高三英语书面表达的探讨复习课程

高三英语书面表达的探讨吴建海高三英语书面表达的探讨影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个因素1.语篇信息是否完整2.行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。3.是否使用高级词汇4.是否巧用精彩句式5.卷面整洁,书写工整

你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，以“whetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting？”为题，写一篇短文。６５％的学生认为３５％的学生认为１．应该春游１．不应该春游２．接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康２．高考临近，没有心情玩３．活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习３．春游耽误学习AppreciationofagoodcompositionWhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.

Moststudents,about65%,arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhat’smore,theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudy.

Ontheotherhand,about35%studentsareagainsttheidea.Theysaythatwiththecollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,theydon’tfeellikegoinganywhere.Besides,theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff.Theycan’taffordthetime.Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies.beclosetoenergeticfeellikegoingaffordfixtheirattentiononheatedfreshTheoutlineofthewriting:Conclusionparagraph:…Introductionparagraph:…Point2…BodyPoint1…supportingidea1supportingidea2supportingidea1supportingidea2

表示观点对比类写作套语A.总起:Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.Differentpeopleholddifferent/oppositeopinions.Peoplehavetaken/adopteddifferentattitudestowards…Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.Peopletakedifferentviewsonthisquestion.B.表达观点一:…ofthemholdtheopinionthat….…ofthemareinfavoroftheideathat…Peoplewhoarefortheideathink…

C.表达不同观点之间的衔接:However,…ofthemholdadifferentview./…ofthemholdtheoppositeopinion.Peoplewhoareagainstitdon’tthinkso.However,everycoinhastwosides.Differentfromthose….,…peoplethink….Ontheotherhand,…peoplethink….D.结尾常用套语:Inmyopinion/Personally,…AsfarasI’mconcerned,…Inshort/inbrief/inaword,…

表列举说明的关联词:Firstly/Firstofall/Tobeginwith,....Secondly…Thirdly…Inthefirstplace…Inthesecondplace…Inthethirdplace…Finally/Lastbutnotleast/,....表示递进、强调的关联词....Besides/Apartfrom/What’smore/Inaddition/Furthermore/Moreover/worsestill/tomakemattersworse…

A、运用高级词汇或短语B、增加形容词或副词C、灵活运用各种句型

亮点点拨1)Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.

高级词汇：

Owingto/Becauseof/Asaresultof+N.Asaresultofthegoodweather,wehadacomfortablejourney.2)SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.

高级词汇：comeupwithAllofasudden,agoodideaflashedintomymind.3)Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.高级词汇：Provetobe/turnouttobeTheplanturnedouttobeafailure.4)Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.高级词汇：WithoutanydifficultyYouwillhavenodifficultyinfindingmyhouse.B.增加形容词或副词在我们的校园里有一个小池塘。Thereisalovelypondinourbeautifulcampus.C.灵活运用各种句型1.活用it句型It常用句型：Itisthefirst/second…timethat…Itis(high)timethat…Itissaid/reported/well-knownthat…Ittakessb.sometimetodosth.sb.feel/find/make/think/considerit+adj.+todoWhenitcomestosth.我们到了采取措施保护环境的时候．我认为举行英语比赛很有意义．２.从句

李宇春在超级女生比赛中获得第一，这令她的歌迷们很兴奋．LiYuchunwonthefirstintheSuperGirlCompetition,whichmadeherfansexcited.３.倒装句型我们只有通过努力才能获得成功．

Onlybyworkinghardcanweachievesuccess.

直到他回来我才睡觉。

NotuntilmyfathercamebackdidIgotobed.４.强调句型

直到他回来我才睡觉。ItwasnotuntilmyfathercamebackthatIwenttobed.

就在他抬头看时，一个不明的物体在天空掠过。Anunknownobjectwasflyingacrosstheskyjustwhenhelookedup.Itwaswhenhelookedupthatanunknownobjectwasflyingacrossthesky.５.with结构有那么多的人支持超女比赛，这个活动很成功。

WithsomanypeoplesupportingtheSuperGirlCompetition,itenjoyedagreatsuccess.６.分词短语30%同学不赞同这一看法，认为孩子不应当…。30%ofmyclassmatesdisagreewithit,sayingchildrenshouldn’t….知道了这点，他们会越来越努力学习。Knowingthis,they’llstudyharderandharder.Challengeyourself

我校学生进行了一场有关学生可否带手机进校园的讨论，根据下表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。

一些同学认为另一些同学认为１.带手机便于与同学联系２．便于与家人联系３．是一种娱乐方式１．破坏学习气氛２．浪费过多时间和金钱３．考试时会发短信作弊

Thestudentsofourschoolhadadiscussionaboutwhethermiddleschoolstudentscangotoschoolwithmobilephones.Differentpeopleholddifferentopinions.

Somestudentsthinkthatstudentshavemobilephonesatschool,becausemobilephoneswillenablestudentstostayin

touchwiththeirfriendsandfamilywherever

they

are.Besides,themobilephoneisawaytohavefun.

Asacoinhastwosides,themobilephones,whileprovidingconvenience,causetroubletoo.Inclassrooms,theuntimely

ringingofphonesinterruptslecturesanddestroysthe

atmosphereofstudy.Andsomestudentsmayspendtoomuchtimeandmoneyonphonecallsandsendingmessages.What’sworse,sometimesstudentsmightusephonemessagestocheatduringexams.Homework:

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