2025年高二英语寒假衔接（外研版）专题13 Unit3 话题写作+实操练习（外研-版选择性必修三）解析版

专题13Unit3话题写作+实操练习（外研2019版选择性必修三）考点聚焦：核心考点+小考考点，有的放矢重点速记：知识点和关键点梳理，查漏补缺难点强化：难点内容标注与讲解，能力提升学以致用：真题感知+提升专练，全面突破1.分析课本Writing部分的文章。2.写作指导：介绍英雄。3.实操练习。结构分析Partone(paragraph1)Introduction:AbriefintroductiontoYangJingyu.Parttwo(paragraph2)Mainbody:MajoreventsaboutYangJingyu.Partthree(paragraph3)Conclusion:People’sopinionsofYangJingyu.介绍英雄的记叙文可以包括三个部分。第一部分是对这个人物的简介，可以包括人物的姓名、出身及外貌特征等。第二部分介绍人物的成就或取得的成绩，可以选择具有代表性的事迹或成就，按时间顺序进行介绍。第三部分是介绍人物的影响及人们对此人的评价。必背短语fightagainst抗击alargesumofmoney一大笔钱breakthrough突破bebetrayedto被泄露给trackdown追踪turnsorrowintoanger化悲痛为力量beborninto出生于floodtowards涌向sixjetsoffire六股火焰bestuck受困于atthecriticalmoment在危急关头blowup炸开openanewroad开辟一条新路underthecoverof在……掩护下makesacrifices做出牺牲indefenceof捍卫本单元要求写一位战斗英雄，其写作范围属于写人的记叙文。这类记叙文可从以下三个方面入手：1．结构：第一段，介绍战斗英雄的姓名、出生时间、出生地点及其他背景信息。第二段，按时间顺序写战斗英雄的主要事迹。第三段，发表个人看法，进行人物评价；2．时态：通常用一般过去时；3．人称：以第三人称为主。常用句型1．Eachtimepeoplesaytheword“hero”，whatwillyouthink?每次人们说“英雄”这个词，你会想到什么？2．Atthetimeofnationalcrisis,numerousAnti­JapaneseheroesemergedintheChinesenation.在民族危亡的时刻，中华民族涌现出了无数抗日英雄。3．DuringtheAnti­JapanesewarinChina,manyyoungheroesemerged.中国抗日战争中，涌现出了许许多多的少年英雄。4．China,anancientcountrywith5，000yearsofhistory,haswitnessedtheemergenceoftensofthousandsofpatrioticheroesintheriveryears.中国，一个有着五千年历史的古老国度，在如河的岁月中见证了千千万万的爱国英雄的涌现。5．Inordertodefendtheirmotherland,theysacrificedthemselvesbravely.为了保卫祖国，他们勇敢地牺牲了自己。6．Theyarewillingtoshedbloodforthecauseofnationalliberation.他们为了民族的解放事业甘愿抛头颅洒热血。7．Hefoughtbravelyagainsttheenemywithoutfearofthreat.他不怕威胁，勇敢地与敌人搏斗。8．Theywerebraveandwittyandfoughtagainsttheenemy.他们勇敢机智，与敌人展开斗争。9．Theysacrificethemselvesandforgetdeath,selflesslycontributeanddieforthecountry.他们舍生忘死，无私奉献，为国捐躯。10．Wearedeeplymovedbytheirgloriousdeeds.他们的光荣事迹，让我们深受感动。11．Hisspiritisworthlearning.他的精神很值得学习。12．Weshouldcherishtoday'shardwonhappylifeandbuildourmotherlandmoreprosperous.我们应该珍惜今天来之不易的幸福生活，把祖国建设得更加繁荣昌盛。典型例题根据以下内容提示，写一篇有关战斗英雄董存瑞的短文。1．董存瑞于1929年出生于河北省。2．1947年3月加入中国共产党。3．1948年5月25日，他的连队承担了炸毁一座桥上敌人碉堡的任务，董存瑞在这次任务中英勇牺牲。注意：1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3．参考词汇：炸药包(anexplosivepackage)引信(fuse)审题构思第一段：董存瑞的总体介绍及抗战事迹；第二段：我对董存瑞的评价。核心要点：1.董存瑞的出生日期、地点，入党时间和承担的任务及完成任务的过程；2.我对董存瑞的高度赞扬。核心词汇1．bebornon/in... 出生于……2．joinv. 加入3．shoulderthetaskof... 承担……任务4．blowup 炸毁……5．failv. 失败6．sacrificev. 牺牲7．aheroicact 英雄事迹由词扩句1．董存瑞于1929年出生于河北省。DongCunruiwasborninHebeiProvincein1929.2．1947年3月董加入中国共产党。DongjoinedtheCommunistPartyofChinainMarch1947.3．1948年5月25日，董存瑞连队承担了炸毁一座桥上敌人碉堡的任务。OnMay25,1948,thecompanyDongCunruishoulderedthetaskofblowingupanenemyfortonabridge.4．部队尝试了几次，但都失败了。Thetroopstriedseveraltimesbutfailed．5．接着，董勇敢地走了出来，手里拿着一个炸药包，向桥下冲去。ThenDongcameoutbravely，carryinganexplosivepackageinhishands,andrushedtowardsthebridge.6．他左手举起炸药包，右手拉出引信，成功地摧毁了碉堡。Heliftedtheexplosivepackagebylefthandandpulledthefusebyrighthand,successfullydestroyingthefort．7．他牺牲了自己19岁的生命，但他为军队开辟了道路。Hesacrificedhis19­year­oldlifebutheopenedawayforthetroops.8．这就是为什么我说董存瑞是我心目中真正的英雄。That'swhyIsayDongCunruiisarealheroinmymind.9．他的英雄事迹会被永远记住。Hisheroicactswillberememberedforever.句式升级1．用过去分词短语作后置定语的结构把第三步中的句1和句2合并。DongCunrui,borninHebeiProvincein1929,joinedtheCommunistPartyofChinainMarch1947.2．用让步状语从句的省略结构改写第三步中的句7。Althoughsacrificinghis19­year­oldlife,heopenedawayforthetroops.过渡衔接连成篇Onepossibleversion：DongCunrui,borninHebeiProvincein1929,joinedtheCommunistPartyofChinainMarch1947.OnMay25,1948,thecompanyDongCunruishoulderedthetaskofblowingupanenemyfortonabridge.Thetroopstriedseveraltimesbutfailed.ThenDongcameoutbravely,carryinganexplosivepackageinhishands,andrushedtowardsthebridge.Heliftedtheexplosivepackagebylefthandandpulledthefusebyrighthand,successfullydestroyingthefort.Althoughsacrificinghis19­year­oldlife,heopenedawayforthetroops.That'swhyIsayDongCunruiisarealheroinmymind.Hisheroicactswillberememberedforever.练习一假定你是李华，在一家英语网站看到关于“TheOlympicHeroinMyHeart”的论坛，请你在帖子下面留言，内容包括：1.你心中的奥运英雄；2.敬佩他（她）的理由。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Thereemergedsomanyexcellentathletesinthe2024OlympicGames.AmongthemthemostimpressiveoneisPanZhanle.Tobehonest,heisayoungheroinmyheartnotonlybecauseofthenewworldrecordhesetinmen's100-meterfreestylebutalsobecauseoftheoptimismandconfidenceheshowedbeforethecompetition.Besides,Ideeplyrespecthimforhisperseverance,unwaveringspiritinthefaceofchallenges,aswellashiscommitmenttoachievingexcellence.Ithinkheisarolemodelforallyounggeneration.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生在一家英语网站看到关于“TheOlympicHeroinMyHeart”的论坛，请考生在帖子下面留言。【详解】1.词汇积累由于：becauseof→dueto自信：confidence→self-assurance面对：inthefaceof→befacedwith展示：show→showcase2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Besides,Ideeplyrespecthimforhisperseverance,unwaveringspiritinthefaceofchallenges,aswellashiscommitmenttoachievingexcellence.拓展句：Besides,Ideeplyrespecthimforhisperseverance,unwaveringspiritwhenfacingchallenges,aswellashiscommitmenttoachievingexcellence.【点睛】[高分句型1]AmongthemthemostimpressiveoneisPanZhanle.(运用了全部倒装句)[高分句型2]Ithinkheisarolemodelforallyounggeneration.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)练习二假设你是高中生李华，你的英国笔友Mike从网上看到中国抗击疫情中的许多英雄任务之后，给你写了一封e-mail，询问谁是你心目中的英雄，请根据以下要点用英语给他回信：1.对钟南山的简单介绍；2.喜欢他的理由；3.从他身上得到的启示。姓名钟南山简要介绍1936年10月出生于南京；1960年，毕业于北京医学院主要事迹2003年，抗击非典SARS；2004年，被评为“感动中国2003年度”十大人物之一；2020年，抗击新冠肺炎(COVID-19)注意：1.适当增加相关细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数120词左右参考翻译：感动中国2003年度“十大人物之一”oneoftoptenpeoplemovingChinain2003

北京医学院BeijingMedicalCollege

新冠肺炎COVID-19

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Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMike,Iamhonoredthatyou’reinterestedingettingtoknowabouttheheroesinChinainthisspecialfight.Frommypointofview,IregardZhongNanshan,thefamousmedicalscientistinChina,astheheroinmyeyes.BorninOctober,1936inNanjing,ZhongNanshangraduatedfromBeijingMedicalCollege.Sincethen,shehasbeendevotinghimselftomedicalwork.In2003,whenSARSbrokeout,heledhismedicalteamtofightwithSARSbravelyandwonthebattle.Asaresult,hewasawardedoneoftoptenpeoplemovingChinain2003.Again,in2020,itwashethatstoodoutimmediatelyasabravefighterduringtheCOVID-19epidemicinChinaattheriskofbeinginfected,whichgreatlyimpressedme.IwasdeeplytouchedbyhisfearlessnesswhenIsawthepictureofthenightwhenhewasonthetraintoWuhananxiously,tiredandconcerned.Asastudent,allthatIcandoistostudyhardandacquiretheknowledgetobeneededfortheconstructionofourpromisingfuture.Yours,LiHua【导语】本书面表达是一篇应用文写作，要求用英文给英国笔友Mike写一封回信，参照表格信息告知他你心目中的抗疫英雄，要点如下：1.对钟南山的简单介绍；2.喜欢他的理由；3.从他身上得到的启示。【详解】1.词汇积累把看成是：regard...as→consider...as/see...as致力于：devoteoneselfto→commitoneselfto立刻：immediately→instantly打动：touch→move2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Asastudent,allthatIcandoistostudyhardandacquiretheknowledgetobeneededfortheconstructionofourpromisingfuture.拓展句：Asastudent,whatIcandoistostudyhardandacquiretheknowledgetobeneededfortheconstructionofourpromisingfuture.【点睛】【高分句型1】BorninOctober,1936inNanjing,ZhongNanshangraduatedfromBeijingMedicalCollege.(运用了过去分词作状语)【高分句型2】Again,in2020,itwashethatstoodoutimmediatelyasabravefighterduringtheCOVID-19epidemicinChinaattheriskofbeinginfected,whichgreatlyimpressedme.(运用了强调句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)练习三假定你是李华，你校英语杂志《人物》专栏正在举行主题为“TheHeroinMyEyes”的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.人物介绍（谁、事迹）；2.成为你眼中英雄的理由；3.该英雄人物对你的影响。注意：1.写作词数应为80；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TheHeroinMyEyesDuringthepandemicthatstruckChongqingthiswinter,alargequantityofheroicfiguresemergeamongpeoplefromallwalksoflife.Amongthem,myheadmasteristheonethatIadmiremost.Myheadteacherisamiddle-agedman.Heisnotstrong,butheshowedenormousstrengthduringthepandemic.Sincestrictruleswereissuedduringthatperiod,myheadteachervoluntarilystayedoncampustotakecareofthosestudentswhocannotgobackhome.Besides,hecommittedlargeamountsoftimeandenergyeverydaytoguaranteetheefficiencyofouronlinelearning.Hiscourageanddiligencemotivatemetofaceallkindsofobstaclesbravelyinthefuture.【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。假定你是李华，你校英语杂志《人物》专栏正在举行主题为“TheHeroinMyEyes”的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累出现：emerge→appear激励：motivate→stimulate此外：besides→inaddition障碍：obstacle→barrier2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：DuringthepandemicthatstruckChongqingthiswinter,alargequantityofheroicfiguresemergeamongpeoplefromallwalksoflife.Amongthem,myheadmasteristheonethatIadmiremost.拓展句：DuringthepandemicthatstruckChongqingthiswinter,alargequantityofheroicfiguresemergeamongpeoplefromallwalksoflife,amongwhom,myheadmasteristheonethatIadmiremost.【点睛】[高分句型1]Sincestrictruleswereissuedduringthatperiod,myheadteachervoluntarilystayedoncampustotakecareofthosestudentswhocannotgobackhome.(运用了who引导定语从句)[高分句型2]Besides,hecommittedlargeamountsoftimeandenergyeverydaytoguaranteetheefficiencyofouronlinelearning.(运用了不定式作目的状语)练习四你所在的英语社团正在开展“我为英雄代言”主题演讲活动。请你写一篇演讲稿，要点如下：1）你要代言的英雄；2）简述英雄事迹；3）你的感想。注意：1）词数80左右；2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。MyHero____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:MyHeroManyheroeshaveanenormousimpactonmygrowth,oneofwhomisLinQiaozhi.It’suniversallyacknowledgedthatLinQiaozhiisanexpertinwomen’sandchildren’sdisease.However,what’sunknownisthatshewentthroughhardshipsoneafteranotherbeforeshebecameadoctor.Therewasatimewhengirlshadlittleaccesstoschooling,butshemadeit.Later,shedevotedallherlifetothewelfareprojectofwomenandchildren.LinQiaozhihassetagoodexampleforusandweshouldlearndeterminationanddedicationfromher.ThisisthetruereasonwhyIcelebrateher.【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生写一篇演讲稿，参加英语社团正在开展“我为英雄代言”主题演讲活动。【详解】1.词汇积累对……有影响：haveanimpacton=haveaneffecton困难：hardship→difficulty获得成功：makeit=achievesuccess致力于：devote…to=workon2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：LinQiaozhihassetagoodexampleforusandweshouldlearndeterminationanddedicationfromher.拓展句：LinQiaozhihassetagoodexampleforus,fromwhomweshouldlearndeterminationanddedication.【点睛】[高分句型1]It’suniversallyacknowledgedthatLinQiaozhiisanexpertinwomen’sandchildren’sdisease.(it为形式主语，that引导主语从句)[高分句型2]However,what’sunknownisthatshewentthroughhardshipsoneafteranotherbeforeshebecameadoctor.(what引导主语从句，that引导表语从句，before引导时间状语从句)练习五英雄航天员陈冬光荣地承担了两次航天任务，他十几年如一日刻苦训练从不言弃，终于实现了自己的航天梦。你校《学生英文报》正在组织“向陈冬学习”的英语征文活动，请你向校报投稿，内容包括：1.他的优秀品质；2.如何向他学习。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Theastronautwhoperformedspacemissionstwice,Chendongdeservesourhighestrespectforhispersistenceinthedecade-longhardtraining.Neverdidhesayneverandultimatelyhelivedhisspacedream.HowcanwelearnfromChendong,especiallyhisperseveranceanddiligence?Whenfailinginexams,weshouldreflectonourweakpointsanddocountlessexerciseratherthandrownourselvesinsorrowordisappointment.Regardingdifficultieswemeetinourdailylife,weshouldrecoverfromlowspiritsandquicklyregaincalmnessasChendongdid.Hardworkcanpayoff.【导语】这是一篇应用文。英雄航天员陈冬光荣地承担了两次航天任务，他十几年如一日刻苦训练从不言弃，终于实现了自己的航天梦。你校《学生英文报》正在组织“向陈冬学习”的英语征文活动，请你向校报投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累反思：reflecton→self-examine终于：ultimately→finally弱点：weakpoints→disadvantage关于：regarding→concerning2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Hardworkcanpayoff.拓展句：Asweallknow,hardworkcanpayoff.【点睛】[高分句型1]ThefirstfemaleastronautwhoperformedspacewalkbyShenzhouXIII,WangYapingdeservesourhighestrespectforherpersistenceinthedecade-longhardtraining.(运用了who引导定语从句)[高分句型2]Neverdidshesayneverandultimatelyshelivedherspacedream.(运用了部分倒装)练习六重庆本轮疫情期间，你身边涌现出好多英雄。返校后，学校举行英语作文比赛。请你以疫情期间，你身边最值得敬佩的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。内容包括：1.你最敬佩的人的简介；2.说明理由：他/她在疫情期间的主要事迹。3.你从他/她身上学到了什么。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以从你身边的老师、同学、亲朋或媒体报道的抗疫名人中任选一人来写。但是，注意文中不得出现作者的真实人名学校名等，否则酌情扣分。3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：疫情pandemic；新冠病毒novelcoronavirus新冠肺炎COVID