读后续写练习+为冰淇淋小吉米踏上+“征途”高三上学期英语一轮复习专项

高考英语读后续写语篇练习为冰淇淋，小吉米踏上“征途”1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Jimmylovedicecream.Itwashisfavoritedessert.Hewantedtoeaticecreamallthetime.Hisparentslethimhaveasmalldisheachnightafterdinner,ifheateallofhisvegetables.Athome,Jimmyusuallyhadchocolate.Hismotherspooneditoutofthecarton(硬纸盒)andintohisbowl.Jimmylikedeatingicecreamathome,buthereallylovedgoingtotheicecreamstandtogetanicecreamcone.Thereweresomanydifferentflavorstotry.Jimmyalwaysdidhisbesttotryanewkindoficecreameachtime.4续写原文WhenJimmyturnedeight,hehadacheckupatthedoctor’soffice.DrKatzsaidthaticecreamwasn’taveryhealthysnack.“It’sfinetohavealittleicecreamonceinawhile,butnoteverynight,”shesaid.Afterthedoctor’svisit,Jimmyandhismomdrovehome.“CanIstillhaveicecreamfordesserttonight?”Jimmyasked.“Idon’tthinkso,honey,”Momsaid.“Weshouldalltrytobehealthier.”5续写原文Thatnightatsupper,Jimmyateallhisvegetables.Buttherewasnoicecreamfordessert.Instead,Momcameupwithanewrule.“Ifwewanttoeaticecream,we’llhavetoearnitbywalkingtotheicecreamstand,”shesaid.Jimmywaswillingtogiveitatry,sotheydecidedtotaketheirwalkonSaturdayafternoon.Accordingtothemap,theicecreamstandwasamileaway.Saturdaywasahotandsunnyday.Jimmybegantofeelsweaty.Thesunwassobrightthathehadtosquint(眯着眼).Hekepthiseyelids(眼皮)almostallthewayclosed,withjustasmallcracktostretchoutof.“I’mhot,”saidJimmy.“Howmuchfartherisit?”6段首句Paragraph1：Momcheckedthemaponherphone.Paragraph2：WhenJimmytoldMomtoreadytoturnaround,hesawthepurpleflagatthetopoftheicecreamstand.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9小吉米对冰淇淋情有独钟，每晚饭后都能享用一份。然而，八岁时的一次体检，医生告知冰淇淋并非健康零食，不宜每晚食用。此后，妈妈制定新规，若想吃冰淇淋，需步行至一英里外的摊位。周六，酷热难耐，吉米在前往摊位的路上大汗淋漓、疲惫不堪，不断询问还有多远，但他始终没有放弃，一心想着美味的冰淇淋。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1:

Momcheckedthemaponherphone.妈妈查看手机上的地图后，温柔地告诉吉米，距离冰淇淋摊已经很近了，只要再坚持一下就能品尝到美味的冰淇淋。尽管烈日炎炎，汗水湿透了吉米的衣衫，每一步都显得沉重无比，但一想到香甜的冰淇淋，他便咬咬牙，继续向前走去。妈妈为了缓解吉米的疲惫，一路上和他分享着有趣的小故事，还不时指着路边的小花小草，让吉米感受大自然的美好。吉米努力地听着，试图分散自己对炎热和疲惫的注意力。11续写思路分析Para2：WhenJimmytoldMomtoreadytoturnaround,hesawthepurpleflagatthetopoftheicecreamstand.当吉米实在走不动，跟妈妈说想要放弃转身回家时，不经意间，他瞥见了冰淇淋摊顶上那醒目的紫色旗帜。一瞬间，疲惫感消失得无影无踪，兴奋与喜悦涌上心头。他兴奋地大喊：“妈妈，我们到啦！”随后，像一只欢快的小鹿般飞奔到冰淇淋摊前。他迫不及待地浏览着琳琅满目的口味，经过一番纠结，终于挑选出心仪的冰淇淋。拿到冰淇淋的那一刻，他迫不及待地舔了一口，香甜的味道在口中散开，所有的付出都在这一刻得到了回报，他的脸上绽放出满足的笑容。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Momcheckedthemaponherphone."Jimmy,we'rereallyclosenow.Justashortdistanceleft,"shesaid,hervoicefullofencouragement.Thesunwasblazinghot,andJimmywassweatingprofusely.Hisstepsbecameheavierwitheachpassingmoment.However,thethoughtofthedeliciousicecreamwaitingforhimatthestandgavehimthestrengthtokeepgoing.Alongtheway,Momsharedinterestingstoriestodistracthimfromthediscomfort.Shealsopointedoutthebeautifulflowersanduniqueplantsbytheroadside,tryingtomakethejourneymoreenjoyable.Jimmylistenedattentively,doinghisbesttofocusonhismom'swordsratherthantheheat.14范文呈现WhenJimmytoldMomhewasreadytoturnaround,hecaughtsightofthepurpleflagatthetopoftheicecreamstand.Instantly,hiswearinessvanished,replacedbyexcitement."Mom,we'vemadeit!"heshoutedjoyfully.Runningtowardsthestand,hecouldn'twaittoseealltheflavors.Standinginfrontofthestand,hescannedthelistcarefully,hiseyessparklingwithanticipation.Aftermakingatoughdecision,hefinallygothisicecreamcone.Takingabiglick,hesavoredthesweetandcoldtaste.Alltheeffortshehadputintothewalkwerewellworthit,andabigsmilespreadacrosshisface.15升级版范文呈现Momcheckedthemaponherphone."Jimmy,we'retantalizinglyclosenow;justastone'sthrowaway,"sheexclaimed,hervoicelacedwithencouragement.Thesun,asearingballoffire,beatdownrelentlessly,causingJimmytosweatbuckets.Hislegs,heavyaslead,seemedtoprotestwitheverystep.Nevertheless,theallureofthecreamy,coldicecreamwaitingatthestandpropelledhimforward.Astheytrudgedalong,Mom,inanattempttolightenthemood,regaledJimmywithfascinatingtales.Shealsogesturedtowardsthevibrantflowersandcuriousplantsliningthepath,hopingtodiverthisattentionfromtheswelteringheat.Jimmy,doinghisutmosttostaypositive,listenedintently,hismindmomentarilydistractedfromthediscomfort.16升级版范文呈现WhenJimmy,onthevergeofgivingup,toldMomhewasreadytoturnaround,hiseyeschancedupontheflutteringpurpleflagatoptheicecreamstand.Inaninstant,hisfatigueevaporatedlikemorningdew,replacedbyanoverwhelmingsurgeofexcitement."Mom,we'vefinallyarrived!"heshriekedindelight.Dartingtowardsthestandwiththespeedofasprinter,hewasgreetedbyamouth-wateringarrayofflavors.Standingthere,eyeswidewithanticipation,heperusedthelistwithmeticulouscare.Aftermuchdeliberation,hefinallyselectedhislong-awaitedtreat.Takingavoluptuousl