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高考英语读后续写语篇练习从嫌弃到接纳,善意的转变之旅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文IwasbusilypreparingforourSaturdaynightbarbecue(烧烤),aweeklytraditionthatbroughtourfamilytogether.Suddenly,ourdaughterRikkistormedinthroughthefrontdoor,herfacecloudedwithanger.Withoutaword,shemarchedstraighttoherroom,leavingmewithasenseofanxiety.IlookedoutofthewindowandsawherclassmateLexiwalkingawaysadly.Mymother’sintuition(直觉)toldmethatthissituationmightneedsomegentleguidance.SoIcalledRikkiouttothekitchen,hopingtostartaconversationaboutwhathadhappened.Rikkistoodbeforemewithastubbornlookonherface,thekindthatkidsgetwhentheyknowthey’vedonesomethingwrongbutaretooproudtoadmitit.“InoticedthatLexicameover,butshedidn’tstaylong,”Isaidgently.“She’syourageandgoestothesameschoolasyou.Whydoesn’tshestaylonger?”4续写原文Rikkisaid,“Idon’tlikeher,Iwishshewouldstopcomingoverhereallthetime.Shedressesterrible,andsometimesshedoesn’tsmellgood.”Isighedandsaid,“That’snotherfault,Rikki.Maybeshedoesn’thaveanyonetohelpherwiththingslikethat.Somekidsdon’thavetheextrathingsthatyouandyourfriendshave.Butthatdoesn’tmakethemanylessworthythanyou.Everyonedeservestobetreatedwithkindnessandrespect.”Rikkinoddedbutherexpressiondidn’tchange.Herfatherhadbeenwatchingfromthebackyardwherehewasgrilling(烧烤).Hedidn’tlikethewayRikkihadtreatedLexi,sohedecidedtotakeaction,Hecameovertomeandsaid“Let’sgoandseeLexi.”ThenhecalledRikkioverandaskedhertogetinthecar.TogetherwedrovestraighttoLexishouse.5段首句Paragraph1:AtLexi’shouse,Rikkiwasshockedtoseehowdifferentherlifewas.Paragraph2:RikkiinvitedLexitocomeoverandhavedinnerwithus.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8每周六晚的家庭烧烤是“我”家传统。一天,女儿瑞奇气冲冲回家,径直回房。“我”看到她的同学莱克西难过离开,便询问瑞奇。瑞奇表示不喜欢莱克西,嫌弃她穿着和气味。“我”向她解释这并非莱克西的错,每个人都值得尊重。瑞奇的父亲也看不惯她的态度,决定带大家去莱克西家。点1:位于续写第一段段首,流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语;点2:位于续写第一段段尾,流畅衔接第二段段首句;点3:位于续写第二段段首,续写衔接第二段段首语;点4:文章结尾升华,给予读者正能量,揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1:AtLexi’shouse,Rikkiwasshockedtoseehowdifferentherlifewas.到了莱克西家,瑞奇被眼前的景象深深震撼。狭小昏暗的房间里,家具摆放杂乱,且大多破旧不堪。墙壁上有几处脱落的墙皮,显得格外寒酸。莱克西的妈妈正忙里忙外,神情疲惫,她不仅要照顾家里,还要操持各种家务,显然没有多余的精力去顾及莱克西的穿着打扮。看到这一切,瑞奇内心满是愧疚。她回想起自己之前对莱克西的种种嫌弃,觉得自己实在太过分。她开始反思自己的行为,意识到不能以貌取人。10续写思路分析Para2:RikkiinvitedLexitocomeoverandhavedinnerwithus.怀着满心的歉意,瑞奇真诚地邀请莱克西来家里吃晚餐。莱克西有些意外,但还是欣然答应了。回到家后,瑞奇热情地拉着莱克西,向家人一一介绍。烧烤过程中,瑞奇不停地给莱克西夹菜,和她分享有趣的事情。莱克西也渐渐放松下来,脸上露出灿烂的笑容。两人相谈甚欢,就像多年的好友。从那以后,瑞奇和莱克西的关系愈发亲密,瑞奇也彻底改变了自己的看法,懂得了尊重和关爱他人的重要性。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现AtLexi’shouse,Rikkiwasshockedtoseehowdifferentherlifewas.Thehousewassmallandshabby,withold-fashionedfurnitureandpeelingpaintonthewalls.ShesawLexi'smother,whowasbusydoinghouseworkwhilelookingexhausted.RikkirealizedthatLexididn'thavetheresourcestodresswellorsmellnice.Shefeltashamedofherpreviousjudgment.Shestartedtothinkabouthowunfairshehadbeen.Sheunderstoodthatitwaswrongtojudgeothersbasedontheirappearance.13范文呈现RikkiinvitedLexitocomeoverandhavedinnerwithus.Lexiagreedwithashysmile.Backatourplace,RikkiintroducedLexitoherfamilywarmly.Duringthebarbecue,RikkichattedandlaughedwithLexi.Shesharedstoriesandfoodwithhernewfriend.Lexiwasnolongerthegirlshehaddislikedbefore.Instead,theybecameclose.Rikki'sparentswerehappytoseethechangeinher.Fromthenon,RikkitreatedLexiwithkindnessandrespect,andtheirfriendshipgrewstrongerdaybyday.14升级版范文呈现AtLexi’shouse,Rikkiwasstruckwithastonishmentuponwitnessingthestarkcontrastofherlife.Thedwellingwasdiminutiveanddilapidated,itsfurnitureantiquatedandthewallsadornedwithpeelingpaint.There,shebeheldLexi'smother,toilingawayathouseholdchores,hervisageetchedwithweariness.ItdawnedonRikkithatLexilackedthemeanstodonelegantattireormaintainanimmaculateappearance.Ashamedofherpriorhastyjudgment,shebegantoreflectontheinjusticeofheractions.Onlythendidshegraspthefallacyofjudgingothersmerelybytheiroutwardappearance.15升级版范文呈现RikkiextendedaninvitationtoLexitojoinusfordinner.Withabashfulsmile,Lexiacquiesced.Uponreturningtoourabode,RikkiintroducedLexitoherfamilywithexuberance.Amidstthebarbecue,RikkiengagedinanimatedconversationsandheartylaughterwithLexi.Sheregaledhernew-foundfriendwithstoriesandsharedthedeliciousfood.GonewastheanimosityRikkionceharboredtowardsLexi;instead,theyforgedaclosebond.Rikki'sparents,observingthistransformation,werefilledwithdel

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