高考英语复习读后续写练习：粉刺之痛：成长路上的嘲笑与温暖+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习粉刺之痛：成长路上的嘲笑与温暖1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文“No!”screamedAshaasshesawahugepimple（粉刺）onhernose.Shedidn’thavetimetocoverthepimpleasshewasrunninglatetoschool.Sheateherbreakfastfast,grabbedherbagandcaughtherschoolbusjustintime.Assoonasshegotonthebus,kidsstartedlaughing.Nobodywaswillingtolethersitbesidethem.EvenAnita,herbestfriend,actedabitdifferently,whichmadehermoreupset.Ashawaslostinthought.Anewthoughtpoppedinhermindeverysecond.Onceshethought“Great!Ihavetoworryaboutmypimpleasifhomeworkandexamswerenotenough.”Thenextminuteanotherthoughtpoppedinhermind.“Iamtiredofusingthisfacewash.IstillwonderhowIagreedtousethatthing!”Thensuddenly,Mr.Shetty,thebusdriver,said,“Asha,doyouwanttomisstheclass?”Ashawassolostinherthoughtthatshedidnotevennoticethateverybodyhadgotoffthebusexcepther.4续写原文Shedidnotwanttostepintotheschoolcampus.Shethought,“Whatwillmyteachersthink?Whatwillmyfriendsthink?”Aftersometime,shegatheredcourageandenteredherclass;expectingthatshewouldbelaughedat.Whileenteringtheclass,sheheardstudentscommentingonherpimple.Achildlaughed,“Look,someone’scherryisonhernose!Getitforme.”Sheheardsomeboysmurmuring,“Shewoulddefinitelybechosenasthejokerinthedance.”Itwasaveryharddayatschoolforher.Assoonasshegothome,shehuggedhermothertightly,withtearswellingupinhereyes.5段首句Paragraph1Ashatoldhermotherwhatshehadexperiencedintheday._Paragraph2:AshaopenedthedoorandincameherfriendAnitawithabunchofflowers.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8阿莎某天早上惊恐地发现自己鼻子上长了一个大粉刺，由于上学时间紧迫，她来不及处理就匆匆赶去学校。上了校车后，同学们看到她的粉刺纷纷嘲笑，没人愿意和她坐在一起，就连她最好的朋友安妮塔的态度也变得有些异样，这让阿莎十分难过。在校车上，阿莎陷入了深深的自我怀疑和烦恼之中，她觉得除了作业和考试的压力，还要面对这颗粉刺带来的困扰，甚至开始抱怨一直使用的洗面奶毫无效果。她沉浸在自己的思绪里，直到校车司机提醒才发现车上其他人都已下车。到了学校，她鼓起勇气走进教室，不出所料，同学们对她的粉刺议论纷纷，各种嘲笑和讽刺的话语让她倍感煎熬。这一天在学校对阿莎来说格外艰难，放学后一回到家，她就满含泪水，紧紧地抱住了妈妈。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Paragraph1:Ashatoldhermotherwhatshehadexperiencedintheday._阿莎把当天在学校的经历一五一十地告诉了妈妈。妈妈轻轻地抚摸着她的头，温柔地说：“宝贝，长粉刺是成长过程中的正常现象，每个人都会经历。那些嘲笑你的同学只是不懂事，他们的话并不重要。你要相信自己，不要因为别人的看法而难过。你的内在美才是最珍贵的，它不会因为一颗粉刺而消失。”妈妈的话让阿莎心里好受了一些。妈妈接着说：“我有一个小妙招，能让粉刺尽快消失。我们一起用天然的芦荟胶来敷一敷，效果很好的。”于是，妈妈带着阿莎来到厨房，取出新鲜的芦荟，小心翼翼地挤出里面的凝胶，轻轻地涂抹在阿莎的粉刺上。在妈妈的悉心照料下，阿莎的心情逐渐平静下来，她开始反思，自己好像太在意别人的眼光了，其实只要自己不在意，那些嘲笑就伤害不了她。10续写思路分析Paragraph2:AshaopenedthedoorandincameherfriendAnitawithabunchofflowers.阿莎刚敷上芦荟胶没多久，就听到了敲门声。她打开门，看到好朋友安妮塔站在门口，手里拿着一束鲜花。安妮塔的脸上带着愧疚的神情，她把鲜花递给阿莎，说道：“阿莎，对不起，今天在学校我没有站出来帮你，还和其他人一样疏远你，我错了。看到你难过的样子，我心里也不好受。其实你长粉刺的样子一点也不丑，那些嘲笑你的人太过分了。你永远都是我最好的朋友，希望你能原谅我。”阿莎接过鲜花，眼眶湿润了，她没想到安妮塔会来向她道歉。她紧紧地抱住安妮塔，说：“我原谅你了，安妮塔。其实我也太敏感了，不应该因为别人的话而这么难过。”从那以后，阿莎和安妮塔的友谊更加深厚了，阿莎也不再因为粉刺而自卑，她学会了勇敢地面对自己的不完美，用自信和乐观迎接成长的每一个挑战。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Ashatoldhermotherwhatshehadexperiencedintheday.Hermothergentlystrokedherheadandsaidtenderly,"Honey,gettingpimplesisanormalpartofgrowingup.Everyonegoesthroughit.Thoseclassmateswholaughedatyouarejustignorant.Theirwordsdon'tmatter.Youshouldbelieveinyourselfandnotbesadbecauseofwhatothersthink.Yourinnerbeautyisthemostprecious,anditwon'tdisappearbecauseofapimple."Hermother'swordsmadeAshafeelalittlebetter.Thenhermothersaid,"Ihavealittletrickthatcanmakethepimpledisappearquickly.Let'susenaturalaloeverageltoapplyit.Itworkswell."So,hermothertookAshatothekitchen,tookoutfreshaloevera,andcarefullysqueezedoutthegelinside,gentlyapplyingittoAsha'spimple.Underhermother'scarefulcare,Asha'smoodgraduallycalmeddown.Shebegantoreflectthatsheseemedtocaretoomuchaboutotherpeople'sopinions.Infact,aslongasshedidn'tcare,thoselaughscouldn'thurther.13范文呈现ShortlyafterAshaappliedthealoeveragel,sheheardaknockonthedoor.SheopenedthedoorandsawherbestfriendAnitastandingatthedoorwithabunchofflowers.Anitahadalookofguiltonherface.ShehandedtheflowerstoAshaandsaid,"Asha,I'msosorry.Ididn'tstandupforyouatschooltodayanddistancedmyselffromyouliketheothers.Iwaswrong.Seeingyousosad,Ifeltterrible.Infact,youdon'tlookuglyatallwiththepimple.Thosewholaughedatyouweretoomean.Youarealwaysmybestfriend.Ihopeyoucanforgiveme."Ashatooktheflowers,hereyesfilledwithtears.Shedidn'texpectAnitatocomeandapologizetoher.ShehuggedAnitatightlyandsaid,"Iforgiveyou,Anita.Actually,Iwastoosensitiveandshouldn'thavebeensosadbecauseofotherpeople'swords."Fromthenon,AshaandAnita'sfriendshipbecameevendeeper.Ashanolongerfeltinferiorbecauseofthepimple.Shelearnedtobravelyfaceherimperfectionsandwelcomeeverychallengeofgrowthwithconfidenceandoptimism.14升级版范文呈现Ashatoldhermotherwhatshehadexperiencedintheday.Withagentletouch,hermotherstrokedherheadandspoketenderly,"Honey,gettingpimplesisaninevitablepartofthejourneyofgrowingup,somethingthateveryonehastogothrough.Thoseclassmateswholaughedatyouaremerelyignorant,andtheirwordsholdnorealweight.Youmustbelieveinyourselfandnotlettheopinionsofothersbringyoudown.Yourinnerbeauty,whichisfarmorepreciousthananythingelse,willneverfadeawayjustbecauseofatinypimple."Hermother'scomfortingwordsmanagedtosootheAsha'stroubledhearttosomeextent.Subsequently,hermotheradded,"I'vegotalittletrickupmysleevethatcanhelpthepimpledisappearinnotime.Let'smakeuseofsomenaturalaloeveragel;it'sreallyeffective."Then,leadingAshabythehand,hermotherwalkedintothekitchen,tookoutsomefreshaloevera,andwithgreatcare,squeezedoutthegel,gentlyapplyingittoAsha'spimple.Underhermother'smeticulouscare,Asha'smoodgraduallysettleddown.Shebegantoreflectonherownbehavior,realizingthatshehadperhapsbeenoverlyconcernedaboutwhatothersthoughtofher.Infact,aslongassheremainedindifferenttothosemockingvoices,theywouldhavenopowertoharmher.15升级版范文呈现ShortlyafterAshahadappliedthealoeveragel,aknockonthedoorinterruptedthepeacefulatmosphere.Shewalkedoverandopenedthedoor,onlytofindherbestfriendAnitastandingthere,holdingabeautifulbunchofflowers.Anita'sfacewasetchedwithalookofdeepguilt.HandingtheflowerstoAsha,shesaidinaremorsefultone,"Asha,I'mtrulysorry.Ifailedtostandupforyouatschooltodayandevendistancedmyselffromyoualongwiththeothers.Iwascompletelywrong.Seeingyousoheartbrokenmademefeelextremelyterrible.Infact,youlookjustaslovelywiththepimple.Thosewholaughedatyouwerebeingincrediblymean.You'vealways