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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。UndoubtedlyMotherNatureisalwaysattractivetokids.Inourchildhood,howoftendidweturnadeafeartoourparents’advice?Veryoften!Thus,welandedourselvesinasituationwherewegreatlyregrettedouractofnothavinglistenedtotheadviceofthewise.SuchanunforgettableexperienceIhadattheageof7gavemeaninvaluablelesson,afterwhichIdeeplyunderstoodwhymygentlemotherwasrepeatingtheboringsuggestionsandIwouldtrytotakehersuggestionsseriously.Inmychildhood,Iwassocrazyaboutnaturethatevenplayingamongthecolorfulflowersinourgardencouldmakemyday.Ourhousewasnexttothewoodswhichhadalwaysstirredup(激起)greatcuriosityinmeinwantingtofindoutwhatwaswithin.EverytimeIsawfascinatingbutterfliesdancingfromthewoods,mycuriositygrew.Butmymotherdidn’tlikemewanderingoffonmyownandalwaysensuredthatIwaswithinhersight.Evenifsheallowedmetoexplorethesurroundingareaonmyown,itwasonlytobesomewherenearthehouse.Beingascuriousasthecat,Ialwaysdesiredtoexplorethewoods.Itseemedasifmymotherhadunderstoodmydesire,soshehadwarmedmeonlotsofoccasionsnevertoenterthewoodsalone.“Mom,canIgooutandplayinthegarden?”Iasked.“Sure,”shewouldreplyeachtime.“Kate,youcanplayinthegardenbutyoumustpromisemeonething—onlywhenI’mwithyoucanyougointothewoods.Therearenocasesofanimalattacksonhumans,butit’sstilldangerousforalittlekidlikeyou.It’stooeasytogetlostinthewoods.”“Sure,you’vesaidthatmanytimes!”Iansweredwithoutpatienceatherrepeatedreminders.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。However,curiositygotthebetterofmeonemorning.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Kate?”Behindthetreescoveredbytheraysofthesettingsuncamemymother’svoice.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意文章讲述了作者小时候对大自然充满热爱，尤其对家旁边的树林充满好奇。母亲担心孩子安全，多次告诫孩子不能独自进入树林，尽管孩子每次都不耐烦地回应，但母亲仍不断提醒。故事山分析目标：“我”渴望探索树林。阻碍：母亲不允许“我”独自进入树林，多次提醒树林危险。努力：“我”试图说服母亲让“我”进树林，无果后决定独自前往。结果：“我”在树林中迷路，陷入恐慌。意外：母亲及时出现，找到了“我”。转折：“我”从这次经历中认识到母亲的话是正确的，不再对母亲的提醒不耐烦。结局：“我”理解了母亲的苦心，以后会认真听母亲的建议。伏笔以及在续写中的回应伏笔：母亲多次提醒不能独自进入树林，有危险且容易迷路。回应：“我”独自进入树林后迷路，验证了母亲的话。伏笔：“我”对树林充满好奇，每次看到蝴蝶从树林飞出，好奇心就增长。回应：好奇心驱使“我”在一个早晨独自走进树林。伏笔：母亲不喜欢“我”独自乱逛，总是确保“我”在她的视线范围内。回应：母亲发现“我”不在视线范围内，开始寻找“我”，最终在树林里找到。伏笔：“我”对母亲的反复提醒没有耐心。回应：迷路后“我”后悔没有听母亲的话，意识到母亲的提醒是重要的。伏笔：母亲说虽然没有动物攻击人类的案例，但对小孩仍危险。回应：“我”在树林里不仅因迷路感到恐惧，还担心可能遇到危险。续写要点（两段）第一段：着重描写“我”独自进入树林后的情景，如看到的景色、内心的想法和感受，以及发现自己迷路后的惊慌失措。第二段：描写母亲找到“我”时的场景，“我”的反应，以及母亲的安慰和教导，最后表达“我”的感悟和改变。情感线起初，“我”对母亲的提醒不耐烦，充满好奇想要探索树林。进入树林后，“我”兴奋又好奇，随着迷路，恐惧和后悔逐渐占据内心。母亲出现时，“我”感到惊喜和安心，最后对母亲充满感激，理解了母亲的苦心，决定以后认真听母亲的建议。故事线“我”因好奇独自进入树林。“我”在树林里欣赏景色，沉浸在探索的快乐中。“我”发现自己迷路，开始惊慌失措。母亲在树林中寻找“我”。母亲找到“我”，对“我”进行安慰和教导。“我”理解了母亲的苦心，有了深刻的感悟。主旨升华句Fromthisexperience,Itrulyrealizedthatparents'adviceisalwaysfullofloveandcare,andweshouldcherishandfollowit.Thisunforgettableincidenttaughtmethatbehindparents'repeatedremindersliestheirdeep-seatedconcernforourwell-being.Icametounderstandthattheseeminglyboringwordsfromourparentsareactuallyprecioustreasuresthatguideusawayfrompotentialdangers.Throughthisadventure,Ilearnedthatlisteningtoourparentsisnotonlyasignofrespectbutalsoawaytoprotectourselves.Thiseventmademeawarethatparents'wisdomislikealighthouseinthedark,leadingustotherightpathoflife.写作示范一However,curiositygotthebetterofmeonemorning.Whenmymotherwasbusywithhousework,Iquietlyslippedoutofthehouseandmademywaytowardsthewoods.AsIsteppedintothewoods,Iwasimmediatelyattractedbythebeautifulscenery.Thetalltrees,thecolorfulwildflowers,andthesingingbirdsmademefeellikeIhadenteredafairy-taleworld.Iwalkeddeeperanddeeper,forgettingallaboutmymother'swarnings.Butsoon,IrealizedwithhorrorthatIcouldn'tfindthewayback.PanicseizedmeasIranaround,tryingtofindafamiliarpath,butallinvain.“Kate?”Behindthetreescoveredbytheraysofthesettingsuncamemymother’svoice.Iburstintotearsandrushedtowardsher.“Mom,I'msosorry.Ishouldhavelistenedtoyou.”Mymotherhuggedmetightlyandsaidsoftly,“It'sokay,honey.I'mjustgladIfoundyou.Remember,Ialwayswanttokeepyousafe.”Inodded,promisingmyselfthatIwouldneverignoreheradviceagain.Fromthatdayon,Itrulyunderstoodtheloveandcarehiddeninmymother'swords.写作示范二However,curiositygotthebetterofmeonemorning.Takingadvantageofthemomentwhenmymotherwasoccupied,Isneakedintothewoods.Thefreshairandthemysteriousatmospheremademeextremelyexcited.Ichasedthebutterflies,pickedupthefallenleaves,andenjoyedmyselftothefullest.Butastimepassed,Ifoundmyselfsurroundedbystrangetreesandcouldn'tfigureoutthedirection.FearcreptintomyheartasIrealizedIwaslost.Ishoutedforhelp,butonlytheechoofmyownvoicereplied.“Kate?”Behindthetreescoveredbytheraysofthesettingsuncamemymother’svoice.IwasoverjoyedandrantowardsherasfastasIcould.“Mom,I'msoscared.Iwon'tdothisagain.”Mymotherstrokedmyhairgentlyandsaid,“Dear,Iwassoworriedaboutyou.Yousee,it'sreallydangeroustobeherealone.”Ilookedatmymotherwithtearsinmyeyes,knowingthatherwarningswereformyowngood.Sincethen,Ihavealwayslistenedattentivelytomymother'swords,understandingthattheyarefilledwithherdeeplove.参考范文However,curiositygotthebetterofmeonemorning.Isummonedupmycourageanddecidedtotakeachance.HardlyhadIenteredthewoodswhenIwastotallyattractedbythesight.Thewanderingclouds,thebloomingflowersandthevigoroustreesallkeptmespellbound.Atthesightofabeautifulbutterfly,Itiptoedalongthepath,bentover,cuppedmyhandsgentlyanddancedwithitdownthetrack.Timeflewan