高考英语复习读后续写练习：在餐厅里感受的温暖与善良的真谛

高考英语读后续写语篇练习在餐厅里感受的温暖与善良的真谛1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Bobby,mybrother,andIwouldspendourusualSaturdaywithGrandpa,cleaninghishouse.Momwouldtakeustohishomeintheearlymorning.Sincechildhood,BobbyandIhadbeenspendingthedaydusting,moppingandchangingthesheetsonhisbed.Grandpagrewupinapoorfamily.Hisdaddiedwhenhewasateenager.Thenhehadtoleaveschool,runthefamilyfarmandraisehisbrotherandsister.Heworkedasanightdoorkeeperforacompanywithinwalkingdistanceofhishome,andthehighlightofhisweekwastherewardthathegavemybrotherandmeforcleaning.Anditwasthemomentwhenwefeltthehappiest.4续写原文ThisSaturday,afterBobbyandIfinishedcleaning,Grandpadecidedtoinviteustodinner.Whenwefinallyarrivedathisfavoriterestaurant,thewaitressesgreetedhimasalong-lostelder.Theirsmilesandwavesfollowedustoourfavoritetableasweplacedourorders.Andthenwelaughedandate.Grandpapraisedhowwellwehadcleanedhisplace,tellinganyonewhowouldliketolistenabouteverytaskwehadaccomplished.Regardlessofwhowasservingusatthetime,eachoftheotherwaitresseswouldcomeuptosay“hi”toGrandpaandcongratulatehisgrandkidsontheirwork.Itwasarestaurant,butitwaslikeourhome.Whendinnerwasover,thewaitresswouldbringthecheckandhandittoGrandpa.Thistime,itwasGloriathatbentclosetohim,andtoldhimtheamountofthecheck.5续写原文Grandpacarefullydugintothepocketofhistrousersandbroughtoutaworncoinpurse.Hecarefullylaidoutthecoinsandpaidthebill.ThenhegaveGloriaatip,butitwasn’tenough.Iwasashamedthathegottheamountofthetipwrong,andwewereembarrassed.IwasabouttosaysomethingwhenGloriagrabbedmyhands.“Comeandgetsomeflowers,today’sgifts,Susie,”shesaidassheledmetowardthecounter.6段首句Paragraph1：“Iwantyoutolistencarefully,Susie,”Gloriasaidtomeseriously.Paragraph2：IlistenedtoGloriaandstaredatthoseflowers,deepinthought.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9我和弟弟鲍比每周六都会去爷爷家帮忙打扫，爷爷出身贫寒，靠自己努力撑起家庭。这周六打扫完后，爷爷带我们去他最喜欢的餐厅吃饭。餐厅的服务员们都热情地和爷爷打招呼，大家相处得像一家人。用餐结束后，爷爷付钱给小费，可给的不够，我觉得很羞愧。这时，服务员格洛丽亚拉着我去柜台拿花，还说有话要跟我说。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：“Iwantyoutolistencarefully,Susie,”Gloriasaidtomeseriously.“我想让你认真听着，苏西。”格洛丽亚严肃地对我说。她拉着我走到柜台边，轻轻地把花放在我面前。“你爷爷是个非常好的人。”她的眼神中充满了敬重，“他虽然没有很多钱，但每次来这里，他都会尽自己所能给我们小费，而且他总是对我们每一个人都很友善，关心我们的生活。我们都很尊敬他，在这里，他就像我们的长辈一样。”格洛丽亚的声音很温柔，却让我内心受到了很大的冲击。我开始反思自己刚才因为爷爷给的小费不够而感到羞愧的行为，觉得自己是多么的肤浅。11续写思路分析Para2：IlistenedtoGloriaandstaredatthoseflowers,deepinthought.我听着格洛丽亚的话，盯着那些花，陷入了深深的思考。我意识到，善良和尊重并不是用金钱来衡量的。爷爷虽然生活并不富裕，但他一直用自己的方式对周围的人表达着善意。他努力工作，养大了自己的弟弟妹妹，还一直关爱着我们。而我却因为一点小费而感到尴尬，实在不应该。我抬起头，看着格洛丽亚，心中充满了感激。我决定以后要像爷爷一样，做一个善良的人，不再因为外在的东西而轻视他人。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现"Iwantyoutolistencarefully,Susie,"Gloriasaidtomeseriously.Sheledmetothecounterandgentlyplacedtheflowersinfrontofme."Yourgrandpaisareallyniceperson,"shesaid,withrespectshininginhereyes."Althoughhedoesn'thavemuchmoney,everytimehecomeshere,hetrieshisbesttogiveustips.Andheisalwayskindtoallofus,caringaboutourlives.Weallrespecthimalot.Here,heisjustlikeourelder."Gloria'svoicewassoft,butithitmehard.Ibegantoreflectonmybehavioroffeelingashamedjustbecausegrandpa'stipwasnotenough.IfelthowshallowIwas.14范文呈现IlistenedtoGloriaandstaredatthoseflowers,deepinthought.Irealizedthatkindnessandrespectcouldn'tbemeasuredbymoney.Althoughgrandpadidn'tlivearichlife,hehadalwaysshownkindnesstopeoplearoundhiminhisownway.Heworkedhardtoraisehisyoungerbrotherandsisterandhadalwaystakengoodcareofus.ButIfeltembarrassedjustbecauseofalittletip.Ireallyshouldn'thave.IlookedupatGloria,fullofgratitudeinmyheart.IdecidedthatIwouldbeakind-heartedpersonlikegrandpainthefutureandwouldneverlookdownuponothersbecauseofexternalthings.15升级版范文呈现"Iwantyoutolistencarefully,Susie,"Gloriasaidtomeearnestly.Sheguidedmeovertothecounteranddelicatelylaidtheflowersbeforeme."Yourgrandpaistrulyaremarkableman,"sheremarked,hereyesbrimmingwithrespect."Despitehislimitedmeans,eachtimehegracesourrestaurant,hesparesnoefforttoofferusatip.Moreover,hetreatseveryoneofuswithkindnessandshowsgenuineconcernforourwell-being.Weallholdhiminthehighestesteem.Here,heislikeabelovedeldertous."Gloria'svoice,softyetimpactful,struckachordwithinme.Icouldn'thelpbutreflectonmyearlierfeelingsofshame,whichhadstemmedfromtheinadequacyofgrandpa'stip.Iwassuddenlyawareofhowsuperficialmythoughtshadbeen.16升级版范文呈现IheededGloria'swordsandfixedmygazeontheflowers,lostinprofoundcontemplation.Itdawnedonmethatkindnessandrespectdefyquantificationbymonetarystandards.Grandpa,despitehishumblecircumstances,hadconsistentlyextendedkindnesstothosearoundhiminhisownuniqueway.Hetoiledtoraisehisyoungersiblingsandhadalwaysshowereduswithloveandcare.Yet,Ihadallowedmyselftobeembarrassedoverameretip.Itrulyregrettedmyearlierreaction.IliftedmyheadandmetGloria'seyes,m