高考英语复习读后续写练习+中年妈妈的棒球逐梦之旅

高考英语读后续写语篇练习中年妈妈的棒球逐梦之旅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文WhenIwasfour,myseven-year-oldbrotherreceivedabaseballgloveforhisbirthday.Everynight.aswewenttosleep.I’dlistentohimthrowingaballintothegloveoverandovertosoftentheleather.IwantedaglovesomuchthatIalmostcried.But,backthen,girlsdidn’tplaysports;theyplayedwithdolls(洋娃娃).Fast-forwardtwenty-sixyears.Nowathirty-year-oldmotheroftwoboysandagirl,Ihappenedtosecanoticeinmylocalpaper:“Women’sBaseballLeagueopenssoon.Anyoneinterested,signupatthecommunityservicecenter.”Icutitoutandsetitonthekitchentable,CouldI?Afteralltheseyears?4续写原文Ilookedatthatnoticeonmytableeveryday.lthoughtofathousandreasonsIcouldn’tplay.Buttheideaofplayingbaseballstuckinmyheadandwouldn’tgoaway.Finally,1gatheredupmycourageandsignedup.SinceIwasn’tamemberofanyteam,theytoldmeI’dbeassigned(分配)toone.Twoweekspassedbeforetheygavemethenameoftheteamtolookfor.SincemyhusbandworkedMondaynights,Iarrangedforababysitter.Itwasaluxury(奢侈)but,atthatmomentinmylife,anecessity.5续写原文OnMonday,heartpounding,Iwalkedthroughtheparkfilledwithwomenofallagespracticing.Ittookmeawhiletofindmyteam.Theywereallhigh-schoolgirls,seventeenandeighteenyearsold!Iwaitedacoupleofminutesbeforeapproachingthecoach.Hehadputtogethertopathletesforhisteam,andhedidn’twantsomeoldladymessingthingsup.Helookedmeover.Hisgirlshadfineglovesandmetalcleats(棒球钉鞋).Theylookedlikeplayers.IhadnogloveandworeanoldT-shirtandgymshoes.Ididn’tcare.Iwantedtoplay.Thatfirstday,hehadmerunbases(跑垒).Inevergotachancetobatorplaythefield.Ijustranbasesallnight.Thenextmorning,Icouldhardlystand.6段首句Paragraph1：WhenIshowedupthenextMonday,thecoachwasclearlysurprised.Paragraph2：“Impressivecatch!”myteammatescheeredformyperformanceafterthetraining.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了作者四岁时，因女孩不能玩体育的观念，只能羡慕弟弟的棒球手套。二十六年后，已是三个孩子母亲的她，看到当地报纸上女子棒球联赛招募的消息，心动不已。虽有诸多顾虑，但她最终鼓起勇气报名。被分配到一支由十七八岁高中女生组成的队伍后，教练起初对她不看好，第一次训练只让她跑垒，强度大到第二天她几乎无法站立。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：WhenIshowedupthenextMonday,thecoachwasclearlysurprised.当我下周一再次出现在训练场地时，教练明显很惊讶。他大概以为经过上次高强度的训练，我会知难而退。但我不仅来了，还带着新买的手套和合身的队服。我用行动告诉他，我是认真的。训练开始后，他安排我到外场守备。我内心既紧张又兴奋，时刻准备着迎接挑战。突然，一个高飞球朝我飞来，我迅速判断球的落点，快步冲过去，高高跃起，伸出手套。那一刻，时间仿佛静止了，我只听到自己的心跳声。当手套稳稳地接住球时，我心中涌起一股巨大的成就感。教练看到这一幕，微微点了点头。11续写思路分析Para2：“Impressivecatch!”myteammatescheeredformyperformanceafterthetraining.“漂亮的接球！”训练结束后，队友们为我的表现欢呼。她们的认可让我无比开心，也让我更加融入这个团队。从那以后，每次训练我都全力以赴，不断提升自己的球技。随着比赛日的临近，我越发刻苦。比赛那天，我怀着紧张又激动的心情走上赛场。在队友们的默契配合下，我们一路拼搏。我在场上发挥出色，成功完成多次关键防守和击球。最终，我们赢得了比赛。那一刻，我感受到了团队的力量，也实现了自己多年的棒球梦想。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现WhenIshowedupthenextMonday,thecoachwasclearlysurprised.HeprobablythoughtIwouldgiveupafterthetoughfirstpractice.However,notonlydidIcome,butIalsobroughtanewgloveandaproperuniform.IwasdeterminedtoshowhimthatIwasserious.Afterthetrainingstarted,heassignedmetoplayintheoutfield.Iwasbothnervousandexcited,alwaysreadytomeetthechallenges.Suddenly,aflyballcametowardsme.Iquicklyjudgeditslandingpoint,rushedtowardsit,andjumpedhigh,reachingoutmyglove.Atthatmoment,timeseemedtostandstill,andIcouldonlyhearthesoundofmyheartbeat.Whentheglovecaughttheballfirmly,agreatsenseofachievementwelledupinme.Thecoachsawthisandnoddedslightly.14范文呈现"Impressivecatch!"myteammatescheeredformyperformanceafterthetraining.Theirrecognitionmademeextremelyhappyandhelpedmeintegrateintotheteambetter.Fromthenon,Iwentalloutineverytrainingsessiontoimprovemyskills.Asthegamedayapproached,Itrainedevenharder.Onthedayofthegame,Isteppedontothefieldwithamixtureofnervousnessandexcitement.Withthetacitcooperationofmyteammates,wefoughthardalltheway.Iperformedoutstandinglyonthefield,successfullymakingseveralcrucialdefensesandhits.Eventually,wewonthegame.Atthatmoment,Ifeltthepoweroftheteamandrealizedmylong-cherishedbaseballdream.15升级版范文呈现WhenIshowedupthenextMonday,thecoach'ssurprisewaspalpable.Presumably,hehadexpectedmetothrowinthetowelafterthearduousinitialpractice.However,notonlydidImakeanappearance,butIalsoarrivedequippedwithabrand-newgloveandaproperuniform,determinedtoprovemyunwaveringcommitment.Asthetrainingcommenced,heassignedmetotheoutfieldposition.Acocktailofnervousnessandexcitementcoursedthroughmyveins,andIwasperpetuallyonhighalert,readytoembraceanychallengethatcamemyway.Suddenly,asoaringflyballhurtledinmydirection.Withouthesitation,Iswiftlycalculateditstrajectory,sprintedtowardstheanticipatedlandingspot,andlaunchedmyselfintotheair,mygloveoutstretched.Inthatsuspendedmoment,timeseemedtostandstill,andtheonlyaudiblesoundwasthethunderouspoundingofmyheart.Themomenttheglovesecurelytrappedtheball,anoverwhelmingsenseofaccomplishmentsurgedwithinme.Catchingsightofthis,thecoachgaveasubtlenodofapproval.16升级版范文呈现"Impressivecatch!"myteammatesexclaimed,showeringmewithpraisefollowingthetraining.Theirvalidationfilledmewithexuberantjoyandseamlesslyintegratedmeintotheteam.Fromthatmomentforward,Ileftnostoneunturnedineverytrainingsession,strivingtoenhancemyskills