高考英语复习读后续写练习：破例搭载搭车客：一场温暖且特别的邂逅+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习破例搭载搭车客：一场温暖且特别的邂逅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Ineverpickuphitch-hikers(搭便车者)asarule.Idon’tknowwhatmovedmetodosotoday.IwasheadingfromNorthPlattetoBradyandhewasjustoutsideofNorthPlatte.Hejumpedinandsaid,“Thanksforstopping.”Isaid,“Noproblem,I’mgoingtoBradyabout23milesuptheroad,andI’lltakeyouthatfar.”Aswewereconversing,Inoticedhesmeltofalcohol.Ialsonoticedhiswrinkled,sundarkenedandunshavenface,hismessyhairandclothes.ButwhatInoticedmostwashisclear,large,blueeyes.Theysaytheeyesarethewindowtothesoul,andIbelieveit,ifyoulookclosely,youcanprettymuchtellthekindofsoulapersonhasthroughtheireyes.Hiseyeswerealmostindescribable.Theyweresospellbinding,notabitofhateinthem.Lookingathisveryroughappearance,Icouldtellhe’dbeendownaveryhardroad.Somehow,despitetheroadhehadbeendown,therewasnohateinhiseyes,onlylove.4续写原文Iaskedhimifhewantedasmoke,andhesaidyes,soIgavehimone,thenIlethimkeepthewholepack,forwhichheseemedgenuinelygrateful.Istartedaskinghimwherehewasfrom,wherehewasheading,whetherhehadafamily,etc.Hetoldmehehadbeenontheroadforsixdays,comingfromArizonawherehehadrecentlyhadaheartattackandheartsurgery.Hewasprettymuchhealedupbutcouldn’tfindwork.HewasheadingbacktohisbirthplaceofKansasCity,whichiswhereIwasbornaswell.Hesaidhelosthiswifetoabraintumortenyearsago,andthatheneverhadkidsbecausehiswifecouldn’thaveany.Wetalkedtherestoftheway,andIhadafeelingthattherewassomethingaboutthisguythatIcouldn’tputmyfingeron,butitwassomethingspecial.5段首句Paragraph1:SowegottoBradyandIsaid,“Well,thisistheendofmyline.”Paragraph2：AsImentioned,ItoldhimIwasgoingtogivehimsomemoney.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8“我”平时从不搭载搭便车的人，但这次却在从北普拉特前往布雷迪的途中，鬼使神差地搭载了一位搭便车者。他上车后，“我”在交谈中注意到他身上有酒味，外貌沧桑，头发和衣服都很凌乱。然而，他那双清澈、湛蓝的眼睛却深深吸引了“我”，尽管历经磨难，眼中却没有一丝仇恨，只有爱意。“我”给了他一支烟，还把整包烟都送给了他，他非常感激。在交流中，“我”得知他刚在亚利桑那州经历了心脏病发作和手术，找不到工作后准备返回出生地堪萨斯城，而那里也是“我”的出生地。他的妻子十年前因脑瘤离世，他们没有孩子。一路上，我们相谈甚欢，“我”总觉得他身上有一种特别的东西，却说不清楚。很快，就到了布雷迪，“我”要和他分别了，后续的故事将围绕分别时的场景和可能发生的事情展开。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：SowegottoBradyandIsaid,“Well,thisistheendofmyline.”很快我们就到了布雷迪，我说：“嗯，我就只能载你到这儿了。”他缓缓打开车门，双脚刚落地，又回头看向我，眼中满是不舍。“真的太感谢你了，这一路要不是你，我都不知道该怎么办。”他的声音有些沙哑，带着几分感激。我看着他那瘦弱的身躯，心中一阵不忍，于是问道：“你接下来有什么打算呢？”他叹了口气，无奈地说：“我也不知道，先去堪萨斯城看看，碰碰运气，希望能找到一份工作。”我想了想，决定帮帮他。“我这儿还有些钱，你拿着吧，路上兴许能用得上。”我一边说着，一边从钱包里拿出一些钱。他听了，连忙摆手拒绝，“不行不行，你已经帮了我太多了，我不能再要你的钱。”我坚持把钱塞到他手里，“拿着吧，这是我的一点心意，希望能让你接下来的路好走一点。”他犹豫了许久，最终还是收下了，眼眶微微泛红，不停地向我道谢。10续写思路分析Para2：AsImentioned,ItoldhimIwasgoingtogivehimsomemoney.正如我之前提到的，我告诉过他我要给他一些钱。他紧紧地握着那叠钱，手微微颤抖着，激动得半晌说不出话来。过了好一会儿，他才缓缓开口：“你是我见过最善良的人，这份恩情我永远都不会忘记。”我微笑着安慰他：“别这么说，谁还没有遇到难处的时候呢，能帮一点是一点。”他沉默了片刻，然后从口袋里掏出一个破旧的小本子，在上面写下了自己的联系方式。“这是我的联系方式，等我到了堪萨斯城安定下来，一定会联系你，把钱还给你。”他认真地说道。我接过本子，看着上面歪歪扭扭的字迹，心中涌起一股暖流。我们又聊了一会儿，分享了彼此的一些生活经历和对未来的期望。最后，他恋恋不舍地和我告别，转身踏上了前往堪萨斯城的路。我看着他渐行渐远的背影，默默地祝福他一切顺利，希望他能在堪萨斯城找到属于自己的一片天地。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现SowegottoBradyandIsaid,“Well,thisistheendofmyline.”Heslowlyopenedthecardoor,andassoonashisfeettouchedtheground,heturnedbacktolookatme,hiseyesfilledwithreluctance.“Thankyousomuch.Ireallydon'tknowwhatIwouldhavedonewithoutyouthisjourney.”Hisvoicewashoarse,fullofgratitude.Ilookedathisthinfigureandfeltapangofpity.ThenIasked,“Whatareyourplansforthenextstep?”Hesighedandsaidhelplessly,“I'mnotsure.I'llgotoKansasCityfirstandseeifIcanfindajob.”Afterthinkingforawhile,Idecidedtohelphim.“Ihavesomemoneyhere.Youcantakeit.Itmightbeusefulonyourway.”AsIspoke,Itookoutsomemoneyfrommywallet.Hearingthis,hequicklywavedhishandstorefuse.“No,no.You'vealreadyhelpedmealot.Ican'ttakeyourmoney.”Iinsistedonstuffingthemoneyintohishand.“Takeit.Thisisjustalittleofmykindness.Ihopeitcanmakeyournextjourneyeasier.”Hehesitatedforalongtimeandfinallytookit.Hiseyeswereslightlyred,andhekeptthankingme.13范文呈现AsImentioned,ItoldhimIwasgoingtogivehimsomemoney.Heheldthestackofmoneytightly,hishandstremblingslightly,andwastooexcitedtospeakforalongtime.Afterawhile,hefinallysaid,“YouarethekindestpersonI'veevermet.Iwillneverforgetyourkindness.”Ismiledandcomfortedhim,“Don'tsaythat.Everyonehasdifficulttimes.I'mjustdoingwhatIcan.”Hewassilentforamomentandthentookoutaworn-outsmallnotebookfromhispocketandwrotedownhiscontactinformation.“Thisismycontactinformation.IwilldefinitelycontactyouandpayyoubackwhenIsettledowninKansasCity.”hesaidseriously.Itookthenotebookandlookedatthecrookedhandwritingonit.Awarmcurrentsurgedinmyheart.Wetalkedforawhilelonger,sharingsomeofourlifeexperiencesandexpectationsforthefuture.Finally,hesaidgoodbyetomereluctantlyandturnedtostepontheroadtoKansasCity.Iwatchedhisrecedingfigureandsilentlywishedhimallthebest,hopingthathecouldfindhisownplaceinKansasCity.14升级版范文呈现SowegottoBradyandIsaid,“Well,thisistheendofmyline.”Slowly,heopenedthecardoor,andthemomenthisfeethittheground,heswiveledaroundtofaceme,hiseyesbrimmingwithreluctance.“Thankyousomuch.ItrulyhavenoideawhatIwouldhavedonewithoutyouonthisjourney,”hesaid,hisvoicehoarsewithgratitude.Gazingathisemaciatedfigure,awaveofcompassionwashedoverme.“Whatareyourplansfromhere?”Iinquired.Heheavedadeepsighandreplied,histonelacedwithhelplessness,“I'mnotsure.I'llheadtoKansasCityfirstandseeifIcanlandajob.”Afteramomentofthought,Iresolvedtolendhimahand.“I'vegotsomemoneyhere.Youshouldtakeit.Itmightcomeinhandyonyourway,”Isaid,asIfishedsomemoneyoutofmywallet.Uponhearingthis,heswiftlywavedhishandsinrefusal.“No,no.You'vealreadydonemeagreatdealofgood.Ican'tacceptyourmoney.”However,Iwaspersistent,firmlystuffingthemoneyintohishand.“Takeit.Thisisjustasmalltokenofmygoodwill.Ihopeitcaneaseyourwayahead.”Afteralongperiodofhesitation,hefinallyacceptedit,hiseyestingedwithredashecontinuouslyexpressedhisthanks.15升级版范文呈现AsImentioned,ItoldhimIwasgoingtogivehimsomemoney.Clutchingthestackofmoneytightly,hishandsquiveringslightly,hewassoovercomewithemotionthatheremainedspeechlessforquiteawhile.Eventually,hemanagedtosay,“YouarethekindestsoulI'veevercomeacross.Iwillneverbeabletoforgetyourkindness.”Iofferedhimawarmsmileandreassuredhim,“Don'tsaythat.Everyonegoesthroughtoughtimes.I'mmerelydoingwhatIcan.”Hefellin