2024秋高中英语Unit1FriendshipSectionⅣ写作Writing-建议信学案含解析新人教版必修1

PAGE1-Unit1FriendshipSectionⅣ写作(Writing——建议信)本单元的写作项目属于应用文类别中的“建议信”。这种题目要求我们就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。一、基本框架1．开头(beginning)——开宗明义，向对方陈述自己的观点(stateyouridea)。2．主体(body)——对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasonsandevidence)。3．结尾(ending)——呼应开头，重申观点(restateyouropinion)。二、增分佳句1．建议信开头常用句式：①Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers,andyoumayoftenfeellonely.我知道你现在在与人沟通方面有些麻烦，你也可能常常感到孤独。②I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...很兴奋收到你就……征求建议的来信。③Herearesometips/afewsuggestionstohelpyou.这里有帮助你的一些建议。④Ithinkyoucanmakeitifyoufollowtheadvicebelow.假如你听从以下建议，我认为你会做到的。2．表达建议常用句式：①First(ly),whynotjoinaclub?Ifyoudothis,youcanmakefriends.首先，为什么不参与一个俱乐部？假如你这样做的话，就会交到挚友。②Second(ly),youshould/cantrytotalkwithothers.Then/Thatway,youwillfeelbetter.其次，你应当尽力与人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。③Third(ly),itwouldbeagoodideaifyoureadabookorlistentomusic.Bydoingthis,youwillcalmyourselfdown.第三，假如你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的办法。通过这样做，你会使自己安静下来。④Lastbutnotleast,youshouldtalkwithherfirst.最终但同等重要的是，你应当先和她谈一谈。⑤AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion,youshouldhelpeachother.就我而言/在我看来，你们应当相互帮助。3．建议信结尾常用句式：①Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.我希望你会发觉这些方法有用。②Astimegoeson,peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucanfollowtheabove.假如你遵从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加理解你，会情愿和你交挚友的。③Ibelievethatifyoufollowmyadvice,you'llgetalongwellwithyourclassmates.我信任，假如你听从我的建议，你会和同学们相处好的。④Ibelieve,withyourtrying,youcanmanagetoovercomethesedifficulties.我信任，有了你的努力，你会胜利克服这些困难的。[题目要求]假如你是李华，你的好挚友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请依据下面提示给她写一封信。词数：100左右。1．要交挚友首先要做一个挚友；2．要和挚友同甘共苦，患难之中的挚友才是真正的挚友；3．友情须要时间和投入(effort)。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1．确定体裁：本文为建议信；2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应用其次人称；3．确定时态：主要运用一般现在时。二、构思第一段点出写信的目的；其次段正文列出所提的建议；最终一段写出写信人的希望。其次步：核心词汇想周全1．tip/advice/suggestion建议2．make_friends交挚友3．havetrouble/difficultyindoing...做……有困难4．sharehappinessandsorrowwith...和……同甘共苦5．call_for/need须要6．put_one's_heart_into一心一意第三步：由词扩句雏形现1．知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很愧疚。(宾语从句)Iamsorrytoknowthat_you_are_having_trouble_in_making_friends.2．假如你接受我的建议，变更这种境况是很简单的。(be＋adj.＋todo)Thesituationis_easy_to_changeifyoutakemyadvice.3．要交挚友首先要做一个挚友。(主谓结构)Ifyouwanttomakefriends,you_should_be_a_friend_first.4．你要和挚友同甘共苦。Youshouldshare_happiness_and_sorrow_with_your_friend.5．患难之中的挚友才是真正的挚友。Afriendin_needisa_friend_indeed.6．友情须要时间和投入。(主谓宾结构)Friendshipcalls_for/needs_time_and_effort.第四步：句式升级造亮点1．用whynot改写句3Whynotbeafriendfirstifyouwanttomakefriends?2．用wouldn'titbeagoodideaif...改写句4Wouldn'titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?3．用justasasayinggoes来丰富句5Justasasayinggoes,“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.”第五步：过渡连接联成篇(留意运用however,tobeginwith,inaddition,lastbutnotleast等关联词)DearSuRu，Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.Tobeginwith,whynotbeafriendfirstifyouwanttomakefriends?Inaddition,wouldn'titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?Justasasayinggoes,“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.”Lastbutnotleast,itwouldbeagoo