高考英语复习读后续写练习：公交车上的温情：陌生人的慷慨解囊+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习公交车上的温情：陌生人的慷慨解囊1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Wesatonthebuswaitingwhileotherpassengerspiledon.Ablond-hairedgirl,aboutfifteenyearsold,tooktheseatinfrontofus.Thebusdriverfollowedbehindher.Hedemandedherfare(车费).“Youshouldpay$40,younglady,”thedriversaid.“Ipaidalready.Yesterday,online.”thegirlsaid.“No,norecordofit,”thebusdriverpointedtothepaperinhishandandwaveditinherface.“See?Nopay.Youpay,oryoumustgetoff,”thebusdriverpointedtotheexitdoor.“ButIdon’thavemoney.AndIpaidalready,”thegirlinsisted.4续写原文Thebusdriverpickeduphismobilephoneandmadeacalltofindoutiftherehadbeenanerrorwiththepaperwork.Andafewminuteslater,hecutthecallandsaidtothegirl.“Youhaven’tpaid.Youmustpaynow.”“Butplease,Idon’thaveanymoneyonmenow.ImustgettoLosAngelestoday.Please…”thegirlbegged.Tearsstreameddownherface.JohnandIhadboardedthebusheadingtoLosAngeles.IwasexcitedaboutexperiencingLosAngeles.ButwhileIwassittingtherecomfortablyinmyseat,thinkingaboutmynextadventure,thisgirlwasintears,withamanstandinginfrontofhertodemandmoney.5续写原文Iwasn’tsurewhatIshoulddo.Wasshetellingthetruth?Itwouldn’tbethefirsttimethatsomeonehadaskedformoneybytellingasadstorythatturnedoutuntrue.Wasshereallyshortofmoney?Maybethebusdriverwouldshowsomesympathyandallowhertosortthepaymentoutlater?Butno,thebusdrivercontinuedtodemandthatshepay$40orgetoffthebus.Thegirlinsistedthatshedidn’thavemoneyforthefareandhadnooneshecouldcontactforhelp.Itseemedthatthedriverwouldthrowheroffthebus.6段首句Paragraph1:Suddenly,anoldwomanwithgreyhairwalkedupfromthebackofthebus.Paragraph2：Iwastouchedbythekindactdonebytheoldwomanwholookedinneedherself.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9在一辆前往洛杉矶的公交车上，一位约15岁的金发女孩上车后，司机称她未支付40美元车费，要求她当场付款，否则就得下车。女孩坚称自己前一天已在线支付，但司机表示没有记录。司机打电话核实后，仍认定女孩未付费，坚持让她付款。女孩无奈落泪，称自己身上没钱，且无人可求助。“我”和约翰也在这辆车上，“我”对于女孩的遭遇感到纠结，不确定她是否在说谎，也期待司机能网开一面，但司机依旧态度强硬。此时，故事的发展陷入僵局，后续情节围绕是否有人会帮助女孩展开。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Suddenly,anoldwomanwithgreyhairwalkedupfromthebackofthebus.突然，一位头发花白的老妇人从公交车的后排走了过来。她步履蹒跚，每一步都走得小心翼翼，但眼神中却透露出一种坚定。她走到女孩和司机面前，轻轻拍了拍司机的肩膀，温和地说：“小伙子，别为难这孩子了。她看起来不像在说谎，这40美元我替她付了。”司机有些惊讶地看着老妇人，犹豫了一下说道：“这……不太好吧，这不是您的责任。”老妇人微笑着摇了摇头，说：“出门在外，谁还没个难处呢。这孩子着急去洛杉矶，肯定有要紧的事。我能帮一把是一把。”说着，她从自己破旧的钱包里拿出几张皱巴巴的钞票，仔细地数出40美元，递给了司机。女孩看着老妇人，眼中满是震惊和感激，泪水再次夺眶而出。她哽咽着说：“奶奶，谢谢您，您的恩情我一辈子都不会忘记。”老妇人摸了摸女孩的头，安慰道：“孩子，别哭了，以后出门在外要多注意。”随后，老妇人转身准备回到自己的座位上。11续写思路分析Para2：Iwastouchedbythekindactdonebytheoldwomanwholookedinneedherself.我被这位看起来同样需要帮助的老妇人的善举深深打动了。她自己的穿着朴素，钱包也破旧不堪，显然生活并不富裕，但她却毫不犹豫地伸出援手，帮助了一个素不相识的女孩。我心中涌起一股暖流，也为自己之前的犹豫和怀疑感到羞愧。我看着老妇人缓缓走回座位的背影，心中充满了敬佩。于是，我起身走到老妇人身边，轻声对她说：“奶奶，您真是太善良了。我想替您分担一部分车费，这是我的一点心意。”说着，我拿出20美元递给她。老妇人连连摆手拒绝，说：“孩子，不用了，奶奶能帮就帮了，你留着钱自己用。”但我坚持把钱塞到她手里，说：“奶奶，您就收下吧，这也是我对您的一点敬意。”老妇人看着我，眼中满是感动，最终收下了钱。车上的其他乘客也纷纷向老妇人和我投来了赞许的目光。在这之后，公交车内的气氛变得温馨起来，大家都被老妇人的善良所感染，彼此之间的交流也多了起来。这次公交车上的经历，让我深刻地体会到了人间的温暖和善良的力量。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Suddenly,anoldwomanwithgreyhairwalkedupfromthebackofthebus.Shewalkedslowlyandunsteadily,eachstepcarefullytaken,buttherewasadeterminationinhereyes.Shecameuptothegirlandthedriver,gentlypattedthedriverontheshoulder,andsaidsoftly,"Youngman,don'tbesohardonthischild.Shedoesn'tseemtobelying.I'llpaythe$40forher."Thedriverlookedattheoldwomaninsurpriseandhesitatedforamoment,saying,"Well...thisisn'treallyyourresponsibility."Theoldwomanshookherheadwithasmileandsaid,"Whenwe'reoutandabout,everyonehastheirowndifficulties.ThischildisinahurrytogettoLosAngeles.Shemusthavesomethingimportanttodo.IcanhelpifIcan."Withthat,shetookoutseveralcrumpledbanknotesfromherworn-outwallet,carefullycountedout$40,andhandedittothedriver.Thegirllookedattheoldwoman,hereyesfilledwithshockandgratitude,andtearsstreameddownherfaceagain.Shechokedandsaid,"Grandma,thankyousomuch.Iwillneverforgetyourkindness."Theoldwomanstrokedthegirl'sheadandcomfortedher,"Don'tcry,child.Bemorecarefulwhenyou'reoutinthefuture."Then,theoldwomanturnedaroundandpreparedtogobacktoherseat.14范文呈现Iwastouchedbythekindactdonebytheoldwomanwholookedinneedherself.Shewasdressedsimply,andherwalletwasoldandshabby.Itwasclearthatshedidn'thaveawealthylife,butshedidn'thesitatetoreachoutandhelpastranger.Awarmcurrentsurgedinmyheart,andIfeltashamedofmyprevioushesitationandsuspicion.Ilookedattheoldwoman'sbackassheslowlywalkedbacktoherseat,filledwithadmiration.So,Igotupandwalkedtotheoldwoman,sayingsoftlytoher,"Grandma,you'resokind.Iwanttosharepartofthefarewithyou.Thisisalittlesomethingfromme."Withthat,Itookout$20andhandedittoher.Theoldwomanwavedherhandsrepeatedlytorefuse,saying,"Child,noneed.Grandmacanhelpifshecan.Youkeepyourmoneyforyourself."ButIinsistedonstuffingthemoneyintoherhand,saying,"Grandma,pleasetakeit.Thisisalsomyrespectforyou."Theoldwomanlookedatme,hereyesfullofemotion,andfinallyacceptedthemoney.Theotherpassengersonthebusalsocastapprovingglancesattheoldwomanandme.Afterthat,theatmosphereonthebusbecamewarmandfriendly.Everyonewasinfectedbytheoldwoman'skindness,andthecommunicationamongpassengersincreased.Thisexperienceonthebusmademedeeplyrealizethewarmthofhumanityandthepowerofkindness.15升级版范文呈现Suddenly,anoldwomanwithgreyhairwalkedupfromthebackofthebus.Movingwithaslowanddeliberategait,eachstepmeasuredandcautious,sheexudedaquietdeterminationinhereyes.Approachingthegirlandthedriver,shegentlypattedthedriverontheshoulderandspokeinasoft,soothingtone,"Youngman,don'tbetooharshonthischild.Shedoesn'tstrikemeassomeonewho'slying.I'llcoverthe$40fareforher."Thedriver,visiblytakenaback,hesitatedforamomentbeforereplying,"Well...thisreallyisn'tyourburdentobear."Theoldwoman,withawarmsmile,shookherheadandsaid,"Whenwe'reoutintheworld,everyoneencounterstheirfairshareofhardships.ThisgirlisinarushtoreachLosAngeles;shemusthavesomethingimportanttoattendto.IfIcanlendahand,Iwill."Havingsaidthat,sheretrievedseveralcrumpledbanknotesfromhertatteredwallet,meticulouslycountedout$40,andhandeditovertothedriver.Thegirl,hereyeswidewithshockandbrimmingwithgratitude,hadtearsstreamingdownhercheeksoncemore.Chokingbacksobs,shemanagedtosay,"Grandma,thankyousomuch.I'llneverforgetyourkindness."Theoldwomantenderlystrokedthegirl'sheadandcomfortedher,"Don'tcry,child.Bemorecarefulwhenyou'reoutandaboutinthefuture."Subsequently,theoldwomanturnedaroundandmadeherwaybacktoherseat.16升级版范文呈现Iwasdeeplytouchedbythekindactoftheoldwoman,whoherselfseemedtobeinneed.Dressedinsimpleattireandwithaworn-outwallet,itwasevidentthatherlifewasn'toneofabundance.Yet,withoutamoment'shesitation,sheextendedahelpinghandtoacompletestranger.Awaveofwarmthwelledupwithinme,andIfeltapangofshameformyearlierhesitationanddoubt.Gazingattheoldwoman'sretreatingfigureassheslowlymadeherwaybacktoherseat,myheartwasfilledwithadmiration.Irosefrommyseatandapproachedtheoldwoman,speakingsoftly,"Grandma,you'reincrediblykind.I'dliketosharepartofthefarewithyou.Thisisjustasmalltokenofmyappreciation."Withthat,Itookout$20andofferedi