高考英语复习读后续写练习+奇迹重逢：14+年后的团圆

高考英语读后续写语篇练习奇迹重逢：14年后的团圆1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文At76yearsold,Melaniefelttiredallthetime.Ithadnothingtodowithherage,though.14yearsago,herson,Anthony,diedinaplanecrash.Afteralong-timesearch,therescuerssaidtherewerenosurvivorsandnohopeforthevictims’families.Luckily,MelaniehadAnthony’sson,Mark,andhiswife,Kayla,togetherby.Butitwasn’tthesame.ShemissedAnthonyandoftenfelthopelessaboutlife.Hersondiedatayoungage.Heleftababy,andKaylahadnotrecoveredfromhisdeatheither.4续写原文Onedayathome,whenwatchingthenewsonTV,MelanieandKaylaweresuddenlysurprisedbywhattheywereseeing.AnewsreporterwastalkingbesideamanwholookedlikeAnthony.Heseemedolderthanhehadeverbeen.Thenewscausedgreatexcitement.“Itmustbehim!”MelanieandKaylabothsaidhappily.“Ifyourecognizethisman,pleasecallthenumberonthescreen.Recently,avague(模糊的)memoryofhavingaplanecrashhitthisman’smind.Buthestilldoesn’trememberanythingbeforethecrash14yearsagoneartheCanaryIslands.Authoritiesnowhavereasontobelievethattherewasamistakeinthepreviousreportthatthecrashleftnosurvivors…”5续写原文Whenthenewsended,Kaylacalledthenumberimmediately.ShetoldtheattendantthatshebelievedthemanwasherhusbandAnthonyandprovideddetails.Kaylaalsoaskedformoreinformationaboutwhathadhappenedoverthepast14yearssincetheaccident.Theattendantsaid,“14yearsago,somelocalfishermenfoundhimwholosthismemory.Theyofferedhimajob,andhehasworkedandlivedwithoneofthemsincethen.”ThisattendantthentoldAnthonythathisfamilywerewaitingforhimtogohome.Weekslater,AnthonywenttothecitywhereMelanieandKaylalived.Allthefamilymemberswerewaitingattheairport.Finally,thegatesopened,andpeoplewerecomingout.6段首句Paragraph1：Suddenly,Kaylanoticedafamiliarfaceinthecrowd.Paragraph2：Backhome,MelanieandKaylatriedtorestoreAnthony’smemory.

7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了76岁的梅兰妮因14年前儿子安东尼在飞机失事中被宣告死亡，一直陷入悲伤。幸运的是，她有孙子马克和儿媳凯拉陪伴。一天，梅兰妮和凯拉在电视新闻中看到疑似安东尼的人，报道称他失忆且可能是飞机失事的幸存者。凯拉立即联系相关人员，数周后，安东尼前往她们所在的城市，一家人在机场等待。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Suddenly,Kaylanoticedafamiliarfaceinthecrowd.突然，凯拉在人群中注意到一张熟悉的面孔。尽管岁月在那张脸上留下了痕迹，可她还是一眼就认出了那是安东尼。“安东尼！”凯拉激动地大喊，声音因兴奋而颤抖。她不顾一切地朝着那个方向冲了过去，梅兰妮和马克也紧紧跟在后面。安东尼听到呼喊，停下脚步，眼中满是疑惑。当凯拉跑到他面前，一把抱住他时，他的眼神中闪过一丝熟悉的感觉。梅兰妮赶到后，看着眼前失而复得的儿子，泪水夺眶而出，她颤抖着伸出手，轻轻抚摸着安东尼的脸，仿佛在确认这不是一场梦。11续写思路分析Para2：Backhome,MelanieandKaylatriedtorestoreAnthony’smemory.回到家后，梅兰妮和凯拉努力帮助安东尼恢复记忆。她们拿出安东尼过去的照片，一张一张地给他看，讲述着照片背后的故事。梅兰妮指着一张安东尼小时候的照片，声音温柔地说：“这是你五岁生日时拍的，你当时特别开心。”凯拉也在一旁补充着他们婚后的点点滴滴。慢慢地，安东尼的脑海中开始浮现出一些模糊的画面，那些曾经被遗忘的记忆逐渐苏醒。虽然恢复记忆的过程很缓慢，但一家人都充满希望，他们知道，只要在一起，就没有什么困难能够阻挡他们。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Suddenly,Kaylanoticedafamiliarfaceinthecrowd.Despitethepassageofyearshavingleftitsmarksonthatface,sherecognizeditasAnthony'satfirstsight."Anthony!"Kaylashoutedexcitedly,hervoicequiveringwithelation.Sherushedtowardshimwithouthesitation,andMelanieandMarkfollowedcloselybehind.Anthonyheardtheshoutandstopped,hiseyesfilledwithconfusion.WhenKaylareachedhimandhuggedhimtightly,aglimmeroffamiliarityflashedinhiseyes.Melanie,uponarriving,lookedatherlong-lostson,andtearswelledupinhereyes.ShereachedouthertremblinghandandgentlystrokedAnthony'sface,asiftryingtoconfirmthatthiswasnotadream.14范文呈现Backhome,MelanieandKaylatriedtorestoreAnthony'smemory.TheytookoutAnthony'soldphotosandshowedthemtohimonebyone,tellingthestoriesbehindeachphoto.MelaniepointedtoaphotoofAnthonywhenhewasachildandsaidsoftly,"Thiswastakenonyourfifthbirthday.Youweresohappythen."Kaylaalsoaddeddetailsabouttheirmarriedlife.Gradually,somevagueimagesbegantoemergeinAnthony'smind,andtheonce-forgottenmemoriesweregraduallycomingback.Althoughtheprocessofmemoryrestorationwasslow,thewholefamilywasfullofhope.Theyknewthataslongastheyweretogether,nodifficultycouldstopthem.15升级版范文呈现Suddenly,Kaylacaughtsightofafamiliarvisageinthebustlingthrong.Theravagesoftimehadindeedlefttheirindeliblemarksonthatface,yetsherecognizeditasnoneotherthanAnthony'sinaninstant."Anthony!"Kaylaexclaimed,hervoicetremulouswithoverwhelmingexcitement.Withoutamoment'shesitation,shedashedtowardshim,withMelanieandMarkhotonherheels.Anthony,uponhearingtheshout,haltedinhistracks,hiseyescloudedwithbewilderment.AsKaylaflungherselfintohisarms,aflickerofrecognitiondancedinhiseyes.Melanie,arrivingshortlyafter,beheldherlong-lostson,andtears,unbidden,welledupinhereyes.Withatremblinghand,shereachedoutandtenderlycaressedAnthony'sface,asiftoassureherselfthatthiswasnomeredream.16升级版范文呈现Backhome,MelanieandKaylaembarkedonamissiontoreviveAnthony'smemories.TheyunearthedatroveofAnthony'soldphotographsand,onebyone,presentedthemtohim,eachimageunlockingafloodofstoriesfromthepast.Melanie,pointingtoasnapshotofayoungAnthony,recountedsoftly,"Thiswastakenon