathersmallest.Notallherclassmatesmadeherfeeluncomfortable,though.Itwasmainlyagroupofgirlsandboys—theloud,outspoken,popularkids.AlthoughtheycouldrunfasterthanEmma,theypreferredtojogabitbehindher,burstingoutinlaughtereverynowandthen,commentingonhowEmmajogged.4续写原文Justonemoreyear,Emmakepttellingherself.OnemoreyearandI’llhavegraduatedandwon’thavetotakethisstupidPEclassanymore.Shejustwantedtosurviveit.ButeverythingchangedwhenanewgirlcalledKitjoinedtheclass.Shehadshort,jet-blackhair,brighteyes,andalongscaracrosstheleftsideofherface.Herentranceintotheclassroomthatdaywasmetbydozensofcuriouseyes.Althoughtheirteacher,MsHardy,didn’taskKitforapersonalintroduction,uponputtingherbagdownonherdesk,Kitrose,saying,“Hi,everyone,nicetomeetyou,I’mKit.Iloveboxing,animationandfashion.Youmightbewonderingaboutmyscar.IgotitwhenIwasyoungwhenIfelloffmybike.Luckily,Ididn’tgethurtmoreseriously.It’snowlikeacooltrademarkofalltheadventuresIhadasakid.”AfterKit’sintroduction,Emmasimplysatthere,herheartpoundingandmouthwideopen.Howcouldsomeonebesoconfident?Eventhepopularkidsweresittingthereinshock.5段首句Paragraph1:Atlunchtime,EmmawassittingatherusualtablewithafewotherclassmateswhenKitwalkedovertothem.Paragraph2:OnFriday,itwastimeforthefearfulPEclass,butthistime,Kitwaswithher.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8艾玛在体育课上总是充满痛苦，不是因为跑步的疲惫，而是受不了同学们异样的目光。她体型比同龄人偏大，小学起就饱受嘲笑，那些受欢迎的同学尤其喜欢在体育课上跟在她身后对她的慢跑姿态指指点点，肆意嘲笑。艾玛满心自卑，只能在心里不断安慰自己，再熬一年毕业就能摆脱这讨厌的体育课。直到新同学基特的到来，一切都发生了改变。基特留着乌黑短发，眼睛明亮，左脸有一道长长的疤痕。她进入教室时，吸引了众多好奇的目光。尽管老师没有要求自我介绍，但基特主动起身，大方地向同学们介绍自己，还坦诚地分享了疤痕的由来，言语间充满自信，这让艾玛大为震惊，就连那些平时爱嘲笑人的受欢迎同学也惊讶不已。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Paragraph1:Atlunchtime,EmmawassittingatherusualtablewithafewotherclassmateswhenKitwalkedovertothem.午餐时间，艾玛像往常一样和几个同学坐在餐桌旁。她低着头，默默地吃着饭，周围同学的欢声笑语似乎与她无关。就在这时，基特端着餐盘朝她们走来。艾玛有些惊讶，她没想到基特会主动过来。基特友好地打了个招呼，然后在艾玛旁边坐下。“嗨，艾玛，介意我坐这儿吗？”基特笑着问道。艾玛连忙摇摇头，小声说：“不介意。”基特一边吃饭，一边和艾玛聊起天来，她分享着自己以前学校的趣事，还说起了自己对新学校的期待。艾玛渐渐被基特的热情所感染，也开始主动说起自己的爱好。基特认真地听着，不时点头表示赞同。不一会儿，两人就像老朋友一样聊得热火朝天。周围的同学看到这一幕，都有些惊讶，他们没想到一向沉默寡言的艾玛能和新同学聊得这么开心。午餐结束后，基特和艾玛一起走出食堂，基特拍了拍艾玛的肩膀说：“以后有什么事都可以找我哦，我们是朋友啦！”艾玛心里暖暖的，脸上露出了久违的笑容。10续写思路分析Paragraph2:OnFriday,itwastimeforthefearfulPEclass,butthistime,Kitwaswithher.周五，令人害怕的体育课又到了。艾玛站在跑道上，心里有些忐忑不安。这时，基特跑了过来，站在艾玛身边。“别怕，有我呢！”基特笑着说。随着老师的一声哨响，同学们开始跑步。那些曾经嘲笑艾玛的同学又跟在她后面，准备像往常一样嘲笑她。但基特没有给他们机会，她大声说：“你们能不能别这么无聊，总是盯着别人的缺点看，有这时间还不如多关注自己的进步。”那些同学被基特的话噎住了，一时不知道该说什么。基特拉着艾玛的手，鼓励她：“艾玛，别管他们，我们按照自己的节奏跑，你一定可以的。”艾玛感受到基特手心的温暖，心中涌起一股勇气。她深吸一口气，和基特一起向前跑去。在跑步的过程中，基特不断地给艾玛加油打气。艾玛越跑越有信心，脚步也越来越轻快。当她们冲过终点线时，艾玛激动地抱住了基特。从那以后，艾玛不再害怕体育课，因为她知道，无论遇到什么困难，都有基特这个好朋友在身边支持她。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Atlunchtime,EmmawassittingatherusualtablewithafewotherclassmateswhenKitwalkedovertothem.Emmawasabitsurprised.Shedidn'texpectKittocomeoveronherowninitiative.KitgreetedthemfriendlyandthensatdownnexttoEmma."Hi,Emma,doyoumindifIsithere?"Kitaskedwithasmile.Emmaquicklyshookherheadandsaidinalowvoice,"Notatall."Whileeating,KitstartedchattingwithEmma.Shesharedsomeinterestingstoriesaboutherpreviousschoolandalsotalkedaboutherexpectationsforthenewschool.EmmawasgraduallyinfectedbyKit'senthusiasmandbegantotalkaboutherownhobbies.Kitlistenedattentivelyandnoddedinagreementfromtimetotime.Beforelong,thetwowerechattinghappilylikeoldfriends.Thesurroundingclassmateswerequitesurprisedwhentheysawthisscene.Theydidn'texpectthatEmma,whowasalwaysquietandreserved,couldchatsohappilywiththenewclassmate.Afterlunch,KitandEmmawalkedoutofthecafeteriatogether.KitpattedEmmaontheshoulderandsaid,"Youcancometomeforanythinginthefuture.We'refriendsnow!"Emmafeltwarminherheartandalong-lostsmileappearedonherface.13范文呈现Afewweekslater,Allyrecoveredcompletely.Shewaslikeacheerfullittlebird,runningaroundinthegardenwithabrightsmileonherface.Oneday,sheandherfatherweresittingonabenchinthegarden,enjoyingthewarmsunshine.Suddenly,Allythoughtofthemiraculousleaf,andthedoubtsinherheartwelledupagain.Sheturnedherheadandlookedatherfatherseriously."Dad,whydidn'tthatleafeverfall?It'sreallyamazing,asifithasalifeofitsown,"sheasked.HerfatherlookedatAllywithasmile,hiseyesfulloflove.HetookAlly'shand,stoodup,andledherbacktotheroom,thenwalkedtothewindow.Pointingattheivyvineoutsidethewindow,herfathersaidtoAlly,"Mychild,actuallythatleafwaspaintedbyme.Thatnight,whenIsawtherewasonlythelastleafleft,andyouweresodesperate,Iwasafraidthatyouwouldreallygiveupyourlifebecauseofthefallingofthisleaf.So,Iclimbeduptheladderinthedarkandinthewindandrain,andpaintedaleafonthewallwithpaint.Ihopedthisleafcouldbringyouhopeandrekindleyourdesireforlife."Afterhearingthis,tearsofgratitudeglistenedinAlly'seyes.Shehuggedherfathertightlyandchokedout,"Dad,thankyou.Yougavemeasecondlife."HerfathergentlystrokedAlly'sheadandsaid,"Sillychild,aslongasyoucangrowuphealthyandhappy,everythingDaddoesisworthit."Fromthenon,Allycherishedlifeevenmoreandlivedhard,becausesheknewthatbehindher,therewasherfather'sdeeplovealwaysprotectingher.14升级版范文呈现Atlunchtime,EmmawassittingatherusualtablewithafewotherclassmateswhenKitwalkedovertothem.Emmawastakenaback;shehadneveranticipatedthatKitwouldapproachhersowillingly.KitgreetedtheminafriendlymannerandthentookaseatrightnexttoEmma."Hi,Emma,wouldyoumindifIjoinedyouhere?"Kitinquiredwithawarmsmile.Emmaquicklyshookherheadandrepliedinasoftvoice,"Notatall."Astheyate,KitengagedEmmainalivelyconversation,sharingfascinatingstoriesaboutherpreviousschoolandexpressingherhighhopesforthenewone.EmmawasgraduallydrawninbyKit'sexuberanceandbegantoopenupaboutherownhobbies.Kitlistenedintently,noddinginapprovalfromtimetotime.Beforelong,thetwowerechattingawaymerrily,justlikeoldfriends.Theotherclassmatesatthetablewerequiteastonishedatthesight;theyhadneverexpectedthattheusuallyreservedEmmacouldconversesofreelywiththenewarrival.Afterlunch,KitandEmmamadetheirwayoutofthecafeteriatogether.KitgentlypattedEmmaontheshoulderandsaid,"Youcanalwayscometomewheneveryouneedanything.We'refriendsnow!"Emmafeltawarmthspreadingthroughherheart,andalong-lostsmilegracedherface.15升级版范文呈现OnFriday,itwastimeforthedreadedPEclass,butthistime,Kitwasrightbyherside.Emmastoodonthetrack,herheartpoundingwithnervousness.Justthen,KitsprintedoverandpositionedherselfnexttoEmma."Don'tbescared.I'mherewithyou!"Kitreassuredherwithabrightsmile.Astheteacherblewthewhistle,thestudentssetoffrunning.TheclassmateswhohadalwaysmockedEmmafellinbehindheronceagain,readytoresumetheirtaunting.However,Kitwashavingnoneofit.Sheraisedhervoiceandexclaimed,"Canyouallstopbeingsopetty?You'realwaysfixat