高考英语复习读后续写练习+小熊代女孩踏上五十州之旅+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习小熊代女孩踏上五十州之旅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Afterseeingaprogramontelevisionaboutareporterwhohadhitchhiked(搭顺风车)acrossAmerica,myten-year-olddaughter,Ashleysaid,“IwishIcoulddothat!”Ashleywasdiagnosedwithcancerthreeyearsearlier.Althoughsheiscancer-freenowafterasurgery,numeroustestsandthescaryprocedureoftreatmentshadmadeherunwillingtoriskoutsideherknownworld.SoIwantedtoencouragethatspiritofadventureinher.Ibegantryingtothinkofawayforherto“hitchhike”acrossthecountrywithoutleavinghome.That’showCarmenwasborn.CarmenisateddybearAshleyhadreceivedwhileshewasinthehospital.WedecidedtosendCarmeninAshley’splace.SowepurchasedanotebookasatraveljournalandabagforCarmentotravelin,togetherwithaletterwrittenbyAshley:4续写原文MynameisAshleyandIamtenyearsold.Thisismybear,Carmen.IgotherwhenIwasinthehospital.ShewantstogotoallfiftystatesjustlikethereporterguyonTVwhohitchhikedacrossAmerica.Butshecan’twalk,sowillyoupleasehelpher?Couldyouletherridewithyouandkeephersafe,aswellastellheraboutyourselfsoshewon’tbelonely?Pleasewritealittleaboutyourselfinthejournalandthenintroducehertosomeonenew.Shewantstomeetasmanynewpeopleasshecan.IthinkbyaboutSeptembershewillbereadytocomehome.Inhercoinpurseis$5.00.PleaseputherinaboxwithherjournalandsendhertoSacCityStateBank.Attention:CaretakerofCarmenBear.IfyouwouldliketohearfromCarmenaftershegetshome,pleaseleaveyouraddressinhernotebookandwewillsendyouanoteandletyouknowwhenshegetshomesafely.5续写原文ThankyoufortakingcareofCarmen,andthankyoufortakingthetimetowriteinhernotebook.Yournewfriends,CarmenandAshley6段首句Paragraph1：WethentookCarmentoourfamilyfriendPhil,ahighwaypatrolofficer(巡警).Paragraph2：ThenonedayinSeptemberthelong-expectedpackagewithCarmeninsidefinallyarrived.____________________________________________________________________7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了十岁的Ashley三年前被诊断出癌症，尽管术后已无癌症，但此前的治疗让她不敢冒险走出熟悉的世界。在看到记者搭顺风车横穿美国的节目后，她表示希望自己也能如此。为鼓励她的冒险精神，妈妈决定让Ashley的小熊Carmen代替她踏上旅程。她们为Carmen准备了旅行日记和背包，并附上Ashley的信，请求陌生人帮助Carmen前往美国的五十个州。信中详细说明了帮助方式和后续联系方法。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：WethentookCarmentoourfamilyfriendPhil,ahighwaypatrolofficer(巡警).随后，我们把Carmen交给了我们的家庭朋友菲尔，他是一名公路巡警。菲尔非常乐意帮忙，他小心翼翼地将Carmen安置在巡逻车的副驾驶座上，还特意给她系上了安全带，仿佛Carmen是一位真正的乘客。一路上，菲尔带着Carmen见识了各种各样的风景，从繁华的城市街道到宁静的乡村小路。每到一处，菲尔都会热情地向同事和遇到的路人介绍Carmen。在日记里，菲尔详细记录下他们的行程，分享有趣的巡逻故事，还有那些与Carmen相遇的人们的善良和热情。有一次，他们遇到一群可爱的孩子，孩子们好奇地围过来，轻轻地抚摸着Carmen，还在日记里画了可爱的图案，为Carmen的旅程增添了许多欢乐。11续写思路分析Para2：ThenonedayinSeptemberthelong-expectedpackagewithCarmeninsidefinallyarrived.然后，在九月的一天，期待已久的装有Carmen的包裹终于到了。阿什利一听到门铃声，就像离弦的箭一样冲过去开门。她颤抖着双手接过包裹，眼中闪烁着兴奋的光芒。回到房间后，她迫不及待地打开包裹，看到Carmen安然无恙，激动得差点落泪。她轻轻拿起旅行日记，一页一页地仔细阅读，仿佛跟着Carmen一起经历了那些奇妙的旅程。看到陌生人在日记里写下的温暖话语和有趣经历，阿什利被深深打动。这次经历让她感受到了世界的广阔和人们的善意，也让她原本有些怯懦的心变得更加勇敢，她开始期待未来自己也能去探索更多未知的地方。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现WethentookCarmentoourfamilyfriendPhil,ahighwaypatrolofficer.Philwasmorethanhappytotakeonthisspecialmission.HegentlyplacedCarmeninthepassengerseatofhispatrolcarandcarefullybuckledherup,treatingherjustlikearealpassenger.Duringthejourney,PhilshowedCarmenvarioussceneries,fromthebustlingcitystreetstothepeacefulcountrylanes.Wherevertheywent,PhilwouldenthusiasticallyintroduceCarmentohiscolleaguesandthepassers-bytheymet.Inthejournal,Philmeticulouslyrecordedtheirtrips,sharinginterestingpatrolstoriesandthekindnessandenthusiasmofthepeoplewhoencounteredCarmen.Once,theymetagroupoflovelychildren.Thechildrencuriouslygatheredaround,gentlystrokingCarmenanddrawingcutepatternsinthejournal,addingalotofjoytoCarmen'sjourney.14范文呈现ThenonedayinSeptemberthelong-expectedpackagewithCarmeninsidefinallyarrived.AssoonasAshleyheardthedoorbellring,sherushedtothedoorlikeaboltoflightning.Herhandsweretremblingwithexcitementasshetookthepackage.Backinherroom,shecouldn'twaittoopenit.SeeingCarmensafeandsound,shewassoexcitedthattearswelledupinhereyes.Shegentlypickedupthetraveljournalandreaditcarefullypagebypage,asifshehadexperiencedthosewonderfultripswithCarmen.Beingdeeplytouchedbythewarmwordsandinterestingexperienceswrittenbystrangersinthejournal,Ashleyrealizedthevastnessoftheworldandthekindnessofpeople.Thisexperiencemadeheroriginallytimidheartbecomebraver,andshebegantolookforwardtoexploringmoreunknownplacesinthefuture.15升级版范文呈现WethentookCarmentoourfamilyfriendPhil,ahighwaypatrolofficer.Phil,elatedtobepartofthisheart-warmingadventure,tenderlyinstalledCarmeninthepassengerseatofhispatrolcar,fasteningherseatbeltwithutmostcare,asifshewereapreciouscargo.Throughouttheirexpedition,PhilexposedCarmentoakaleidoscopeoflandscapes,fromthevibrantcitythoroughfarespulsatingwithlifetotheidyllicruralbywayssteepedintranquility.Ateverystop,Phil,withunbridledenthusiasm,introducedCarmentohisfellowofficersandthechancepassers-by.Inthejournal,Philchronicledtheirodysseyinminutedetail,regalingitwithengagingpatrolanecdotesandthetalesofthekindsoulswhocrossedpathswithCarmen.Ononeoccasion,agroupofadorablechildrenflockedaround,theireyeswidewithcuriosity,gentlycaressingCarmenandadorningthejournalwithcharmingdoodles,infusingCarmen'sjourneywithacascadeofjoy.16升级版范文呈现ThenonedayinSeptemberthelong-awaitedpackagehousingCarmenfinallyarrived.Theinstantthedoorbellchimed,Ashleycatapultedtowardsthedoor,herheartpoundingwithanticipation.Withtremblinghands,shereceivedthepackage,anduponreturningtohersanctum,shetoreitopenwithbarelycontainedexcitement.ThesightofCar