高三英语一轮复习读后续写练习：三轮车刮豪车老人与陌生人的故事

高考英语读后续写语篇练习三轮车刮豪车，老人与陌生人的故事1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Inabusycity,anoldmanrodehistricycle（三轮脚踏车）alongthestreet.Hisfacewasfullofthelinesoftime.Hishandsheldthehandlebarswithcare.Hewasreturninghomefromthemarket,andhistricyclewasfilledwithfreshproduce.Whenhewaswonderinghowmuchhecouldselltheproducefor,hegotdistracted（思想不集中的）andthetricyclehitacarwhichwasparkedbytheroadside.Theoldman'sheartsankashesurveyedthelongscratch（划痕）damagingthenewpaintworkoftheexpensivecar.Hestoodtherewithworryandregretonhisface.Heknewthevalueofsuchacarandthepotentialcostofthedamage."Ican'taffordthis,"hewhisperedtohimselfsadly.Justthen,astrangerapproachedtheoldman.Thestranger,dressedinasharpsuit,lookedatthesceneandimmediatelyrealizedthesituation."Thepaintworkisdamaged.Canyouaffordtopayforthedamage?"heaskedgently.Theoldmanshookhisheadandlookeddown."No,Ican't,"hereplied.4续写原文Thestrangerlookedaroundandspokeinalowtone."Ifyoucan'taffordit,whydon'tyouleave?Doyouwaitfortheownertocome?"Itwasmoreofasuggestionthanaquestion.Asmallsmileappearedonthestranger'smouth.Theoldmanhesitated,tornbetweenhissenseofresponsibilityandthepracticalityofthestranger'sadvice.Afteramomentofinternalstruggle,hemadehisdecision.Hepulledanoldplasticbagoutofhispocket.Heputallthemoneyinside,whichwaslessthantwentydollars,underthewiper（雨刷）ofthecar.Then,hefeltthescratchonthecarwithhishands.Withonelastlookatthedamagedcar,hebegantopushhistricycleaway,glancingbackeveryfewsteps.5段首句Paragraph1：Aftertheoldmanwentaway,thestrangertookoutacarkey.Paragraph2：Thestrangerpulledoverandgotoutofthecar.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8在繁华都市，一位老人骑三轮车从市场满载而归，途中不慎刮到路边一辆昂贵的汽车。老人看着车上的划痕，深知赔不起，满心忧虑。这时，一位身着西装的陌生人出现，暗示老人离开。老人内心挣扎后，选择留下仅有的不到二十美元在雨刷下，然后推车离开。之后，陌生人掏出车钥匙，原来他就是车主，他开车跟上老人，最终归还老人的钱，称赞老人的诚实，认为其诚信比修车费用更珍贵。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Aftertheoldmanwentaway,thestrangertookoutacarkey.老人离开后，陌生人掏出车钥匙，原来他竟是车主。他发动车子，缓缓跟上老人。一路上，他看着老人费力地推着三轮车，背影满是沧桑与无奈。陌生人心中思绪万千，他在想老人以卖农产品为生，这点钱对自己修车来说微不足道，可对老人或许是几天的生活费。他决定追上老人，给老人一个交代。10续写思路分析Para2：Thestrangerpulledoverandgotoutofthecar.陌生人追上老人后，将车停在路边，快步走到老人身边。老人转身，看到是刚刚的陌生人，眼中满是疑惑与不安。陌生人微笑着，把装钱的塑料袋递给老人，说道：“老人家，我刚刚只是想看看你的为人，你的诚实让我很感动，这钱你拿回去，车的事就别放在心上了。”老人愣住，片刻后，泪水夺眶而出，紧紧握住陌生人的手，不停地说着感谢的话。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Aftertheoldmanwentaway,thestrangertookoutacarkey.Itsuddenlydawnedonthereaderthathewasactuallytheownerofthecar.Hestartedthecaranddroveslowly,followingtheoldman.Ashewatchedtheoldmanpushingthetricyclewithgreatdifficulty,asenseofpitywelledupinhisheart.Hethoughtabouttheoldman'shard-workinglife,makingalivingbysellingfreshproduce.Themoneytheoldmanleftwasfarfromenoughtocoverthecostofrepairingthecar,butitmightmeanalottotheoldman.Hedecidedthathecouldn'tjustlettheoldmangolikethisandneededtocatchupwithhim.13范文呈现Thestrangerpulledoverandgotoutofthecar.Hequicklywalkedtowardstheoldman.Whentheoldmanturnedaroundandsawthestranger,therewasalookofsurpriseanduneaseinhiseyes.Thestrangersmiledgentlyandhandedtheplasticbagwiththemoneybacktotheoldman."Oldman,"hesaid,"Ijustwantedtotestyourhonesty.Yourintegrityisreallyprecious.Idon'tcareaboutthescratchonthecar.Youcankeepyourmoney."Theoldmanwasstunned.Afterawhile,tearswelledupinhiseyes.Heheldthestranger'shandstightly,expressinghisgratituderepeatedly.14升级版范文呈现Aftertheoldmanwentaway,thestrangertookoutacarkey,whichrevealedthathewastheownerofthecar.Startingthecar,hedroveslowly,followingtheoldman,whosebackwasbentundertheweightofthetricycle.Watchingtheoldmanstrugglingtopushthevehicle,afeelingofpitywelledupinthestranger'sheart.Consideringtheoldman'shard-earnedmoneyfromsellingfreshproduce,herealizedthatthemoneyleftwasfarfromenoughforthecarrepairbutmightbeagreatdealtotheoldman.Thus,hemadeuphismindtocatchupwiththeoldman.15升级版范文呈现Thestrangerpulledoverandgotoutofthecar.Walkingquicklytowardstheoldman,hesawsurpriseanduneaseintheoldman'seyesasheturnedaround.Withagentlesmile,thestrangerhandedtheplasticbagwiththemoneybacktotheoldman,saying,"Oldman,whatIcaredaboutwasyourhonesty.Itisyourintegritythatisreallyprecious,notthescratchonthecar.Keepyou