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体裁命题形式写作主题2022新高考I卷应用文邀请信写邮件邀请外教进行一次访谈II卷应用文邀请信写邮件邀请外教进行一次访谈全国卷乙卷说明文投稿利用填表调查结果给报社投稿甲卷应用文投稿以世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿2021新高考I卷应用文投稿校刊youth庆祝十周年，向校刊表达自己经历，并送上祝福II卷应用文投稿校刊youth庆祝十周年，向校刊表达自己经历，并送上祝福全国卷乙卷应用文发言稿以“besmartonlinelearners”为主题写一篇发言稿参赛甲卷应用文征求建议征求外国朋友建议，哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人2020全国卷I卷应用文投稿写一篇以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题投稿参赛II卷应用文日记写一篇英文短文介绍上周末采摘活动III卷应用文求助信给外教写一封信，请帮忙指导建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，并说明理由，使别人了解自己的想法、主张，能利用所提建议解决有关问题的一类信件。建议信要简洁明确、理由充分、具有合理性和说服力。其结构一般如下：①、明确问题，并表明帮助意愿②、提出具体建议并给出相应的理由③、希望对方的问题得到解决素材精粹【高分句型】首段：开门见山表明写信目的I'mverysorrytohearthatyouhavetroublein.......atthemoment.Herearesometipsforyou.获悉此刻你遇到……麻烦，我深感遗憾。这是给你的一些建议。Learningthat......，'mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestionsonhowto........得知，我写信给你一些关于如何…的建议。主体部分：提出具体建议Whenitcomestosuchasituation，Iwouldliketosuggestthat........Foronething，........Foranother,.......What'smore........当遇到这种情况时，我想建议…。一方面，……。另一方面，……。而且，…AsfarasI'mconcerned/Frommypointofview，itisagoodideato......./itwouldbewiseofyouto.......Besides，Istronglyadviseyouto..Lastbutnotleast，youcan.........就我而言/在我看来，……是个好主意/你……是明智的。此外，我强烈建议你……。最后但同样重要的是，你可以……尾段：希望采纳建议并表示祝福Personally，itwouldbebeneficialifyoustickto........在我看来，如果你坚持……的话会有好处的2.Iwillbeveryhappyifyoucantakemyadvice/ideasintoconsideration.如果你能考虑我的建议/想法，我会很开心。Hopefullythesesuggestionswillbeofgreathelptoyou.希望这些建议对你有很大的帮助。佳作共赏DearMichael，I'mmorethandelightedtolearnthatyouaregoingtoparticipateintheTraditionalChineseCultureCompetition.I'mwillingtogiveyouahandandoffersomepracticalsuggestionsatyourrequest.Tobeginwith，itisnecessaryforyoutoconsultsomebooksconcerningtraditionalChineseculture，thusbroadeningyourhorizonsandwellequippingyouforthecomingcompetition.Secondly，whynotwatchsomevideoclips？Youareboundtogetsomeinspirationfromthem.Asforwhenandwheretomeet，canwemakeitat4：00thisFridayafternooninyourclassroom？Ifit’snotconvenientforyou，pleaseletmeknowwhattimeissuitableforyouinadvance.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours，LiHua*注：本书"佳作共赏"栏目中画波浪线的部分可作模板背诵。（2021·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.表达歉意并说明原因；2.提出建议并给出理由。注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJim,I’msorrytoinformyouthatIcan’tgooutwithyouthisweekend.I’vejustbeentoldthatIhavetogoandvisitmysickgrandfatherinthecountryside,whowassuddenlyadmittedtothehospital.Ihopethechangewon’tcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.HowaboutgoingoutnextSaturdaymorning?Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetattheschoolgateat9:00.Pleaseletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimenextweekend.Inaddition,nextSaturday,therewillbeaflowershowinBeihaiPark.Thenwecangotoseetheflowerstogether.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，就因故不能赴约而致歉并建议再约。【详解】1.词汇积累通知：tell→inform麻烦：problem→trouble怎么样：whatabout→howabout适合：fit→suit2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Ishouldbeavailableanytimenextweekend.拓展句：IshouldbeavailableanytimenextweekendsothatIcangooutwithyouandhaveagoodtime.【点睛】[高分句型1]I’msorrytoinformyouthatIcan’tgooutwithyouthis

weekend.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]I’vejustbeentoldthatIhavetogoandvisitmysickgrandfatherinthecountryside,whowassuddenlyadmittedtothehospital.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型3]Pleaseletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)（2021·全国·高考乙卷真题）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Besmartonlinelearners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1.分析优势与不足；2.提出学习建议。注意：1.词数100左右;2.题目和首句已为你写好。BesmartonlinelearnersNetworklearninghasincreasinglybecomeanimportantmeansforpeopletoacquireknowledgeandsolveproblems.Butbeingsmartonlinelearnershasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】onepossibleversion:BesmartonlinelearnersNetworklearninghasincreasinglybecomeanimportantmeansforpeopletoacquireknowledgeandsolveproblems.Butbeingsmartonlinelearnershasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Firstofall,assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensiveeducationalresourcestobroadenthehorizon.Besides,Wecantaketheinitiativeinourstudybyourselveswithouttimeandspacelimit.Ofcourse,thesedisadvantagesareasfollows.Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,Wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesandfindaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以Besmartonlinelearners为题写一篇发言稿参赛。【详解】1.词汇积累充分利用：makefulluseof→makethemostof扩宽,丰富：broaden→enrich各种各样：allkindsof→varietiesof不完美：imperfection→defect2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesandfindaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.拓展句：Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantages，findingaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.【点睛】[高分句型1]Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,Wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueand

thefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.（非谓语作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.（现在分词作状语）（2019·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:

⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；⑶希望从中有何收获。注意：⑴词数不少于100；⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。DearChris,I'mLiJim,astudentatChenguangHighSchool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourtime.Yours,LiJin【答案】DearChris,

I'mLiJim,astudentatChenguangHighSchool.It’sourgreatpleasuretohaveyouvisitourschoolandgivealectureonwesternartduringthecomingsummervacation.Whenitcomestomysuggestions,Iamquiteinterestedinwesternmusic,andexpectthatyoucoulddeliverthelectureonthistopic.Servedasabridge,westernmusicprovidesusteenagerswiththeopportunitytobroadenourhorizonsandhaveabetterunderstandingonculturediversities.Italsogivesusstrengthandhopewhenweareovercomingdifficulties.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyadvice,andIhopethatIcangainmoreknowledgethroughthelecture.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Thankyouforyourtime.Yours,LiJin【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英方教师Chris写信，就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出意见。【详解】1.词汇积累做演讲：givealecture→makeaspeech提供：providesb.withsth.→refersb.sth.机会：opportunity→chance采纳建议：takeone’sadvice→followone’sadvice2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Servedasabridge,westernmusicprovidesusteenagerswiththeopportunitytobroadenourhorizonsandhaveabetterunderstandingonculturediversities.拓展句：Westernmusic，whichisservedasabridge，providesusteenagerswiththeopportunitytobroadenourhorizonsandhaveabetterunderstandingonculturediversities.【点睛】【高分句型1】Whenitcomestomysuggestions,Iamquiteinterestedinwesternmusic,andexpectthatyoucoulddeliverthelectureonthistopic.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Italsogivesusstrengthandhopewhenweareovercomingdifficulties.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）（2022·江苏省泰州市教育局模拟预测）假定你是李华，得知你的新西兰笔友Jason正负责筹备学校的中国诗歌节。请你给他写一封信，内容包括：1.你的心情；2.活动建议；3.良好祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.开头和结尾已为你写好；3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearJason,I’mgladthataChinesePoetryFestivalistotakeplaceinyourschool.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThefestivalwillsurelydeepenyourunderstandingofChinesecultureandIhopeitwillbeasuccess.Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJason,I’mgladthataChinesePoetryFestivalistotakeplaceinyourschool.Variouscompetitions,likepoetrytranslation,poetryreadingandpoetrywriting,shouldbeincluded,whichnotonlyhelparousestudents’passionforgettinginvolvedbutofferstudentsaplatformtoshowthemselves.Besides,Idorecommendalectureonpoetryappreciationbegiven,thusequippingthestudentswithmorerelevantknowledge.ThefestivalwillsurelydeepenyourunderstandingofChinesecultureandIhopeitwillbeasuccess.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。新西兰笔友Jason正负责筹备学校的中国诗歌节，要求考生给他写一封信。【详解】1.词汇积累举办：takeplace→hold比赛：competitions→matches激发：arouse→inspire此外：Besides→What’smore2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Variouscompetitions,likepoetrytranslation,poetryreadingandpoetrywriting,shouldbeincluded.拓展句：Variouscompetitionswhichincludepoetrytranslation,poetryreadingandpoetrywriting.【点睛】【高分句型1】Variouscompetitions,likepoetrytranslation,poetryreadingandpoetrywriting,shouldbeincluded,whichnotonlyhelparousestudents’passionforgettinginvolvedbutofferstudentsaplatformtoshowthemselves.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，同时使用了notonly……but句型）【高分句型2】I’mgladthataChinesePoetryFestivalistotakeplaceinyourschool.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）（2022·湖北·武汉市第十二中学模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校英语广播电台将对播出时段、时长、栏目等做调整，正在向听众征求意见。请你写封邮件，内容包括：1.你的建议；2.你的理由。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearEnglishradiostation,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua【答案】DearEnglishradiostation,

Knowingthatyouwilladjustthebroadcasttimeslot,lengthandcolumn,Iamwritingtogivemysuggestions.Firstofall,Ithinka20-minutenewssummarycanbeplayedbeforethemorningreadingclass,whichwillhelpstudentsunderstandnationaleventsandstimulatetheirlisteningability.Secondly,Englishpopsongscanbeplayedfortenminutesafterschoolatnoon,whichcanrelievestudents’studypressureallmorning.Finally,duringtheafternoonbreak,someexcellentsampleessayspublishedbystudentscanbeplayed.Hopingmysuggestionscanbehelpful.

Yours,

LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你校英语广播电台将对播出时段、时长、栏目等做调整，正在向听众征求意见的情况，写封邮件给出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：suggestions→advice缓解，放松：relieve→relax压力：pressure→stress优秀的：excellent→outstanding2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Finally,duringtheafternoonbreak,someexcellentsampleessayspublishedbystudentscanbeplayed.拓展句：Finally,duringtheafternoonbreak,someexcellentsampleessayswhicharepublishedbystudentscanbeplayed.【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstofall,Ithinka20-minutenewssummarycanbeplayedbeforethemorningreadingclass,whichwillhelpstudentsunderstandnationaleventsandstimulatetheirlisteningability.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。)【高分句型2】Finally,duringtheafternoonbreak,someexcellentsampleessayspublishedbystudentscanbeplayed.(运用了非谓语动词作后置定语。)（2022·吉林长春·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter在中国留学两年后即将返回美国。他打算送给他的寄宿家庭每人一份礼物，为此来信向你求助，请你回信给他提供一些建议。内容包括：(1)肯定他的做法；(2)具体的建议；(3)表达祝愿。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearPeter,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearPeter,I’mgladtohearthatyouwanttobuysomegiftsforyourmotherthatrepresentChineseculture.AndIamwritingtogiveyousomeadvice.Personally,Ithinkyoushouldbuythefollowingtwogifts:QipaoandChineseknot.Qipao,averybeautifultraditionaldressforChinesewomen,canshowtherealbeautyofawoman.Iamsureyourmotherwilllikeitverymuch.What’smore,itisalsoagoodchoiceforyoutobuytheChineseknot.Itisusuallyhunginthesittingroomorcars,whichrepresentsgoodluck.Wishyouagoodvacation.Pleasegivemybestwishestoyourfamily.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter在中国留学两年后即将返回美国。他打算送给他的寄宿家庭每人一份礼物，为此来信向你求助，请你回信给他提供一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：advice→suggestion就我而言：personally→asfarasI’mconcerned选择：choice→option代表：represent→standfor2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Qipao,averybeautifultraditionaldressforChinesewomen,canshowtherealbeautyofawoman.拓展句：Qipao,whichisaverybeautifultraditionaldressforChinesewomen,canshowtherealbeautyofawoman.【点睛】[高分句型1]I’mgladtohearthatyouwanttobuysomegiftsforyourmotherthatrepresentChineseculture.(运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]Itisusuallyhunginthesittingroomorcars,whichrepresentsgoodluck.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)（2022·北京八十中模拟预测）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim最近总是感觉身体不适，因此写信向你询问如何健康饮食，请你给他回信。内容包括：1.对Jim表示关切

2.提出合理建议3.表达祝愿内容注意：1．词数100左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim,I’mdelightedtohearfromyou,butsorrytohavelearnedyouaren’tfeelingwellthesedays.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJim,I’mdelightedtohearfromyou,butsorrytohavelearnedyouaren’tfeelingwellthesedays.Inyourletteryouaskedmehowtostayhealthy.Hereismyadvice.Firstly,you’dbetterkeepabalanceddiet.Itcanbebeneficialtoavoideatingfoodhighinfatorwithtoomuchsugar.Instead,havemorefreshvegetablesandfruits.Secondly,takingexerciseeverydayhelpsalottobuildupastrongbody.Asisknown,regularexercise,suchasjogging,isanessentialapproachtokeepingfit.Finally,Iwonderifyoualwaysstayuplateatnight.Ifso,pleasegetridofthishabit,forneverwillwebehealthywithoutenoughsleep.Allthesecountalotforkeepingyourbodyataproperweightandstayinghealthy.Itrulyhopeyouwillfindmyadvicehelpfulandgetwellsoon.Bestwishes!Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim写回信，回复他咨询的如何健康饮食的问题。内容包括：1.对Jim表示关切；2.提出合理建议；3.表达祝愿内容。【详解】1.词汇积累开心的：delighted→excited建议：advice→suggestion锻炼：takeexercise→workout重要：count→matter2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Hereismyadvice.拓展句：Hereismyadvice,whichIhopewillbehelpfulforyou。【点睛】【高分句型1】Itcanbebeneficialtoavoideatingfoodhighinfatorwithtoomuchsugar.Instead,havemorefreshvegetablesandfruits.(运用了非谓语动词作宾语)【高分句型2】Asisknown,regularexercise,suchasjogging,isanessentialapproachtokeepingfit.(运用了as引导非限制性定语从句)（2022·湖南·雅礼中学二模）假如你是李华，你的巴基斯坦笔友Muhammad准备明年来你校做交换生，写信向你咨询如何学习中文。请你用英语给他回封电子邮件。要点：1.表示欢迎；2.提出学习中文建议；3.期待与祝福。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearMuhammad,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMuhammad,Welcometobeanexchangestudentatourschoolnextyear.AstohowtolearnChinese,herecomemytips.First,youmightaswelltakeaChinesecoursetolayasolidfoundation.What’smore,itisawisechoicetopickupproperChineseTVprograms,whichwillenableyoutoaccessstandardandauthenticChinese.Plus,befriendingwarmheartedChinesefriendsaroundyouissuretobetteryouroralChinese.Meanwhile,itcanenrichyourknowledgeofChinesecustoms.Finally,Isuggestyoutrye-mailingmeinChinese.Ihopemysuggestionsabovemaybenefityou.HopeyouwillmakesufficientprogressinChinesesoon.Iamlookingforwardtoyourarrival.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你的巴基斯坦笔友Muhammad准备明年来你校做交换生，写信向你咨询如何学习中文。请你用英语给他回封电子邮件。【详解】1.词汇积累至于：asto→asfor建议：tip/suggestion→advice明智的：wise→advisable此外：what’smore→besides2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Plus,befriendingwarmheartedChinesefriendsaroundyouissuretobetteryouroralChinese.Meanwhile,itcanenrichyourknowledgeofChinesecustoms.拓展句：Plus,notonlyisbefriendingwarmheartedChinesefriendsaroundyousuretobetteryouroralChinese,butalsoitcanenrichyourknowledgeofChinesecustoms.【点睛】[高分句型1]What’smore,itisawisechoicetopickupproperChineseTVprograms,whichwillenableyoutoaccessstandardandauthenticChinese.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Finally,Isuggestyoutrye-mailingmeinChinese.(运用了省略that的宾语从句和虚拟语气)（2022·北京师大附中三模）假如你是红星中学高三1班班长李华。最近你班同学听外教Jim线上讲课时遇到了一些问题。请你代表你班同学给Jim写一封邮信，内容包括：1.反映情况；2.给出建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua【答案】DearJim,I’mLiHua,monitorofClassOneSeniorThreefromHongxingMiddleSchool.Representingmyclassmates,I’mwritingtotellyousomequestions.Duringyouronlineclasses,youknow,someofourstudents’spokenEnglishisnotverygood,sowearethinkingwhetheryoucanspeakalittleslowly,sothatweallcanfollowyou.Besides,youaretoostrictwithus,whichisofcoursegood,butyoucanalsoberelaxedandkindtous.Then,theatmosphereinyourclasseswillbemoreactive,andwedaretoexpressourselvesmorebravely.Youcanbelievethatwecanstillfinishwhatyouaskustodoeventhoughyouarenotsostrict.Wewillappreciateitifyoucantakeoursuggestions.Hopetohearfromyousoon.

Yours,

LiHua【解析】【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给外教Jim写一封邮信，反映学生们线上听课时遇到的一些问题并给出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累代表：represent→onbehalfof英语口语：spokenEnglish→oralEnglish此外：besides→what’smore建议：suggestion→advice2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I’mLiHua,monitorofClassOneSeniorThreefromHongxingMiddleSchool.拓展句：I’mLiHua,whoisthemonitorofClassOneSeniorThreefromHongxingMiddleSchool.【点睛】【高分句型1】Duringyouronlineclass,youknow,someofourstudents’spokenEnglishisnotverygood,sowearethinkingwhetheryoucanspeakalittleslowly,sothatweallcanfollowyou.(运用了由whether引导的宾语从句和sothat引导的结果状语从句)【高分句型2】Besides,youaretoostrictwithus,whichisofcoursegood,butyoucanalsoberelaxedandkindtous.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型3】Youcanbelievethatwecanstillfinishwhatyouaskustodoeventhoughyouarenotsostrict.(运用了that引导的宾语从句、what引导的宾语从句和eventhough引导的让步状语从句)（2022·山东烟台·三模）你校英文报正在向全校学生进行英文征稿，征稿主题是“劳动与学生成长”，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1．你对劳动的认识；2．你经常参加哪些劳动；3．你的建议。注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。LaborandStudents’Growth________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】OnepossibleversionLaborandStudents’GrowthAsisknowntoall,laborisanecessityforastudent’sgrowth.Atpresent,moststudentsliveincitiesandrarelyhaveopportunitiestotrulyexperiencelabor,resultinginlackoflaboreducation.Throughlabor,studentscancultivatecorrectlaborviewpointanddeveloplaborhabits,whichwillcontributetostudents’overalldevelopment.Inmysparetime,I’dliketohelpmyparentsdovarietiesofhouseworkathome.Besides,Ioftenvolunteertodosomecleaningworkfortheelderlyatnursinghome.Inviewofmanybenefitsoflabortostudents,Isuggestthatweshouldregularlytakepartinawiderangeoflaborsothatwecanbecomewell-rounded.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文投稿，主题是“劳动与学生成长”。【详解】1.词汇积累目前：atpresent→currently机会：opportunity→chance空余的：spare→free此外：besides→what’smore2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Atpresent,moststudentsliveincitiesandrarelyhaveopportunitiestotrulyexperiencelabor,resultinginlackoflaboreducation.拓展句：Atpresent,moststudentsliveincitiesandrarelyhaveopportunitiestotrulyexperiencelabor,whichresulsinlackoflaboreducation.【点睛】【高分句型1】Asisknowntoall,laborisanecessityforastudent’sgrowth.（运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Throughlabor,studentscancultivatecorrectlaborviewpointanddeveloplaborhabits,whichwillcontributetostudents’overalldevelopment.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）（2022·北京八十中三模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他最近因疫情在家上网课，感到效果不理想，为此感到苦恼。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：1.你对在线学习的看法；2.提出学习建议。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJim,

Learningthatyouhavebeenstrugglingtoadapttotheformofonlinecourses,IfeltthesamewayaswehadclassesonlineduringtheisolationofCovidbreakout.Now,I’dliketotalkaboutmyviewsononlineclasses.

Firstandforemost,itisthroughtheinternetthatclassescanbepresentedinmanyinterestingways:Pictures,videos,younameit.Onlyinthiswaycanteachersshedlightonsomecomplexideasandconcepts.Besides,youcanhaveteachers’lecturesrecordedandlearnthematyourownspace.Togetoveryouranxiety,youshouldgooverwhatyouaregoingtolearnnextclassaswellasconsultyourteacherconstantly.

Shouldyouwanttoseekfurtherhelp,don’thesitatetowritetome.Thanksforyourletter.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Jim回复一封电子邮件，对他最近因疫情在家上网课，感到效果不理想，为此感到苦恼，谈谈自己的看法并提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累首先：Firstandforemost→Firstofall快速浏览：goover→gothrough让某物容易被人理解：shedlightonsth.→makesth.understood寻求：seek→askfor2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Besides,youcanhaveteachers’lecturesrecordedandlearnthematyourownspace.拓展句：Besides,youcanhaveteachers’lecturesrecordedandlearnthematyourownspace,whichwillhelpyoubetterdigestthepoints.【点睛】[高分句型1]Firstandforemost,itisthroughtheinternetthatclassescanbepresentedinmanyinterestingways:Pictures,videos,younameit.(运用了强调句句式)[高分句型2]Onlyinthiswaycanteachersshedlightonsomecomplexideasandconcepts.(运用了only+状语置于句首的部分倒装句式)（2022·浙江·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校交换生Paul最近因为疫情在家上网课，感觉学习效果不理想，写信询问你如何改善。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.给予安慰；2.提供建议；3.表达愿望。注意：1.词数80左右2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearPaul,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearPaul,Sorrytoknowthatyouarebeingtroubledwhentakingonlineclasses.Actually,Ihavebeenthereandherearesometipsworkingwellforme.First,ittakesself-disciplinetofullyengageinonlinelessons,sotrytoremove