高考英语复习读后续写练习：神奇的臭鼬：妈妈的善举换来的特别重逢+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习神奇的臭鼬：妈妈的善举换来的特别重逢1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文WheneverIspreadmarmalade(橘子酱),Iamremindedofmymother,afive-foot-tallangelwhoevenbefriendedaskunk(臭鼬).Oneday,whileshewasbusypickingbeansinthebackyard,shecameacrossaskunknomorethanameteraway.Theskunk’sembarrassmentwasevidentashehadundoubtedlybeenrummaging(乱翻)throughthegarbage.Hestillhadamarmaladejarstuckonhisnose.Momtookpityonhim.Insteadofworryingthecreaturewouldspraysomethingsmellyalloverherandthebeans,shesmiledcompassionatelyatthelittlethingandextendedahelpinghand.Kneelingontheground,sheinchedacrossthegrass,reachedout,andtwistedthejar—verycarefully.4续写原文Thejarslippedoff.Theskunknoddedathank-youbeforeslippingawayintothewoodsatthebackofthegarden.Obviously,therewasnosprayingincident,thankstomyremarkablemother.Sherepeatedthistalenumeroustimes,alwayscallingtheskunkMarmalade.However,thatwasnottheendofthestory.Threesummerslater,whenIwasabouttwelve,anotherencounteroccurred.Itwasarainymorning,andbothmymotherandfatherhadgonetowork.MyfriendRobcameovertoplay,andwedecidedtoruntheelectrictraininmyroom.Suddenly,ascratchingsoundemergedfromtheattic(阁楼).Robassumedthatitmightbesomekindofanimal.Curiositygotthebetterofus,andweventuredtowardsthesourceofthesound.5续写原文Icautiouslyopenedtheatticdoorinthehall.Thenoiseceasedabruptly.Iclimbedupthestairs,Robfollowingmylead.Therebehindthetoyboxnearthechimneystoodtheanimal—blackwithadistinctwhitestripedownhisback.Washescaredandtrembling?Ibelieveso,atleastthat’swhatIremember.Instinctively,Iretreated,fearingthepotentialsprayorbitesfromthecreature.“Hey,Rob,”Iwhisperedurgently,“It’saskunk.Let’sgotothekitchenandfigureoutawaytogethimoutofhere.”6段首句Paragraph1:Inthecupboard,severalpapercupsandajarofmarmaladecaughtoursight.Paragraph2:RobandIfollowedtheskunkasheatehiswaydownthestairs.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9“我”每次涂抹橘子酱，就会想起妈妈。妈妈身材娇小却十分善良，她曾与一只臭鼬结下奇妙缘分。一天，妈妈在后院摘豆子时，发现一只鼻子上套着橘子酱罐子的臭鼬，它当时正在翻找垃圾，显得十分窘迫。妈妈没有因害怕臭鼬喷臭气而驱赶它，反而心生怜悯，小心翼翼地帮它取下了罐子。臭鼬离开前还点头致谢，妈妈之后常提起这个故事，还把这只臭鼬叫做“橘子酱”。三年后的一个夏天，在一个下雨天，“我”和朋友罗布在家玩电动火车，突然听到阁楼传来抓挠声。出于好奇，我们前往查看，发现一只背上有白色条纹的臭鼬躲在烟囱附近的玩具箱后面。“我”担心它会攻击我们，便拉着罗布退回到厨房，想着如何把它弄出去。这时，橱柜里的几个纸杯和一罐橘子酱映入我们眼帘。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Paragraph1:Inthecupboard,severalpapercupsandajarofmarmaladecaughtoursight.在橱柜里，几个纸杯和一罐橘子酱映入我们的眼帘。我脑海中瞬间闪过妈妈和那只臭鼬的故事，一个念头油然而生：或许这只臭鼬就是妈妈曾经帮助过的那只“橘子酱”，而且橘子酱说不定能成为我们引导它离开的关键。我兴奋地把这个想法告诉了罗布，他也觉得这是个不错的主意。我们迅速打开橘子酱罐子，浓郁的果香弥漫在空气中。我们用勺子舀了一些橘子酱放进纸杯中，将纸杯摆成一条从阁楼楼梯口一直延伸到屋外的路线。每放一个纸杯，我们都轻声呼唤着，希望能吸引臭鼬的注意。做完这些后，我们躲在楼梯转角处，紧张地等待着。不一会儿，阁楼里又传来了轻微的动静，我们知道臭鼬开始行动了。只见它小心翼翼地探出脑袋，鼻子不停地嗅着空气中的橘子酱香味。它顺着香味慢慢地走下楼梯，每走一步都显得十分谨慎。当它走到第一个纸杯前时，它停了下来，低头嗅了嗅，然后开始津津有味地吃起橘子酱来。11续写思路分析Paragraph2:RobandIfollowedtheskunkasheatehiswaydownthestairs.罗布和我跟在臭鼬后面，看着它顺着纸杯的路线一路吃下去。它吃得很专注，完全没有注意到我们的存在。我们既紧张又兴奋，紧张的是担心它突然受到惊吓而喷出臭气或者攻击我们，兴奋的是我们的计划似乎正在顺利进行。随着臭鼬不断地吃着橘子酱，它离屋外越来越近。当它走到最后一个纸杯前时，它已经来到了门口。这时，它似乎意识到了自己已经走到了屋外，抬起头四处张望了一下。然后，它转过身，看了我们一眼，像是在向我们表示感谢。接着，它迈着轻快的步伐，走进了院子里的草丛中，渐渐消失在我们的视线里。看着臭鼬安全离开，我和罗布长舒了一口气。我们知道，这次多亏了妈妈和那只臭鼬的故事，还有这罐橘子酱，才让我们顺利地解决了这个难题。等爸爸妈妈回来后，我们迫不及待地把这件事告诉了他们，妈妈听后，脸上露出了欣慰的笑容，她感慨地说：“善良总会有回报的，这只臭鼬一定是记得我们的好。”12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Inthecupboard,severalpapercupsandajarofmarmaladecaughtoursight.Suddenly,thestoryofmymotherandthatskunkflashedthroughmymind.Anideaoccurredtome:maybethisskunkwasthe"Marmalade"thatmymotherhadhelpedbefore,andthemarmalademightbethekeytoguidingitout.IexcitedlytoldRobthisidea,andhealsothoughtitwasagoodone.Wequicklyopenedthejarofmarmalade,andtherichfruityaromafilledtheair.Wescoopedsomemarmaladeintothepapercupswithaspoonandarrangedthecupsinalinefromtheatticstairsallthewaytotheoutsideofthehouse.Everytimeweplacedacup,wecalledoutsoftly,hopingtoattracttheskunk'sattention.Afterwefinished,wehidaroundthecornerofthestairs,waitingnervously.Soon,therewasaslightmovementintheatticagain.Weknewtheskunkwasonthemove.Itcautiouslystuckitsheadout,itsnosesniffingthesmellofmarmaladeintheair.Itwalkeddownthestairsslowlyalongthesmell,andeverystepittookwasverycautious.Whenitreachedthefirstpapercup,itstopped,sniffedit,andthenbegantoeatthemarmaladewithrelish.14范文呈现RobandIfollowedtheskunkasheatehiswaydownthestairs.Itwassofocusedoneatingthatitdidn'tnoticeourpresenceatall.Wewerebothnervousandexcited.Wewerenervousbecausewewereafraidthatitmightsuddenlygetscaredandsprayorattackus,andwewereexcitedbecauseourplanseemedtobegoingsmoothly.Astheskunkkepteatingthemarmalade,itgotcloserandclosertotheoutside.Whenitreachedthelastpapercup,itwasalreadyatthedoor.Atthistime,itseemedtorealizethatithadcomeoutside.Itraiseditsheadandlookedaround.Then,itturnedaroundandlookedatus,asifthankingus.Afterthat,itwalkedbrisklyintothegrassintheyardandgraduallydisappearedfromoursight.Seeingtheskunkleavesafely,RobandIbreathedasighofrelief.Weknewthatthistime,thankstothestoryofmymotherandtheskunk,andthisjarofmarmalade,wehadsuccessfullysolvedtheproblem.Whenmyparentscameback,wecouldn'twaittotellthemaboutit.Mymotherlistenedandagratifiedsmileappearedonherface.Shesaidwithemotion,"Kindnessalwayspaysoff.Thisskunkmustrememberourkindness."15升级版范文呈现Inthecupboard,severalpapercupsandajarofmarmaladecaughtoursight.Allofasudden,thestoryofmymother'sencounterwiththatskunkflashedvividlythroughmymind.Anideastruckmelikeaboltoflightning:perhapsthisskunkwasnoneotherthanthe"Marmalade"mymotherhadoncehelped,andthemarmaladecouldverywellserveasthekeytocoaxingitout.IexcitedlysharedthisthoughtwithRob,andhe,too,deemeditabrilliantplan.Swiftly,wepriedopenthejarofmarmalade,andinaninstant,therich,fruityfragrancepermeatedtheair.Usingaspoon,wecarefullyscoopedsomemarmaladeintothepapercupsandthenarrangedtheminatrailthatledfromtheatticstairsallthewaytotheoutdoors.Witheachcupweplaced,wecalledoutinhushedtones,hopingtodrawtheskunk'sattention.Onceweweredone,weconcealedourselvesaroundthecornerofthestairs,ourheartspoundingwithnervousanticipation.Beforelong,afaintrustlingsoundemergedfromtheattic.Weknewtheskunkwasonthemove.Ittentativelypokeditsheadout,itsnosetwitchingasitsniffedthealluringscentofthemarmalade.Itthendescendedthestairsslowly,followingthearoma,eachsteptakenwithutmostcaution.Whenitreachedthefirstpapercup,itpaused,gaveitagoodsniff,andthenbegandevouringthemarmaladewithgusto.16升级版范文呈现RobandItrailedbehindtheskunkasitmadeitswaydownthestairs,gobblingupthemarmaladealongtheway.Soengrossedwasitinitsfeastthatitremainedcompletelyoblivioustoourpresence.Wewereabundleofnerves,yetalsofilledwithexcitement.Wewereonedge,fearingthatatanymomentitmightgetspookedandsprayitspungentodororevenlaunchanattack.However,wewerealsothrilledasourplanseemedtobeunfoldingflawlessly.Astheskunkcontinuedtomunchonthemarmalade,itsteadilydrewnearertotheoutside.Whenitfinallyreachedthelastpapercup,ithadalreadyarrivedatthedoor.Atthat