读后续写+雪夜的救命稻草：皮卡司机的援手+讲义 高二上学期1月期末英语试题

AnAngelonaSnowyNightThewindwasblowinghardasIwasdrivingdownthetwistsandturnsofthecountryroad.Iwasdesperatetogethomebeforedark,butthereseemednoway.Theforecastsaidtherewasgoingtobeaheavysnowontheway.Itwasfreezingcoldoutside.Thewindwasblowingagainstthewindows,lettingoutbuzzingnoises.Hairstandingonend,Isteppedhardontheaccelerator,longingtomakeittomycozyhomeearlier.ThecarwasroaringalongtheroughroadwhenIsuddenlyheardabigbangcomingfrombehind.Thecarsomehowsloweddown,andImanagedtopullitovertothesideoftheroad.Iwasinacoldsweatfromextremeterror,wonderingwhathadjusthappened.Draggingmyselfoutofthedriver’sseat,Ishiveredwithcold.Suddenly,agustofcoldwindclearedmyhead.QuicklyIexaminedthecar.Muchtomysurprise,noseriousdamagewasdone.Itwasjustaflattire,butthecarcouldn’tmoveforwardaninch!Itwasblackdarkoutside.Therewasnotasinglesoularoundtoturnto.Awaveoffearinstantlywashedoverme.Worsestill,itbegantosnowattheverymoment.Snowflakesweredancingintheairatthemercyofhowlingwind.HowIwishedsomeonecouldcometomyrescuejustintime!Withnowheretohide,Ihadtowaitinthedarkness,coldandhelpless.Iwaitedandwaited,butnocarortruckpassedby.Swallowedbycompletedarkness,Ialmostwentmad.“Whatifnoonecomes?WhatshouldIdo?”,Imumbled.Atthispoint,Iwastotallyseizedbyanxietyandfear.Mypatiencewasrunningoutwhenloudnoisesboomedoutfromthedarknight.TherecameaFordpickup（皮卡货车）,withdazzlinglightcastoverthewhitesnow.Isprangtomyfeet,wavingmyarmscrazily.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thepickupfinallystopped,andoutsteppedthedriver.Thedriverdrewbackandrefusedtotakethemoney.文章大意在一个风雪交加的夜晚，“我”驾车行驶在乡村蜿蜒的道路上，一心想在天黑前到家。然而，天气预报显示即将有大雪，车外寒风凛冽，吹得车窗嗡嗡作响。行驶途中，车子突然发出巨响，“我”惊恐地将车停在路边，发现只是轮胎爆了，但在这荒郊野外，周围空无一人，天也黑了，雪还在下，“我”又冷又无助，只能焦急地等待救援。就在“我”几乎绝望时，一辆福特皮卡出现了，“我”疯狂挥手求救。故事山分析开端：“我”在风雪交加的夜晚开车回家，途中车胎爆了。发展：天色已晚，周围无人，大雪纷飞，“我”孤立无援，在恐惧与焦虑中等待救援。高潮：皮卡出现，“我”看到了希望。结局（待续写）：皮卡司机帮助“我”换轮胎，“我”对他的帮助表示感谢并试图给钱，司机拒绝，展现人与人之间的温暖与善良。伏笔以及在续写中的回应恶劣的天气：为故事营造紧张氛围，在续写中，司机在这样的恶劣天气下帮忙，更能体现他的善良。如“在这冰天雪地中，他的援手显得格外温暖，让我忘却了寒冷”。“我”极度渴望回家：在续写中，司机的帮助让“我”能够继续回家的旅程，回应这一伏笔。如“多亏了他的帮忙，我终于可以朝着温暖的家继续前行”。周围无人可求助：与后续皮卡司机的出现形成对比，突出司机的重要性。如“在这无人的荒野，他就像从天而降的救星”。“我”的恐惧与焦虑：在续写中，司机的帮助让“我”的情绪得以平复，从恐惧转为感激。如“他的安慰和行动，驱散了我心中的恐惧，取而代之的是满满的感激”。皮卡的出现：预示着“我”将得到帮助，续写中围绕司机如何帮助“我”展开。如“皮卡的到来，带来了希望的曙光，司机迅速下车开始帮我更换轮胎”。续写要点（两段）第一段：详细描述皮卡司机下车后的反应，如询问情况、检查轮胎、着手帮忙换轮胎的过程，以及他的动作、表情和语言，同时描述“我”看到他帮忙时的心理变化，从紧张到安心。第二段：重点描写换好轮胎后，“我”对司机表示感谢并拿出钱酬谢，司机拒绝的场景，可通过对话展现司机的善良和高尚品格，以及“我”的感动，最后表达对这次经历的感悟。情感线起初，“我”在风雪中驾车回家，充满急切与期待。车胎爆后，陷入极度恐惧和焦虑，在黑暗与寒冷中孤立无援，几乎绝望。皮卡出现时，看到了希望，心中燃起一丝曙光。司机帮忙换轮胎时，从紧张不安逐渐转为安心。当司机拒绝收钱时，内心满是感动与敬佩，深刻体会到人性的温暖与善良。故事线“我”在风雪夜驾车回家，车胎爆了。周围无人，天色已晚，大雪纷飞，“我”孤立无援。“我”在恐惧与焦虑中等待救援，几乎绝望。皮卡出现，“我”疯狂挥手求救。司机下车帮忙换轮胎。换好轮胎后，“我”感谢并试图给钱，司机拒绝，“我”深受感动。主旨升华句Inthedarkestandcoldestmomentsoflife,asimpleactofkindnessfromastrangercanbelikeawarmfire,lightingupourwayandmeltingtheiceofdespair.（在生命中最黑暗、最寒冷的时刻，来自陌生人的一个简单善举就像一团温暖的火焰，照亮我们的道路，融化绝望的坚冰。）Thisencounteronthesnowynighttaughtmethathumanity'skindnessknowsnobounds,andithasthepowertotransformourmostdesperatesituationsintomomentsofhopeandgratitude.（这个雪夜的遭遇让我明白，人性的善良没有界限，它有力量将我们最绝望的处境转化为充满希望和感激的时刻。）Thedriver'sselflesshelpinthefaceoftheharshweathernotonlyfixedmycarbutalsomendedmyfaithinthegoodnessofpeople,remindingmetoalwaysbereadytolendahand.（司机在恶劣天气下的无私帮助不仅修好了我的车，还修复了我对人性美好的信念，提醒我要随时准备伸出援手。）Sometimes,themostunexpectedheroesemergeinthemosttryingtimes,andtheiractsofkindnessbecomethemostpreciousmemoriesthatwarmourheartsforever.（有时候，最意想不到的英雄会在最艰难的时刻出现，他们的善举成为最珍贵的回忆，永远温暖着我们的心。）Throughthisexperience,Ilearnedthatthetruevalueoflifeliesnotinthematerialgainsbutintheconnectionswebuildwithothersthroughkindnessandthelovethatissharedintimesofneed.（通过这次经历，我明白了生命的真正价值不在于物质收获，而在于我们通过善良与他人建立的联系，以及在需要时分享的爱。）写作示范一Thepickupfinallystopped,andoutsteppedthedriver.Hewasatall,sturdymanwithafriendlysmileonhisface.“What'swrong?”heasked,hisvoicewarmandcomforting.Iquicklyexplainedthesituation,andwithoutaword,hewalkedaroundthecar,examiningtheflattire.Then,heopenedthebackofhispickupandtookoutajackandasparetire.Hegotdownonhiskneesinthesnowandstartedtowork.Hishandswereredfromthecold,buthedidn'tseemtonotice.AsIwatchedhim,myanxietygraduallyfadedaway,replacedbyasenseofrelief.Thedriverdrewbackandrefusedtotakethemoney.“Helpingothersiswhatweshoulddo,”hesaidwithagentlesmile.“I'mjustgladIcouldbeofsomehelptoyoutonight.”Hiswordstouchedmyheartdeeply.Ithankedhimagainandwatchedashegotbackintohispickupanddroveaway.Inthatmoment,Irealizedthateveninthedarkestoftimes,thereisalwayshopeandkindnessintheworld.Thisexperiencewouldstaywithmeforever,remindingmetobekindtoothers.写作示范二Thepickupfinallystopped,andoutsteppedthedriver.Amiddle-agedmanwithaweather-beatenface,helookedaroundandimmediatelyunderstoodthesituation.“Don'tworry,I'llgetyoubackontheroadinnotime,”heassuredme.Hethenrolleduphissleevesandgottowork.Heexpertlyremovedtheflattireandreplaceditwiththespareone.Allthewhile,hekepttalkingtome,tryingtocalmmynerves.Hiscalmdemeanorandefficientactionsmademefeelmuchbetter.Thedriverdrewbackandrefusedtotakethemoney.“Idon'twantyourmoney,”hesaidfirmly.“IfIwereinyoursituation,I'dhopesomeonewoulddothesameforme.”Hisselflessnessleftmespeechless.Iwatchedhimdriveoff,histaillightsdisappearingintothesnow-fillednight.Thisencounternotonlysavedmynightbutalsotaughtmeavaluablelessonaboutthepowerofkindness.Itmademerealizethatasmallactofkindnesscanhaveahugeimpactonsomeone'slife.【答案】Thepickupfinallystopped,andoutsteppedthedriver.“What’sup?youngman!”askedthedriver.“Ihaveaflattire.”Iresponded.Thedriverthenkneltonhiskneeandtookacloselookatthebrokentire.“Nothingserious,I’llhelpreplacethetire.”Hearinghiswords,Ibreathedasighofrelief.Asurgeofwarmthsoonflowedthroughmyheart.Thedriverimmediatelypulledsometoolsoutofthetrun